Incredible Loli Change:Volume1 Chapter7 - Revision history

BelialBook at 11:41, 16 October 2015

2015-10-16T11:41:49Z

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	Curse you 90's era same-sex manga...		Curse you 90's era same-sex manga...

	~~Chapter 7 end~~





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Lapidibus: /* Chapter 7 */

2015-10-15T05:44:42Z

Chapter 7

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	"Ria-chan, pleased to meet you."		"Ria-chan, pleased to meet you."

	"Pleased to meet you ~~Maria~~-chan."		"Pleased to meet you Lia-chan."

	What "Pleased to meet you?" Haven't we known each other for many years?!		What "Pleased to meet you?" Haven't we known each other for many years?!
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	Well at least I hope.		Well at least I hope.

	But for having obtained ~~Maria~~ as a name.		But for having obtained Lia as a name.

	I don't like it one bit!		I don't like it one bit!
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	Sitting in the corner, facing the corner, arms holding his knees, it was obvious how big the shock was.		Sitting in the corner, facing the corner, arms holding his knees, it was obvious how big the shock was.

	"It's all idiot Rin-- no, idiot ~~Maria~~'s fault."		"It's all idiot Rin-- no, idiot Lia's fault."

	"Don't say it like that..."		"Don't say it like that..."
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	Wow... how exaggerated...		Wow... how exaggerated...

	"~~Maria~~-chan what do you plan on doing?"		"Lia-chan what do you plan on doing?"

	"......"		"......"
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	Fuyuha as if not knowing what to do, looked nervous.		Fuyuha as if not knowing what to do, looked nervous.

	"If that's how it is, let's go back home onii-chan. We've already met ~~Maria~~-chan."		"If that's how it is, let's go back home onii-chan. We've already met Lia-chan."

	"No wait... Let me do something first..."		"No wait... Let me do something first..."

BelialBook: /* Chapter 7 */

2015-10-11T08:33:12Z

Chapter 7

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 Youxiang = Yuka
 Lingyi = Rin-ichi
 Xiaguo = Mukomi-san
 JingyiJun = Jin-ichi
-Dongxie - Fuyuha
-Liya - Maria
+Dongxie = Fuyuha

Aldenc at 20:41, 10 October 2015

2015-10-10T20:41:03Z

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	It seems like he was at a loss.		It seems like he was at a loss.

	"That's no good, ~~Maria~~-chan ~~(莉亚->まりヤ->Mariya)~~ you shouldn't bully onii-san like that"		"That's no good, Ria-chan you shouldn't bully onii-san like that"

	Yuka said.		Yuka said.
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	"Ah?"		"Ah?"

	Ah, who's ~~Maria~~-?		Ah, who's Ria-?

	This extremely european-sounding name.		This extremely european-sounding name.
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	Apart from this brother-abusing Rin, the pony-tailed Yuka, the lolicon Fuyuha, and the regressed to loli Jin, who else is there?		Apart from this brother-abusing Rin, the pony-tailed Yuka, the lolicon Fuyuha, and the regressed to loli Jin, who else is there?

	"Oh, ~~Maria~~ as a name is not bad."		"Oh, Ria as a name is not bad."

	Rin-ichi why are you agreeing?		Rin-ichi why are you agreeing?
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	Why did I mishear?		Why did I mishear?

	"~~Maria~~-chan, pleased to meet you."		"Ria-chan, pleased to meet you."

	"Pleased to meet you Maria-chan."		"Pleased to meet you Maria-chan."
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	I guarantee there's no one else in this world the same as an idiot like me.		I guarantee there's no one else in this world the same as an idiot like me.

	"~~Maria~~-chan~"		"Ria-chan~"

	I'm a guy.		I'm a guy.
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	Yuka, did you plan this?		Yuka, did you plan this?

	"Azumabashi ~~Maria~~, this name sounds good."		"Azumabashi Ria, this name sounds good."

	Rin-ichi rubbed her chin and nodded her head.		Rin-ichi rubbed her chin and nodded her head.
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	Fuyuha, you can't judge a person by how they look....		Fuyuha, you can't judge a person by how they look....

	"Azumabashi Ri, no... Azumabashi ~~Maria~~..."		"Azumabashi Ri, no... Azumabashi Ria..."

	What would happen if he knew I was Jin-ichi?		What would happen if he knew I was Jin-ichi?
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	I think he'd be depressed for many days; no, weeks, months, maybe even years...		I think he'd be depressed for many days; no, weeks, months, maybe even years...

	"~~Maria~~ is it, such a cute name."		"Ria is it, such a cute name."

	Wah~ the beast in him came up....		Wah~ the beast in him came up....
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	I didn't do anything! I'm just being held by Fuyuha.		I didn't do anything! I'm just being held by Fuyuha.

	"Stop before yo go too far."		"Stop before you go too far."

	"Ah!"		"Ah!"
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	She pulled him towards the entrance with all her strength.		She pulled him towards the entrance with all her strength.

