Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 1 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Lne: Corrected some tenses and replaced many single quotes with apostrophes.

2017-03-31T21:16:49Z

Corrected some tenses and replaced many single quotes with apostrophes.

Helllo: /* Chapter 3 */ added "wanted"

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Chapter 3: added "wanted"

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	I recalled the day on the rooftop. Did I say anything wrong? Was Ayaka trying to say anything to me? Why didn’t she say it? Did I miss something? If I asked her, would she answer? Why didn’t I ask? Why? My phone rang for quite some time, but I pretended not to hear it. My mind kept replaying the few hours on that day at the rooftop.		I recalled the day on the rooftop. Did I say anything wrong? Was Ayaka trying to say anything to me? Why didn’t she say it? Did I miss something? If I asked her, would she answer? Why didn’t I ask? Why? My phone rang for quite some time, but I pretended not to hear it. My mind kept replaying the few hours on that day at the rooftop.

	The only thing that Ayaka left me was the armband of the Gardening Club, printed with an orange logo on it. It’s the armband that she wore on her arm that day. After I was forced to put it on, I to return it to her, and brought it back home straightaway.		The only thing that Ayaka left me was the armband of the Gardening Club, printed with an orange logo on it. It’s the armband that she wore on her arm that day. After I was forced to put it on, I wanted to return it to her, and brought it back home straightaway.

	Have Ayaka already planned to suicide at that moment?		Have Ayaka already planned to suicide at that moment?

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	“Careful! Carefully place it into the box! Stuff it full of towels! Narumi, don’t touch the wound! What if you enlarge the wound!”		“Careful! Carefully place it into the box! Stuff it full of towels! Narumi, don’t touch the wound! What if you enlarge the wound!”

	Following Alice’s directions that were full of yelling and crying, Major and I placed the hurt plushie into a big cardboard box stuffed full of rolled up towels if the seams of the box. The huge, wrapped up box is indeed a thing that couldn’t be handled by just a person.		Following Alice’s directions that were full of yelling and crying, Major and I placed the hurt plushie into a big cardboard box stuffed full of rolled up towels in the seams of the box. The huge, wrapped up box is indeed a thing that couldn’t be handled by just a person.

	Major asked: “So it’ll be okay if we just bring this to Yondaime’s?”		Major asked: “So it’ll be okay if we just bring this to Yondaime’s?”

	“Tell him to fix it by ~~this night~~, this concerns my life!”		“Tell him to fix it by tonight, this concerns my life!”

	Alice said with tears in her eyes. Why would they hand it to Yondaime? How does this concern her life? Questions swirled around in my mind, but the atmosphere does not allow me to ask them.		Alice said with tears in her eyes. Why would they hand it to Yondaime? How does this concern her life? Questions swirled around in my mind, but the atmosphere does not allow me to ask them.

Rocko at 20:41, 28 July 2012

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Asteradragon at 03:14, 27 December 2011

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			==Chapter 3==

	During the winter break, I started to show up at Hanamaru Ramen Shop more often, because Ayaka was usually working there. Just staying at home is really boring, anyways.		During the winter break, I started to show up at Hanamaru Ramen Shop more often, because Ayaka was usually working there. Just staying at home is really boring, anyways.

Zephyrus: Toshio --> Toshi

2011-12-24T02:51:35Z

Toshio --> Toshi

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Zephyrus: (added images to the chapter)

2011-12-20T14:29:15Z

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			[[Image:Kamisama no memocho vol01 141.jpg\|thumb\|Ayaka hurriedly chased the bus, and waved at me.]]
	On the way home, I walked to the bus stopwith Ayaka, but still couldn’t say anything. When we walked past the bridge, the bus coincidentally passed by us. Ayaka hurriedly chased the bus, and waved at me.		On the way home, I walked to the bus stopwith Ayaka, but still couldn’t say anything. When we walked past the bridge, the bus coincidentally passed by us. Ayaka hurriedly chased the bus, and waved at me.

