Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 8 Chapter 4 - Revision history

JcLZM: /* Chapter 4 */

2012-11-22T13:19:03Z

Chapter 4

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	I felt a little disappointed. So she admits knowing Ayaka so easily?		I felt a little disappointed. So she admits knowing Ayaka so easily?

	~~“how~~ can I help you today?”		“How can I help you today?”<!-- ~~~~~~ -->

	When I was asked that, my suspicions started to grow thin. Isn't this person just an horticulturist? Isn't she just a good citizen unrelated to Hakamizaka who knew Ayaka beforehand? Aren't our deductions wrong? But there's no time. In this very moment, those poppy flowers are being cultivated, their juices are being extracted, purified and made into pills, and Hirasaka-gumi is sniffing around for that place.		When I was asked that, my suspicions started to grow thin. Isn't this person just an horticulturist? Isn't she just a good citizen unrelated to Hakamizaka who knew Ayaka beforehand? Aren't our deductions wrong? But there's no time. In this very moment, those poppy flowers are being cultivated, their juices are being extracted, purified and made into pills, and Hirasaka-gumi is sniffing around for that place.

Sab: /* Chapter 4 */

2012-07-19T20:22:04Z

Chapter 4

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	At that moment, I heard noisy footsteps of several people outside. Alice let out a little gasp, and her black hair swayed. The door was then pushed open with worrying strength, and the footsteps rushed over.		At that moment, I heard noisy footsteps of several people outside. Alice let out a little gasp, and her black hair swayed. The door was then pushed open with worrying strength, and the footsteps rushed over.

	“Sorry for intruding!” ~~“Nee~~-san, sorry for intruding!”		“Sorry for intruding!” “Ane-san, sorry for intruding!”

	The group of muscular men who were crowded together like a mountain of trash bags about to collapse were Hirasaka-gumi's members. I gripped the sheets with my hands behind my back, trying with all my might not to faint, but my voice wouldn't come out either.		The group of muscular men who were crowded together like a mountain of trash bags about to collapse were Hirasaka-gumi's members. I gripped the sheets with my hands behind my back, trying with all my might not to faint, but my voice wouldn't come out either.
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	“Why are you all here? You are my enemies.”		“Why are you all here? You are my enemies.”

	“There's no way we're ~~nee~~-san's enemies!” “Hey, shut up!” “Don't cry!”		“There's no way we're ane-san's enemies!” “Hey, shut up!” “Don't cry!”

	Making the guys behind him quiet down, Rocky came a few centimeters closer.		Making the guys behind him quiet down, Rocky came a few centimeters closer.
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	“Yondaime's?” My voice suddenly came out in the form of that question.		“Yondaime's?” My voice suddenly came out in the form of that question.

	“Yes sir, we heard Toshi was missing! But since he won't ask ~~Nee~~-san for information, he told us to rush out and ask around!”		“Yes sir, we heard Toshi was missing! But since he won't ask Ane-san for information, he told us to rush out and ask around!”

	“He told us to split up in any ways or beat up whoever was necessary to get the information!”		“He told us to split up in any ways or beat up whoever was necessary to get the information!”

Spiral9809 at 06:55, 6 June 2012

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	“He told us to split up in any ways or beat up whoever was necessary to get the information!”		“He told us to split up in any ways or beat up whoever was necessary to get the information!”

	With a shocked face, Alice looked up at the ceiling. I felt something hot overflowing, even in the middle of the cold. By my side, Ayaka fixed ~~his~~ gaze on my face.		With a shocked face, Alice looked up at the ceiling. I felt something hot overflowing, even in the middle of the cold. By my side, Ayaka fixed her gaze on my face.

	“Narumi.”		“Narumi.”

