Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter01 02 - Revision history

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	... That's what I mean by sickening		... That's what I mean by sickening

	When I left the house, I put on a ~~black~~ leather jacket over my light blue kimono.		When I left the house, I put on a red leather jacket over my light blue kimono.

	The kimono gets trapped inside the jacket and burns my body.		The kimono gets trapped inside the jacket and burns my body.

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	"Recognizing" is to confirm that the information recalled is the same as the event that actually occurred.		"Recognizing" is to confirm that the information recalled is the same as the event that actually occurred.

	If one cannot perform any one of these processes, ~~they have~~ a memory disorder. Of course, depending on which system is dysfunctional, the case of memory disorder will vary.		If one cannot perform any one of these processes, one has a memory disorder. Of course, depending on which system is dysfunctional, the case of memory disorder will vary.

	But in my case, all these functions are working properly. I can't really feel my previous memories as my own, but the function of "recognizing" is working properly as I can tell that the memory is indeed the same as what I've experienced before.		But in my case, all these functions are working properly. I can't really feel my previous memories as my own, but the function of "recognizing" is working properly as I can tell that the memory is indeed the same as what I've experienced before.

Georgi at 19:56, 7 March 2009

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	I don't like it, but nothing can be done about what I can see.		I don't like it, but nothing can be done about what I can see.

	And like that, the girl we were talking about was flying as if she were ~~laying~~ on the moon.		And like that, the girl we were talking about was flying as if she were lying on the moon.

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Georgi: Some changes as I read along. Line 33 - me and myself - hope the way I changed it makes sense.

2009-02-05T02:49:44Z

Some changes as I read along. Line 33 - me and myself - hope the way I changed it makes sense.

Vaelis at 12:00, 3 January 2009

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	For me, it was never cold to begin with.		For me, it was never cold to begin with.

	<nowiki>----</nowiki>		<nowiki>----</nowiki> Even though it's midnight, if you walk, you see some people.

	Even though it's midnight, if you walk, you see some people.

	A man hurrying down the street with his face down.		A man hurrying down the street with his face down.

Vaelis at 11:54, 3 January 2009

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	On the night at the end of August, I decided to take a walk.		On the night at the end of August, I decided to take a walk.
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	For me, it was never cold to begin with.		For me, it was never cold to begin with.

	----		<nowiki>----</nowiki>

	Even though it's midnight, if you walk, you see some people.		Even though it's midnight, if you walk, you see some people.
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	Then you could say that I am in love with my previous self.		Then you could say that I am in love with my previous self.

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	Looking up after noticing that I have walked a long way, I find out I am in the office district.		Looking up after noticing that I have walked a long way, I find out I am in the office district.
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	And like that, the girl we were talking about was flying as if she were lying on the moon.		And like that, the girl we were talking about was flying as if she were lying on the moon.

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Ddrddr at 21:32, 11 May 2007

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	... Two years ago.		... Two years ago.

	I, ~~Ryohgi~~ Shiki, was about to head up to my second year in high school when I got in an accident. I was carried straight to the hospital.		I, Ryougi Shiki, was about to head up to my second year in high school when I got in an accident. I was carried straight to the hospital.

	I heard that my body didn't get any serious wounds, but the the damage was concentrated on my head.		I heard that my body didn't get any serious wounds, but the the damage was concentrated on my head.
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	Maybe because my body was uninjured, the hospital kept me alive, and my meaningless body also tried to live on.		Maybe because my body was uninjured, the hospital kept me alive, and my meaningless body also tried to live on.

	And finally, about two months ago, ~~Ryohgi~~ Shiki recovered.		And finally, about two months ago, Ryougi Shiki recovered.

	I guess the doctors were shocked - it was as if a corpse had come back to life. I see, that tells me how much they expected my recovery.		I guess the doctors were shocked - it was as if a corpse had come back to life. I see, that tells me how much they expected my recovery.
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	But still, I could not be confident about my previous self. I could not feel that I am who I was.		But still, I could not be confident about my previous self. I could not feel that I am who I was.

