Kämpfer:Volume 1 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Draconic at 10:21, 1 June 2013

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	When was I promoted from partner to '' 'buddy?' '' Hey, hope she knows I'm not really a lesbian.		When was I promoted from partner to '' 'buddy?' '' Hey, hope she knows I'm not really a lesbian.

	"You say counterattack, but where's the enemy?" I gingerly looked through a crack between volumes. I could ~~just~~ see dust dancing, not a chance of seeing our enemy.		"You say counterattack, but where's the enemy?" I gingerly looked through a crack between volumes. I could only see dust dancing, not a chance of seeing our enemy.

	"Hiding like a cancer. We gotta treat it the same way."		"Hiding like a cancer. We gotta treat it the same way."

Draconic at 23:25, 31 May 2013

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	"I'm good, I'm good. Don't worry about it, I was just surprised," I reassured her while smiling.		"I'm good, I'm good. Don't worry about it, I was just surprised," I reassured her while smiling.

	"I become a girl when I change, but I didn't know a Kämpfer could change personality ~~also~~."		"I become a girl when I change, but I didn't know a Kämpfer could also change personality."

	"It's true..." Akane said as she raised her head slightly, still crying. "Even I can't believe it. It's scary to think about... I'm always surprised at what she does..."		"It's true..." Akane said as she raised her head slightly, still crying. "Even I can't believe it. It's scary to think about... I'm always surprised at what she does..."

Draconic at 23:23, 31 May 2013

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	"... yes..."		"... yes..."

	The conversation made it that far then stopped again.		The conversation made it that far, then stopped again.

	"How did you ~~managed~~ to get here... I wonder."		"How did you manage to get here... I wonder."

	"Yes..."		"Yes..."
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	"Oh... Please, I'm sorry... I've been saying strange things... I rarely talk to boys."		"Oh... Please, I'm sorry... I've been saying strange things... I rarely talk to boys."

	This was a pure-hearted and innocent girl. Nervous in front of boys.		This was a pure-hearted and innocent girl. Nervous in front of boys.

	I'm sorry... accept my apology... so sorry..."		"I'm sorry... accept my apology... so sorry..."

	She bowed many times.		She bowed many times.
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	"...Mishima Akane."		"...Mishima Akane."

	"Huh...?"		"Huh...?"

	My mouth hung open so far my jaw almost came loose. Akane's face turned bright red and she looked back at the floor.		My mouth hung open so far my jaw almost came loose. Akane's face turned bright red and she looked back at the floor.
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	"I'm good, I'm good. Don't worry about it, I was just surprised," I reassured her while smiling.		"I'm good, I'm good. Don't worry about it, I was just surprised," I reassured her while smiling.

	"I become a girl when I change, I didn't know Kämpfer could change personality also."		"I become a girl when I change, but I didn't know a Kämpfer could change personality also."

	"It's true..." Akane said as she raised her head slightly, still crying. "Even I can't believe it. It's scary to think about... I'm always surprised at what she does..."		"It's true..." Akane said as she raised her head slightly, still crying. "Even I can't believe it. It's scary to think about... I'm always surprised at what she does..."
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	I remembered it took a while to return that morning, "how much time does it take to return to normal?"		I remembered it took a while to return that morning, "how much time does it take to return to normal?"

	"Until you learn to change yourself it varies. At first it's very random. It may be five minutes, one time it took me two days."		"Until you learn to change yourself it varies. At first it's very random. It may be five minutes, but one time it took me two days."

	Aw crap, that sounds like trouble. I wouldn't be able to go to school, since my tuition only paid for the boys' section.		Aw crap, that sounds like trouble. I wouldn't be able to go to school, since my tuition only paid for the boys' section.
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	"Oh, forget what I just said, I was just thinking out loud."		"Oh, forget what I just said, I was just thinking out loud."

	"it's just that I have similar thoughts."		"It's just that I have similar thoughts."

	"Like what, Mishima-san?"		"Like what, Mishima-san?"

80.42.247.202: /* Chapter 2 */

2013-04-15T20:01:35Z

Chapter 2

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	"...can't be late!"		"...can't be late!"

	An good student hates to miss classes. Being a good student doesn't just mean living up to the image, it also means denying yourself of fun to avoid a bad reputation. Her hand slapped a table and dust flew up. The library was in a sad shape. She hated harming the books, but it was worth it. Besides, she could get the budget committee to buy new books.		Any good student hates to miss classes. Being a good student doesn't just mean living up to the image, it also means denying yourself of fun to avoid a bad reputation. Her hand slapped a table and dust flew up. The library was in a sad shape. She hated harming the books, but it was worth it. Besides, she could get the budget committee to buy new books.

