Jinrui wa Suitai Shimashita:Volume 1 Chapter 2 - Revision history

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	Mr. Fishroll begins walking away. He stops close by and looks at me as if to say, come along.		Mr. Fishroll begins walking away. He stops close by and looks at me as if to say, come along.



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	"Are you going to ~~gobble me from behind~~?"		"Are you going to eat the rest later?"


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	Mr. Fishroll's ~~gait meanders~~, ~~swaying in sync with his shivering spine~~. It seems like he~~'s expecting to be eaten at any moment~~.		<!-- (There's something going on here that I don't understand.) -->
			Mr. Fishroll's back quivers as if he has been possessed by something. I'm not going to do anything about it, though. It seems like he himself expected it too.


	"Ah- ~~but, but, I'm awfully bony~~, ~~you know~~?"		<!-- (may be wrong.) -->
			"Ah- even, even if it has bones in it?"


	"They're a source of calcium~~, very nutritious~~!"		They're a source of calcium; it's good for health!"


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	From the door the masked person had left open when they exited, a strange papery butterfly gracefully flits by.		From the door the masked person had left open when they exited, a strange papery butterfly gracefully flits by.


	== Fairy Memo: Balling up ==		== Fairy Memo: Balling up ==

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	"Are you going to ~~eat the rest later~~?"		"Are you going to gobble me from behind?"


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	~~<!-- (There's something going on here that I don't understand.) -->~~		Mr. Fishroll's gait meanders, swaying in sync with his shivering spine. It seems like he's expecting to be eaten at any moment.
	Mr. Fishroll's ~~back quivers as if he has been possessed by something. I'm not going to do anything about it~~, ~~though~~. It seems like he ~~himself expected it too~~.


	~~<!-- (may be wrong.) -->~~		"Ah- but, but, I'm awfully bony, you know?"
	"Ah- ~~even~~, ~~even if it has bones in it~~?"


	They're a source of calcium~~; it's good for health~~!"		"They're a source of calcium, very nutritious!"


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	From the door the masked person had left open when they exited, a strange papery butterfly gracefully flits by.		From the door the masked person had left open when they exited, a strange papery butterfly gracefully flits by.


	== Fairy Memo: Balling up ==		== Fairy Memo: Balling up ==

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	==Chapter 2 - Dawn of the Fairies==		==Chapter 2 - Dawn of the Fairies==

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	Several centuries have already passed since the beginning of humanity's decline.		Several centuries have already passed since the beginning of humanity's decline.
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	"Now, I wonder ~~how this thing moves~~..."		"Now, I wonder what powers it..."


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	== Fairy Memo: Balling up ==		== Fairy Memo: Balling up ==

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	When a fairy is attacked by an enemy, or is startled by a loud noise, it defends itself by folding its body up into a ball. This phenomenon is known as <b><i>balling up</i></b>.		When a fairy is attacked by an enemy, or is startled by a loud noise, it defends itself by folding its body up into a ball. This phenomenon is known as <b><i>balling up</i></b>.

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			== Fairy Memo: Balling up ==

			When a fairy is attacked by an enemy, or is startled by a loud noise, it defends itself by folding its body up into a ball. This phenomenon is known as <b><i>balling up</i></b>.


			Fairies are usually too fast, but they are easily caught when balled up.


			When balled up, they are not concious, and enter a sort of hibernative state.


			They return to normal after a few minutes. However, when they do, they appear to lose any memories of what caused them to ball up in the first place.


			How wonderous!

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			==Chapter 2 - Dawn of the Fairies==

	Several centuries have already passed since the beginning of humanity's decline.		Several centuries have already passed since the beginning of humanity's decline.
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	~~=========~~		<hr>


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	"Oh, but I'm coming with you to watch."		"Oh, but I'm coming with you to watch."


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	I've come this far; I can't skip the ending at this point.		I've come this far; I can't skip the ending at this point.




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	From the door the masked person had left open when they exited, a strange papery butterfly gracefully flits by.		From the door the masked person had left open when they exited, a strange papery butterfly gracefully flits by.


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	==Translator's Notes==		==Translator's Notes==

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	<references />		<references />

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			==Translator's Notes==

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	~~==Translator's Notes==~~
	<references />		<references />

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	"Cut it?" "Will we?" "Are we cutting it up?" "Let's spread it out to everyone!" "But it feels like a waste to cut it up..." "UUUUhhhhhggggg I wanna eat it~~[[User:Wscp\|Wscp]] ([[User talk:Wscp\|talk]])~~" "Misete-kure<ref>Original japanese was, transliterated to romanji: "shou-mi" (show me)</ref>, I just don't get what to do..." "My heart, it aches!"		"Cut it?" "Will we?" "Are we cutting it up?" "Let's spread it out to everyone!" "But it feels like a waste to cut it up..." "UUUUhhhhhggggg I wanna eat it" "Misete-kure<ref>Original japanese was, transliterated to romanji: "shou-mi" (show me)</ref>, I just don't get what to do..." "My heart, it aches!"

	"It's haaarddd"		"It's haaarddd"

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Author's Notes

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	==~~Author~~'s Notes==		==Translator's Notes==
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	{{SimpleNav		{{SimpleNav
	\|back=Chapter 1		\|back=Chapter 1
	\|forward=~~Epilog~~		\|forward=Epilogue
	\|startchapter=1		\|startchapter=1
	\|endchapter=3		\|endchapter=3
	}}		}}
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	{{SimpleNav		{{SimpleNav
	\|back=Chapter 1		\|back=Chapter 1
	\|forward=~~Chapter 3~~		\|forward=Epilog
	\|startchapter=1		\|startchapter=1
	\|endchapter=3		\|endchapter=3
	}}		}}
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			==Author's Notes==
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			{{SimpleNav
			\|back=Chapter 1
			\|forward=Chapter 3
			\|startchapter=1
			\|endchapter=3
			}}
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