Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter03 02 - Revision history

Georgi: nothing significant here

2009-05-02T16:53:39Z

nothing significant here

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	"Hmm...."		"Hmm...."

	Letting out a breath, Fujino feels her own hair. The tuft on the left side has been cut off. It was probably by that guy with a knife who was on top of her a second ago. Remembering that, she finally looks around the room. This place is a bar built into a basement. It was abandoned half a year ago due to bankruptcy and became a place where the bad kids would hang out. ...In the corner of the room is a pipe chair. ...In the middle of the room is a pool table. ...Food from convenience stores is scattered around, and a pile of trash is stacked up. It seems these things are creating the disturbing odor. Fujino becomes displeased by the sickening smell in the room. This place is a ruin... or is it some back-alley slum in a faraway country? One cannot even imagine that a normal city exists on the other side of the stairway. The only normal thing ~~there~~ is the smell of the alcohol lamp they brought in.		Letting out a breath, Fujino feels her own hair. The tuft on the left side has been cut off. It was probably by that guy with a knife who was on top of her a second ago. Remembering that, she finally looks around the room. This place is a bar built into a basement. It was abandoned half a year ago due to bankruptcy and became a place where the bad kids would hang out. ...In the corner of the room is a pipe chair. ...In the middle of the room is a pool table. ...Food from convenience stores is scattered around, and a pile of trash is stacked up. It seems these things are creating the disturbing odor. Fujino becomes displeased by the sickening smell in the room. This place is a ruin... or is it some back-alley slum in a faraway country? One cannot even imagine that a normal city exists on the other side of the stairway. The only normal thing here is the smell of the alcohol lamp they brought in.

	"Umm...."		"Umm...."
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	"Guh...!"		"Guh...!"

	Fujino groans from the sudden agony. There is a great pain in her stomach area. She twists her body, not able to withstand the squeezing pain. Her hands touch the floor, making a splashing sound. ~~Looking,~~ the whole room is filled with liquid.		Fujino groans from the sudden agony. There is a great pain in her stomach area. She twists her body, not able to withstand the squeezing pain. Her hands touch the floor, making a splashing sound. She looks and realizes the whole room is filled with liquid.

	"Yes, come to think of it, it is raining today."		"Yes, come to think of it, it is raining today."
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	The one who stabbed Fujino was an infamous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was seen as a leader ~~for~~ the misfits in the area. He gathered people that liked the same things as him, and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not for any particular reason. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Ladies' Academy and also quite beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not satisfied with abusing her just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their minds when they found out that Fujino hadn't told anyone and was agonizing over it by herself. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times, and they were completely relaxed, but also getting bored of the ~~repetitive~~ act. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this ~~habituality~~. The leader of the kids' pride had been hurt since, Fujino had lived normally even after they had raped her. He wanted definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. In preparation for an act of extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change, even after having a knife pressed to her face, so he pushed her down and...		The one who stabbed Fujino was an infamous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was seen as the leader of the misfits in the area. He gathered people that liked the same things as him, and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not for any particular reason. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Ladies' Academy and also quite beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not satisfied with abusing her just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their minds when they found out that Fujino hadn't told anyone and was agonizing over it by herself. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times, and they were completely relaxed, but also getting bored of the banal act. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this routine. The leader of the kids' pride had been hurt since Fujino had lived normally even after they had raped her. He wanted definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. In preparation for an act of extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change, even after having a knife pressed to her face, so he pushed her down and...


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	She kicks at one of the limbs scattered around the floor.		She kicks at one of the limbs scattered around the floor.

	''Am I ~~more angry~~ at getting dirtied by their blood than the fact that they have violated me up to now?''		''Am I angrier at getting dirtied by their blood than at the fact that they have violated me up to now?''

	Fujino thinks, as she is surprised by her own rage. It's raining outside... there should be less people walking around in about an hour. Even though it's raining, it's summertime so it shouldn't be too cold. I'll soak myself in the rain and then wash off the blood at some park. ...As she reaches that solution, she suddenly calms down. She walks away from the pool of blood and finally counts the corpses scattered around. One, two, three, four... four...... four...... four, no matter how many times I count!! She is astonished. ...One is missing...		Fujino thinks, as she is surprised by her own rage. It's raining outside... there should be less people walking around in about an hour. Even though it's raining, it's summertime so it shouldn't be too cold. I'll soak myself in the rain and then wash off the blood at some park. ...As she reaches that solution, she suddenly calms down. She walks away from the pool of blood and finally counts the corpses scattered around. One, two, three, four... four...... four...... four, no matter how many times I count!! She is astonished. ...One is missing...
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	''Then I will be caught by the police. If he goes to them, I will be arrested. But... will he go to the police? How will he be able to explain the situation? Will he start by telling them about raping me, Asagami Fujino, and threatening me not to tell anyone? Not possible. Such a thing is impossible, and these people should not have the brains to come up with a convincing story.''		''Then I will be caught by the police. If he goes to them, I will be arrested. But... will he go to the police? How will he be able to explain the situation? Will he start by telling them about raping me, Asagami Fujino, and threatening me not to tell anyone? Not possible. Such a thing is impossible, and these people should not have the brains to come up with a convincing story.''

