Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter01 06 - Revision history

70.55.171.124 at 04:09, 26 May 2010

2010-05-26T04:09:58Z

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	I end rather vaguely and Shiki looks at me doubtfully.		I end rather vaguely and Shiki looks at me doubtfully.

	"But you're different"		"But you're different."

	Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. Whilst initially cold-sounding, the words feel warm somehow. It's a bit embarrassing, so I walk on for a while in silence. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and the many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, we'll be able to see the station right ahead.		Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. Whilst initially cold-sounding, the words feel warm somehow. It's a bit embarrassing, so I walk on for a while in silence. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and the many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, we'll be able to see the station right ahead.

Georgi: minor edits

2009-03-07T20:34:10Z

minor edits

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	"Let me finish, I think I'd do that because I'm weak.		"Let me finish, I think I'd do that because I'm weak.

	I'm going to kill myself because I don't have the courage to keep on living and turn all of Tokyo into my enemy. That's easier, right? Courage for an instant and courage that needs to continue throughout your life. You know which one is harder.		“I'm going to kill myself because I don't have the courage to keep on living and turn all of Tokyo into my enemy. That's easier, right? Courage for an instant and courage that needs to continue throughout your life. You know which one is harder.

	It's an extreme argument, but I think death is running away, no matter what kind of determination is behind it. But there are times when the concerned person wants to run away. I can't deny it or refute it, because I'm a weak person as well."		“It's an extreme argument, but I think death is running away, no matter what kind of determination is behind it. But there are times when the concerned person wants to run away. I can't deny it or refute it, because I'm a weak person as well."

	Hmm, but this seems like I'm saying it's all right for someone to do so because I'd do so too. Self-sacrifice in that case is probably the right thing to do, and that action would be called heroic. But that's wrong. It's foolish to choose death no matter how noble or right it is. No matter how wrong or low it is, we have to keep on living to make right our wrongs.		Hmm, but this seems like I'm saying it's all right for someone to do so because I'd do so too. Self-sacrifice in that case is probably the right thing to do, and that action would be called heroic. But that's wrong. It's foolish to choose death no matter how noble or right it is. No matter how wrong or low it is, we have to keep on living to make right our wrongs.
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	"But you're different"		"But you're different"

	Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. Whilst initially cold-sounding, the words feel warm somehow. It's a bit embarrassing, so I walk on for a while ~~silently~~. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and the many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, we'll be able to see the station right ahead.		Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. Whilst initially cold-sounding, the words feel warm somehow. It's a bit embarrassing, so I walk on for a while in silence. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and the many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, we'll be able to see the station right ahead.

	Then, Shiki stops.		Then, Shiki stops.
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	"Two strawberry Häagen-Dazs. They're still there ~~there after~~ you bought them. Finish those things off, man."		"Two strawberry Häagen-Dazs. They're still there from when you bought them. Finish those things off, man."

	"...I guess I did buy those."		"...I guess I did buy those."

Vaelis at 12:03, 3 January 2009

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 The sun has set and we leave Tohko-san's abandoned building. Shiki's apartment is in the area but my place is twenty minutes away from here by train. Tiredness shows in Shiki, who is walking a bit shakily, but nonetheless stays by my side.
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 Overlooking View／Finish

84.108.86.183 at 17:26, 25 May 2008

2008-05-25T17:26:55Z

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	Overlooking View／		Overlooking View／

	The sun has set and we leave Tohko-san's abandoned building. Shiki's apartment is in the area but my place is twenty minutes away from here by train. Tiredness ~~showed~~ in Shiki, who is walking a bit shakily, but nonetheless stays by my side.		The sun has set and we leave Tohko-san's abandoned building. Shiki's apartment is in the area but my place is twenty minutes away from here by train. Tiredness shows in Shiki, who is walking a bit shakily, but nonetheless stays by my side.

	"Do you think suicide is right, Mikiya?'		"Do you think suicide is right, Mikiya?'

