Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter02 06 - Revision history

Georgi at 23:32, 8 March 2009

2009-03-08T23:32:56Z

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	A girl in red. Sodden with rain.		A girl in red. Sodden with rain.

	Not even holding an umbrella, the girl is drenched as if she has just ~~came~~ out of the ocean. Her black hair clings to her forehead and her eyes look empty.		Not even holding an umbrella, the girl is drenched as if she has just come out of the ocean. Her black hair clings to her forehead and her eyes look empty.

	"...Shiki"		"...Shiki"

Vaelis at 12:51, 3 January 2009

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 ''A warm smile.''

Ddrddr at 21:50, 11 May 2007

2007-05-11T21:50:23Z

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	The dark clouds start to shower rain upon the earth. The countless droplets pattering against the ground send a clamor against the hazy night, and the cold air belies the typical March weather. Among the wet bamboo leaves, ~~Kokutoh~~ Mikiya stares at the ~~Ryohgi~~ mansion. The hand holding his umbrella grows red and sore, and he heaves a great sigh - even he doesn't plan on continuing this voyeuristic charade for much longer. It would be great if the killer were to be caught in the time that he was doing this, but Mikiya has decided to quit if nothing happens for another week.		The dark clouds start to shower rain upon the earth. The countless droplets pattering against the ground send a clamor against the hazy night, and the cold air belies the typical March weather. Among the wet bamboo leaves, Kokuto Mikiya stares at the Ryougi mansion. The hand holding his umbrella grows red and sore, and he heaves a great sigh - even he doesn't plan on continuing this voyeuristic charade for much longer. It would be great if the killer were to be caught in the time that he was doing this, but Mikiya has decided to quit if nothing happens for another week.

	...Standing in the rain sure is tiring. The coldness and the rain hit hard. Mikiya is just barely getting used to all this.		...Standing in the rain sure is tiring. The coldness and the rain hit hard. Mikiya is just barely getting used to all this.
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	That blank, crying mask of a face is frightening, and at the same time, pitiful.		That blank, crying mask of a face is frightening, and at the same time, pitiful.

	"~~Kokutoh~~, say something."		"Kokuto, say something."

	She'll listen to his last words. In spite of his trembling body, Mikiya looks unwaveringly into Shiki's eyes.		She'll listen to his last words. In spite of his trembling body, Mikiya looks unwaveringly into Shiki's eyes.

Ddrddr: right, think this one's done.

2007-05-07T20:09:50Z

right, think this one's done.

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	"I want to kill you."		"I want to kill you."

	''~~It was really kind~~ smile.''		''A warm smile.''

Ddrddr at 20:07, 7 May 2007

2007-05-07T20:07:44Z

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	"I want to kill you."		"I want to kill you."

	''It a was really kind smile.''		''It was really kind smile.''

Ddrddr at 20:01, 7 May 2007

2007-05-07T20:01:02Z

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	''....Sigh		''....Sigh

	~~The sigh is not~~ because of the rain but rather as a result of Shiki's actions ~~this day~~. What can Mikiya get across to her when she thinks he doesn't trust her? At that time, Shiki seemed really fragile, so much so that Mikiya thought she was crying.		Not because of the rain but rather as a result of Shiki's actions today. What can Mikiya get across to her when she thinks he doesn't trust her? At that time, Shiki seemed really fragile, so much so that Mikiya thought she was crying.

	The rain does not stop.		The rain does not stop.

Ddrddr at 19:59, 7 May 2007

2007-05-07T19:59:31Z

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	Night. The dark clouds start to shower rain upon the earth. Raindrops make the night into a noisy one. Even though it's March, the rain is still cold. Among the wet bamboo leaves, Kokutoh Mikiya stares at the Ryohgi mansion. The hand holding his umbrella grows red and sore. Mikiya heaves a great sigh - even he doesn't plan on continuing this voyeuristic charade for much longer. It would be great if the killer were to be caught in the time that he was doing this, but Mikiya has decided to quit if nothing happens for another week.		:Night.

	...Standing in the rain sure is tiring. The coldness and the rain hit hard ~~since~~ Mikiya is just getting used to all this.		The dark clouds start to shower rain upon the earth. The countless droplets pattering against the ground send a clamor against the hazy night, and the cold air belies the typical March weather. Among the wet bamboo leaves, Kokutoh Mikiya stares at the Ryohgi mansion. The hand holding his umbrella grows red and sore, and he heaves a great sigh - even he doesn't plan on continuing this voyeuristic charade for much longer. It would be great if the killer were to be caught in the time that he was doing this, but Mikiya has decided to quit if nothing happens for another week.

