Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter01 03 - Revision history

Georgi: a few word changes and rephrasing; most importantly, reformatted multiple paragraph dialogue to include " in the beginning of each paragraph.

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a few word changes and rephrasing; most importantly, reformatted multiple paragraph dialogue to include " in the beginning of each paragraph.

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Vaelis at 11:57, 3 January 2009

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	~~Overlooking~~ View／		===／Overlooking View／===

	----		<nowiki>-------</nowiki>The image is that of a dragonfly. Busily flying.

	---The image is that of a dragonfly. Busily flying.

	A butterfly came to follow, but I didn't slow down. The butterfly eventually could not keep up and fell as it was about to go out of my vision.		A butterfly came to follow, but I didn't slow down. The butterfly eventually could not keep up and fell as it was about to go out of my vision.
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	Maybe she took a walk last night after I left.		Maybe she took a walk last night after I left.

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	Next to the room which is Tohko-san's room and the office is a room like a kitchen.		Next to the room which is Tohko-san's room and the office is a room like a kitchen.
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	Looking, I notice that the coffee maker is already filled with the black liquid.		Looking, I notice that the coffee maker is already filled with the black liquid.

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	"I guess the one yesterday makes eight. People should start to notice the similarities by now."		"I guess the one yesterday makes eight. People should start to notice the similarities by now."
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	I guess people call this good news within bad news.		I guess people call this good news within bad news.

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	And answered so.		And answered so.

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71.63.6.48 at 16:09, 7 August 2008

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72.137.9.216 at 00:44, 27 June 2008

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	---The image is that of an dragonfly. Busily flying.		---The image is that of a dragonfly. Busily flying.

	A butterfly came to follow, but I didn't slow down. The butterfly eventually could not keep up and fell as it was about to go out of my vision.		A butterfly came to follow, but I didn't slow down. The butterfly eventually could not keep up and fell as it was about to go out of my vision.

84.108.86.183 at 16:57, 25 May 2008

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	This sudden question pulls me back into reality.		This sudden question pulls me back into reality.

	I haven't really been at a high place since I went to the Tokyo Tower as a child. I don't really remember what I thought about it then. The only thing ~~is knows~~ is that I tried so hard to spot the place I ~~where~~ lived, but ended up not being able to find it.		I haven't really been at a high place since I went to the Tokyo Tower as a child. I don't really remember what I thought about it then. The only thing I know is that I tried so hard to spot the place where I lived, but ended up not being able to find it.

	"Maybe, something small?"		"Maybe, something small?"

84.108.86.183 at 16:44, 25 May 2008

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	It's been two month since I let these two meet. I'm starting to become the one to hear about the results when it comes to these kinds of tales.		It's been two month since I let these two meet. I'm starting to become the one to hear about the results when it comes to these kinds of tales.

	As a normal human being different from these two, I'd like to stay away from those stories. ~~One~~ the other hand, since it doesn't suit me to be ignored, I think this neutral stance I'm holding right now is perfect.		As a normal human being different from these two, I'd like to stay away from those stories. On the other hand, since it doesn't suit me to be ignored, I think this neutral stance I'm holding right now is perfect.

	I guess people call this good news within bad news.		I guess people call this good news within bad news.

202.14.216.129 at 03:06, 5 June 2007

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	"Does it mean your mind goes crazy for just an instant?"		"Does it mean your mind goes crazy for just an instant?"

	Tohko-san laughs after I blurt out my.		Tohko-san laughs after I blurt out my question.

	"Everyone dreams about the taboo, Kokuto. Humans have the ability to gain pleasure from imagining things they cannot do. But... yeah, that's pretty close. The important thing is that the thought only comes at a specific place - at that place itself. Well, I guess that's pretty obvious. To speak in your case, I think your mind isn't crazy, but rather numb."		"Everyone dreams about the taboo, Kokuto. Humans have the ability to gain pleasure from imagining things they cannot do. But... yeah, that's pretty close. The important thing is that the thought only comes at a specific place - at that place itself. Well, I guess that's pretty obvious. To speak in your case, I think your mind isn't crazy, but rather numb."