24.14.209.26: removed language about Shiki's gender

2008-05-23T09:43:49Z

removed language about Shiki's gender

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	Overlooking View／		Overlooking View／

	The sun has set and we leave Tohko-san's abandoned building. Shiki's apartment is in the area but my place is twenty minutes away from here by train. Shiki ~~must be sleepy as she~~ is walking a bit shakily, but ~~she~~ stays by my side ~~while we walk~~.		The sun has set and we leave Tohko-san's abandoned building. Shiki's apartment is in the area but my place is twenty minutes away from here by train. Tiredness showed in Shiki, who is walking a bit shakily, but nonetheless stays by my side.

	"Do you think suicide is right, Mikiya?'		"Do you think suicide is right, Mikiya?'
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	Well, I don't care about small things. I guess my only choice is to obey Shiki. But just obeying is a bit irritating, so I decide to strike back a little.		Well, I don't care about small things. I guess my only choice is to obey Shiki. But just obeying is a bit irritating, so I decide to strike back a little.

	Shiki has a vulnerable point where, when I say this, ~~she~~ gets mad but can't say anything back.		Shiki has a vulnerable point where, when I say this, Shiki gets mad but can't say anything back.

	Even though it is a wish from the bottom of my heart, ~~she~~ still has yet to take my advice.		Even though it is a wish from the bottom of my heart, Shiki still has yet to take my advice.

	"All right, I'll spend the night. But Shiki..."		"All right, I'll spend the night. But Shiki..."

	~~She~~ looks at me as I advise ~~her~~ with a straight face.		Shiki looks at me as I advise with a straight face.

	"You shouldn't talk like that. You're a girl, you know."		"You shouldn't talk like that. You're a girl, you know."

Ddrddr at 00:32, 7 May 2007

2007-05-07T00:32:15Z

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	The sun has set and we leave Tohko-san's abandoned building. Shiki's apartment is in the area but my place is twenty minutes away from here by train. Shiki must be sleepy as she is walking a bit ~~wobbly. But Shiki~~ stays by my side while we walk.		The sun has set and we leave Tohko-san's abandoned building. Shiki's apartment is in the area but my place is twenty minutes away from here by train. Shiki must be sleepy as she is walking a bit shakily, but she stays by my side while we walk.

	"Do you think suicide is right, Mikiya?'		"Do you think suicide is right, Mikiya?'

	Shiki suddenly asks me that. That downcast~~-like gesture~~ looks a bit touching.		Shiki suddenly asks me that out of the blue. That downcast expression looks a bit touching.

	"Hmm, I don't know. Let's say I get this virus that will kill everybody in Tokyo just by me staying alive. If everyone would be saved if I die, then I'd probably kill myself."		"Hmm, I don't know. Let's say I get this virus that will kill everybody in Tokyo just by me staying alive. If everyone would be saved if I die, then I'd probably kill myself."
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	It's an extreme argument, but I think death is running away, no matter what kind of determination is behind it. But there are times when the concerned person wants to run away. I can't deny it or refute it, because I'm a weak person as well."		It's an extreme argument, but I think death is running away, no matter what kind of determination is behind it. But there are times when the concerned person wants to run away. I can't deny it or refute it, because I'm a weak person as well."

	Hmm, but this seems like I'm saying it's all right for someone to do so because I'd do so too. Self-sacrifice in that case is probably the right thing to do, and that action would be called heroic. But that's wrong. It's foolish to choose death no matter how noble or right it is. No matter how wrong or ~~lowly~~ it is, we have to keep on living to make right of our wrongs.		Hmm, but this seems like I'm saying it's all right for someone to do so because I'd do so too. Self-sacrifice in that case is probably the right thing to do, and that action would be called heroic. But that's wrong. It's foolish to choose death no matter how noble or right it is. No matter how wrong or low it is, we have to keep on living to make right our wrongs.

	We have to live on and accept the end of the things we've caused. That is something that takes a lot of courage. I don't think I could do that myself, and it sounds too cocky, so I decide not to say it.		We have to live on and accept the end of the things we've caused. That is something that takes a lot of courage. I don't think I could do that myself, and it sounds too cocky, so I decide not to say it.

