Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 2 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Blind: /* Chapter 2 */

2014-10-29T18:51:10Z

Chapter 2

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	No phone?		No phone?

	I was lost in thought. Because I thought that having a phone was natural, I overlooked ~~something｡ｪ~~ Kusakabe Masaya couldn’t contact Meo even if he wants to, while Meo can’t reach him as well.		I was lost in thought. Because I thought that having a phone was natural, I overlooked something. Kusakabe Masaya couldn’t contact Meo even if he wants to, while Meo can’t reach him as well.

	It’s almost like……		It’s almost like……
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	I could feel it, she wasn’t joking.		I could feel it, she wasn’t joking.

	~~“So｡ｪ~~ you, who do not feel fear, just bluntly, lazily sleep without caring about your image.”		“So you, who do not feel fear, just bluntly, lazily sleep without caring about your image.”

	“I’m telling you that I can’t sleep!”		“I’m telling you that I can’t sleep!”

Andy29485: /* Chapter 2 */

2013-08-22T20:48:47Z

Chapter 2

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	Many shops around this area has the Hirasaka-gumi emblem on it, for instance clubs, stores for sports goods, boutiques and so on. If you look closely at the corner of their signboards, you would probably see sticker with a swallowtail butterfly, the emblem of the Taira clan, on it.		Many shops around this area has the Hirasaka-gumi emblem on it, for instance clubs, stores for sports goods, boutiques and so on. If you look closely at the corner of their signboards, you would probably see sticker with a swallowtail butterfly, the emblem of the Taira clan, on it.

	It is said that these shops had connections to Hirasaka-gumi from the time the shops opened, but I, as a high school student, only heard rumors about this. In reality, the only person who’s doing everything is Yondaime, the leader of the gang. The other members always look very free, cooped up in their office all ~~they~~.		It is said that these shops had connections to Hirasaka-gumi from the time the shops opened, but I, as a high school student, only heard rumors about this. In reality, the only person who’s doing everything is Yondaime, the leader of the gang. The other members always look very free, cooped up in their office all day.

	Because of Alice’s request, I had to go use the creaking elevator to get to the third floor of the broken down building, nervously open the iron door that the signboard of Hirasaka-gumi is hanging on, and then I saw the office stuffed full of members wearing black T-shirts.		Because of Alice’s request, I had to go use the creaking elevator to get to the third floor of the broken down building, nervously open the iron door that the signboard of Hirasaka-gumi is hanging on, and then I saw the office stuffed full of members wearing black T-shirts.

Q: /* Chapter 2 */

2012-12-12T19:20:45Z

Chapter 2

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	I suddenly thought of the question. As she’s a hikikomori, maybe she’s nocturnal?		I suddenly thought of the question. As she’s a hikikomori, maybe she’s nocturnal?

	“The moment when I sleep is when everyone in the world sleeps. If only there’s ~~anyone~~ who may threaten me awake, I will not hand myself to ~~Hypnos~~.”		“The moment when I sleep is when everyone in the world sleeps. If only there’s even a single person who may threaten me awake, I will not hand myself to sleep.”

	“Er......”		“Er......”
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	I still don’t understand what she’s trying to say.		I still don’t understand what she’s trying to say.

	“That means that I almost never sleep. The longest time that I slept is probably about an hour. Some doctors ~~said~~ that it’s an illness, while some doctors ~~said~~ that it’s a physical condition, then expressed their strong desire of wanting to do research on me. That was one of the reasons that I ran away from home.”		“That means that I almost never sleep. The longest time that I have slept is probably about an hour. Some doctors say that it’s an illness, while some doctors say that it’s a physical condition, then expressed their strong desire of wanting to do research on me. That was one of the reasons that I ran away from home.”

	“Uh......” Is that problem really okay?		“Uh......” Is that problem really okay?

Q: /* Chapter 2 */

2012-12-11T19:21:45Z

Chapter 2

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	Knowing that I wouldn’t get a wink of sleep even if I went home anyways, I directly went to Hanamaru to check out the situation. The steel door of the ramen shop was unexpectedly half open even though it’s so early, and trapezium-shaped light shone on the gray asphalt road. Squatting down to look at the interior of the shop, I could see a silhouette with small braids walking in and out of the counter. It was Meo. What in the world is she doing at this time?		Knowing that I wouldn’t get a wink of sleep even if I went home anyways, I directly went to Hanamaru to check out the situation. The steel door of the ramen shop was unexpectedly half open even though it’s so early, and trapezium-shaped light shone on the gray asphalt road. Squatting down to look at the interior of the shop, I could see a silhouette with small braids walking in and out of the counter. It was Meo. What in the world is she doing at this time?

	I really don’t know how to mention her father’s problem to me, and since I haven’t sorted out my own feelings yet, I really don’t feel like meeting her. However, Meo noticed me as I was about to leave, and she opened the door for me. By now, I couldn’t escape anymore.		I really don’t know how to mention her father’s problem to her, and since I haven’t sorted out my own feelings yet, I really don’t feel like meeting her. However, Meo noticed me as I was about to leave, and she opened the door for me. By now, I couldn’t escape anymore.

