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	“Why? Aren’t you…….”		“Why? Aren’t you…….”

	“…… If things go on like this, won’t the things that we’ve done ~~painstakingly~~ go to waste?”		“…… If things go on like this, won’t the things that we’ve painstakingly done go to waste?”

	“—— Eh?”		“—— Eh?”
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	I took out a plastic bag from my pocket, took out one of them and stuffed it into her hands. She opened her hands and raised it to eye level. It was a piece of black cloth —— an armband, and on it was printed a round, orange shape.		I took out a plastic bag from my pocket, took out one of them and stuffed it into her hands. She opened her hands and raised it to eye level. It was a piece of black cloth —— an armband, and on it was printed a round, orange shape.

	Ayaka stared at the armband for ~~awhile~~, and raised her head.		Ayaka stared at the armband for a while, and raised her head.

	“…… Pervert, Repelling, Machine? (Note: Pervert, repel, and machine in Japanese are ‘Chikan’, ‘Genkitai’, and ‘Machine’ respectively. Their initials CGM is the same as the badge)”		“…… Pervert, Repelling, Machine? (Note: Pervert, repel, and machine in Japanese are ‘Chikan’, ‘Genkitai’, and ‘Machine’ respectively. Their initials CGM are the same as the badge.)”

	“I think it’s better if you return that to me!”		“I think it’s better if you return that to me!”
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	I shifted my gaze and nodded. The expression on Ayaka’s face went through complicated changes, looking as if ~~she’s~~ both crying and laughing.		I shifted my gaze and nodded. The expression on Ayaka’s face went through complicated changes, looking as if she was both crying and laughing.

	“How did you make this? It wouldn’t be because you wanted to make this that you took two days off, would it?”		“How did you make this? It wouldn’t be because you wanted to make this that you took two days off, would it?”
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	“Yeah, I designed it using a computer, and made it at a shop.”		“Yeah, I designed it using a computer, and made it at a shop.”

	Ayaka looked relieved. She carefully wore the armband and then showed it to me, her stiff expression is gradually gone too.		Ayaka looked relieved. She carefully wore the armband and then showed it to me; her stiff expression was gradually gone too.

	Ayaka looked at the plastic bag in my bag and said: “Did you make one for yourself, too?”		Ayaka looked at the plastic bag in my bag and said: “Did you make one for yourself, too?”

Umini at 23:07, 19 September 2015

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Davinciko: /* Chapter 2 */

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Chapter 2

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	“Really? Then I don’t have any reason to tell you.”		“Really? Then I don’t have any reason to tell you.”

	I bit my lower lip, finding that I was starting to get restless. Of course I mind how Ayaka ~~see~~ me. As if she had seen through my thoughts, Alice finally answered.		I bit my lower lip, finding that I was starting to get restless. Of course I mind how Ayaka sees me. As if she had seen through my thoughts, Alice finally answered.

	“…… Ayaka said that you are similar to Toshi.”		“…… Ayaka said that you are similar to Toshi.”
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	I stood there for awhile, and resignedly picked up the spade and the armband. I originally thought that Ayaka might come back immediately, but I as a member of the Gardening Club should still do my job. But I only know how to water and weed, after I finished doing them, it was as if there was a hole in my heart.		I stood there for awhile, and resignedly picked up the spade and the armband. I originally thought that Ayaka might come back immediately, but I as a member of the Gardening Club should still do my job. But I only know how to water and weed, after I finished doing them, it was as if there was a hole in my heart.

	Until the sun ~~have~~ set, Ayaka still ~~haven’t~~ come back.		Until the sun had set, Ayaka still hasn’t come back.

	I walked into the computer lab that I didn’t enter for a long time, tried to sit in the seat by the windows, but I couldn’t find the energy to turn on the computer. So the computer lab that has only one person is actually so quiet.		I walked into the computer lab that I didn’t enter for a long time, tried to sit in the seat by the windows, but I couldn’t find the energy to turn on the computer. So the computer lab that has only one person is actually so quiet.
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	After pondering for a while, I thought of a place that I haven’t searched for yet.		After pondering for a while, I thought of a place that I haven’t searched for yet.