	Fujino relaxes a bit and lights the lamp on the pool table. The light from the lamp lights the whole room. The 16 scattered arms and legs show up clearly. If you look for them, you should also be able to find four bodies and heads. ~~Brighened~~ by the orange light, the room is washed anew with red paint, as if it has gone mad. Fujino does not care much about this disastrous scene. ... One has escaped. Her revenge is not complete yet... Fortunately, it has not ended.		Fujino relaxes a bit and lights the lamp on the pool table. The light from the lamp lights the whole room. The 16 scattered arms and legs show up clearly. If you look for them, you should also be able to find four bodies and heads. Brightened by the orange light, the room is washed anew with red paint, as if it has gone mad. Fujino does not care much about this disastrous scene. ... One has escaped. Her revenge is not complete yet... Fortunately, it has not ended.

	"Would I have to take revenge...?"		"Would I have to take revenge...?"

Vaelis at 13:11, 3 January 2009

2009-01-03T13:11:15Z

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	Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one in this room except Fujino. The light is off... no, there was no such thing to begin with. Only deep darkness surrounds her.		Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one in this room except Fujino. The light is off... no, there was no such thing to begin with. Only deep darkness surrounds her.
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	Talking to herself, Fujino stands up. She looks at her stomach. There is a trace of blood there... the place where she was stabbed by these people scattered around here.		Talking to herself, Fujino stands up. She looks at her stomach. There is a trace of blood there... the place where she was stabbed by these people scattered around here.

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	The one who stabbed Fujino was an infamous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was seen as a leader for the misfits in the area. He gathered people that liked the same things as him, and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not for any particular reason. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Ladies' Academy and also quite beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not satisfied with abusing her just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their minds when they found out that Fujino hadn't told anyone and was agonizing over it by herself. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times, and they were completely relaxed, but also getting bored of the repetitive act. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this habituality. The leader of the kids' pride had been hurt since, Fujino had lived normally even after they had raped her. He wanted definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. In preparation for an act of extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change, even after having a knife pressed to her face, so he pushed her down and...		The one who stabbed Fujino was an infamous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was seen as a leader for the misfits in the area. He gathered people that liked the same things as him, and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not for any particular reason. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Ladies' Academy and also quite beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not satisfied with abusing her just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their minds when they found out that Fujino hadn't told anyone and was agonizing over it by herself. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times, and they were completely relaxed, but also getting bored of the repetitive act. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this habituality. The leader of the kids' pride had been hurt since, Fujino had lived normally even after they had raped her. He wanted definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. In preparation for an act of extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change, even after having a knife pressed to her face, so he pushed her down and...

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	"I can't go outside like this."		"I can't go outside like this."
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	...The pool of blood reflecting her face shows her mouth forming a smile...		...The pool of blood reflecting her face shows her mouth forming a smile...

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Ddrddr at 11:13, 12 May 2007

2007-05-12T11:13:28Z

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	"Would I have to take revenge...?"		"Would I have to take revenge...?"

	Fujino fears the idea of having to kill another person. Her body trembles, telling her such a thing is impossible to do; but she herself will be in danger if she doesn't. ~~Sill~~, she does not want to do any more bad things... Those are her true feelings.		Fujino fears the idea of having to kill another person. Her body trembles, telling her such a thing is impossible to do; but she herself will be in danger if she doesn't. Still, she does not want to do any more bad things... Those are her true feelings.

	...The pool of blood reflecting her face shows her mouth ~~form~~ a smile...		...The pool of blood reflecting her face shows her mouth forming a smile...

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2007-05-08T15:26:35Z

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	Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one in this room except Fujino. The ~~room's~~ light is off... no, there was no such thing to begin with. Only deep darkness surrounds her.		Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one in this room except Fujino. The light is off... no, there was no such thing to begin with. Only deep darkness surrounds her.