			...Standing in the rain sure is tiring. The coldness and the rain hit hard. Mikiya is just barely getting used to all this.

	''....Sigh		''....Sigh

Ddrddr at 19:52, 7 May 2007

2007-05-07T19:52:58Z

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			Night. The dark clouds start to shower rain upon the earth. Raindrops make the night into a noisy one. Even though it's March, the rain is still cold. Among the wet bamboo leaves, Kokutoh Mikiya stares at the Ryohgi mansion. The hand holding his umbrella grows red and sore. Mikiya heaves a great sigh - even he doesn't plan on continuing this voyeuristic charade for much longer. It would be great if the killer were to be caught in the time that he was doing this, but Mikiya has decided to quit if nothing happens for another week.
	~~That night~~. The dark clouds start to shower rain upon the earth. Raindrops make the night into a noisy one. Even though it's March, the rain is still cold. Among the wet bamboo leaves, Kokutoh Mikiya stares at the Ryohgi mansion. The hand holding his umbrella grows red and sore. Mikiya heaves a great sigh - even he doesn't plan on continuing this voyeuristic charade for much longer. It would be great if the killer were to be caught in the time that he was doing this, but Mikiya has decided to quit if nothing happens for another week.

	...Standing in the rain sure is tiring. The coldness and the rain hit hard since Mikiya is just getting used to all this.		...Standing in the rain sure is tiring. The coldness and the rain hit hard since Mikiya is just getting used to all this.
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	''It doesn't move?		''It doesn't move?

	The pain is so sharp, it cannot be perceived of as normal pain. It hurts so much that his senses begin to go numb. There's no time for Mikiya to think. The girl in red he thought of as Shiki moves. Maybe it's because Mikiya has seen something terrible here already, but his mind is not panicking yet. Jumping back calmly, he runs off.		The pain is so sharp, it cannot be perceived as normal pain. It hurts so much that his senses begin to go numb. There's no time for Mikiya to think. The girl in red he thought of as "Shiki" moves. Maybe it's because Mikiya has seen something terrible here already, but his mind is not panicking yet. Jumping back calmly, he runs off.

	...No, there was no way he could get away.		...No, there was no way he could get away.

Ddrddr at 19:46, 7 May 2007

2007-05-07T19:46:11Z

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	That night. The dark clouds ~~starts~~ to shower rain upon the earth. Raindrops make the night into a noisy one. Even though it's March, the rain is still cold. Among the wet bamboo leaves, Kokutoh Mikiya stares at the Ryohgi mansion. The hand holding his umbrella grows red and sore. Mikiya heaves a great sigh - even he doesn't plan on continuing this voyeuristic charade for much longer. It would be great if the killer were to be caught in the time that he was doing this, but Mikiya has decided to quit if nothing happens for another week.		That night. The dark clouds start to shower rain upon the earth. Raindrops make the night into a noisy one. Even though it's March, the rain is still cold. Among the wet bamboo leaves, Kokutoh Mikiya stares at the Ryohgi mansion. The hand holding his umbrella grows red and sore. Mikiya heaves a great sigh - even he doesn't plan on continuing this voyeuristic charade for much longer. It would be great if the killer were to be caught in the time that he was doing this, but Mikiya has decided to quit if nothing happens for another week.

	...Standing in the rain sure is tiring. The coldness and the rain hit hard since Mikiya is just getting used to all this.		...Standing in the rain sure is tiring. The coldness and the rain hit hard since Mikiya is just getting used to all this.

Ddrddr at 19:44, 7 May 2007

2007-05-07T19:44:53Z

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	:'''A red figure is standing facing him.'''		:'''A red figure is standing facing him.'''

	A girl in red ~~is sodden~~ with rain.		A girl in red. Sodden with rain.

	Not even holding an umbrella, the girl is drenched as if she has just came out of the ocean. Her black hair clings to her forehead and her eyes look empty.		Not even holding an umbrella, the girl is drenched as if she has just came out of the ocean. Her black hair clings to her forehead and her eyes look empty.