Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 8 Chapter 3 - Revision history

200.127.54.143: Undo revision 207153 by JcLZM (talk) (the police told the story)

2012-11-26T19:14:42Z

Undo revision 207153 by JcLZM (talk) (the police told the story)

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	“Wasn't there any other people related to the group? Someone who could have stored some Fix somewhere.”		“Wasn't there any other people related to the group? Someone who could have stored some Fix somewhere.”

	“I told you I don't know anything. I only sold the thing to people that approached me on the city center. That was the use that guy had for me. Anyway, the police must have ~~been~~ told the whole story already...”		“I told you I don't know anything. I only sold the thing to people that approached me on the city center. That was the use that guy had for me. Anyway, the police must have told the whole story already...”

	“But, in the end nobody understood Hakamizaka.”		“But, in the end nobody understood Hakamizaka.”

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2012-11-22T13:08:14Z

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	“But, in the end nobody understood Hakamizaka.”		“But, in the end nobody understood Hakamizaka.”

	He was the son of a Gunma's second generation Diet member. He had graduated with honors and they had great expectations on his future. He received a large allowance, lived in an apartment in ~~Nurima~~ and did as he pleased.		He was the son of a Gunma's second generation Diet member. He had graduated with honors and they had great expectations on his future. He received a large allowance, lived in an apartment in Nerima and did as he pleased.
	This superficial information was blabbered about in variety shows and weekly publications, but no one was interested in talking about what he was thinking, or with what purpose did he distribute the Angel Fix in the city.		This superficial information was blabbered about in variety shows and weekly publications, but no one was interested in talking about what he was thinking, or with what purpose did he distribute the Angel Fix in the city.

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	“I offended Min-san, so it doesn't seem like I'll be able to fill the holes in her body--”		“I offended Min-san, so it doesn't seem like I'll be able to fill the holes in her body--”

	Hiro-san muttered words he shouldn't have, so the kitchen door opened once again and Min-san's kick thrust Hiro-san's back.		Hiro-san muttered words he shouldn't have, so the kitchen door opened once again and Min-san's kick thrust <!-- Thrusted into? Kicked his back? It's wrong but I don't have a alternative --> Hiro-san's back.

JcLZM: /* Chapter 3 */

2012-11-22T12:53:48Z

Chapter 3

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	“Wasn't there any other people related to the group? Someone who could have stored some Fix somewhere.”		“Wasn't there any other people related to the group? Someone who could have stored some Fix somewhere.”

	“I told you I don't know anything. I only sold the thing to people that approached me on the city center. That was the use that guy had for me. Anyway, the police must have told the whole story already...”		“I told you I don't know anything. I only sold the thing to people that approached me on the city center. That was the use that guy had for me. Anyway, the police must have been told the whole story already...”

	“But, in the end nobody understood Hakamizaka.”		“But, in the end nobody understood Hakamizaka.”

Sab: /* Chapter 3 */

2012-07-19T20:08:21Z

Chapter 3

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	“Ah...” The black-shirted men groaned.		“Ah...” The black-shirted men groaned.

	~~“Nee~~-san.”		“Ane-san.”

	~~“Nee~~-san, Ojiki, thanks for your hard work!”		“Ane-san, Ojiki, thanks for your hard work!”

	“Thanks for your hard work!”		“Thanks for your hard work!”

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2012-06-06T05:26:59Z

Chapter 3

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	“Toshi-san, you entered M High's greenhouse through the back door and talked to Ayaka, right? Did you talk about something related to the cultivation?”		“Toshi-san, you entered M High's greenhouse through the back door and talked to Ayaka, right? Did you talk about something related to the cultivation?”

	There was no ~~reponse~~ for a while. A strange feeling of disgust was seeping, and I twisted my body to brush it off. I heard a snort, a violent cough, and the creaking of a chair.		There was no response for a while. A strange feeling of disgust was seeping, and I twisted my body to brush it off. I heard a snort, a violent cough, and the creaking of a chair.

	“I didn't do anything. I was just an underling, I already told you.”		“I didn't do anything. I was just an underling, I already told you.”

Spiral9809: /* Chapter 3 */

2012-06-06T05:11:57Z

Chapter 3

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	“Don't forget your own work. And Min-san is going to hear.”		“Don't forget your own work. And Min-san is going to hear.”