	Even if I do remember my memory as ~~Ryohgi~~ Shiki, I can only recognize the memory as someone else's. Even though there's no doubt that I'm ~~Ryohgi~~ Shiki.		Even if I do remember my memory as Ryougi Shiki, I can only recognize the memory as someone else's. Even though there's no doubt that I'm Ryougi Shiki.

	The two years of emptiness has reduced ~~Ryohgi~~ Shiki into nothing.		The two years of emptiness has reduced Ryougi Shiki into nothing.

	Unlike what society thinks, it has caused what's inside of me to crumble into nothing. My memory and the personality I should have had... the connection was utterly destroyed.		Unlike what society thinks, it has caused what's inside of me to crumble into nothing. My memory and the personality I should have had... the connection was utterly destroyed.
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	With that being the case, my memory became nothing but an image.		With that being the case, my memory became nothing but an image.

	But because of that image, I am able to act like I used to. I can communicate with the people I knew and my parents as the ~~Ryohgi~~ Shiki they knew, but without any concern for my real feelings.		But because of that image, I am able to act like I used to. I can communicate with the people I knew and my parents as the Ryougi Shiki they knew, but without any concern for my real feelings.

	To be honest, that troubles me so much that I can almost not stand the pain.		To be honest, that troubles me so much that I can almost not stand the pain.
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	Just like a newborn baby. I don't know anything and I haven't experienced anything. But the memory of the past eighteen years has made me into a complete human.		Just like a newborn baby. I don't know anything and I haven't experienced anything. But the memory of the past eighteen years has made me into a complete human.

	I already have the emotions people originally learn from experiencing many events as my memory. But I have not actually experienced them. But even if I wanted to experience them, I already know about them. There is no amazement nor feeling of being alive.		I already have the emotions people originally learn from experiencing many events as my memory. But I have not actually experienced them. But even if I wanted to experience them, I already know about them. There is no amazement nor feeling of being alive.
	... Just like not being able to be surprised by a magic trick which you already know.		... Just like not being able to be surprised by a magic trick which you already know.

Ddrddr: grammar, style

2007-05-06T18:23:59Z

grammar, style

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	On the night at the end of August, I decided to take a walk.		On the night at the end of August, I decided to take a walk.

	The air is a bit cold for ~~being at~~ the end of a summer. The last train has already left and the town is quiet.		The air is a bit cold for the end of a summer. The last train has already left and the town is quiet.

	It's cold, quiet, and old, just like a dead city. Even the passing people seem cold and artificial like photos. It reminded me of an ~~uncurable~~ disease.		It's cold, quiet, and old, just like a dead city. Even the passing people seem cold and artificial like photos. It reminded me of an incurable disease.

	... ~~disease~~, illness, sickening.		... Disease, illness, sickening.

	Everything, the dim houses, the illuminated convenience store... everything seemed as if ~~they~~ would crumble ~~down~~ if ~~they~~ let ~~their guards~~ down.		Everything, the dim houses, the illuminated convenience store... everything seemed as if it would crumble if it let its guard down.

	In it all, the moon shines through the night.		In it all, the moon shines through the night.
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	Many people hanging out in front of the convenience store.		Many people hanging out in front of the convenience store.

	I tried to figure out what reasons they had for being there, but I never did figure it out being just an outsider.		I tried to figure out what reasons they had for being there, but I never did figure it out; being just an outsider.

	First of all, there was no meaning behind me myself walking out late at night.		First of all, there was no meaning behind me myself walking out late at night.
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	... Two years ago.		... Two years ago.

	Me, ~~called~~ Ryohgi Shiki, was about to head up to ~~the~~ second year in my high school when I got in an accident. I was carried straight to the hospital.		I, Ryohgi Shiki, was about to head up to my second year in high school when I got in an accident. I was carried straight to the hospital.

	I heard that my body didn't get any serious wounds, but the the damage was concentrated on my head.		I heard that my body didn't get any serious wounds, but the the damage was concentrated on my head.
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	And finally, about two months ago, Ryohgi Shiki recovered.		And finally, about two months ago, Ryohgi Shiki recovered.

	I guess the doctors were shocked, it was as if a corpse had come back to life. I see, that tells me how much they expected my recovery.		I guess the doctors were shocked - it was as if a corpse had come back to life. I see, that tells me how much they expected my recovery.