	The greenhouse was at the interior of the school, near to the walls surrounding the school. At the other side of the wall is a graveyard, so not many people ~~goes~~ there. Entering the Gardening Club for a month or so, this is still the first time that I’ve come to the greenhouse. As taking care of greenhouse plants requires special skills, Ayaka ~~have~~ always handled them alone.		The greenhouse was at the interior of the school, near to the walls surrounding the school. At the other side of the wall is a graveyard, so not many people go there. Entering the Gardening Club for a month or so, this is still the first time that I’ve come to the greenhouse. As taking care of greenhouse plants requires special skills, Ayaka has always handled them alone.

	Through the foggy glass, I could only faintly see the greenery inside, its interior should be about as big as a classroom.		Through the foggy glass, I could only faintly see the greenery inside, its interior should be about as big as a classroom.

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112.204.130.188: /* Chapter 2 */

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Chapter 2

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	She said to me. I raised my head, clumsily returned her smile and said with my voice that sounded like it was going to vanish at any moment: “Uh, I’m sorry……” That was the best that I could do at that moment.		She said to me. I raised my head, clumsily returned her smile and said with my voice that sounded like it was going to vanish at any moment: “Uh, I’m sorry……” That was the best that I could do at that moment.

	“Hey, let’s make a bigger one! Like a ~~flage~~ or something. We can use it during the school festival for the club relay race.”		“Hey, let’s make a bigger one! Like a flag or something. We can use it during the school festival for the club relay race.”

	Who would take part, then? There’s only two people in the club.		Who would take part, then? There’s only two people in the club.

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	**I was brought to the arcade at the shopping ~~centre~~ of the station. The first floor was filled with crane games and sticker making machines, while half of the second floor was occupied by large music game machines, online games and racing games. The older games were all squeezed in a corner.		**I was brought to the arcade at the shopping center of the station. The first floor was filled with crane games and sticker making machines, while half of the second floor was occupied by large music game machines, online games and racing games. The older games were all squeezed in a corner.

	Toshi was really good in fighting games, Toshi-senpai and Hiro-san challenged him in turn, but still can’t defeat him.		Toshi was really good in fighting games, Toshi-senpai and Hiro-san challenged him in turn, but still can’t defeat him.
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	After returning to the ramen shop, I found that the shop was pitch dark, and there ~~were~~ not even one customer, while Ayaka could not be seen anywhere as well. Min-san was stirring the butter in a large bowl.		After returning to the ramen shop, I found that the shop was pitch dark, and there was not even one customer, while Ayaka could not be seen anywhere as well. Min-san was stirring the butter in a large bowl.

	“I told Ayaka, since there’s no customers today, she could go home first. But she said that Toshi might come back, so she’s waiting upstairs.”		“I told Ayaka, since there’s no customers today, she could go home first. But she said that Toshi might come back, so she’s waiting upstairs.”
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	Ayaka sadly knitted her brows, placing her phone back into her bag.		Ayaka sadly knitted her brows, placing her phone back into her bag.

	“He’s like this ~~everytime~~, always disappearing without saying a thing.”		“He’s like this every time, always disappearing without saying a thing.”

	I thought to myself: "That’s probably because he thinks that you’re troublesome." Ayaka looked at me and cocked her head.		I thought to myself: "That’s probably because he thinks that you’re troublesome." Ayaka looked at me and cocked her head.

Sleepy920 at 10:08, 21 April 2012

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	“Cheer up!” Ayaka patted my back. Oh please, the person who made me feel down was you in the first place!		“Cheer up!” Ayaka patted my back. Oh please, the person who made me feel down was you in the first place!