	"... Well, anyways... I think it's just different for everyone."		"...Well, anyways... I think it's just different for everyone."

	I end rather vaguely and Shiki looks at me doubtfully.		I end rather vaguely and Shiki looks at me doubtfully.
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	"But you're different"		"But you're different"

	Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. ~~It sounded~~ cold, ~~but~~ the words ~~were~~ warm somehow. It ~~was~~ a bit embarrassing, so I ~~walked~~ on for a while silently. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and the many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, we'll be able to see the station right ahead.		Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. Whilst initially cold-sounding, the words feel warm somehow. It's a bit embarrassing, so I walk on for a while silently. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and the many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, we'll be able to see the station right ahead.

	Then, Shiki stops.		Then, Shiki stops.
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	"Huh? Why, all of a sudden?"		"Huh? Why, all of a sudden?"

	Shiki ~~pulls~~ me saying that it doesn't matter.		Shiki grabs me, saying that it doesn't matter.

	It is indeed easier to stay at Shiki's place since it's nearby, but I don't feel like doing so ~~out of morality~~.		It is indeed easier to stay at Shiki's place since it's nearby, but I don't feel like doing so, on moral grounds.

	"It's fine. You don't have anything in your room either. It's boring even if I do go. Or are you telling me there's something I have to do there?"		"It's fine. You don't have anything in your room either. It's boring even if I do go. Or are you telling me there's something I have to do there?"
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	"Two strawberry Häagen-Dazs. It's still there after you ~~brought it~~. Finish off ~~that thing~~, man."		"Two strawberry Häagen-Dazs. They're still there there after you bought them. Finish those things off, man."

	"... I guess I did buy ~~that~~."		"...I guess I did buy those."

	Yes I did. ~~It was~~ something I bought because of how hot it is while walking to Shiki's place. ~~But why did I buy that thing~~, it's almost September after all...		Yes I did. They were something I bought because of how hot it is while walking to Shiki's place. Then again, it's almost September after all, so I wonder why I bothered...

	Well, I don't care about small things. I guess my only choice is to obey Shiki. But just obeying is a bit irritating, so I decide to strike back a little.		Well, I don't care about small things. I guess my only choice is to obey Shiki. But just obeying is a bit irritating, so I decide to strike back a little.
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	Shiki has a vulnerable point where, when I say this, she gets mad but can't say anything back.		Shiki has a vulnerable point where, when I say this, she gets mad but can't say anything back.

	Even though it is a wish from the bottom of my heart, ~~Shiki~~ has yet to take my advice.		Even though it is a wish from the bottom of my heart, she still has yet to take my advice.

	"All right, I'll spend the night. But Shiki..."		"All right, I'll spend the night. But Shiki..."

	I ~~say~~ with a straight face ~~to Shiki, who looks at me~~.		She looks at me as I advise her with a straight face.

	"You shouldn't talk like that. You're a girl, you know."		"You shouldn't talk like that. You're a girl, you know."

	~~Being told that,~~ Shiki looks away angrily.		Shiki looks away, angrily.

	Overlooking View／Finish		Overlooking View／Finish

Trigger-happy at 11:18, 20 March 2007

2007-03-20T11:18:01Z

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	"But you're different"		"But you're different"

	Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. It sounded cold, but the words were warm somehow. It was a bit embarrassing, so I walked on for a while silently. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and the many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, the station is right ahead.		Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. It sounded cold, but the words were warm somehow. It was a bit embarrassing, so I walked on for a while silently. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and the many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, we'll be able to see the station right ahead.

	Then, Shiki stops.		Then, Shiki stops.

Bored tenshi at 05:10, 5 February 2007

2007-02-05T05:10:52Z

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	The sun has set and we leave Tohko-san's abandoned building. Shiki's apartment is in the area but my place is twenty minutes away from here by train. Shiki must be sleepy as ~~Shiki~~ is walking a bit wobbly. But Shiki stays by my side while we walk.		The sun has set and we leave Tohko-san's abandoned building. Shiki's apartment is in the area but my place is twenty minutes away from here by train. Shiki must be sleepy as she is walking a bit wobbly. But Shiki stays by my side while we walk.