201.212.249.35 at 21:31, 21 May 2012

2012-05-21T21:31:01Z

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	Alice kept returning to that question, but I had a hunch that that wasn't the main issue. As long as we didn't find that ''key'', we'd still be misreading something—I had that feeling.		Alice kept returning to that question, but I had a hunch that that wasn't the main issue. As long as we didn't find that ''key'', we'd still be misreading something—I had that feeling.

	“I'll go to Toshi's house, if I check his room I might understand something.”		“I'll go to Toshi-san's house, if I check his room I might understand something.”

	“For what reason?” She muttered, with her eyes still sunken in the swamp of her thoughts.		“For what reason?” She muttered, with her eyes still sunken in the swamp of her thoughts.
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	“Sorry for intruding!” “Nee-san, sorry for intruding!”		“Sorry for intruding!” “Nee-san, sorry for intruding!”

	The group of muscular men who were crowded together like a mountain of trash bags about to collapse were Hirasaka-gumi's members. I gripped the sheets with my hands ~~without~~ my back, trying with all my might not to faint, but my voice wouldn't come out either.		The group of muscular men who were crowded together like a mountain of trash bags about to collapse were Hirasaka-gumi's members. I gripped the sheets with my hands behind my back, trying with all my might not to faint, but my voice wouldn't come out either.
	Why are you guys here, and in such a great number? Aren't you all the members of the gang? You won't be able to get into the bedroom—Hey, stop, you're going to break the door frame.		Why are you guys here, and in such a great number? Aren't you all the members of the gang? You won't be able to get into the bedroom—Hey, stop, you're going to break the door frame.

	“What are you all doing!? A wild gorilla has better manners than you!”		“What are you all doing!? A wild gorilla has better manners than you!”
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	I bowed my head and took off my shoes, walking into the apartment. When I looked behind me, the atmosphere between father and child was as stiff as an rolled up aluminum foil being extended. Ayaka bowed her head with upturned eyes, and his father averted his gaze and pointed at the corridor with his chin. The distant formalities were almost repulsive, matching the circumstances.		I bowed my head and took off my shoes, walking into the apartment. When I looked behind me, the atmosphere between father and child was as stiff as an rolled up aluminum foil being extended. Ayaka bowed her head with upturned eyes, and his father averted his gaze and pointed at the corridor with his chin. The distant formalities were almost repulsive, matching the circumstances.

	It took around 20 minutes by car to reach the apartment in Sedagaya from the Detective ~~Office~~. Ayaka didn't have enough time to prepare herself psychologically.		It took around 20 minutes by car to reach the apartment in Sedagaya from the Detective Agency. Ayaka didn't have enough time to prepare herself psychologically.

	Ayaka actually didn't remember her father. Was it because he was a memory linked to Toshi-san? Or perhaps her father was someone she didn't want to remember? I don't know if something happened between this father and his children, nor the reason behind their parents' divorce, nor what this father does during the day, but now is not the time to worry about that.		Ayaka actually didn't remember her father. Was it because he was a memory linked to Toshi-san? Or perhaps her father was someone she didn't want to remember? I don't know if something happened between this father and his children, nor the reason behind their parents' divorce, nor what this father does during the day, but now is not the time to worry about that.

201.212.249.35 at 02:11, 21 May 2012

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	I quickly put my finger to my lips, going “shhh”, but he left the shovel, the watering can and the toolbox behind and rushed up.		I quickly put my finger to my lips, going “shhh”, but he left the shovel, the watering can and the toolbox behind and rushed up.

	“Are you Shirou-san's friend?” ~~Tomohiko~~-kun asked, clinging to the wire mesh. I was about to say “no”, but then I realized it would be a good excuse to talk to him, so I nodded.		“Are you Shirou-san's friend?” Tomoki-kun asked, clinging to the wire mesh. I was about to say “no”, but then I realized it would be a good excuse to talk to him, so I nodded.

	“So, are you an angel florist?”		“So, are you an angel florist?”
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	“Then I'll let you in!”		“Then I'll let you in!”