	And myself too, I was shocked for another reason.		And myself too, I was shocked for another reason.
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	According to Tohko, memory is composed of four systems that the brain operates: Writing, saving, replaying, and recognizing.		According to Tohko, memory is composed of four systems that the brain operates: Writing, saving, replaying, and recognizing.

	"Writing" is ~~taking~~ what you see and ~~writing~~ it into your brain as information.		"Writing" is to take what you see and to write it into your brain as information.

	"Saving" is to keep that information stored.		"Saving" is to keep that information stored.
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	The two years of emptiness has reduced Ryohgi Shiki into nothing.		The two years of emptiness has reduced Ryohgi Shiki into nothing.

	Unlike what ~~the~~ society thinks, it has caused what's inside of me to crumble into nothing. My memory and the personality I should have had... the connection was utterly destroyed.		Unlike what society thinks, it has caused what's inside of me to crumble into nothing. My memory and the personality I should have had... the connection was utterly destroyed.

	With that being the case, my memory became nothing but an image.		With that being the case, my memory became nothing but an image.

	But because of that image, I am able to act like I used to. I can communicate with the people I knew and my parents as the Ryohgi Shiki they knew~~. But~~ without any concern for my real feelings.		But because of that image, I am able to act like I used to. I can communicate with the people I knew and my parents as the Ryohgi Shiki they knew, but without any concern for my real feelings.

	To be honest, that troubles me so much that I can almost not stand the pain.		To be honest, that troubles me so much that I can almost not stand the pain.
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	I already have the emotions people originally learn from experiencing many events as my memory. But I have not actually experienced them. But even if I wanted to experience them, I already know about them. There is no amazement nor feeling of being alive.		I already have the emotions people originally learn from experiencing many events as my memory. But I have not actually experienced them. But even if I wanted to experience them, I already know about them. There is no amazement nor feeling of being alive.
	... Just like not being able to be ~~surprized~~ by a magic which you already know ~~the trick to~~.		... Just like not being able to be surprised by a magic trick which you already know.

	And just like that, I continue to act like I used to without feeling that I'm alive.		And just like that, I continue to act like I used to without feeling that I'm alive.
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	Because if I act like that, I might figure out the reason to why I take these walks late at night.		Because if I act like that, I might figure out the reason to why I take these walks late at night.

	... Oh I see.		... Oh, I see.

	Then you could say that I am in love with my previous self.		Then you could say that I am in love with my previous self.
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	Buildings of the same heights are standing side-by-side along the road in a well-mannered fashion. The surface of the buildings are filled with glass windows, and they are only reflecting the moonlight right now.		Buildings of the same heights are standing side-by-side along the road in a well-mannered fashion. The surface of the buildings are filled with glass windows, and they are only reflecting the moonlight right now.

	In the darkness, the large ~~mirror~~ created by the buildings are reflecting each ~~other~~'s figures ~~indistinctively~~.		In the darkness, the large mirrors created by the buildings are reflecting each others' figures hazily.

	It's a quiet night tonight.		It's a quiet night tonight.

	The group of buildings by the main street is like a world of shadows ~~that the~~ monsters roam around in.		The group of buildings by the main street is like a world of shadows which monsters roam around in.

	Deep in it, there is a shadow taller than the rest. That building like a twenty-story high ladder looked like a tower reaching for the moon.		Deep in it, there is a shadow taller than the rest. That building like a twenty-story-high ladder looked like a tower reaching for the moon.

	The name of the tower is Fujiyoh.		The name of the tower is Fujiyoh.
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	At that instant, An uninteresting shadow caught my eyes.		At that instant, An uninteresting shadow caught my eyes.

	A silhouette of a girl floats into my vision. Not metaphorically, the girl ~~was~~ literally floating.		A silhouette of a girl floats into my vision. Not metaphorically, the girl is literally floating.

	There is no wind.		There is no wind.
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	The coldness in the air is abnormal for summer.		The coldness in the air is abnormal for summer.

	The bone in my nape creaks from the ~~coldness~~.		The bone in my nape creaks from the cold.

	Of course, it's just my imagination.		Of course, it's just my imagination.
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	"I see. So you're here today too."		"I see. So you're here today too."

