Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 2 Chapter 5 - Revision history

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	==Chapter ~~Five~~==		==Chapter 5==

	It was only until the day that Yondaime and I became sworn brothers that I found out that not only the third floor, but the second floor was also rented by the gang. The partitions in the second floor was broken down to become a hall of about twenty tatamis, the floor was covered with wooden boards, and there was an altar in the room. It looks just like a kendo dojo.		It was only until the day that Yondaime and I became sworn brothers that I found out that not only the third floor, but the second floor was also rented by the gang. The partitions in the second floor was broken down to become a hall of about twenty tatamis, the floor was covered with wooden boards, and there was an altar in the room. It looks just like a kendo dojo.

Helllo: /* Chapter Five */ Fixed typos

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Chapter Five: Fixed typos

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	The scene when the main character in the movie 'Ben-Hun' drank with his companions-- taking the wine dish of the other, cross each other's arms and drinking it directly. When the wine dish reaches the mouth of the two at the same time, the double loop formed from the arms, shoulders until the head would form a chain.		The scene when the main character in the movie 'Ben-Hun' drank with his companions-- taking the wine dish of the other, cross each other's arms and drinking it directly. When the wine dish reaches the mouth of the two at the same time, the double loop formed from the arms, shoulders until the head would form a chain.

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	The first time I drank wine was the wine in the sake ceremony with a yakuza, probably I'm the only one who did that in his high school life in Japan, huh? The sake was spicy and bitter, and it felt like my tongue was going to break off.		The first time I drank wine was the wine in the sake ceremony with a yakuza, probably I'm the only one who did that in his high school life in Japan, huh? The sake was spicy and bitter, and it felt like my tongue was going to break off.

Zephyrus: Chapter 5 completed

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	Blocking Meo who was about to go forward, Yondaime said:		Blocking Meo who was about to go forward, Yondaime said:

	"~~wait~~. Do you mean we don't negotiate with these people? Just directly barge in and save him?"		"Wait. Do you mean we don't negotiate with these people? Just directly barge in and save him?"

	"Unfortunately, that's correct."		"Unfortunately, that's correct."
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	The road that was so zigzagging and roundabout that it was stupid became straight. Will this really work? I poured water into the waterway in my mind to test it out. The first problem is time. Today is Thursday, and it's already two in the afternoon. There's still tomorrow left. It would be barely in time. Next up is the number of people. Though I have next to no friends, I could still borrow Hiro and Yondaime's strengths. That's right, I could also ask Yi Ling-san and the others for help. Of course, there are some flaws in this. I should say that there's a lot of flaws. But Alice and Major should be able to close up the loopholes. Lastly, I could only rely on Tetsu-senpai's fists.		The road that was so zigzagging and roundabout that it was stupid became straight. Will this really work? I poured water into the waterway in my mind to test it out. The first problem is time. Today is Thursday, and it's already two in the afternoon. There's still tomorrow left. It would be barely in time. Next up is the number of people. Though I have next to no friends, I could still borrow Hiro and Yondaime's strengths. That's right, I could also ask Yi Ling-san and the others for help. Of course, there are some flaws in this. I should say that there's a lot of flaws. But Alice and Major should be able to close up the loopholes. Lastly, I could only rely on Tetsu-senpai's fists.

	The rest is the ~~arguements~~ and timing.		The rest is the arguments and timing.

	I stood up. The trembling of my knees are no longer caused by fear.		I stood up. The trembling of my knees are no longer caused by fear.
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	And this time, Alice was the one to interrupt me..		And this time, Alice was the one to interrupt me..

	'But I'll help you to handle the far-fetched parts. Just do it. You're in charge of the front-line ~~commans~~, while my mission is just to hack in, right?'		'But I'll help you to handle the far-fetched parts. Just do it. You're in charge of the front-line commands, while my mission is just to hack in, right?'

	I gazed at the ~~celing~~ and heaved a long sigh. If I relax right now, I'll feel so happy that I'll shout (even in front of Meo).		I gazed at the ceiling and heaved a long sigh. If I relax right now, I'll feel so happy that I'll shout (even in front of Meo).

	"Yeah. Please make a large-scale ruckus."		"Yeah. Please make a large-scale ruckus."
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	"Are you serious?"		"Are you serious?"

	When I reported to Yondaime right after I walked out of the study, that was his reaction. Pole and Rocky said something like: "Erm, aniki...... Can you explain it ~~agian~~?" "Forget it, idiots like us can't understand aniki's great plan."		When I reported to Yondaime right after I walked out of the study, that was his reaction. Pole and Rocky said something like: "Erm, aniki...... Can you explain it again?" "Forget it, idiots like us can't understand aniki's great plan."

	"Indeed, an odd detective would have a strange assistant."		"Indeed, an odd detective would have a strange assistant."