	~~Tomohiko~~-kun quickly opened a small back gate on the left. I wanted to say “No, wait a second”. I was thankful for the welcoming mood, but no excuse would suffice if I was caught inside the school territory.		Tomoki-kun quickly opened a small back gate on the left. I wanted to say “No, wait a second”. I was thankful for the welcoming mood, but no excuse would suffice if I was caught inside the school territory.

	However, before I realized, I was entering anyway.		However, before I realized, I was entering anyway.
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	“Hm.” Alice held her chin with her hand.		“Hm.” Alice held her chin with her hand.

	Iharagi Junko has been moving since yesterday—After I interrogated her and ~~Tomohiko~~-kun revealed that they knew Hakamizaka. Was she destroying some evidence?		Iharagi Junko has been moving since yesterday—After I interrogated her and Tomoki-kun revealed that they knew Hakamizaka. Was she destroying some evidence?

	“Understood. Anyway, if something happens contact me again.”		“Understood. Anyway, if something happens contact me again.”

201.212.249.35 at 23:51, 19 May 2012

2012-05-19T23:51:16Z

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	“However, there's a high possibility that Hakamizaka introduced the shop to her. Ayaka apparently purchased quite a few unusual and expensive gardening medicines from that shop. It was unlikely that the school's Gardening Club had that many medicines. They barely use them now, actually.”		“However, there's a high possibility that Hakamizaka introduced the shop to her. Ayaka apparently purchased quite a few unusual and expensive gardening medicines from that shop. It was unlikely that the school's Gardening Club had that many medicines. They barely use them now, actually.”

	'''It would be better to confirm more with Ayaka'''--No one said that. We had chosen that winding road on our detective work to avoid that, after all.		''It would be better to confirm more with Ayaka''--No one said that. We had chosen that winding road on our detective work to avoid that, after all.

	“So this woman is Hakamizaka's acquaintance? If so, the police might have tracked her last year.”		“So this woman is Hakamizaka's acquaintance? If so, the police might have tracked her last year.”

KilluaX90: /* Chapter 4 */

2012-05-04T16:01:13Z

Chapter 4

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	She hesitated, and I also lowered my gaze to the sheets.		She hesitated, and I also lowered my gaze to the sheets.
	Ayaka would know about that. More precisely, Ayaka before leaping from the rooftop would know.		Ayaka would know about that. More precisely, Ayaka before leaping from the rooftop would know.
	As of yet, that information was buried somewhere among ~~Ataka~~'s memories, and maybe they could be dug up. But we fought with Yondaime to not let him do that.		As of yet, that information was buried somewhere among Ayaka's memories, and maybe they could be dug up. But we fought with Yondaime to not let him do that.

	The phone rang. Alice bent her body and pushed the talk button, switching to hands-free.		The phone rang. Alice bent her body and pushed the talk button, switching to hands-free.

Abril at 06:39, 4 May 2012

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	“Wh-... Why... are you here?”		“Wh-... Why... are you here?”

	“Iharagi Junko turned the gas taps in her house. Had I ~~come~~ an hour later, she'd be dead. You're always so easygoing. ~~Move~~.”		“Iharagi Junko turned the gas taps in her house. Had I arrived an hour later, she'd be dead. You're always so easygoing. Out of my way.”

	“I'm—...ugh-”		“I'm—...ugh-”

Abril at 05:15, 4 May 2012

2012-05-04T05:15:09Z

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	Toshi-san's testimony?		Toshi-san's testimony?

	“He said he periodically went to the greenhouse and took a report written by Ayaka along with the flowers that had ~~bloomed~~.”		“He said he periodically went to the greenhouse and took a report written by Ayaka along with the flowers that had turned blue.”

	“Yes, but, wasn't that also because of the raw materials? I can't think of anything else.”		“Yes, but, wasn't that also because of the raw materials? I can't think of anything else.”

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2012-05-04T03:29:00Z

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