	“You’re up early, Mr. Assistant.”		“You’re up early, Mr. Assistant.”
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	“Fourteen.”		“Fourteen.”

	She’s two years younger than me, but she seems to be more energetic than me.		She’s two years younger than me, but she seems to be more energetic than I am.

	“As long as your parents agree, you can marry after two years. But you don’t have ~~any people~~ you like, do you?”		“As long as your parents agree, you can marry after two years. But you don’t have anyone you like, do you?”

	“I do. My dad.”		“I do. My dad.”

203.116.187.1 at 08:25, 8 January 2012

2012-01-08T08:25:45Z

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	“Sorry, I’ll wash your hair now!” Meo went back to the washroom, and I heard the sound of the misty glass door closing.		“Sorry, I’ll wash your hair now!” Meo went back to the washroom, and I heard the sound of the misty glass door closing.

	“Miss ~~Assistant~~, don’t move around so much!”		“Miss Detective, don’t move around so much!”

	“Uuuu— my eyes hurt!”		“Uuuu— my eyes hurt!”

83.59.1.148: I missed one

2012-01-06T23:40:26Z

I missed one

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	“How can I forget about it!? Two thousand yen is a lot!”		“How can I forget about it!? Two thousand yen is a lot!”

	After walking out of the building, Octy brought Tetsu-senpai and I to a sushi shop for some reason. According to him, it seemed like it was because they needed a player to join their game, so he ~~borrowed~~ Tetsu-senpai two hundred thousand without interest, even promising him not to collect an entry fee and to treat senpai to lunch, so that he would join their game. That would mean senpai already lost two hundred thousand before I even reached there. It’s too scary. Being squeezed in the middle of senpai and Octy in the sushi shop, my hand holding the cup trembled. And also, why are we sitting like this? Why am I in a pincer attack!?		After walking out of the building, Octy brought Tetsu-senpai and I to a sushi shop for some reason. According to him, it seemed like it was because they needed a player to join their game, so he lent Tetsu-senpai two hundred thousand without interest, even promising him not to collect an entry fee and to treat senpai to lunch, so that he would join their game. That would mean senpai already lost two hundred thousand before I even reached there. It’s too scary. Being squeezed in the middle of senpai and Octy in the sushi shop, my hand holding the cup trembled. And also, why are we sitting like this? Why am I in a pincer attack!?

	“Oh, I see. So this is the guy who dealt with the kids who sold the drug. I’ve heard of it before. I really can’t tell that you’re that audacious. I’ll treat, so eat up.”		“Oh, I see. So this is the guy who dealt with the kids who sold the drug. I’ve heard of it before. I really can’t tell that you’re that audacious. I’ll treat, so eat up.”

83.59.18.182: And the rest. 'Lend to' and 'borrow from'.

2012-01-06T20:11:48Z

And the rest. 'Lend to' and 'borrow from'.

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	Suddenly hearing my shouts, a surprised expression appeared on Meo’s face. Then, Tetsu-senpai pushed me away from the back and stepped into the corridor.		Suddenly hearing my shouts, a surprised expression appeared on Meo’s face. Then, Tetsu-senpai pushed me away from the back and stepped into the corridor.

	“Meo, can you ~~borrow~~ me some money?”		“Meo, can you lend me some money?”

	“No, dad said to me not to have any money transactions with other people.”		“No, dad said to me not to have any money transactions with other people.”

	“Then it’s okay even if you don’t ~~borrow~~ me, you can just pretend that it’s an investment, I guarantee you that the money would increase twentyfold after the Sakura Gallery next week.”		“Then it’s okay even if you don’t lend me, you can just pretend that it’s an investment, I guarantee you that the money would increase twentyfold after the Sakura Gallery next week.”

	“Wait...... Tetsu-senpai, what are you saying!?”		“Wait...... Tetsu-senpai, what are you saying!?”
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	On the table that had a layer of some sort of wooly paper on it, a whole lot of mahjong tiles were placed on it.		On the table that had a layer of some sort of wooly paper on it, a whole lot of mahjong tiles were placed on it.

	“Narumi, you’re just in time. ~~Borrow~~ me two thousand.”		“Narumi, you’re just in time. Lend me two thousand.”

	Tetsu-senpai, who originally had his back to me, suddenly turned his head over, and stretched out his hand with an agitated expression on his face.		Tetsu-senpai, who originally had his back to me, suddenly turned his head over, and stretched out his hand with an agitated expression on his face.

83.59.18.182: 'Borrow me'? Are you serious?

2012-01-06T20:08:23Z

'Borrow me'? Are you serious?

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	When we reached the end of the staircase, senpai finally looked at me.		When we reached the end of the staircase, senpai finally looked at me.

	“Oh yeah, Narumi, ~~borrow~~ me some money!”		“Oh yeah, Narumi, lend me some money!”

	Is it me, or is the change of topic too sudden?		Is it me, or is the change of topic too sudden?

Zephyrus: Added image

2012-01-05T07:42:31Z

Added image

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	“Gardening Club kid, what are you doing here?”		“Gardening Club kid, what are you doing here?”

