Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter01 01 - Revision history

187.114.208.169 at 22:27, 27 March 2020

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	"Good evening. You look lazy as always, Shiki."		"Good evening. You look lazy as always, Shiki."

	The sudden visitor stands by the ~~door~~ as he gives a boring greeting with a smile.		The sudden visitor stands by the entrance as he gives a boring greeting with a smile.

	"I passed an accident on my way here. A girl jumped from the top of a building: a suicide. Though I heard it's been happening a lot recently I never thought I'd see one myself. Here, freezer."		"I passed an accident on my way here. A girl jumped from the top of a building: a suicide. Though I heard it's been happening a lot recently I never thought I'd see one myself. Here, freezer."
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	My house is a one room apartment. If you go past the hallway, which isn't even a meter long, from the entrance you get to the room serving as both bedroom and living room.		My house is a one room apartment. If you go past the hallway, which isn't even a meter long, from the entrance you get to the room serving as both bedroom and living room.

	Staring at the back of Mikiya, who was stepping quickly into the room, I followed.		Staring at the back of Mikiya, who was stepping quickly into the room, I followed him into my room.

	"Shiki. You skipped school again today, right? ~~I don't care~~ about your grades, but you won't be able to pass unless you attend at least the required days. Did you forget about our promise to go to college together?"		"Shiki. You skipped school again today, right? You can do something later about your grades, but you won't be able to pass unless you attend at least the required number of days. Did you forget about our promise to go to college together?"

	"Do you have the right to lecture me about school? I don't remember such a promise, and what's more, you've already dropped out of college."		"Do you have the right to lecture me about school? I don't remember such a promise, and what's more, you've already dropped out of college."
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	~~He landed himself~~ in the middle of the room.		Mikiya sat in the middle of the room.

	I sit on the bed behind him and lay down horizontally. ~~Mikiya~~ keeps his back turned towards me.		I sit on the bed behind him and lay down horizontally. He keeps his back turned towards me.

	I look at that back, which is a bit small compared to the average guy, absent-mindely.		I look at that back, which is a bit small compared to the average guy, absent-mindely.

Nanashi(kari) at 19:05, 27 March 2020

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	"Good evening. You look lazy as always, Shiki."		"Good evening. You look lazy as always, Shiki."

	The sudden visitor stands by the door as he gives a boring greeting with a smile.		The sudden visitor stands by the door as he gives a boring greeting with a smile.

	"I passed an accident on my way here. A girl jumped from the top of a building: a suicide. Though I heard it's been happening a lot recently I never thought I'd see one myself. Here, freezer."		"I passed an accident on my way here. A girl jumped from the top of a building: a suicide. Though I heard it's been happening a lot recently I never thought I'd see one myself. Here, freezer."
	~~He throws me a plastic bag from a convenience store as he unties his shoes by the door.~~

	Inside are two strawberry <span id="haag">[[Kara_no_Kyoukai:Chapter01_Translation_Notes#Häagen-Dazs\|Häagen-Dazs]]</span>.		He throws me a plastic bag from a convenience store as he unties his shoes by the door. Inside are two strawberry <span id="haag">[[Kara_no_Kyoukai:Chapter01_Translation_Notes#Häagen-Dazs\|Häagen-Dazs]]</span>. I guess he means I should put them in the freezer before they melt.
	I guess he means I should put them in the freezer before they melt.
	While I was slowly checking out the contents of the bag, Mikiya had finished taking off his shoes and was stepping across the threshold.		While I was slowly checking out the contents of the bag, Mikiya had finished taking off his shoes and was stepping across the threshold.

	My house is a room ~~in a mansion~~.		My house is a one room apartment. If you go past the hallway, which isn't even a meter long, from the entrance you get to the room serving as both bedroom and living room.
	If you go past the hallway ~~—~~ which~~, mind you,~~ isn't even a meter long ~~—~~ you get to the room serving as both my bedroom and my living room.
	Staring at the back of Mikiya, who was stepping quickly into the room, I followed.		Staring at the back of Mikiya, who was stepping quickly into the room, I followed.

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	"Do you have the right to lecture me about school? I don't remember such a promise, and what's more, you've already dropped out of college."		"Do you have the right to lecture me about school? I don't remember such a promise, and what's more, you've already dropped out of college."