	"Hmm...."		"Hmm...."

	Letting out a breath, Fujino feels her own hair. The tuft on ~~her~~ left side is cut off. It's probably ~~from the~~ guy with a knife who was on her a second ago. Remembering that, she finally looks around the room. This place is a bar ~~made in~~ a basement. It was abandoned half a year ago due to bankruptcy and became a place where bad kids hang out. ...In the corner of the room is a pipe chair. ...In the middle of the room is a pool table. ...Food from convenience stores ~~are~~ scattered around, and ~~there is~~ a pile of trash stacked up. It seems these things are creating the disturbing odor. Fujino becomes displeased by the sickening smell in the room. This place is a ruin... or is it some back alley slum in a faraway country? One cannot even imagine that a normal city exists on the other side of the stairway. The only normal thing there is the smell of the alcohol lamp they brought in.		Letting out a breath, Fujino feels her own hair. The tuft on the left side has been cut off. It was probably by that guy with a knife who was on top of her a second ago. Remembering that, she finally looks around the room. This place is a bar built into a basement. It was abandoned half a year ago due to bankruptcy and became a place where the bad kids would hang out. ...In the corner of the room is a pipe chair. ...In the middle of the room is a pool table. ...Food from convenience stores is scattered around, and a pile of trash is stacked up. It seems these things are creating the disturbing odor. Fujino becomes displeased by the sickening smell in the room. This place is a ruin... or is it some back-alley slum in a faraway country? One cannot even imagine that a normal city exists on the other side of the stairway. The only normal thing there is the smell of the alcohol lamp they brought in.

	"Umm...."		"Umm...."

	She looks around in a rather well-mannered fashion. Fujino's mind is not fully functional yet. ...She still has not taken in what has been happening until now. She picks up a wrist that happens to be by her feet. There is a watch on the severed wrist. The digital screen shows July 20, 1998. Time is 8PM, not even an hour after that incident.		She looks around in a rather well-mannered fashion. Fujino's mind is not fully functional yet. ...She still has not taken in what has been happening until now. She picks up a wrist that happens to be by her feet. There is a watch on the severed wrist. The digital screen shows "July 20, 1998". Time is 8PM, not even an hour after that incident.

	"Guh...!"		"Guh...!"

	Fujino groans from the sudden ~~pain~~. A great pain is in her stomach area. She twists her body, not able to withstand the squeezing pain. ~~The~~ hands ~~that~~ touch the floor ~~make~~ a splashing sound. Looking, the whole room is filled with liquid.		Fujino groans from the sudden agony. There is a great pain in her stomach area. She twists her body, not able to withstand the squeezing pain. Her hands touch the floor, making a splashing sound. Looking, the whole room is filled with liquid.

	"Yes, come to think of it, it is raining today."		"Yes, come to think of it, it is raining today."
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	The one who stabbed Fujino was an infamous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was seen as a leader for the misfits in the area. He gathered people that liked the same ~~thing~~ as ~~he did~~ and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not ~~much~~ reason ~~was there~~. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien ~~Lady~~ Academy and ~~was~~ also beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not satisfied with abusing her just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their ~~mind~~ when they found out that Fujino hadn't told anyone and was agonizing over it by herself. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times and they were completely relaxed, ~~and~~ also getting bored of the ~~repetitious action~~. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this ~~repeated habit~~. The leader of the kids had ~~his pride~~ hurt since Fujino lived normally even after they ~~have~~ raped her. He wanted definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. In preparation for an act of extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change even after having a knife pressed ~~in front of~~ her face, so he pushed her down and...		The one who stabbed Fujino was an infamous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was seen as a leader for the misfits in the area. He gathered people that liked the same things as him, and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not for any particular reason. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Ladies' Academy and also quite beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not satisfied with abusing her just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their minds when they found out that Fujino hadn't told anyone and was agonizing over it by herself. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times, and they were completely relaxed, but also getting bored of the repetitive act. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this habituality. The leader of the kids' pride had been hurt since, Fujino had lived normally even after they had raped her. He wanted definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. In preparation for an act of extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change, even after having a knife pressed to her face, so he pushed her down and...

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	"I can't go outside like this."		"I can't go outside like this."

	Fujino downcasts her eyes as she feels her blood-soaked self. Her blood is only on her stomach, but she is dirtied by someone else's blood from the top of her hair to the bottom of her shoes. It seems ~~the blood on her~~ cannot be easily washed off. Fujino murmurs to herself.		Fujino downcasts her eyes as she feels her blood-soaked self. Her blood is only on her stomach, but she is dirtied by someone else's blood from the top of her hair to the bottom of her shoes. It seems it cannot be easily washed off. Fujino murmurs to herself.