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	My shoulders tremebled, and a viscous liquid rose from the upper part of my waist to my flanks. If I just stood there without moving, I would probably just scream without a reason, so I flung out my tightly clenched fists.		My shoulders tremebled, and a viscous liquid rose from the upper part of my waist to my flanks. If I just stood there without moving, I would probably just scream without a reason, so I flung out my tightly clenched fists.

			[[Image:Kamisama no memocho vol01 153.jpg\|thumb\|Right, left, right, I continuously hit Tetsu-senpai’s large silhouette.]]
	My outstretched right fist made a ‘dong’ sound, and was absorbed by the boxing gloves. A numbing pain was transmitted to my elbows and shoulders. I didn’t care, and lashed out with my left fist. Colliding with the punching gloves as soon as I straightened my hands, the pain could be felt even from my teeth. Right, left, right, I continuously hit Tetsu-senpai’s large silhouette. Even though I gave punched a lot, the tightly held boxing gloves would receive my fists, reflecting the attack back to my body. It hurts. When you hit people, your own self would feel pain. It’s a simple and persuasive fact. Did Ayaka feel pain at that moment too? Or did she have no time to feel pain? Sweat trickled into my eyes, blurring my vision. I could only hear my rapid breathing and the sound of me hitting the punching gloves. This is a real sound that belonged to me, and real pain.		My outstretched right fist made a ‘dong’ sound, and was absorbed by the boxing gloves. A numbing pain was transmitted to my elbows and shoulders. I didn’t care, and lashed out with my left fist. Colliding with the punching gloves as soon as I straightened my hands, the pain could be felt even from my teeth. Right, left, right, I continuously hit Tetsu-senpai’s large silhouette. Even though I gave punched a lot, the tightly held boxing gloves would receive my fists, reflecting the attack back to my body. It hurts. When you hit people, your own self would feel pain. It’s a simple and persuasive fact. Did Ayaka feel pain at that moment too? Or did she have no time to feel pain? Sweat trickled into my eyes, blurring my vision. I could only hear my rapid breathing and the sound of me hitting the punching gloves. This is a real sound that belonged to me, and real pain.

Zephyrus at 05:23, 19 December 2011

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	Alice made a sound as if she was forced into a corner and said repeatedly. I suppressed the emotions accumulated at my chest. What are the emotions that the young girl in front of me showed me? Nostalgia, pain and helplessness.		Alice made a sound as if she was forced into a corner and said repeatedly. I suppressed the emotions accumulated at my chest. What are the emotions that the young girl in front of me showed me? Nostalgia, pain and helplessness.

	~~“Are~~ you willing to help me? Let’s just make it as the payment for your request.”		"Are you willing to help me? Let’s just make it as the payment for your request."

	Alice looked at me like a drowning person clutching at a straw, the faint rays of light, the stars in the glass, now looked as if they were going to shatter.		Alice looked at me like a drowning person clutching at a straw, the faint rays of light, the stars in the glass, now looked as if they were going to shatter.

Zephyrus at 05:22, 19 December 2011

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	Alice made a sound as if she was forced into a corner and said repeatedly. I suppressed the emotions accumulated at my chest. What are the emotions that the young girl in front of me showed me? Nostalgia, pain and helplessness.		Alice made a sound as if she was forced into a corner and said repeatedly. I suppressed the emotions accumulated at my chest. What are the emotions that the young girl in front of me showed me? Nostalgia, pain and helplessness.

	“Are you willing to help me? Let’s just make it as the payment for your request.”		“Are you willing to help me? Let’s just make it as the payment for your request.”

	Alice looked at me like a drowning person clutching at a straw, the faint rays of light, the stars in the glass, now looked as if they were going to shatter.		Alice looked at me like a drowning person clutching at a straw, the faint rays of light, the stars in the glass, now looked as if they were going to shatter.

Zephyrus at 05:22, 19 December 2011

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	“Then just leave school earlier!”		“Then just leave school earlier!”