	"Uh, if you say 'rights', there aren't any rights for anybody~~, but..~~."		"Uh, if you say 'rights', there aren't any rights for anybody."
	Sounding sophisticated, Mikiya ~~trailed off and looked for a seat~~.
	He tends to let out his true feelings when he's on the defensive; it's something I remembered just recently.		Sounding sophisticated, Mikiya sits down. He tends to let out his true feelings when he's on the defensive; it's something I remembered just recently.


	He landed himself in the middle of the room.		He landed himself in the middle of the room.
	I ~~sat~~ on the bed behind him, and ~~spread myself out~~.
	~~The only thing~~ I ~~could see of Mikiya was his~~ back, which ~~was~~ a bit small compared to the average guy.		I sit on the bed behind him and lay down horizontally. Mikiya keeps his back turned towards me.
	~~I look at it empty mindedly~~.
			I look at that back, which is a bit small compared to the average guy, absent-mindely.

	This young man named Kokuto Mikiya seems to be my friend from back in high school.		This young man named Kokuto Mikiya seems to be my friend from back in high school.

	In the midst of youngsters nowadays — where so many fads appear one after another, gain speed, and finally dash out of control into disappearance — he was a ~~boringly~~ "rare kind" that kept the image of a student:		In the midst of youngsters nowadays — where so many fads appear one after another, gain speed, and finally dash out of control into disappearance — he was a "rare kind" that boringly kept the image of a student.
	He doesn't dye his hair or let it grow long,
	He doesn't get a tan or wear accessories,		He doesn't dye his hair or let it grow long. He doesn't get a tan or wear accessories. He doesn't carry a cell phone or play around with women.
	He doesn't carry a cell phone or play around with women,		His height is around 170cm or so. His kind-looking face is more on the cute side and his black-rimmed glasses make that feature stand out even more.
	His height is around 170cm or so,
	His kind-looking face is more on the cute side and his ~~huge~~ black glasses make that feature stand out even more.
	Even though he has graduated from high school, he dresses ordinarily.		Even though he has graduated from high school, he dresses ordinarily.
	If he were to dress up a bit, he would likely catch a few eyes.		If he were to dress up a bit, he would likely catch a few eyes.

172.69.62.55: /* ／1 */ added the article "the" in front of Fujiyou building

2018-07-27T03:44:53Z

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	Oh, I remember now.		Oh, I remember now.
	The ghost story that started around three weeks ago.		The ghost story that started around three weeks ago.
	As the story has it, there's an expensive mansion in the office district called Fujiyoh building.		As the story has it, there's an expensive mansion in the office district called the Fujiyoh building.
	At night, a human-like form can be seen floating above the building.		At night, a human-like form can be seen floating above the building.
	The fact that not only I, but Azaka as well, saw it must mean the thing is real.		The fact that not only I, but Azaka as well, saw it must mean the thing is real.

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2012-03-11T03:30:35Z

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	The sudden visitor stands by the door as he gives a boring greeting with a smile.		The sudden visitor stands by the door as he gives a boring greeting with a smile.

	"I passed an accident on my way here. A girl jumped from the top of a building: a suicide. Though I heard it's been happening a lot recently I never thought I'd see one myself. Here, ~~fridge~~."		"I passed an accident on my way here. A girl jumped from the top of a building: a suicide. Though I heard it's been happening a lot recently I never thought I'd see one myself. Here, freezer."
	He throws me a plastic bag from a convenience store as he unties his shoes by the door.		He throws me a plastic bag from a convenience store as he unties his shoes by the door.

	Inside are two strawberry <span id="haag">[[Kara_no_Kyoukai:Chapter01_Translation_Notes#Häagen-Dazs\|Häagen-Dazs]]</span>.		Inside are two strawberry <span id="haag">[[Kara_no_Kyoukai:Chapter01_Translation_Notes#Häagen-Dazs\|Häagen-Dazs]]</span>.
	I guess he means I should put them in the ~~fridge~~ before they melt.		I guess he means I should put them in the freezer before they melt.
	While I was slowly checking out the contents of the bag, Mikiya had finished taking off his shoes and was stepping across the threshold.		While I was slowly checking out the contents of the bag, Mikiya had finished taking off his shoes and was stepping across the threshold.

