Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 4 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Rxls at 06:39, 23 July 2017

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	After that, a window popped up on the monitor, signaling the completion of a software execution. That moment, the printer activated silently, printing out flyers with photos of the wanted suspects in order.		After that, a window popped up on the monitor, signaling the completion of a software execution. That moment, the printer activated silently, printing out flyers with photos of the wanted suspects in order.

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Morgi: /* Chapter 1 */

2012-04-17T13:09:44Z

Chapter 1

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Noskillatall: grammar and stuff

2012-04-03T17:10:47Z

grammar and stuff

Zephyrus at 01:39, 24 February 2012

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	I am an assistant detective. For this place, and for this small detective, I must use up all the blood in my body.		I am an assistant detective. For this place, and for this small detective, I must use up all the blood in my body.

	Alice glared at me with a gaze ~~that~~ was about to burst into tears, and immediately turned around to face her keyboard again. Her black, silky hair flowed along with the movement of her head, gently touching the back of my hand.		Alice glared at me with a gaze as though she was about to burst into tears, and immediately turned around to face her keyboard again. Her black, silky hair flowed along with the movement of her head, gently touching the back of my hand.

	After that, a window popped up on the monitor, signaling the completion of a software execution. That moment, the printer activated silently, printing out flyers with photos of the wanted suspects in order.		After that, a window popped up on the monitor, signaling the completion of a software execution. That moment, the printer activated silently, printing out flyers with photos of the wanted suspects in order.

Zephyrus: Mistake

2012-02-23T06:46:25Z

Mistake

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Zephyrus: Chapter complete.

2012-02-23T06:43:41Z

Chapter complete.

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Tony Yon at 20:46, 22 February 2012

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	”If it seemed so fun, please change places with me!”		”If it seemed so fun, please change places with me!”

	”But isn’t that Narumi-kun’s privilege?” What kind of privilege is that! I have to worry about Alice’s baths, wash her clothes, feed her and so on. I would have ~~quitted~~ long ago if I could!		”But isn’t that Narumi-kun’s privilege?” What kind of privilege is that! I have to worry about Alice’s baths, wash her clothes, feed her and so on. I would have quited long ago if I could!

	”Just sniffing it doesn’t really matter, but washing my clothes is a definite no. Hiro, it’s the same for you!”		”Just sniffing it doesn’t really matter, but washing my clothes is a definite no. Hiro, it’s the same for you!”

Zephyrus at 08:49, 22 February 2012

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	Nearly bursting into tears, Alice hugged her bear while shouting loudly.		Nearly bursting into tears, Alice hugged her bear while shouting loudly.

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	Disregarding the incident for the moment, my journey of walking the Yamanote Line began from the next day.		Disregarding the incident for the moment, my journey of walking the Yamanote Line began from the next day.
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	As Yondaime said just now, I told myself to just focus on my own jobs, and walked out of the study after that.		As Yondaime said just now, I told myself to just focus on my own jobs, and walked out of the study after that.

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	After class ended next day, I started to interview various livehouses, clubs and advertising companies. The design of all the advertisements of the whole event was handed to the professionals, but the management of the website fell on my shoulders for some reason. How should I say this, I really can’t face this as though I’m preparing for a school festival anymore. As my salary is so high, I can’t be sloppy when doing things as well.		After class ended next day, I started to interview various livehouses, clubs and advertising companies. The design of all the advertisements of the whole event was handed to the professionals, but the management of the website fell on my shoulders for some reason. How should I say this, I really can’t face this as though I’m preparing for a school festival anymore. As my salary is so high, I can’t be sloppy when doing things as well.

Zephyrus: ~65% complete

2012-02-22T08:45:44Z

~65% complete

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Zephyrus at 08:30, 21 February 2012

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	…… Is washing clothes part of an assistant’s job?		…… Is washing clothes part of an assistant’s job?

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	When a long-awaited client arrived at the agency, I was having a fierce battle with Alice, and thus did not notice anyone enter.		When a long-awaited client arrived at the agency, I was having a fierce battle with Alice, and thus did not notice anyone enter.