	While walking calmly to her next class at Iron Star Academy she brushed her school uniform and made sure it was perfect. Just before the teacher came through the door she sat at her desk.		While walking calmly to her next class at Iron Star Academy she brushed her school uniform and made sure it was perfect. Just before the teacher came through the door she sat at her desk.

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2013-04-06T17:46:59Z

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	My mouth hung open so far my jaw almost came loose. Akane's face turned bright red and she looked back at the floor.		My mouth hung open so far my jaw almost came loose. Akane's face turned bright red and she looked back at the floor.

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	Akane and I went to the library. The library is a separate building built on the border between the two halves the school. Since books are shared, the library was unisex. It had guards stationed at both doorways leading to each half of campus. We came here because Akane had said '' 'the boys' side... makes me anxious.' '' Since she was used to the library she wouldn't be as nervous there. We sat face-to-face across a wide library table.		Akane and I went to the library. The library is a separate building built on the border between the two halves the school. Since books are shared, the library was unisex. It had guards stationed at both doorways leading to each half of campus. We came here because Akane had said '' 'the boys' side... makes me anxious.' '' Since she was used to the library she wouldn't be as nervous there. We sat face-to-face across a wide library table.
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	That wasn't Akane's shy voice...		That wasn't Akane's shy voice...

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	I raised my hands like in western movies. I turned around slowly, praying she didn't shoot. Where Akane had been, I stood at the gunpoint of the vicious dog girl.		I raised my hands like in western movies. I turned around slowly, praying she didn't shoot. Where Akane had been, I stood at the gunpoint of the vicious dog girl.
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	She clucked her tongue and stored the dirk in her cuff. The chain and other dirk were put away silently. She checked her left wrist, it was already time.		She clucked her tongue and stored the dirk in her cuff. The chain and other dirk were put away silently. She checked her left wrist, it was already time.

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Serin781 at 11:56, 6 April 2013

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	My mouth hung open so far my jaw almost came loose. Akane's face turned bright red and she looked back at the floor.		My mouth hung open so far my jaw almost came loose. Akane's face turned bright red and she looked back at the floor.

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	Akane and I went to the library. The library is a separate building built on the border between the two halves the school. Since books are shared, the library was unisex. It had guards stationed at both doorways leading to each half of campus. We came here because Akane had said '' 'the boys' side... makes me anxious.' '' Since she was used to the library she wouldn't be as nervous there. We sat face-to-face across a wide library table.		Akane and I went to the library. The library is a separate building built on the border between the two halves the school. Since books are shared, the library was unisex. It had guards stationed at both doorways leading to each half of campus. We came here because Akane had said '' 'the boys' side... makes me anxious.' '' Since she was used to the library she wouldn't be as nervous there. We sat face-to-face across a wide library table.
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	That wasn't Akane's shy voice...		That wasn't Akane's shy voice...

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	I raised my hands like in western movies. I turned around slowly, praying she didn't shoot. Where Akane had been, I stood at the gunpoint of the vicious dog girl.		I raised my hands like in western movies. I turned around slowly, praying she didn't shoot. Where Akane had been, I stood at the gunpoint of the vicious dog girl.
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	She clucked her tongue and stored the dirk in her cuff. The chain and other dirk were put away silently. She checked her left wrist, it was already time.		She clucked her tongue and stored the dirk in her cuff. The chain and other dirk were put away silently. She checked her left wrist, it was already time.

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Kondou: /* Chapter 2 */

2012-11-04T03:49:27Z

Chapter 2

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Kondou: needed to explain something used in second half...

2012-10-25T01:22:06Z

needed to explain something used in second half...

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	"Like what, Mishima-san?"		"Like what, Mishima-san?"

	"That..." she hesitated. "'' 'Akane' '' is fine, that's what all my classmates call me. Even though I've never been called that... by a man..."		"That..." she hesitated. "'' 'Akane<ref>Akane-chan - Akane doesn't specify the honorific to use, but it can be assumed that she should be called "Akane-chan" by a fellow second year student like Natsuru.</ref>' '' is fine, that's what all my classmates call me. Even though I've never been called that... by a man..."

	She looked down and started to blush deeply. I thought I should reply quickly.		She looked down and started to blush deeply. I thought I should reply quickly.

Kondou: /* Chapter 2 */ whoops, mixed in a line from the second half..

2012-10-23T23:02:37Z

Chapter 2: whoops, mixed in a line from the second half..

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	"Yo, ya got some balls, adding '' 'chan' '' ta mah name! Ya son of a bitch."		"Yo, ya got some balls, adding '' 'chan' '' ta mah name! Ya son of a bitch."

	~~I recognized the~~ voice ~~of the vicious dog girl, where Akane had been~~.		That wasn't Akane's shy voice...

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Kondou: The first half of Chapter 2 (rewritten)

2012-10-23T22:25:39Z

The first half of Chapter 2 (rewritten)

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