Kamisu Reina:Volume 1 Fumi Saito - Revision history

EusthEnoptEron at 13:08, 30 December 2015

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	"I am '''here'''. Kamisu ~~Reina~~ is — '''here'''."		"I am '''here'''. Reina Kamisu is — '''here'''."

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	"Hm? Oh, you're right. Okay, let's hurry up."		"Hm? Oh, you're right. Okay, let's hurry up."

	Slightly swift-footed, walk to the stadium where the dolphin show takes place.		Slightly swift-footed, we walk to the stadium where the dolphin show takes place.

	On the way there, we come past a tank in which a large number of fishes are herding together and keep rotating restlessly.		On the way there, we come past a tank in which a large number of fishes are herding together and keep rotating restlessly.

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	His right hand moves. I reflexively close my eyes. However, he could somehow control himself and hit the wall behind me.		His right hand moves. I reflexively close my eyes. However, he could somehow control himself and hit the wall behind me.

	I mind goes blank like white paint. I'm trembling all over.		My mind goes blank like white paint. I'm trembling all over.

	What am I supposed to do? I'm scared! Please, don't hurt me. I haven't done anything!		What am I supposed to do? I'm scared! Please, don't hurt me. I haven't done anything!

Simon at 22:28, 18 May 2014

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	==1==		==Chapter 1: Fumi Saito==
			===1===

	I don't have any friends.		I don't have any friends.
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	I would long since have—<!--grrarr edit mark-->		I would long since have—<!--grrarr edit mark-->

	==2==		===2===
	Another bad day starts.		Another bad day starts.

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	—Reina is everything of me.		—Reina is everything of me.

	==3==		===3===

	I am changing. The liquid "Reina" is continuously being poured into the container "I", while the liquid "I" is overflowing from that container.		I am changing. The liquid "Reina" is continuously being poured into the container "I", while the liquid "I" is overflowing from that container.
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	As long as Reina is with me, I'm perfectly fine.		As long as Reina is with me, I'm perfectly fine.

	==4==		===4===
	As promised, Reina and I went to the aquarium.		As promised, Reina and I went to the aquarium.

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	I was standing there in the wide, empty aquatic park, left behind, alone in the world.		I was standing there in the wide, empty aquatic park, left behind, alone in the world.

	==5==		===5===

	People have erasers in their hearts.		People have erasers in their hearts.

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	They don't look like living beings — now that she mentions it, she has a point. Inside an aquarium, they still feel a bit like living beings, but when they are held in a water tank at home, they're more like decoration. Decoration that shines and pulsates. When jellyfish are put into a tank in a house, their role changes from a ''living being'' to ''decoration''.		They don't look like living beings — now that she mentions it, she has a point. Inside an aquarium, they still feel a bit like living beings, but when they are held in a water tank at home, they're more like decoration. Decoration that shines and pulsates. When jellyfish are put into a tank in a house, their role changes from a ''living being'' to ''decoration''.

	"Besides, jellyfish kind of stand out. All other fishes here are just ''fishes'', but jellyfish ~~fell~~ like entirely different beings. Ah, I'm not making sense, am I?"		"Besides, jellyfish kind of stand out. All other fishes here are just ''fishes'', but jellyfish feel like entirely different beings. Ah, I'm not making sense, am I?"

	"No, I know what you mean. You want to say that jellyfish are simply jellyfish, right?"		"No, I know what you mean. You want to say that jellyfish are simply jellyfish, right?"

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	Ridiculous. Ridiculous, indeed, but that proves how alone I feel when I'm at school.		Ridiculous. Ridiculous, indeed, but that proves how alone I feel when I'm at school.

	Because I have nothing to do between classes, I started reading books in my free time even though I don't really like doing so. Thanks to that, I've become even harder to approach and widened the gap between me and my classmates even further. It's a vicious cycle: I'm mistaken for someone who likes being alone, even though that's downright wrong. I'd love to chitchat, too! I want to chat about who's the coolest guy in our class or who my favorite member in whatever boyband is too! But I'm ignored. I'm only reluctantly approached by others when absolutely ~~necessart~~.		Because I have nothing to do between classes, I started reading books in my free time even though I don't really like doing so. Thanks to that, I've become even harder to approach and widened the gap between me and my classmates even further. It's a vicious cycle: I'm mistaken for someone who likes being alone, even though that's downright wrong. I'd love to chitchat, too! I want to chat about who's the coolest guy in our class or who my favorite member in whatever boyband is too! But I'm ignored. I'm only reluctantly approached by others when absolutely necessary.

	Why am I unable to make friends? What makes me different from everyone else? Since I have nothing to do anyway, I often mull over this question.		Why am I unable to make friends? What makes me different from everyone else? Since I have nothing to do anyway, I often mull over this question.

EusthEnoptEron at 15:47, 8 September 2013

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	People have erasers in their hearts.		People have erasers in their hearts.

	While their efficiency differs from person to person — some of them ~~are even incapable of erasing it all~~ — anyone can use their eraser.		While their efficiency differs from person to person — some of them might be really bad — anyone can use their eraser.