	”You actually wished to bathe my good friends, causing them to suffer the third-most cruelest method of torture in this world! Though I have long known that you are a cold, unjust person, I never thought that it is actually serious till this extent!”		”You actually wished to bathe my good friends, causing them to suffer the third-most cruelest method of torture in this world! Though I have long known that you are a cold, unjust person, I never thought that it was actually serious till this extent!”

	Standing on her bed in the six [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_units_of_measurement tsubo] room, Alice looked just like [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nio Nio] as her luscious hair that was like black honey fluttered, while her skin so white that it looked sickly was slightly flushed in anger. Teddy bears, dolphins, kittens, and large quantities of other dolls were collapsed on the sheets. The reason that she was so agitated was just because I asked her if I should wash the dolls. Though she is a self-proclaimed detective, always speaking a huge ton of principles, actually, her personality is as her appearance suggests, that of a vexatious little girl.		Standing on her bed in the six [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_units_of_measurement tsubo] room, Alice looked just like [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nio Nio] as her luscious hair that was like black honey fluttered, while her skin so white that it looked sickly was slightly flushed in anger. Teddy bears, dolphins, kittens, and large quantities of other dolls were collapsed on the sheets. The reason that she was so agitated was just because I asked her if I should wash the dolls. Though she is a self-proclaimed detective, always speaking a huge ton of principles, actually, her personality is as her appearance suggests, that of a vexatious little girl.
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	”…… Are you referring to this?”		”…… Are you referring to this?”

	Alice’s fingers moved quickly on the keyboard, showing the results of her search on one of the monitors that covered the walls. As expected of the NEET detective who holds the massive amount of information floating in the internet sea in her weak hands, she’s absolutely unbeatable if she’s in an online state. I think I watched the video played as well. It was a pv that ~~gives~~ a deep impression to the people viewing it. The female lead singer was strumming a black Gibson ~~Los~~ Paul guitar in the video.		Alice’s fingers moved quickly on the keyboard, showing the results of her search on one of the monitors that covered the walls. As expected of the NEET detective who holds the massive amount of information floating in the internet sea in her weak hands, she’s absolutely unbeatable if she’s in an online state. I think I watched the video played as well. It was a pv that gave a deep impression to the people viewing it. The female lead singer was strumming a black Gibson Les Paul guitar in the video.

	”I never thought that Yondaime would actually accept jobs in the entertainment industry as well. What in the world is happening?”		”I never thought that Yondaime would actually accept jobs in the entertainment industry as well. What in the world is happening?”
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	”Barbarian! Why did you not just hand it to me?” Alice furiously plugged in the USB stick.		”Barbarian! Why did you not just hand it to me?” Alice furiously plugged in the USB stick.

	It was not until that moment that day that I noticed the speakers and amplifiers installed in the NEET Detective Agency. When the room was filled with pink noise that was like hot steam, I noticed two huge sound sources at the two sides of the walls covered with black machines. What followed was the strong feedback of the resonance between a ~~Los~~ Paul electric guitar and the Marshal amplifiers.		It was not until that moment that day that I noticed the speakers and amplifiers installed in the NEET Detective Agency. When the room was filled with pink noise that was like hot steam, I noticed two huge sound sources at the two sides of the walls covered with black machines. What followed was the strong feedback of the resonance between a Les Paul electric guitar and the Marshal amplifiers.

	A feeling as though one was beaten up by music— such a thing really did exist.		A feeling as though one was beaten up by music— such a thing really did exist.
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	Hiro-san muttered in a singsong voice.		Hiro-san muttered in a singsong voice.

	”Wish I ~~can~~ hear it outdoors…… It would be exhilarating.”		”Wish I could hear it outdoors…… It would be exhilarating.”

	I somewhat understood what Hiro-san meant. Being immersed in that song with our backs to the sun of real summer that has the color of fresh blood, it would probably be a whole three days before we could return to reality. And I finally understood why Yondaime was so resolute about this as well.		I somewhat understood what Hiro-san meant. Being immersed in that song with our backs to the sun of real summer that has the color of fresh blood, it would probably be a whole three days before we could return to reality. And I finally understood why Yondaime was so resolute about this as well.