Ddrddr at 21:34, 11 May 2007

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Ddrddr at 20:47, 6 May 2007

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Ddrddr: interim save. my pc is up and down like a pogo stick, I'm not taking chances

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interim save. my pc is up and down like a pogo stick, I'm not taking chances

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	"Maybe, something small?"		"Maybe, something small?"

	"That's too shrewd of a remark, ~~Kokutou~~."		"That's too shrewd of a remark, Kokuto."

	A cold response comes back. Well, I was a bit doubtful about my remark myself. I pull myself together and try to think of something else.		A cold response comes back. Well, I was a bit doubtful about my remark myself. I pull myself together and try to think of something else.
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	Impulse is not something that comes from within you like feelings, but rather something that attacks you from the outside. Even if the one attacked by it doesn't want it.		Impulse is not something that comes from within you like feelings, but rather something that attacks you from the outside. Even if the one attacked by it doesn't want it.

	Something like violence that attacks you without warning, that is what we call "~~impulses~~".		Something like violence that attacks you without warning, that is what we call an "impulse".

	Then what is the violence that is brought by an overlooking view?		Then what is the violence that is brought by an overlooking view?

	"That is being "far". A vision too big creates a vivid separation between you and the world. People can only feel safe around things close to them. Even if one has the most detailed map and knows exactly where they are, it's only information, right?		"That is being 'far'. A vision too big creates a vivid separation between you and the world. People can only feel safe around things close to them. Even if one has the most detailed map and knows exactly where they are, it's only information, right?

	For us, the world is only something we can feel ourselves. The boundaries between cities, countries, and the world can only be unconsciously recognized by our brains, and we ourselves cannot feel them unless we actually go to those. And in reality, there is nothing wrong with that way of recognition.		For us, the world is only something we can feel ourselves. The boundaries between cities, countries, and the world can only be unconsciously recognized by our brains, and we ourselves cannot feel them unless we actually go to those. And in reality, there is nothing wrong with that way of recognition.
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	Shiki interrupts as if to say she can't stand it anymore. Come to think of it, we might have strayed off the main topic.		Shiki interrupts as if to say she can't stand it anymore. Come to think of it, we might have strayed off the main topic.

	"It's not long at all. If you're talking in in terms of constructing a discussion topic, we're only on the second part."		"It's not long at all. If you're talking in terms of constructing a discussion topic, we're only on the second part."

	"I only want to hear the end. I don't want to hear you guys talk."		"I only want to hear the end. I don't want to hear you guys talk."

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	Shiki is leaning on a wall while standing up, and Tohko-san is sitting cross-legged on a chair.		Shiki is leaning on a wall while standing up, and Tohko-san is sitting cross-legged on a chair.

	"Morning, ~~Kokutoh~~"		"Morning, Kokuto"

	The look on Tohko-san's face, which is more like a glare, is normal. ... Seeing that she has her glasses off, I guess she was talking with Shiki about "those" kinds of things.		The look on Tohko-san's face, which is more like a glare, is normal. ... Seeing that she has her glasses off, I guess she was talking with Shiki about "those" kinds of things.
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	She told me frankly that I had no hope as the one to make, but she still hired me. She said that I had the ability as the one to search or whatnot.		She told me frankly that I had no hope as the one to make, but she still hired me. She said that I had the ability as the one to search or whatnot.

	"You're slow, ~~Kokutoh~~."		"You're slow, Kokuto."

	...I hear that from the next room.		...I hear that from the next room.
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	"I don't care about all that explanation - there's no danger in that. The problem is ''her''. I know I got that thing good, but if there's a main body somewhere else, we'll just end up repeating this over and over again. I'm tired of being Mikiya's bodyguard."		"I don't care about all that explanation - there's no danger in that. The problem is ''her''. I know I got that thing good, but if there's a main body somewhere else, we'll just end up repeating this over and over again. I'm tired of being Mikiya's bodyguard."

	"I feel the same way. I'll take care of Fujoh Kirie. You can just take ~~Kokutoh~~ home. There's about five more hours until he's off work. If you're going to sleep, you can use the floor there."		"I feel the same way. I'll take care of Fujoh Kirie. You can just take Kokuto home. There's about five more hours until he's off work. If you're going to sleep, you can use the floor there."