	“The people at ‘Hanamaru’ seems to like Fujishima-kun a lot, probably because you guys give off same ~~the~~ aura! Tetsu-senpai told me take you there again.”<!--J112 stopping point-->		“The people at ‘Hanamaru’ seems to like Fujishima-kun a lot, probably because you guys give off the same aura! Tetsu-senpai told me take you there again.”<!--J112 stopping point-->

	“I had already decided to never go there again.” If I continue to go, I would definitely become one of them sooner or later.		“I had already decided to never go there again.” If I continue to go, I would definitely become one of them sooner or later.
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	“This shop was originally my dad’s.” Her expression suddenly returned to normal and said: “I have wanted to open an ice cream shop, so I became an apprentice at an ice cream shop. But one day my dad suddenly disappeared without a trace, so I came back to inherit the shop.		“This shop was originally my dad’s.” Her expression suddenly returned to normal and said: “I have wanted to open an ice cream shop, so I became an apprentice at an ice cream shop. But one day my dad suddenly disappeared without a trace, so I came back to inherit the shop.

	“So that’s it……” I don’t know what to say and could only lower my head in apology. “I’m sorry, asking these strange questions.”		“So that’s it……” I don’t know what to say, and could only lower my head in apology. “I’m sorry, asking these strange questions.”

	“You don’t need to be sorry.” Min-san said while smiling.		“You don’t need to be sorry.” Min-san said while smiling.
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	“Yeah, I did. But I like this shop, the customers and the atmosphere here. These are only present because of the ramen shop. If I remodeled the shop, these will disappear, so I chose to continue.”		“Yeah, I did. But I like this shop, the customers and the atmosphere here. These are only present because of the ramen shop. If I remodeled the shop, these will disappear, so I chose to continue.”

	Min-san looked around the dark shop. There were menus that were splattered with drops of oil, autographs of artists(probably) stuck onto the wall, a cracked counter and an old but brightly polished kitchen ceiling and wall.		Min-san looked around the dark shop. There were menus that were splattered with drops of oil, autographs of artists(probably) stuck onto the wall, a cracked counter, and an old but brightly polished kitchen ceiling and wall.

	“Those who doesn’t have a job claimed the back of the ramen shop as their territory, it’s because they don’t have any other places to go. I don’t mind that!”		“Those who doesn’t have a job claimed the back of the ramen shop as their territory, it’s because they don’t have any other places to go. I don’t mind that!”

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	The next day, I planned to skip the fifth and sixth period of Chemistry and go home straightaway. That was because I wasn’t ready to speak to Ayaka alone.		The next day, I planned to skip the fifth and sixth period of Chemistry and go home straightaway. That was because I wasn’t ready to speak to Ayaka alone.

	But when break time started, the guys nearby started to come and chat with me, causing me to lose my chance from ~~escaping~~ the classroom.		But when break time started, the guys nearby started to come and chat with me, causing me to lose my chance to escape from the classroom.

	“Fujishima, I saw you at the arcade yesterday. You were with Ichinomiya-senpai, ~~aren’t~~ you?”		“Fujishima, I saw you at the arcade yesterday. You were with Ichinomiya-senpai, weren’t you?”

	“Erm, hmm?”		“Erm, hmm?”
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	Lately, my classmates kept chatting with me, but I’m still not used to it. To be exact, I haven’t remembered their names yet, so I feel as if I did something wrong when I talk to them. But I still answered them:		Lately, my classmates kept chatting with me, but I’m still not used to it. To be exact, I haven’t remembered their names yet, so I feel as if I did something wrong when I talk to them. But I still answered them:

	“Are you talking about Tetsu-senpai, ~~Right~~? Do you guys know him?”~~*****~~		“Are you talking about Tetsu-senpai, perhaps? Do you guys know him?”

	“Of course, Ichinomiya-senpai is extremely famous, I’ve heard that some boxing centers tried to recruit him for their team.”		“Of course, Ichinomiya-senpai is extremely famous, I’ve heard that some boxing centers tried to recruit him for their team.”

	“That’s right, he’s a legendary person. Didn’t he do a lot of great things before this? I’ve heard that the reason ~~that~~ the P.E teacher’s restroom is turned into a storeroom ~~was~~ that Ichinomiya-senpai ruined it.”		“That’s right, he’s a legendary person. Didn’t he do a lot of great things before this? I’ve heard that the reason for which the P.E teacher’s restroom was turned into a storeroom is that Ichinomiya-senpai ruined it.”