Georgi: Changed Fujoh to Fujiyoh for consistency with later chapters

2009-03-07T20:15:43Z

Changed Fujoh to Fujiyoh for consistency with later chapters

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	"Saw what?"		"Saw what?"

	"That thing. The girl at the ~~Fujoh~~ building, the one they say is flying in the air. You said you saw it once too."		"That thing. The girl at the Fujiyoh building, the one they say is flying in the air. You said you saw it once too."

	Oh, I remember now.		Oh, I remember now.
	The ghost story that started around three weeks ago.		The ghost story that started around three weeks ago.
	As the story has it, there's an expensive mansion in the office district called ~~Fujoh~~ building.		As the story has it, there's an expensive mansion in the office district called Fujiyoh building.
	At night, a human-like form can be seen floating above the building.		At night, a human-like form can be seen floating above the building.
	The fact that not only I, but Azaka as well, saw it must mean the thing is real.		The fact that not only I, but Azaka as well, saw it must mean the thing is real.
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	In other words, it seems that I am able to perceive things at a higher level with my eyes and brain, but I don't care about all the reasons or explanations behind this.		In other words, it seems that I am able to perceive things at a higher level with my eyes and brain, but I don't care about all the reasons or explanations behind this.

	"The thing at the ~~Fujoh~~ building, I’ve seen it not only once but many times. Though I haven't been around there for a while, so I don't know if it can still be observed or not."		"The thing at the Fujiyoh building, I’ve seen it not only once but many times. Though I haven't been around there for a while, so I don't know if it can still be observed or not."

	Mikiya responded, "I see. I go by there a lot, but I never saw the ghost."		Mikiya responded, "I see. I go by there a lot, but I never saw the ghost."

Georgi: Numerous changes; corrected vocabulary, added or removed comas, made some major edits of sentences that a translator should look over.

2009-02-05T01:56:43Z

Numerous changes; corrected vocabulary, added or removed comas, made some major edits of sentences that a translator should look over.

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Vaelis at 11:52, 3 January 2009

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Vaelis at 11:51, 3 January 2009

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	On a night at the beginning of August, Mikiya came by without any notice.		On a night at the beginning of August, Mikiya came by without any notice.

85.176.89.210 at 23:38, 21 October 2008

2008-10-21T23:38:20Z

M: Minor typos and simple edit misses

2008-08-19T02:33:11Z

Minor typos and simple edit misses

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	Not right, he said. What exactly is "not right"?		Not right, he said. What exactly is "not right"?
	There's nothing illegal in what's happening between me and my parents.		There's nothing illegal in what's happening between me and my parents.
	It is just that the child was involved in a traffic accident and lost all ~~her~~ past memories.		It's just that the child was involved in a traffic accident and lost all its past memories.
	We are proven to be a family under the law and by our blood, so I'd assume there's nothing wrong this way.		We are proven to be a family under the law and by our blood, so I'd assume there's nothing wrong this way.

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	It was not just the looks of Shiki, either.		It was not just the looks of Shiki, either.
	No unnecessary movements.		No unnecessary movements.
	~~She~~ rarely talked, except when in class.		Shiki rarely talked, except when in class.
	I think just this explains what kind of a person Shiki is.		I think just this explains what kind of a person Shiki is.

	Shiki's figure is almost too perfect.		Shiki's figure is almost too perfect.
	~~Her hair is~~ beautiful as silk, cut with scissors like it was a bother and left it just like that.		Hair, beautiful as silk, cut with scissors like it was a bother and left it just like that.
	It is a short cut just long enough to hide ~~her~~ ears, which suits ~~her~~ so much that many students mistake Shiki's sex.		It is a short cut just long enough to hide the ears, which suits Shiki so much that many students mistake Shiki's sex.
	Shiki looks so handsome that she looks like a female to men, and mistaken as a male by women.		Shiki looks so handsome that she looks like a female to men, and mistaken as a male by women.
	The word beautiful doesn't quite fit her, though.		The word beautiful doesn't quite fit her, though.