	"How stupid of me... getting this dirty."		"How stupid of me... getting this dirty."

	~~And she~~ kicks at one of the limbs scattered around the floor. Am I more angry at getting dirtied by their blood than the fact that they have violated me up to now? Fujino thinks as she is surprised by her own rage. It's raining outside... there should be less people walking around in about an hour. Even though it's raining, it's summertime so it shouldn't be too cold. I'll soak myself in the rain and then wash off the blood at some park. ...As she reaches that solution, she suddenly calms down. She walks away from the pool of blood and finally counts the corpses scattered around. One, two, three, four... four...... four...... four, no matter how many times I count!! She is astonished. ...One is missing...		She kicks at one of the limbs scattered around the floor.

			''Am I more angry at getting dirtied by their blood than the fact that they have violated me up to now?''

			Fujino thinks, as she is surprised by her own rage. It's raining outside... there should be less people walking around in about an hour. Even though it's raining, it's summertime so it shouldn't be too cold. I'll soak myself in the rain and then wash off the blood at some park. ...As she reaches that solution, she suddenly calms down. She walks away from the pool of blood and finally counts the corpses scattered around. One, two, three, four... four...... four...... four, no matter how many times I count!! She is astonished. ...One is missing...

	"One has gotten away, huh...?"		"One has gotten away, huh...?"

	She murmurs faintly. Then I will be caught by the police. If he goes to them, I will be arrested. But... will he go to the police? How will he be able to explain the situation? Will he start ~~from~~ telling them about raping me, Asagami Fujino, and threatening ~~her~~ not to tell anyone? Not possible. Such a thing is impossible, and these people should not have the brains to come up with a convincing story. Fujino relaxes a bit and lights the lamp on the pool table. The light from the lamp lights the whole room. The 16 scattered arms and legs show up clearly. If you look for it, you should also find four bodies and heads. ~~Lightened up~~ by the orange light, the room is ~~painted~~ anew with red paint ~~like~~ it has gone mad. Fujino ~~did~~ not care much about this disastrous scene. ... One has escaped. Her revenge is not ~~completed~~ yet... Fortunately, it has not ended.		She murmurs faintly.

			''Then I will be caught by the police. If he goes to them, I will be arrested. But... will he go to the police? How will he be able to explain the situation? Will he start by telling them about raping me, Asagami Fujino, and threatening me not to tell anyone? Not possible. Such a thing is impossible, and these people should not have the brains to come up with a convincing story.''

			Fujino relaxes a bit and lights the lamp on the pool table. The light from the lamp lights the whole room. The 16 scattered arms and legs show up clearly. If you look for them, you should also be able to find four bodies and heads. Brighened by the orange light, the room is washed anew with red paint, as if it has gone mad. Fujino does not care much about this disastrous scene. ... One has escaped. Her revenge is not complete yet... Fortunately, it has not ended.

	"Would I have to take revenge...?"		"Would I have to take revenge...?"

	Fujino fears at the idea of having to kill another person. Her body trembles, telling her such a thing is impossible to do~~. But~~ she herself ~~would~~ be in danger if she doesn't. ~~But still~~, she does not want to do any more bad things... ~~That is~~ her true ~~feeling~~.		Fujino fears the idea of having to kill another person. Her body trembles, telling her such a thing is impossible to do; but she herself will be in danger if she doesn't. Sill, she does not want to do any more bad things... Those are her true feelings.

	... The pool of blood reflecting her face shows her mouth ~~making~~ a smile...		...The pool of blood reflecting her face shows her mouth form a smile...

Bored tenshi at 04:38, 13 February 2007

2007-02-13T04:38:16Z

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	Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one ~~here, Fujino is~~ in a room. The room's light is off... no, there is no such thing to begin with. Only deep darkness surrounds her.		Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one in this room except Fujino. The room's light is off... no, there was no such thing to begin with. Only deep darkness surrounds her.

	"Hmm...."		"Hmm...."