	I don't like it but it can't be helped what I can see.		I don't like it, but it can't be helped what I can see.

	And like that, the girl we were talking about was flying as if she ~~was~~ lying on the moon.		And like that, the girl we were talking about was flying as if she were lying on the moon.

71.206.157.46 at 23:47, 17 January 2007

2007-01-17T23:47:29Z

Velocity7: Kara no Kyokai:Chapter01 02 moved to Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter01 02

2006-07-20T15:56:05Z

Kara no Kyokai:Chapter01 02 moved to Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter01 02

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	The air is a bit cold for the end of a summer. The last train has already left and the town is quiet.		The air is a bit cold for the end of a summer. The last train has already left and the town is quiet.

	It's cold, quiet, and old, just like a dead city. Even the passing people seem cold and artificial like photos. It reminded me of an incurable disease.		It's cold, quiet and old, just like a dead city. Even the passing people seem cold and artificial like photos. It reminded me of an incurable disease.

	... Disease, illness, sickening.		... Disease, illness, sickening.

	Everything, the dim houses, the illuminated convenience ~~store~~... everything seemed as if it would crumble if it let its guard down.		Everything, the dim houses, the illuminated convenience stores... everything seemed as if it would crumble if it let its guard down.

	In it all, the moon shines through the night.		In it all, the moon shines through the night.
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	Many people hanging out in front of the convenience store.		Many people hanging out in front of the convenience store.

	I tried to figure out what reasons they had for being there, but I never did figure it out; being just an outsider.		I tried to figure out what reasons they had for being there, but I never did figure it out, being just an outsider.

	First of all, there was no meaning behind me myself ~~walking~~ out late at night.		First of all, there was no meaning behind me walking by myself out late at night.

	I'm just repeating what I used to do before.		I'm just repeating what I used to do before.
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	I, Ryougi Shiki, was about to head up to my second year in high school when I got in an accident. I was carried straight to the hospital.		I, Ryougi Shiki, was about to head up to my second year in high school when I got in an accident. I was carried straight to the hospital.

	I heard that my body didn't get any serious wounds, but ~~the~~ the damage was concentrated on my head.		I heard that my body didn't get any serious wounds, but the damage was concentrated on my head.

	Since then, I was in a coma.		Since then, I was in a coma.
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	And myself too, I was shocked for another reason.		And myself too, I was shocked for another reason.

	My memory up ~~to now was~~ a bit weird.		My memory before my waking up is a bit weird.

	To put it simply, I cannot trust the memories I have.		To put it simply, I cannot trust the memories I have.
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	This is different from memory disorder, or rather what people usually call amnesia.		This is different from memory disorder, or rather what people usually call amnesia.

	According to Tohko, memory is composed of four systems that the brain operates: ~~Writing~~, saving, replaying, and recognizing.		According to Tohko, memory is composed of four systems that the brain operates: writing, saving, replaying, and recognizing.

	"Writing" is to take what you see and to write it into your brain as information.		"Writing" is to take what you see and to write it into your brain as information.
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	If one cannot perform any one of these processes, they have a memory disorder. Of course, depending on which system is dysfunctional, the case of memory disorder will vary.		If one cannot perform any one of these processes, they have a memory disorder. Of course, depending on which system is dysfunctional, the case of memory disorder will vary.

	But it my case, all these functions are working properly. I can't really feel my previous memories as my own, but the function of "recognizing" is working properly as I can tell that the memory is indeed the same as what I've experienced before.		But in my case, all these functions are working properly. I can't really feel my previous memories as my own, but the function of "recognizing" is working properly as I can tell that the memory is indeed the same as what I've experienced before.

	But still, I could not be confident about my previous self. I could not feel that I am who I was.		But still, I could not be confident about my previous self. I could not feel that I am who I was.
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	To be honest, that troubles me so much that I can almost not stand the pain.		To be honest, that troubles me so much that I can almost not stand the pain.

	...... It's just a mimicry		...... It's just mimicry
	I'm not living at all.		I'm not living at all.