	"Do you think suicide is right, Mikiya?'		"Do you think suicide is right, Mikiya?'
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	Shiki suddenly asks me that. That downcast-like gesture looks a bit touching.		Shiki suddenly asks me that. That downcast-like gesture looks a bit touching.

	"Hmm, I don't know. Let's say I get this virus that will kill everybody in Tokyo just by me staying alive. If ~~it's the case that~~ everyone would be saved if I die, I'll probably kill myself."		"Hmm, I don't know. Let's say I get this virus that will kill everybody in Tokyo just by me staying alive. If everyone would be saved if I die, then I'd probably kill myself."

	"What is that? That's so unlikely that it's not even a what-if story."		"What is that? That's so unlikely that it's not even a what-if story."

	"Let me finish~~. But~~ I think I'll do that because I'm weak.		"Let me finish, I think I'd do that because I'm weak.

	I'm going to kill myself because I don't have the courage to keep on living ~~turning~~ all of Tokyo into my enemy. That's easier, right? Courage for an instant and courage that needs to continue throughout your life. You know which one is harder.		I'm going to kill myself because I don't have the courage to keep on living and turn all of Tokyo into my enemy. That's easier, right? Courage for an instant and courage that needs to continue throughout your life. You know which one is harder.

	It's an extreme argument, but I think death is running away, no matter what kind of determination is behind it. But there are times when the concerned person wants to run away. I can't deny it or refute it, because I'm a weak person as well."		It's an extreme argument, but I think death is running away, no matter what kind of determination is behind it. But there are times when the concerned person wants to run away. I can't deny it or refute it, because I'm a weak person as well."
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	Hmm, but this seems like I'm saying it's all right for someone to do so because I'd do so too. Self-sacrifice in that case is probably the right thing to do, and that action would be called heroic. But that's wrong. It's foolish to choose death no matter how noble or right it is. No matter how wrong or lowly it is, we have to keep on living to make right of our wrongs.		Hmm, but this seems like I'm saying it's all right for someone to do so because I'd do so too. Self-sacrifice in that case is probably the right thing to do, and that action would be called heroic. But that's wrong. It's foolish to choose death no matter how noble or right it is. No matter how wrong or lowly it is, we have to keep on living to make right of our wrongs.

	We have to live on and accept the end of the things we've caused. That is something that takes a lot of courage. I don't think I could do that myself and it sounds too cocky, so I decide not to say it.		We have to live on and accept the end of the things we've caused. That is something that takes a lot of courage. I don't think I could do that myself, and it sounds too cocky, so I decide not to say it.

	"... Well, anyways... I think it's just different for everyone."		"... Well, anyways... I think it's just different for everyone."
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	"But you're different"		"But you're different"

	Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. It sounded cold, but the words were warm somehow. It was a bit embarrassing, so I walked on for a while silently. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, the station is right ahead.		Shiki says so as if seeing inside my mind. It sounded cold, but the words were warm somehow. It was a bit embarrassing, so I walked on for a while silently. The clamor of the main street is getting closer. Sounds, bright lights, engine sounds. Flooding waves of people and the many sounds they make. If we pass the department stores, the station is right ahead.

	Then, Shiki stops.		Then, Shiki stops.

	"Mikiya, ~~you~~ come over my place tonight."		"Mikiya, come over to my place tonight."

	"Huh? Why, all of a sudden?"		"Huh? Why, all of a sudden?"
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	It is indeed easier to stay at Shiki's place since it's nearby, but I don't feel like doing so out of morality.		It is indeed easier to stay at Shiki's place since it's nearby, but I don't feel like doing so out of morality.

	"It's fine. You don't have anything in ~~you~~ room either. It's boring even if I do go. Or are you telling me there's something I have to do there?"		"It's fine. You don't have anything in your room either. It's boring even if I do go. Or are you telling me there's something I have to do there?"