	“What are you talking about? For the sake of barely staying in school, I ~~strived~~ to get credits that are barely enough to pass, and then skip classes, maintaining the state of not going to the next level or graduating, waiting for eight years to pass then leave school automatically.”		“What are you talking about? For the sake of barely staying in school, I strive to get credits that are barely enough to pass, and then skip classes, maintaining the state of not going to the next level or graduating, waiting for eight years to pass then leave school automatically.”

	“…… Don’t you want to graduate?” I actually asked him that.		“…… Don’t you want to graduate?” I actually asked him that.
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	They saluted Hiro. I couldn’t help but take a step back, nearly dropping the box in the process. What is with this situation? Second brother?		They saluted Hiro. I couldn’t help but take a step back, nearly dropping the box in the process. What is with this situation? Second brother?

	The people wearing black T-shirts were quite young, at most they’re at the age when they’ve just graduated from high school. They had skin that was dyed into a dark color, bleached hair and had piercings in their ears. They looked just like ordinary young people who would gather at the streets of the street ~~centre~~ every night. The only thing different with them is that there was an emblem printed on top of their T-shirts.		The people wearing black T-shirts were quite young, at most they’re at the age when they’ve just graduated from high school. They had skin that was dyed into a dark color, bleached hair and had piercings in their ears. They looked just like ordinary young people who would gather at the streets of the street center every night. The only thing different with them is that there was an emblem printed on top of their T-shirts.

	Hiro answered: “ Don’t call me that! I’ve said that loads of times, don’t call me second brother.”		Hiro answered: “ Don’t call me that! I’ve said that loads of times, don’t call me second brother.”
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	“But Ayaka said that there’s no number displayed.”		“But Ayaka said that there’s no number displayed.”

	“So what? It’s just not displayed on Ayaka’s phone, but there would still be a record at the telecommunication ~~centre~~!”		“So what? It’s just not displayed on Ayaka’s phone, but there would still be a record at the telecommunication center!”

	How can you check such a thing? Isn’t that a crime?		How can you check such a thing? Isn’t that a crime?
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	Alice hung up.		Alice hung up.

	I stared at my cold phone for awhile. Which reminds me, I think she said that she’s a hacker or something like that. She could investigate my file even with Dr. Pepper in one hand, and humming a song through her nose, right? But shouldn’t it be impossible for her to investigate the records of the telecommunication ~~centre~~?		I stared at my cold phone for awhile. Which reminds me, I think she said that she’s a hacker or something like that. She could investigate my file even with Dr. Pepper in one hand, and humming a song through her nose, right? But shouldn’t it be impossible for her to investigate the records of the telecommunication center?

	It’s useless if I worry. The only thing that I could do is to tell Ayaka about Toshi’s problem, at least telling her this is my duty. But how should I say it? Your brother is currently addicted to drugs so don’t go near to him, could I tell her something like this?		It’s useless if I worry. The only thing that I could do is to tell Ayaka about Toshi’s problem, at least telling her this is my duty. But how should I say it? Your brother is currently addicted to drugs so don’t go near to him, could I tell her something like this?
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	“You must wear it the whole day, that’s an order from the club president.”		“You must wear it the whole day, that’s an order from the club president.”

	Ayaka looked really happy that day. She taught me a lot of things, like how to prune, pick seeds, types of fertilizers and floriography, until I almost couldn’t remember them all. Seeing Ayaka like that, I couldn’t help but have an ~~urget~~ to ask her for a few times: “Did something happen to you?” I originally wanted to tell Ayaka about Toshi, but didn’t do so as I didn’t know how to tell that to her.		Ayaka looked really happy that day. She taught me a lot of things, like how to prune, pick seeds, types of fertilizers and floriography, until I almost couldn’t remember them all. Seeing Ayaka like that, I couldn’t help but have an urge to ask her for a few times: “Did something happen to you?” I originally wanted to tell Ayaka about Toshi, but didn’t do so as I didn’t know how to tell that to her.

	Finally, it was already sunset. The clock on the school building opposite to this building said that it was four forty-five. We sat side by side on the railings and looked at the evening sky.		Finally, it was already sunset. The clock on the school building opposite to this building said that it was four forty-five. We sat side by side on the railings and looked at the evening sky.
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	When did that happen, I wonder? Much earlier than when I noticed Ayaka, she had already knew who I was.		When did that happen, I wonder? Much earlier than when I noticed Ayaka, she had already knew who I was.