	“It was also said that the back door is kept closed because Ichinomiya-senpai broke it, so it’s become crooked and couldn’t be opened.”		“It was also said that the back door is kept closed because Ichinomiya-senpai broke it, so it’s become crooked and couldn’t be opened.”
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	“It doesn’t matter if you don’t remember their names, it’s just that you seem very guarded when talking to the others, like you’re talking at two sides of a brick wall. You were like that yesterday too……”		“It doesn’t matter if you don’t remember their names, it’s just that you seem very guarded when talking to the others, like you’re talking at two sides of a brick wall. You were like that yesterday too……”

	Ayaka still minded what had happened yesterday…… Actually I mind it too. The words that Toshi ~~have~~ said is still lingering in my ears.		Ayaka still minded what had happened yesterday…… Actually I mind it too. The words that Toshi had said were still lingering in my ears.

	“…… Why do you butt in my business so much? Are those people who can’t fit in school life such an eyesore?”		“…… Why do you butt in my business so much? Are those people who can’t fit in school life such an eyesore?”

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	“Cheer up!” Ayaka patted my back. Oh please, the person who made me feel down was you in the first place!		“Cheer up!” Ayaka patted my back. Oh please, the person who made me feel down was you in the first place!

	“The people at ‘Hanamaru’ seems to like Fujishima-kun a lot, probably because you guys give off the same aura! Tetsu-senpai told me take you there again.”<!--J112 stopping point-->		“The people at ‘Hanamaru’ seems to like Fujishima-kun a lot, probably because you guys give off the same aura! Tetsu-senpai told me to take you there again.”<!--J112 stopping point-->

	“I had already decided to never go there again.” If I continue to go, I would definitely become one of them sooner or later.		“I had already decided to never go there again.” If I continue to go, I would definitely become one of them sooner or later.
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	“Please go! Everyone’s waiting for you!”		“Please go! Everyone’s waiting for you!”

	Which quality in me do they admire? I almost never spoke to others willingly, so my social skills is quite poor!		Which quality in me do they admire? I almost never spoke to others willingly, so my social skills are quite poor!

	“You are not as introverted as an armadillidium like you thought!”		“You are not as introverted as an armadillidium like you thought!”
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	In the end, I still couldn't refuse her, and could only follow Ayaka to the ramen shop. That day, there ~~weren’t~~ anyone behind "Hanamaru’s" kitchen door. Although it was already evening, there weren’t any customers there.		In the end, I still couldn't refuse her, and could only follow Ayaka to the ramen shop. That day, there wasn’t anyone behind "Hanamaru’s" kitchen door. Although it was already evening, there weren’t any customers there.

	“So you’re here again, Narumi?”		“So you’re here again, Narumi?”
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	“Eh?”		“Eh?”

	"Although I know what is a nutrition lunch, I have never entered any educational institutions from birth.”		"Although I know what a nutrition lunch is, I have never entered any educational institutions from birth.”

	I didn’t think that Alice had a normal life, but I never would have thought that she haven’t even went to primary school.		I didn’t think that Alice had a normal life, but I never would have thought that she haven’t even went to primary school.
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	“Nothing, I just felt inconceivable, to why I would tell you so much.”		“Nothing, I just felt inconceivable, to why I would tell you so much.”

	I felt mystified too, never ~~have~~ I thought that Alice would tell me so much about herself, making me feel a bit worried about the future of this pajamas clad girl—— even though I am absolutely not qualified to be worried for other people.		I felt mystified too, never had I thought that Alice would tell me so much about herself, making me feel a bit worried about the future of this pajamas clad girl—— even though I am absolutely not qualified to be worried for other people.

	“You can just tell me what you think! I don’t mind.”		“You can just tell me what you think! I don’t mind.”
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	“Why……”		“Why……”

	“Because Ayaka is worried of him. Don’t ask anymore, just hurry!”		“Because Ayaka is worried about him. Don’t ask anymore, just hurry!”