	Just like a newborn baby. I don't know anything and I haven't experienced anything. But the memory of the past eighteen years has made me into a complete human.		Just like a newborn baby. I don't know anything and I haven't experienced anything. But the memory of the past eighteen years has made me into a complete human.

	I already have the emotions people originally learn from experiencing many events as my memory. But I have not actually experienced them. But even if I wanted to experience them, I already know about them. There is no amazement ~~nor~~ feeling of being alive.		I already have the emotions people originally learn from experiencing many events as my memory. But I have not actually experienced them. But even if I wanted to experience them, I already know about them. There is no amazement, no feeling of being alive.
	... Just like ~~not~~ being ~~able~~ to be surprised by a magic trick which you already know.		... Just like being unable to be surprised by a magic trick which you already know.

	And just like that, I continue to act like I used to without feeling that I'm alive.		And just like that, I continue to act like I used to without feeling that I'm alive.
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	Because if I do so, I might be able to return to my previous self.		Because if I do so, I might be able to return to my previous self.

	Because if I act like that, I might figure out the reason to why I take these walks late at night.		Because if I act like that, I might figure out the reason why I take these walks late at night.

	... Oh, I see.		... Oh, I see.
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	Looking up after noticing that I have walked a long way, I find out I am in the office district.		Looking up after noticing that I have walked a long way, I find out that I am in the office district.

	Buildings of the same ~~heights~~ are standing side-by-side along the road in a well-mannered fashion. The surface of the buildings ~~are~~ filled with glass windows, and they are only reflecting the moonlight right now.		Buildings of the same height are standing side-by-side along the road in a well-mannered fashion. The surface of the buildings is filled with glass windows, and they are only reflecting the moonlight right now.

	In the darkness, the large mirrors created by the buildings are reflecting each others' figures hazily.		In the darkness, the large mirrors created by the buildings are reflecting each others' figures hazily.
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	It's a quiet night tonight.		It's a quiet night tonight.

	The group of buildings by the main street is like a world of shadows which monsters roam around in.		The group of buildings by the main street is like a world of shadows in which monsters roam around.

	Deep in it, there is a shadow taller than the rest. That building like a twenty-story-high ladder looked like a tower reaching for the moon.		Deep in it, there is a shadow taller than the rest. That building, like a twenty-story-high ladder, looked like a tower reaching for the moon.

	The name of the tower is Fujiyoh.		The name of the tower is Fujiyoh.
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	There are no lights on in the mansion called the Fujiyoh building. The residents are probably all asleep. Probably because it's already almost two in the morning.		There are no lights on in the mansion called the Fujiyoh building. The residents are probably all asleep. Probably because it's already almost two in the morning.

	At that instant, An uninteresting shadow caught my eyes.		At that instant, an uninteresting shadow caught my eyes.

	A silhouette of a girl floats into my vision. Not metaphorically, the girl is literally floating.		A silhouette of a girl floats into my vision. Not metaphorically, the girl is literally floating.

	There is no wind.		There is no wind.
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	"I see. So you're here today too."		"I see. So you're here today too."

	I don't like it, but it can't be ~~helped~~ what I can see.		I don't like it, but nothing can be done about what I can see.

	And like that, the girl we were talking about was flying as if she were ~~lying~~ on the moon.		And like that, the girl we were talking about was flying as if she were laying on the moon.

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	The air is a bit cold for being at the end of a summer. The last train has already left and the town is quiet.		The air is a bit cold for being at the end of a summer. The last train has already left and the town is quiet.

	It's cold, quiet, and old, just like a dead city. Even the passing people ~~seems so~~ cold and so artificial like photos ~~that it~~ reminded me of an uncurable disease.		It's cold, quiet, and old, just like a dead city. Even the passing people seem cold and artificial like photos. It reminded me of an uncurable disease.

	... disease, illness, sickening.		... disease, illness, sickening.

	Everything, the ~~unlighted~~ houses, the ~~lighted~~ convenience store... everything seemed they would crumble down if they let their guards down.		Everything, the dim houses, the illuminated convenience store... everything seemed as if they would crumble down if they let their guards down.

	In it all, the moon shines through the night.		In it all, the moon shines through the night.