	I know there's no such thing. I said so knowing that, so there shouldn't be anything for Shiki to say back... or at least I think so. But Shiki looks at me as if I'm the cause of the problem.		I know there's no such thing. I said so knowing that, so there shouldn't be anything for Shiki to say back... or at least I think so. But Shiki looks at me as if I'm the cause of the problem.
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	"Two strawberry ~~Haagen Dasz~~. It's still there after you brought it. Finish off that thing, man."		"Two strawberry Häagen-Dazs. It's still there after you brought it. Finish off that thing, man."

	"... I guess I did buy that."		"... I guess I did buy that."

	Yes I did. It was something I bought because it ~~was so hot~~ while walking to Shiki's place. But why did I buy that thing~~? With~~ it ~~being~~ almost September ~~and~~ all...		Yes I did. It was something I bought because of how hot it is while walking to Shiki's place. But why did I buy that thing, it's almost September after all...

	Well, I don't care about small things. I guess my only choice is to obey Shiki. But just obeying is a bit irritating, so I decide to strike back a little.		Well, I don't care about small things. I guess my only choice is to obey Shiki. But just obeying is a bit irritating, so I decide to strike back a little.

	Shiki has a vulnerable point where when I say this, ~~Shiki~~ gets mad but ~~cannot~~ say anything back.		Shiki has a vulnerable point where, when I say this, she gets mad but can't say anything back.

	Even though it is a wish from the bottom of my heart, Shiki has yet to take my advice.		Even though it is a wish from the bottom of my heart, Shiki has yet to take my advice.

Solstrike at 16:46, 15 January 2007

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	Shiki suddenly asks me that. That downcast-like gesture looks a bit touching.		Shiki suddenly asks me that. That downcast-like gesture looks a bit touching.

	"Hmm, I don't know. Let's say I get this virus that will kill ~~eveybody~~ in Tokyo just by me staying alive. If it's the case that everyone would be saved if I die, I'll probably kill myself."		"Hmm, I don't know. Let's say I get this virus that will kill everybody in Tokyo just by me staying alive. If it's the case that everyone would be saved if I die, I'll probably kill myself."

	"What is that? That's so unlikely that it's not even a what-if story."		"What is that? That's so unlikely that it's not even a what-if story."
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	I'm going to kill myself because I don't have the courage to keep on living turning all of Tokyo into my enemy. That's easier, right? Courage for an instant and courage that needs to continue throughout your life. You know which one is harder.		I'm going to kill myself because I don't have the courage to keep on living turning all of Tokyo into my enemy. That's easier, right? Courage for an instant and courage that needs to continue throughout your life. You know which one is harder.

	It's an extreme ~~arguement~~, but I think death is running away, no matter what kind of determination is behind it. But there are times when the concerned person wants to run away. I can't deny it or refute it, because I'm a weak person as well."		It's an extreme argument, but I think death is running away, no matter what kind of determination is behind it. But there are times when the concerned person wants to run away. I can't deny it or refute it, because I'm a weak person as well."

	Hmm, but this seems like I'm saying it's all right for someone to do so because I'd do so too. Self-sacrifice in that case is probably the right thing to do, and that action would be called heroic. But that's wrong. It's foolish to choose death no matter how noble or right it is. No matter how wrong or lowly it is, we have to keep on living to make right of our wrongs.		Hmm, but this seems like I'm saying it's all right for someone to do so because I'd do so too. Self-sacrifice in that case is probably the right thing to do, and that action would be called heroic. But that's wrong. It's foolish to choose death no matter how noble or right it is. No matter how wrong or lowly it is, we have to keep on living to make right of our wrongs.
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	"You shouldn't talk like that. You're a girl, you know."		"You shouldn't talk like that. You're a girl, you know."

	Being ~~said~~ that, Shiki looks away angrily.		Being told that, Shiki looks away angrily.

	Overlooking View／Finish		Overlooking View／Finish

Velocity7: Kara no Kyokai:Chapter01 06 moved to Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter01 06

2006-07-20T15:56:28Z

Kara no Kyokai:Chapter01 06 moved to Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter01 06

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