	"No good... onii-chan... you can't do.... that kind of thing to ~~Maria~~-chan-..."		"No good... onii-chan... you can't do.... that kind of thing to Ria-chan-..."

	It looked she was struggling to pull him...		It looked she was struggling to pull him...
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	Fuyuha became dumbstruck.		Fuyuha became dumbstruck.

	"Idiot Ji-no, idiot ~~Maria~~, dad's on the phone..."		"Idiot Ji-no, idiot Ria, dad's on the phone..."

	Coincidentally, Rin-ichi came over.		Coincidentally, Rin-ichi came over.
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			Hey Lapidbus, I'm AldenC, the original translator for this novel, please contact me on my page, and delete this message after you read this, thanks.















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Dreamer2908 at 17:13, 26 September 2015

2015-09-26T17:13:38Z

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	Chapter 7		==Chapter 7==

BelialBook at 03:45, 26 September 2015

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	And one only found out by chance.		And one only found out by chance.

	But come to think of it how did Yuka know, it feels like she knew it since earlier.		But come to think of it, how did Yuka know, it feels like she knew it since earlier.

	How should I put it?		How should I put it?
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	Yuka is smart, maybe even smarter than her brother.		Yuka is smart, maybe even smarter than her brother.

	En, at any rate I can overcome this.		Eh, at any rate, I can overcome this.

	"As I thought it's Jin-ichi."		"As I thought it's Jin-ichi."
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	No, she's very sensitive to these matters.		No, she's very sensitive to these matters.

	For example those incomprehensible things that are abnormal events. No she's even better than the experts at discerning mysterious events like this.		For example, those incomprehensible things that are abnormal events. No, she's even better than the experts at discerning mysterious events like this.

	Furthermore, she has an interest in these sorts of things.		Furthermore, she has an interest in these sorts of things.
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	"What?"		"What?"

	Idle talk is ~~spreading~~ into rumors.		Idle talk is turning into rumors.

	"A boy hit by a shooting can become a girl."		"A boy hit by a shooting star can become a girl."

	"This is being circulated in the female students?!"		"This is being circulated in the female students?!"
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	An ordinary rumor.		An ordinary rumor.

	But this is totally unlike a rumor among girls, it seems like this knowledge should only be ~~amongst~~ the boys.		But this is totally unlike a rumor among girls, it seems like this knowledge should only be among the boys.

	Yuka nodded her head, but then raised her finger ~~and~~ shook her head and said:		Yuka nodded her head, but then raised her finger, shook her head and said:

	"But the original version was that a girl struck by a shooting star could become a boy."		"But the original version was that a girl struck by a shooting star could become a boy."
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	What kind of joke is this?!		What kind of joke is this?!

	The first number is attractive ~~why~~ does it have to be multiplied by 0?! Why?!		The first number is attractive! Why does it have to be multiplied by 0?! Why?!

	"Ah Rin-ichi already knew it?"		"Ah, Rin-ichi already knew it?"

	"En, I already told Rin-ichi about it yesterday."		"En, I already told Rin-ichi about it yesterday."
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	"It's unbelievable for Jin-ichi to have become such a cute girl"		"It's unbelievable for Jin-ichi to have become such a cute girl"

	"Sob... saying it like that it's not like it's not like I could help it..."		"Sob... saying it like that... it's not like, it's not like I could help it..."

	Being hit by a shooting star, it's not like I did it purposefully.		Being hit by a shooting star, it's not like I did it purposefully.
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	But.		But.

	Unfortunately, I ~~didn~~'t want to say Fuyuha's name.		Unfortunately, I don't want to say Fuyuha's name.

	Sorry, Fuyuha.		Sorry, Fuyuha.
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	Where did this western sounding name come from?		Where did this western sounding name come from?

	Yuka did you plan this?		Yuka, did you plan this?

	"Azumabashi Maria, this name sounds good."		"Azumabashi Maria, this name sounds good."
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	Rin-ichi rubbed her chin and nodded her head.		Rin-ichi rubbed her chin and nodded her head.

	Don't agree as please!		Don't agree as you please!

	I already said it twice!		I already said it twice!

	I don't care if it sounds nice it doesn't suit me.		I don't care if it sounds nice, it doesn't suit me.

	An adolescent boy wouldn't be happy with a girly-name. Mainly, I'm not happy.		An adolescent boy wouldn't be happy with a girly-name. Mainly, I'm not happy.
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	Yuka looked toward her brother.		Yuka looked toward her brother.

	Unfortunately Fuyuha still ~~ahd~~ that dead atmosphere around him.		Unfortunately Fuyuha still has that dead atmosphere around him.

	"Eh, his feelings are still hurt..."		"Eh, his feelings are still hurt..."
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	So fast!		So fast!

	Faster than a car, no faster than a bullet train... 比向日未，不，比夏果还快！		Faster than a car, no, faster than a bullet train... 比向日未，不，比夏果还快！

	"You... You.. what's your name?"		"You... You.. what's your name?"
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	Fuyuha as if not knowing what to do, looked nervous.		Fuyuha as if not knowing what to do, looked nervous.