	In this world where everything is ~~dead~~, it seems like the moon is the only thing alive, and it hurts my eyes.		In this world where everything is lifeless, it seems like the moon is the only thing alive, and it hurts my eyes.

	... That's what I mean by sickening		... That's what I mean by sickening

	When I left the house, I put on a black leather jacket ~~on top of~~ my light blue kimono.		When I left the house, I put on a black leather jacket over my light blue kimono.

	The kimono gets trapped inside the jacket and burns my body.		The kimono gets trapped inside the jacket and burns my body.
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	A young man pondering in front of a vending machine.		A young man pondering in front of a vending machine.

	Many people ~~that hang~~ out in front of the convenience store.		Many people hanging out in front of the convenience store.

	I tried to figure out what reasons they had for being there, but I never did figure it out being just an outsider.		I tried to figure out what reasons they had for being there, but I never did figure it out being just an outsider.
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	And finally, about two months ago, Ryohgi Shiki recovered.		And finally, about two months ago, Ryohgi Shiki recovered.

	I guess the doctors were so shocked as if a corpse ~~has~~ come back to life. I see, that tells me how much they expected my recovery.		I guess the doctors were shocked, it was as if a corpse had come back to life. I see, that tells me how much they expected my recovery.

	And myself too, I was shocked for another reason.		And myself too, I was shocked for another reason.
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	"Replaying" is to recall the stored information. In other words, remembering.		"Replaying" is to recall the stored information. In other words, remembering.

	"Recognizing" is to confirm that the information recalled is the same as the event that actually ~~occured~~.		"Recognizing" is to confirm that the information recalled is the same as the event that actually occurred.

	If one cannot perform any one of these ~~process~~, they have a memory disorder. Of course, depending on which system is ~~disfunctional~~, the case of memory disorder will vary.		If one cannot perform any one of these processes, they have a memory disorder. Of course, depending on which system is dysfunctional, the case of memory disorder will vary.

	But it my case, all these functions are working properly. I can't really feel my previous memories as my own, but the function of "recognizing" is working properly as I can tell that the memory is indeed the same as what I've experienced before.		But it my case, all these functions are working properly. I can't really feel my previous memories as my own, but the function of "recognizing" is working properly as I can tell that the memory is indeed the same as what I've experienced before.
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	Even if I do remember my memory as Ryohgi Shiki, I can only recognize the memory as someone else's. Even though there's no doubt that I'm Ryohgi Shiki.		Even if I do remember my memory as Ryohgi Shiki, I can only recognize the memory as someone else's. Even though there's no doubt that I'm Ryohgi Shiki.

	The two years of ~~emptyness~~ has reduced Ryohgi Shiki into nothing.		The two years of emptiness has reduced Ryohgi Shiki into nothing.

	~~Not~~ what the society thinks, ~~but~~ it has caused what's inside of me to crumble into nothing. My memory and the personality I should have had... the connection was utterly destroyed.		Unlike what the society thinks, it has caused what's inside of me to crumble into nothing. My memory and the personality I should have had... the connection was utterly destroyed.

	With that being the case, my memory became nothing but an image.		With that being the case, my memory became nothing but an image.
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	Looking up after noticing that I have walked a long way, I find out I am in the office ~~ditrict~~.		Looking up after noticing that I have walked a long way, I find out I am in the office district.

	Buildings of the same heights are standing side-by-side along the road in a well-mannered fashion. The surface of the buildings are filled with glass windows, and they are only reflecting the moonlight right now.		Buildings of the same heights are standing side-by-side along the road in a well-mannered fashion. The surface of the buildings are filled with glass windows, and they are only reflecting the moonlight right now.
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	At that instant, An uninteresting shadow caught my eyes.		At that instant, An uninteresting shadow caught my eyes.

	A silhouette of a ~~human form comes~~ into my vision. Not ~~as a figure of speech~~, ~~but~~ the girl ~~is really~~ floating.		A silhouette of a girl floats into my vision. Not metaphorically, the girl was literally floating.

	There is no wind.		There is no wind.
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	The bone in my nape creaks from the coldness.		The bone in my nape creaks from the coldness.

	Of course, it's just my ~~illusion~~.		Of course, it's just my imagination.

	"I see. So you're here today too."		"I see. So you're here today too."