	The place Tohko-san points at is a place that has not been cleaned for the past year and is like a dirty furnace.		The place Tohko-san points at is a place that has not been cleaned for the past year and is like a dirty furnace.
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	I stare at her back as she looks outside... She's like a mirage in all this white.		I stare at her back as she looks outside... She's like a mirage in all this white.

	"~~Kokutoh~~, what do you think a view from a high place reminds you of?"		"Kokuto, what do you think a view from a high place reminds you of?"

	This sudden question pulls me back into reality.		This sudden question pulls me back into reality.
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	Tohko-san laughs after I blurt out my.		Tohko-san laughs after I blurt out my.

	"Everyone dreams about the taboo, ~~Kokutoh~~. Humans have the ability to gain pleasure from imagining things they cannot do. But... yeah, that's pretty close. The important thing is that the thought only comes at a specific place - at that place itself. Well, I guess that's pretty obvious. To speak in your case, I think your mind isn't crazy, but rather numb."		"Everyone dreams about the taboo, Kokuto. Humans have the ability to gain pleasure from imagining things they cannot do. But... yeah, that's pretty close. The important thing is that the thought only comes at a specific place - at that place itself. Well, I guess that's pretty obvious. To speak in your case, I think your mind isn't crazy, but rather numb."

	"Tohko, you've been talking for too long."		"Tohko, you've been talking for too long."

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	When Shiki and Tohko-san without her glasses talk together, they usually talk about these occult-like things.		When Shiki and Tohko-san without her glasses talk together, they usually talk about these occult-like things.

	"You heard the story that Shiki saw the girl floating at the Fujiyoh building, right? That story had more to it and it seems there's a human-like figure flying around those floating girls. We were thinking that since they won't stray from the ~~Fijiyoh~~ building, maybe that place was like a net or something."		"You heard the story that Shiki saw the girl floating at the Fujiyoh building, right? That story had more to it and it seems there's a human-like figure flying around those floating girls. We were thinking that since they won't stray from the Fujiyoh building, maybe that place was like a net or something."

	I'm troubled at how complex and weird the story has become.		I'm troubled at how complex and weird the story has become.
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	As if Tohko-san can tell my confusion, she sums up the whole thing.		As if Tohko-san can tell my confusion, she sums up the whole thing.

	"In other words, there's one floating human at the Fujiyoh building and around it are the girls who died of suicide. These girls are probably something like ghosts. That's pretty much it."		"In other words, there's one floating human at the Fujiyoh building and around it are the girls who died by suicide. These girls are probably something like ghosts. That's pretty much it."

	I nod.		I nod.

	I understand the story but I guess I'm hearing ~~the story~~ after ~~its~~ over ~~again~~.		I understand the story but I guess I'm hearing it after it's all over.

	Seeing how Shiki talked, it seems the ghost thing was already taken care of.		Seeing how Shiki talked, it seems the ghost thing was already taken care of.

	It's been two month since I let these two meet. I'm starting to become the one to hear about the results when it comes to these kinds of ~~stories~~.		It's been two month since I let these two meet. I'm starting to become the one to hear about the results when it comes to these kinds of tales.

	As a normal human being different from these two, I'd like to stay away from those stories. ~~But~~ since ~~I would not like~~ to be ignored, I think this neutral stance I'm holding right now is perfect.		As a normal human being different from these two, I'd like to stay away from those stories. One the other hand, since it doesn't suit me to be ignored, I think this neutral stance I'm holding right now is perfect.

	I guess people call this good news within bad news.		I guess people call this good news within bad news.
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	"Then you're saying you saw eight ghosts from the start? Like that one clairvoyant girl?"		"Then you're saying you saw eight ghosts from the start? Like that one clairvoyant girl?"

	"No way. I'm normal. It's just that the air there is abnormal. Let's see... it feels weird ~~like~~ hot ~~water~~ and cold water ~~being~~ right next to each other."		"No way. I'm normal. It's just that the air there is abnormal. Let's see... it feels weird. Like hot and cold water right next to each other."

	Tohko-san follows-up Shiki's ambiguous words.		Tohko-san follows-up Shiki's ambiguous words.