	“That time I wanted to look for you and have a talk, but I didn’t have a chance. So I moved a few plants to the rooftop and pretended to stay at the rooftop because of club ~~activites~~.”		“That time I wanted to look for you and have a talk, but I didn’t have a chance. So I moved a few plants to the rooftop and pretended to stay at the rooftop because of club activities.”

	I almost couldn’t breathe at this moment.		I almost couldn’t breathe at this moment.
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	[[Image:Kamisama no memocho vol01 141.jpg\|thumb\|Ayaka hurriedly chased the bus, and waved at me.]]		[[Image:Kamisama no memocho vol01 141.jpg\|thumb\|Ayaka hurriedly chased the bus, and waved at me.]]
	On the way home, I walked to the ~~bus stopwith~~ Ayaka, but still couldn’t say anything. When we walked past the bridge, the bus coincidentally passed by us. Ayaka hurriedly chased the bus, and waved at me.		On the way home, I walked to the busstop with Ayaka, but still couldn’t say anything. When we walked past the bridge, the bus coincidentally passed by us. Ayaka hurriedly chased the bus, and waved at me.

	I could still remember clearly Ayaka’s face at that moment.		I could still remember clearly Ayaka’s face at that moment.
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	At the pitch black bicycle parking lot, my bike was so cold that it was as if it had frozen.		At the pitch black bicycle parking lot, my bike was so cold that it was as if it had frozen.

	When I went home, I snuggled into my bed, imagining the moment when Ayaka crossed over the railings on the rooftop to jump of the building, but I couldn’t. What’s with this? What on ~~Earh~~ is with this? My tightly clenched hands started to tremble, and I started feeling nauseous. I fervently tried not to, and in the end I went into the realm when reality and dreams interlaced and slept.		When I went home, I snuggled into my bed, imagining the moment when Ayaka crossed over the railings on the rooftop to jump of the building, but I couldn’t. What’s with this? What on Earth is with this? My tightly clenched hands started to tremble, and I started feeling nauseous. I fervently tried not to, and in the end I went into the realm when reality and dreams interlaced and slept.

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	I hugged my knees on the hard, round stool of the hospital, restraining the dumb thoughts that exploded in my heart.		I hugged my knees on the hard, round stool of the hospital, restraining the dumb thoughts that exploded in my heart.

	After that, my classmates came to visit Ayaka for quite a few times. Compared with seeing Ayaka, they were even more surprised when they ~~say~~ me. It seemed that they said stuff like cheer up, you can’t skip school or something like that, but I couldn’t really remember it.		After that, my classmates came to visit Ayaka for quite a few times. Compared with seeing Ayaka, they were even more surprised when they saw me. It seemed that they said stuff like cheer up, you can’t skip school or something like that, but I couldn’t really remember it.

	In the end, the only person in the ward was me. Only me and Ayaka’s empty shell were left. The winter sunlight that passed through the curtains were slow and weak.		In the end, the only person in the ward was me. Only me and Ayaka’s empty shell were left. The winter sunlight that passed through the curtains were slow and weak.
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	“I will accept your weak, powerless punches.”		“I will accept your weak, powerless punches.”

	My shoulders ~~tremebled~~, and a viscous liquid rose from the upper part of my waist to my flanks. If I just stood there without moving, I would probably just scream without a reason, so I flung out my tightly clenched fists.		My shoulders trembled, and a viscous liquid rose from the upper part of my waist to my flanks. If I just stood there without moving, I would probably just scream without a reason, so I flung out my tightly clenched fists.

	[[Image:Kamisama no memocho vol01 153.jpg\|thumb\|Right, left, right, I continuously hit Tetsu-senpai’s large silhouette.]]		[[Image:Kamisama no memocho vol01 153.jpg\|thumb\|Right, left, right, I continuously hit Tetsu-senpai’s large silhouette.]]