	Rub, rub. Okay, away with you. You're an eyesore. Please go away. Rub, rub.		Rub, rub. Okay, away with you. You're an eyesore. Please go away. Rub, rub.

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	People have erasers in their hearts.		People have erasers in their hearts.

	While their efficiency differs from person to person — some of them are even incapable of erasing at all — anyone can use their eraser.		While their efficiency differs from person to person — some of them are even incapable of erasing it all — anyone can use their eraser.

	Rub, rub. Okay, away with you. You're an eyesore. Please go away. Rub, rub.		Rub, rub. Okay, away with you. You're an eyesore. Please go away. Rub, rub.
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	Two weeks have passed since the incident of Mizuhara-san's wallet. One week since I went to the aquarium with Reina.		Two weeks have passed since the incident of Mizuhara-san's wallet. One week since I went to the aquarium with Reina.

	Even after such a time span, no one is talking to me. Like on the previous days, I'm just sitting in my seat, which isn't supposed to be here, and gazing out of the window.		Even after such a time span, no one is talking to me. Like the previous days, I'm just sitting in my seat, which isn't supposed to be here, and gazing out the window.

	I have faded a lot.		I have faded a lot.

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	"Hmm... I don't want to think of them in the same category, but yeah."		"Hmm... I don't want to think of them in the same category, but yeah."

	The dolphins ready themselves no the signal ~~by the woman~~.		The dolphins ready themselves to the woman's signal.

	Are they able to jump so high? Well, they wouldn't be doing this if they couldn't, but I'm afraid that one of them might not make it.		Are they able to jump so high? Well, they wouldn't be doing this if they couldn't, but I'm afraid that one of them might not make it.
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	—But who ~~is that~~, ~~in specific~~?		—But who are they, specifically?


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	"What's wrong?"		"What's wrong?"

	"...I've never been at your home, have I?"		"...I've never been to your home, have I?"

	"Are you sure?"		"Are you sure?"
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	"What's wrong, Fumi? That's obvious, no?"		"What's wrong, Fumi? That's obvious, no?"

	"Why is it then that — even though we are close friends — I haven't been at your place?"		"Why is it then that — even though we are close friends — I haven't been to your place?"

	"..." Reina remains silent.		"..." Reina remains silent.
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	Eh? Hold on! What's that supposed to mean?		Eh? Hold on! What's that supposed to mean?

	We're best friends, no matter how you look at it, so why do I have no idea who her friends and ~~her~~ family is, and where she lives?		We're best friends, no matter how you look at it, so why do I have no idea who her friends and family are, and where she lives?

	"By the way, Reina—"		"By the way, Reina—"
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	There are circumstances...? I don't know what it is, but Reina has a reason not to tell me about her.		There are circumstances...? I don't know what it is, but Reina has a reason not to tell me about her.

	Everyone has things ~~that~~ he doesn't want or can't say.		Everyone has things he doesn't want to or can't say.

	But,		But,
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	"Why? I don't understand, Reina!" I shout and as I do, I notice that a tear is flowing down my cheek, which leaves Reina speechless.		"Why? I don't understand, Reina!" I shout and as I do, I notice that a tear is flowing down my cheek, which leaves Reina speechless.

	Cold air pulsates between us. That... hasn't happened before. This is the first time that we're surrounded by such cold ~~air~~.		Cold air pulsates between us. That... hasn't happened before. This is the first time that we've been surrounded by such a cold atmosphere.

	My feelings had reached Reina. She knows that I wouldn't ever hate or make fun of her.		My feelings had reached Reina. She knows that I wouldn't ever hate or make fun of her.
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	Reina isn't anywhere anymore.		Reina isn't anywhere anymore.

	I was standing there in the wide, empty aquatic park, left behind alone in the world.		I was standing there in the wide, empty aquatic park, left behind, alone in the world.

	==5==		==5==

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	Why is it then that something felt fatally off? There's no reason.		Why is it then that something felt fatally off? There's no reason.

	"Why would they think that you're the culprit without conclusive proof? There's no way you would that."		"Why would they think that you're the culprit without conclusive proof? There's no way you would do that."

	"...Well, they don't know my personality. Besides, Mizuhara-san's wallet was in my bag, so it's natural that they would think that I did it."		"...Well, they don't know my personality. Besides, Mizuhara-san's wallet was in my bag, so it's natural that they would think that I did it."
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	"...That's not true!"		"...That's not true!"

	Reina doesn't believe her own words, and looking at her face, she is ~~blaming~~ herself for faltering.		Reina doesn't believe her own words, and looking at her face, she is admonishing herself for faltering.

	...But there's nothing to ~~blame~~ herself for, since it's a fact.		...But there's nothing to admonish herself for, since it's a fact.

	"Reina."		"Reina."
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	But I failed.		But I failed.

	I imagine how her long ~~her~~ sways as Reina appears and swiftly frees me from their claws. I have a feeling that this picture will become reality. And then she will smile at me with her absurdly beautiful face, "Everything is all right, Fumi."		I imagine how her long hair sways as Reina appears and swiftly frees me from their claws. I have a feeling that this picture will become reality. And then she will smile at me with her absurdly beautiful face, "Everything is all right, Fumi."

	—However, Reina didn't come.		—However, Reina didn't come.