	"So in other words, ~~the~~ time there is not working properly. It's not like there's only one way for time to pass by. The time it takes for something to rot away is unfairly different for everything. Then it should follow that an individual ~~as human~~ and ~~it's~~ memory take different times to disappear. When someone dies, does that person's memory disappear? It doesn't, right? As long as there are observers (ones to remember), nothing disappears instantly~~. They just fade~~ away.		"So in other words, time there is not working properly. It's not like there's only one way for time to pass by. The time it takes for something to rot away is unfairly different for everything. Then, it should follow that a human individual and its memory take different times to disappear. When someone dies, does that person's memory disappear? It doesn't, right? As long as there are observers, ones to remember, nothing disappears instantly, but gradually fades away.
	~~People's memory... no~~, rather records~~, if the~~ observer ~~happened~~ to be the environment around that person, ~~special~~ people like those girls will ~~remain~~ and walk ~~through town~~ as ~~an illusion~~ even after ~~they die~~. This is part of a phenomenon ~~called~~ ghosts. The only ones who see ~~this illusion~~ are the ones that share the memories with these ghosts, namely their parents and friends. Shiki is an exception ~~though~~.
	~~There are those kinds of "~~passage of time ~~for~~ records", but at the top of that building, ~~that is really slow~~. The girls' memories from when they were alive ~~has~~ not caught up to their ~~real~~ state yet.		Memories, or rather, "records". If an observer happens to be in the environment around that person, people like those girls will be preserved by their memories and walk the earth as "illusions" even after their deaths. This is part of the phenomenon which we know as "ghosts". The only ones who see these projections are the ones that share the memories with these ghosts, namely their parents and friends. Shiki, however, is an exception.
	As a result, the memories stay alive. What can be seen there are the actions and the ~~realities~~ of those girls whose time happens to be passing by slowly."		Of course, the passage of time does affect these "records", but at the top of that building, it seems to occur at a much slower rate. The girls' memories from when they were alive have not caught up to their true state yet.
			As a result, the memories stay alive. What can be seen there are the actions and the existences of those girls whose time happens to be passing by slowly."

	Then, Tohko-san lights another cigarette.		Then, Tohko-san lights another cigarette.

	So she is saying that when something goes away, as long as I remember ~~about~~ it, it ~~does~~ not ~~mean it has~~ disappeared, ~~but~~ me remembering it ~~means~~ it's alive~~, so~~ if it's alive, it can be seen?		So she is saying that when something goes away, as long as I remember it, it has not disappeared. Thus, the very act of me remembering it causes it to be alive. So if it's alive, it can be seen?

	That's just like hallucination. ... No, Tohko-san probably used the word "illusion" because it is defined as something that isn't real.		That's just like hallucination... No, Tohko-san probably used the word "illusion" because it is defined as something that isn't real.

	"I don't care about all that ~~explanations. There~~'s no danger in that. The problem is her. I know I got that thing good, but if there's a main body somewhere else, we'll just end up repeating this over and over again. I'm tired of being Mikiya's bodyguard."		"I don't care about all that explanation - there's no danger in that. The problem is ''her''. I know I got that thing good, but if there's a main body somewhere else, we'll just end up repeating this over and over again. I'm tired of being Mikiya's bodyguard."

	"I feel the same way. I'll take care of Fujoh Kirie. You can just take Kokutoh home. There's about five more hours until he's off work. If you're going to sleep, you can use the floor there."		"I feel the same way. I'll take care of Fujoh Kirie. You can just take Kokutoh home. There's about five more hours until he's off work. If you're going to sleep, you can use the floor there."

	The place Tohko-san ~~pointed was~~ a place that has not been cleaned for the past year and ~~was~~ like a dirty furnace.		The place Tohko-san points at is a place that has not been cleaned for the past year and is like a dirty furnace.

	Of course, Shiki ignores her.		Of course, Shiki ignores her.
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	From there, she looks outside.		From there, she looks outside.

	There ~~are~~ no ~~lightings~~ in this room. We only get the light from outside and it's hard to tell if its morning or afternoon in here.		There is no lighting in this room. We only get the light from outside and it's hard to tell if its morning or afternoon in here.

	In contrast, the view outside the window is clearly mid-day. You could almost see the blazing-hot white sunlight.		In contrast, the view outside the window is clearly mid-day. You could almost see the blazing-hot white sunlight.