	Letting out a breath, Fujino feels her own hair. The tuft on her left side is cut off. It's probably from the guy with a knife who was on her a second ago. Remembering that, she finally looks around the room. This place is a bar made in a basement. It was abandoned half a year ago due to bankruptcy and became a place where bad kids hang out. ...In the corner of the room is a pipe chair. ...In the middle of the room is a pool table. ...Food from ~~convienience~~ stores are scattered around, and there is a pile of trash stacked up. It seems these things are creating the disturbing odor. Fujino becomes displeased by the sickening smell in the room. This place is a ruin... or is it some back alley slum of a faraway country? One cannot even imagine that a normal city exists on the other side of the stairway. The only normal thing ~~you could say~~ is the smell of the alcohol lamp they brought in.		Letting out a breath, Fujino feels her own hair. The tuft on her left side is cut off. It's probably from the guy with a knife who was on her a second ago. Remembering that, she finally looks around the room. This place is a bar made in a basement. It was abandoned half a year ago due to bankruptcy and became a place where bad kids hang out. ...In the corner of the room is a pipe chair. ...In the middle of the room is a pool table. ...Food from convenience stores are scattered around, and there is a pile of trash stacked up. It seems these things are creating the disturbing odor. Fujino becomes displeased by the sickening smell in the room. This place is a ruin... or is it some back alley slum in a faraway country? One cannot even imagine that a normal city exists on the other side of the stairway. The only normal thing there is the smell of the alcohol lamp they brought in.

	"Umm...."		"Umm...."

	She looks around in a rather well-mannered fashion. Fujino's mind is not fully functional yet. ...She still has not taken in what has been happening until now. She picks up a wrist that happens to be by her feet. There is a watch on the wrist ~~which was torn off~~. The digital screen shows July 20, 1998. Time is 8PM, not even an hour after that incident.		She looks around in a rather well-mannered fashion. Fujino's mind is not fully functional yet. ...She still has not taken in what has been happening until now. She picks up a wrist that happens to be by her feet. There is a watch on the severed wrist. The digital screen shows July 20, 1998. Time is 8PM, not even an hour after that incident.

	"Guh...!"		"Guh...!"
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	The one who stabbed Fujino was ~~a famous~~ person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was ~~known~~ as a leader~~-like person~~ for the misfits in the area. He gathered people that liked the same thing as he did and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not much reason ~~were~~ there. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Lady Academy and was also beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not satisfied with abusing her just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their mind when they found out that Fujino hadn't told anyone and was ~~agonising~~ over it by herself. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times and they were completely relaxed, and also getting bored of the repetitious action. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this repeated habit. The leader of the kids had his pride hurt since Fujino lived normally even after they have raped her. He wanted definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. In preparation for an act of extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change even after having a knife pressed in front of her face, so he pushed her down and...		The one who stabbed Fujino was an infamous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was seen as a leader for the misfits in the area. He gathered people that liked the same thing as he did and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not much reason was there. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Lady Academy and was also beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not satisfied with abusing her just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their mind when they found out that Fujino hadn't told anyone and was agonizing over it by herself. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times and they were completely relaxed, and also getting bored of the repetitious action. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this repeated habit. The leader of the kids had his pride hurt since Fujino lived normally even after they have raped her. He wanted definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. In preparation for an act of extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change even after having a knife pressed in front of her face, so he pushed her down and...

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	"I can't go outside like this."		"I can't go outside like this."

	Fujino downcasts her eyes as she feels her blood-soaked self. ~~The only~~ blood ~~that~~ is ~~from herself is the one~~ on her stomach, but from the top of her hair to the bottom of her shoes ~~is dirtied by someone else's blood~~. It seems the blood on her cannot be easily washed off. Fujino murmurs to herself.		Fujino downcasts her eyes as she feels her blood-soaked self. Her blood is only on her stomach, but she is dirtied by someone else's blood from the top of her hair to the bottom of her shoes. It seems the blood on her cannot be easily washed off. Fujino murmurs to herself.

	"How stupid of me... getting this dirty."		"How stupid of me... getting this dirty."

	And she kicks at one of the limbs scattered around the floor. Am I more angry at getting dirtied by their blood than the fact that they have violated me up to now? Fujino thinks as she is ~~surprized~~ by her own ~~violentness~~. It's raining outside... there should be less people walking ~~about~~ in about an hour. Even though it's raining, it's summertime so it shouldn't be too cold. I'll soak myself in the rain and then wash off the blood at some park. ...As she reaches that solution, she suddenly calms down. She walks away from the pool of blood and finally counts the corpses scattered around. One, two, three, four... four...... four...... four, no matter how many times I count!! She is astonished. ...One is missing...		And she kicks at one of the limbs scattered around the floor. Am I more angry at getting dirtied by their blood than the fact that they have violated me up to now? Fujino thinks as she is surprised by her own rage. It's raining outside... there should be less people walking around in about an hour. Even though it's raining, it's summertime so it shouldn't be too cold. I'll soak myself in the rain and then wash off the blood at some park. ...As she reaches that solution, she suddenly calms down. She walks away from the pool of blood and finally counts the corpses scattered around. One, two, three, four... four...... four...... four, no matter how many times I count!! She is astonished. ...One is missing...