	“Ahaha, it's okay. I saw her inside making ~~sharbets~~ so it's unlikely that she'll hear---”		“Ahaha, it's okay. I saw her inside making sherbets so it's unlikely that she'll hear---”

	“I ''am'' hearing though, Hiro.”		“I ''am'' hearing though, Hiro.”
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	“...Do you know already? ...About Yondaime?”		“...Do you know already? ...About Yondaime?”

	I asked in a way that gave myself an unpleasant feeling. Tetsu-senpai nodded ~~inmediately~~, while Hiro-san showed a facial expression like he was hesitating about which words he should use, but he nodded silently in the end. My gaze fell to my own feet.		I asked in a way that gave myself an unpleasant feeling. Tetsu-senpai nodded imediately, while Hiro-san showed a facial expression like he was hesitating about which words he should use, but he nodded silently in the end. My gaze fell to my own feet.

	I couldn't help but asking Tetsu-senpai and Hiro-san what should I do. However, unlike those two, my investigation abilities weren't anything special, and I could only waste my time, so I needed to face my own problems.		I couldn't help but asking Tetsu-senpai and Hiro-san what should I do. However, unlike those two, my investigation abilities weren't anything special, and I could only waste my time, so I needed to face my own problems.

Spiral9809: /* Chapter 3 */

2012-06-06T04:46:00Z

Chapter 3

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	Toshi-san drove me away with his hands, looking annoyed.		Toshi-san drove me away with his hands, looking annoyed.

	So, it wasn't a building he ~~owne~~ but an especially chosen and rented place. If it was prepared before Toshi-san joined, then it couldn't have been because it was near the place were the poppy flowers were planted, M High.		So, it wasn't a building he owned but an especially chosen and rented place. If it was prepared before Toshi-san joined, then it couldn't have been because it was near the place were the poppy flowers were planted, M High.

	Why did they use that place to purify the drug? Why did he chose our streets for his experiment? Did it have a particular meaning?		Why did they use that place to purify the drug? Why did he chose our streets for his experiment? Did it have a particular meaning?

Abril at 07:09, 7 May 2012

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	My ears buzzed, and the sounds of the world felt far off.		My ears buzzed, and the sounds of the world felt far off.

	“You know, everyone reunited yesterday, and Yondaime came too, and asked me lots of things. About the time I grew those poppy flowers, and about that florist that used ~~them~~--”		“You know, everyone reunited yesterday, and Yondaime came too, and asked me lots of things. About the time I grew those poppy flowers, and about that florist that used--”

	I grabbed both Ayaka's arms. The bicycle lost its support and collapsed on the sidewalk, but I didn't feel like ~~stop~~ it from falling. Ayaka's face half buried in the scarf stiffened, and she widened her eyes.		I grabbed both Ayaka's arms. The bicycle lost its support and collapsed on the sidewalk, but I didn't feel like stopping it from falling. Ayaka's face half buried in the scarf stiffened, and she widened her eyes.

	“Yondaime asked ''what''!? About... The past? But Ayaka, Ayaka is--”		“Yondaime asked ''what''!? About... The past? But Ayaka, Ayaka is--”

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2012-04-21T09:00:46Z

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	“...You're saying that because you didn't see how Ayaka was back then!”		“...You're saying that because you didn't see how Ayaka was back then!”

	A threatening voice that made myself shiver leaked out from my throat.		A threatening voice that made even myself shiver leaked out from my throat.

	“That's true. I don't have time to waste caring about leaving things out. I asked you why are you here.”		“That's true. I don't have time to waste caring about leaving things out. I asked you why are you here.”

Abril: /* Chapter 3 */

2012-04-16T19:51:56Z

Chapter 3

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	“That's why even now, I'm still thinking. Why didn't he take me with him? Where did he go?”		“That's why even now, I'm still thinking. Why didn't he take me with him? Where did he go?”

	-He died-, I answered in my heart. He vomited everything in the concrete, and writhed in pain in a hospital bed until he died. Then he revived through you, the two survivors. Why won't you notice that?		''He died'', I answered in my heart. He vomited everything in the concrete, and writhed in pain in a hospital bed until he died. Then he revived through you, the two survivors. Why won't you notice that?

	“Why was it scattered in that city? Was it? Was it there? Oi, what the hell? Why did you leave me behind...?”		“Why was it scattered in that city? Was it? Was it there? Oi, what the hell? Why did you leave me behind...?”