	"If that's how it is let's go back home onii-chan. We've already met ~~maria~~-chan."		"If that's how it is, let's go back home onii-chan. We've already met Maria-chan."

	"No wait... Let me do something first..."		"No wait... Let me do something first..."
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	Do what?		Do what?

	~~Resultantly~~, Fuyuha walked towards me.		Reluctantly, Fuyuha walked towards me.

	I have a bad feeling...		I have a bad feeling...

TamaBaka: Fixed / clarified some text.

2015-09-24T18:57:42Z

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	En, at any rate I can overcome this.		En, at any rate I can overcome this.

	"As I thought it's ~~Rin~~-ichi."		"As I thought it's Jin-ichi."

	"Ah, it's like you already knew..."		"Ah, it's like you already knew..."
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	No, she's very sensitive to these matters.		No, she's very sensitive to these matters.

	For example those incomprehensible things that are abnormal events. No she's even better at discerning mysterious events like this.		For example those incomprehensible things that are abnormal events. No she's even better than the experts at discerning mysterious events like this.

	Furthermore, she has an interest in these sorts of things.		Furthermore, she has an interest in these sorts of things.
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	"This is being circulated in the female students?!"		"This is being circulated in the female students?!"

	~~It's like saying being in~~ the ~~middle~~ of ~~a collision between~~ two airplanes ~~will give good luck.~~		The happiness gained from the rumor was the same as that gained by standing underneath the ‘X’ formed by the intersecting contrails of two airplanes

	An ordinary rumor.		An ordinary rumor.
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	Am I also a lolicon?		Am I also a lolicon?

	"I've heard that one also becomes their image of an ideal partner. Does that mean ~~Rin~~-ichi is also a lolicon?"		"I've heard that one also becomes their image of an ideal partner. Does that mean Jin-ichi is also a lolicon?"

	"What you heard was definitely bogus!"		"What you heard was definitely bogus!"
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	"Having become like this, your ability to ridicule hasn't lowered, but there's no harm."		"Having become like this, your ability to ridicule hasn't lowered, but there's no harm."

	~~"Don't~~ say ~~something so~~ Rin-ichi ~~like~~!"		“Don’t say a word about how it’s similar to Rin-ichi!”

	10000*0?		10000*0?
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	Ah, now that I think about it that night...		Ah, now that I think about it that night...

	It really was frightening, that ~~moment shocking enough for my eyes to pop out~~.		It really was frightening, especially that instant when the blindfold fell off.

	Sob~ haven't forgotten it even up till now~		Sob~ haven't forgotten it even up till now~
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	Come to think of it, an adolescent having an interest in his sister's body.		Come to think of it, an adolescent having an interest in his sister's body.

	If someone ~~took~~ my eyes, they would be able enjoy a high definition view of that scene.		Even if her chest is flat, to have that moment imprinted in his memory.

			In fact, it was imprinted so well that if someone were transplanted with my eyes, they would be able enjoy a high definition view of that scene.

	I suddenly feel like I'm a pervert.		I suddenly feel like I'm a pervert.
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	But aren't all lolicons generally perverts?		But aren't all lolicons generally perverts?

	Is it ~~really as they say on tv:~~ after ~~seeing many similar~~ loli ~~so much~~, (~~authors I won't explain~~), and ~~searching everywhere looking~~ for ~~3d lolis~~, ~~to subsequently do a barbaric act~~ *****, and then ~~no one accepting~~ the corpse? (for ~~example~~, ~~referring to~~ the ~~miyazaki incident~~) ~~this type~~ of thing ~~I can't do~~. No, in ~~other words~~ I ~~wouldn't ever~~ do it.		Don’t tell me it’s like what’s shown on TV. How does it go? Let’s see, after having been exposed to enough loli-like characters, normal people or weirdoes (I’m not going to say who) end up desiring something more. What happens next is that they’ll search high and low for a 3D loli, carry out cruel, immoral, and savage acts after *****, and then discard the corpse, right? (There’s precedence for this, consult the Miyazaki Tsutomu case) This kind of thing, it’s impossible for me. No, in fact it might be because I refuse to do it.
	难道真的和电视上说的一样，看了相当多了萝莉类同人通常向或是同人糟糕向（作者我不解释），然后无法满足，到处寻找三次元萝莉，实行残酷无德的暴行后*****，然后弃尸？（有现例，参考宫崎勤事件）这种事情我是不可能干出来的。不，或许说是我不会做出来的。		难道真的和电视上说的一样，看了相当多了萝莉类同人通常向或是同人糟糕向（作者我不解释），然后无法满足，到处寻找三次元萝莉，实行残酷无德的暴行后*****，然后弃尸？（有现例，参考宫崎勤事件）这种事情我是不可能干出来的。不，或许说是我不会做出来的。

Lapidibus at 08:21, 24 September 2015

2015-09-24T08:21:03Z

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2015-09-23T21:29:56Z

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Lapidibus at 19:01, 23 September 2015

2015-09-23T19:01:47Z

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