			[[Image:Kamisama no memochou vol02 097.png\|thumb\|''While walking into the study, Yondaime glared at me, as if his ferocious gaze was telling me that he’ll cut off my finger if I move.'']]
	While walking into the study, Yondaime glared at me, as if his ferocious gaze was telling me that he’ll cut off my finger if I move. He wore a crimson Chinese-styled coat with a picture embroidered on it. If other young people wore it, they would probably be said as showing off, but on this person, it feels rather scary. (I recently heard that the picture embroidered on the coat was sewed by Yondaime himself, so the fact that his sewing skills are at professional level is true.) Rocky and Pole stood behind him, the broadest and tallest men in the gang respectively.		While walking into the study, Yondaime glared at me, as if his ferocious gaze was telling me that he’ll cut off my finger if I move. He wore a crimson Chinese-styled coat with a picture embroidered on it. If other young people wore it, they would probably be said as showing off, but on this person, it feels rather scary. (I recently heard that the picture embroidered on the coat was sewed by Yondaime himself, so the fact that his sewing skills are at professional level is true.) Rocky and Pole stood behind him, the broadest and tallest men in the gang respectively.

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	“You’ll get sick like that.”		“You’ll get sick like that.”

			[[Image:Kamisama no memochou vol02 113.png\|thumb\|''Does everyone feel like playing with Alice as soon as they see her?'']]
	…… I feel like I saw this scene somewhere before. Does everyone feel like playing with Alice as soon as they see her?		…… I feel like I saw this scene somewhere before. Does everyone feel like playing with Alice as soon as they see her?

Zephyrus: Minor corrections

2012-01-02T13:35:54Z

Minor corrections

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	“The bag that Meo brought had two hundred million yen in it. How do you think that happened?”		“The bag that Meo brought had two hundred million yen in it. How do you think that happened?”

	“...... Didn’t he ~~take~~ the ~~company’s money~~?”		“...... Didn’t he defalcate the company?”

	“I don’t mean that, I’m asking why is it filled with cash worth two hundred million yen?”		“I don’t mean that, I’m asking why is it filled with cash worth two hundred million yen?”
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	I hesitated for awhile, then told her about the Boston bag. Yi Ling-san pressed her forehead with her hand and sighed.		I hesitated for awhile, then told her about the Boston bag. Yi Ling-san pressed her forehead with her hand and sighed.

	“So he really did ~~pocket~~ the ~~company’s money~~?”		“So he really did defalcate the company?”

	Taking the company’s money and hiding it at home, but failed, so he told his daughter to take away the money. This is actually quite a simple story, but if this became reality, Meo would become an accomplice (even if it wasn’t deliberate). When I started to ponder about the question, Yi Ling-san suddenly asked:		Taking the company’s money and hiding it at home, but failed, so he told his daughter to take away the money. This is actually quite a simple story, but if this became reality, Meo would become an accomplice (even if it wasn’t deliberate). When I started to ponder about the question, Yi Ling-san suddenly asked:
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	“I don’t know either.”		“I don’t know either.”

	“Would that be……” because it’s easier to ~~pocket~~ the ~~money~~ this way?		“Would that be……” because it’s easier to defalcate the company this way?

	For example, even if it’s their wages, he used his daughter to get the money from his house and run away, so there’s probably still some hanky panky going on.		For example, even if it’s their wages, he used his daughter to get the money from his house and run away, so there’s probably still some hanky panky going on.
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	“Even so, no matter how we think…… I think the results would be as we expected.”		“Even so, no matter how we think…… I think the results would be as we expected.”

	“Narumi, don’t jump to conclusions so quickly……” Unexpectedly, Alice was standing at Meo’s side. “There are a few problems regarding the theory that Kusakabe Masaya ~~pocketed~~ the ~~money~~. Firstly, the structure of the company isn’t so big that someone could just pocket two hundred million yen. Apart from that, the money is in cash. Besides that, the yakuza are looking for two hundred million yen, which matches the sum of money in the bag. But how did they know how much money was in it? Even if the pocketed money was confirmed by the company to be two hundred million yen, why is the money still here?”		“Narumi, don’t jump to conclusions so quickly……” Unexpectedly, Alice was standing at Meo’s side. “There are a few problems regarding the theory that Kusakabe Masaya defalcated the company. Firstly, the structure of the company isn’t so big that someone could just pocket two hundred million yen. Apart from that, the money is in cash. Besides that, the yakuza are looking for two hundred million yen, which matches the sum of money in the bag. But how did they know how much money was in it? Even if the pocketed money was confirmed by the company to be two hundred million yen, why is the money still here?”

	“Ah……”		“Ah……”
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	Alice pressed her head on Meo’s chest as she started hugging Alice tightly again.		Alice pressed her head on Meo’s chest as she started hugging Alice tightly again.

	“If my assumption is correct, ~~pocketing~~ the ~~company’s money~~ wouldn’t be so troublesome. What a pity.”		“If my assumption is correct, defalcating the company wouldn’t be so troublesome. What a pity.”

	“What…… does that mean?”		“What…… does that mean?”