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	"I passed an accident on my way here. A girl jumped from the top of a building: a suicide. Though I heard it's been happening a lot recently I never thought I'd see one myself. Here, fridge."		"I passed an accident on my way here. A girl jumped from the top of a building: a suicide. Though I heard it's been happening a lot recently I never thought I'd see one myself. Here, fridge."
	He throws me a plastic bag from a convenience store as he unties his shoes by the door.		He throws me a plastic bag from a convenience store as he unties his shoes by the door.

	Inside are two strawberry <span id="haag">[[Kara_no_Kyoukai:Chapter01_Translation_Notes#Häagen-Dazs\|Häagen-Dazs]]</span>.		Inside are two strawberry <span id="haag">[[Kara_no_Kyoukai:Chapter01_Translation_Notes#Häagen-Dazs\|Häagen-Dazs]]</span>.
	I guess he means I should put them in the fridge before they melt.		I guess he means I should put them in the fridge before they melt.
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	My house is a room in a mansion.		My house is a room in a mansion.
	If you go past the hallway — which, mind you, isn't even a meter long &mdash you get to the room where it's both my bedroom and my living room.		If you go past the hallway — which, mind you, isn't even a meter long — you get to the room where it's both my bedroom and my living room.
	Staring at the back of Mikiya who was stepping quickly into the room, I also moved into my room.		Staring at the back of Mikiya who was stepping quickly into the room, I also moved into my room.

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	His kind-looking face is more on the cute side and his huge black glasses make that feature stand out even more.		His kind-looking face is more on the cute side and his huge black glasses make that feature stand out even more.
	Even though he is graduated from high school, he dresses ordinarily.		Even though he is graduated from high school, he dresses ordinarily.
	If he only dressed up a bit, he would likely catch a few ~~people's~~ eyes.		If he only dressed up a bit, he would likely catch a few eyes.

	"Shiki, are you listening? I met your mother too. Shouldn't you show up at the Ryougi House at least once? I heard that you haven't even contacted them since you got out of the hospital two months ago."		"Shiki, are you listening? I met your mother too. Shouldn't you show up at the Ryougi House at least once? I heard that you haven't even contacted them since you got out of the hospital two months ago."
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	I frown at those reproachful words.		I frown at those reproachful words.

	Not right, said ~~he, but what~~ exactly is "not right"?		Not right, he said. What exactly is "not right"?
	There's nothing illegal in what's happening between me and my parents.		There's nothing illegal in what's happening between me and my parents.
	It is just that the child was involved in a traffic accident and lost all her past memories.		It is just that the child was involved in a traffic accident and lost all her past memories.
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	Ryougi Shiki has been my friend since high school.		Ryougi Shiki has been my friend since high school.
	Our school was a famous private high school which taught a lot of students who went to a good college.		Our school was a famous private high school which taught a lot of students who went to a good college.
	When I went to see if I was admitted, the name Ryougi Shiki stood out so much that it stuck in my head.		When I went to see if I was admitted, the name Ryougi Shiki stood out so much that it was stuck in my head.
	Ironically, we ended up being in the same class.		Ironically, we ended up being in the same class.
	Since then, I became one of the few friends Shiki had.		Since then, I became one of the few friends Shiki had.
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	"Suicide by jumping off something. Would that be considered an accident, Mikiya?"		"Suicide by jumping off something. Would that be considered an accident, Mikiya?"
	~~Mikiya gets himself together~~ after that meaningless muttering and seriously ~~starts~~ thinking about the question.		He gathered his thoughts after that meaningless muttering and seriously started thinking about the question.

	"~~Hmmm~~, I'm sure it's an accident, but you're right. I wonder what that is. So long as it's the person's will to do so, the blame is only on that person. But falling from a high place could be considered an accident."		"Hm, I'm sure it's an accident, but you're right. I wonder what that is. So long as it's the person's will to do so, the blame is only on that person. But falling from a high place could be considered an accident."

	"Then it's not a murder nor an accidental death. It's really ambiguous, if you say it this way. Though they should have picked a way that wouldn't trouble others if they were going to kill themselves."		"Then it's not a murder nor an accidental death. It's really ambiguous, if you say it this way. Though they should have picked a way that wouldn't trouble others if they were going to kill themselves."