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	Ayaka said: “ Onii-chan, wait for me awhile, I’ll make something hot for you to eat.” And she returned to the kitchen after saying that too.		Ayaka said: “ Onii-chan, wait for me awhile, I’ll make something hot for you to eat.” And she returned to the kitchen after saying that too.

	Toshi smacked his lips, and then took out a small plastic bag out of his pockets, broke the pills in the plastic bag into half ~~and~~ crushed ~~eat~~, ~~then~~ swallowed it down without even a drink of water, and he stared at me after he finished eating the medicine.		Toshi smacked his lips, and then took out a small plastic bag out of his pockets, broke the pills in the plastic bag into half, crushed them, swallowed it down without even a drink of water, and then stared at me after he finished eating the medicine.

	“Ayaka told me about you some time ago, so you’re in the same club?”		“Ayaka told me about you some time ago, so you’re in the same club?”
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	**I was brought to the arcade at the shopping center of the station. The first floor was filled with crane games and sticker making machines, while half of the second floor was occupied by large music game machines, online games and racing games. The older games were all squeezed in a corner.		**I was brought to the arcade at the shopping center of the station. The first floor was filled with crane games and sticker making machines, while half of the second floor was occupied by large music game machines, online games and racing games. The older games were all squeezed in a corner.

	Toshi was really good in fighting games, ~~Toshi~~-senpai and Hiro-san challenged him in turn, but still ~~can’t~~ defeat him.		Toshi was really good in fighting games, Tetsu-senpai and Hiro-san challenged him in turn, but still couldn’t defeat him.

	Major dragged Toshi to a Gundam fighting machine and challenged him with brimming confidence, but was also completely defeated. Toshi, who was controlling Sac II, had superhuman-like senses, making people think that he had another pair of eyes behind his back. Toshi did not want to play at the start, but his eyes became somewhat eerie after winning a few matches, and he also made strange noises. Having a six time winning streak while playing with Major, I originally thought that Toshi would again make the annoying laugh again, but his face suddenly turned green, said ‘I’m going to the washroom for awhile’, and left his game that was playing halfway.		Major dragged Toshi to a Gundam fighting machine and challenged him with brimming confidence, but was also completely defeated. Toshi, who was controlling Sac II, had superhuman-like senses, making people think that he had another pair of eyes behind his back. Toshi did not want to play at the start, but his eyes became somewhat eerie after winning a few matches, and he also made strange noises. Having a six time winning streak while playing with Major, I originally thought that Toshi would again make the annoying laugh again, but his face suddenly turned green, said ‘I’m going to the washroom for awhile’, and left his game that was playing halfway.
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	“The people ~~looks~~ as if they’re not moving. It’s true, I can even see the movement of a dot. Even if I close my eyes, and just listen to the noise, I could win.”		“The people look as if they’re not moving. It’s true, I can even see the movement of a dot. Even if I close my eyes, and just listen to the noise, I could win.”

	After saying that, he laughed, giving no thought to the people walking around.		After saying that, he laughed, giving no thought to the people walking around.
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	“Forgot, because I didn’t meet them for quite a long time already……”		“Forgot, because I didn’t meet them for quite a long time already……”

	Toshi suddenly stopped talking, and started to cough violently. After he stopped coughing, ~~his~~ was still breathing heavily, his hunched back rocking up and down. I didn’t know what to do, and can only rub his back covered by the sports jacket.		Toshi suddenly stopped talking, and started to cough violently. After he stopped coughing, he was still breathing heavily, his hunched back rocking up and down. I didn’t know what to do, and can only rub his back covered by the sports jacket.

	Toshi used his trembling hands to take out a plastic bag from his pockets, this time he swallowed a pill with a gulp of Fanta. I tried to stop him, but it was too late. The carbonated drink spilled onto Toshi’s jeans, but he doesn’t seem to mind. The people passing by stared at us.		Toshi used his trembling hands to take out a plastic bag from his pockets, this time he swallowed a pill with a gulp of Fanta. I tried to stop him, but it was too late. The carbonated drink spilled onto Toshi’s jeans, but he doesn’t seem to mind. The people passing by stared at us.