	"One has gotten away, huh...?"		"One has gotten away, huh...?"

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	Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one here, Fujino is in a room. The room's light is off... no, there is no such thing to begin with. Only darkness surrounds her.		Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one here, Fujino is in a room. The room's light is off... no, there is no such thing to begin with. Only deep darkness surrounds her.

	"Hmm...."		"Hmm...."

	Letting out a breath, Fujino feels her own hair. The tuft on her left side is cut off. It's probably from the guy with a knife who was on her a second ago. Remembering that, she finally looks around the room. This place is a bar made in a basement. It was abandoned half a year ago due to bankruptcy and became a place where bad kids hang out. ...In the corner of the room is a pipe chair. ...In the middle of the room is a pool table. ...Food from convienience stores are scattered around, and there is a pile of trash stacked up. It seems these things are creating the disturbing odor. Fujino ~~feels unpleasant from~~ the sickening smell in the room. This place is a ruin... or is it some back alley of a faraway country? One cannot even imagine that a normal city exists on the other side of the stairway. The only normal thing you could say is the smell of the alcohol lamp they brought in.		Letting out a breath, Fujino feels her own hair. The tuft on her left side is cut off. It's probably from the guy with a knife who was on her a second ago. Remembering that, she finally looks around the room. This place is a bar made in a basement. It was abandoned half a year ago due to bankruptcy and became a place where bad kids hang out. ...In the corner of the room is a pipe chair. ...In the middle of the room is a pool table. ...Food from convienience stores are scattered around, and there is a pile of trash stacked up. It seems these things are creating the disturbing odor. Fujino becomes displeased by the sickening smell in the room. This place is a ruin... or is it some back alley slum of a faraway country? One cannot even imagine that a normal city exists on the other side of the stairway. The only normal thing you could say is the smell of the alcohol lamp they brought in.

	"Umm...."		"Umm...."
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	The one who stabbed Fujino was a famous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was known as a leader-like person for the ~~people who played around~~. He gathered people that liked the same thing as he did and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not much reason were there. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Lady Academy and was also beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not ~~done by~~ just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their mind when they found out that Fujino ~~did not tell~~ anyone. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times and they were completely relaxed, and also getting bored of the action. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this repeated habit. The leader of the kids had his pride hurt since Fujino lived normally even after they have raped her. He wanted a definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. As an extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change even after ~~showing the~~ knife, so he pushed her down and...		The one who stabbed Fujino was a famous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was known as a leader-like person for the misfits in the area. He gathered people that liked the same thing as he did and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not much reason were there. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Lady Academy and was also beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not satisfied with abusing her just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their mind when they found out that Fujino hadn't told anyone and was agonising over it by herself. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times and they were completely relaxed, and also getting bored of the repetitious action. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this repeated habit. The leader of the kids had his pride hurt since Fujino lived normally even after they have raped her. He wanted definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. In preparation for an act of extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change even after having a knife pressed in front of her face, so he pushed her down and...

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	"I can't ~~walk~~ outside like this."		"I can't go outside like this."

	Fujino downcasts her eyes as she feels her blood-soaked self. The only blood that is from herself is the one on her stomach, but from the top of her hair to the bottom of her shoes is dirtied by someone else's blood. It seems the blood on her cannot be easily washed off. Fujino murmurs to herself.		Fujino downcasts her eyes as she feels her blood-soaked self. The only blood that is from herself is the one on her stomach, but from the top of her hair to the bottom of her shoes is dirtied by someone else's blood. It seems the blood on her cannot be easily washed off. Fujino murmurs to herself.
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	"How stupid of me... getting this dirty."		"How stupid of me... getting this dirty."

	And she kicks at one of the limbs scattered around the floor. Am I more angry at getting dirtied by their blood than the fact that they have violated me up to now? Fujino thinks as she is surprized by her own violentness. It's raining outside... there should be less people walking about in about an hour. Even though it's raining, it's summertime so it shouldn't be too cold. I'll soak myself in the rain and then wash off the blood at some park. ...As she reaches that solution, she suddenly calms down. She walks away from the pool of blood and finally counts the corpses scattered around. One, two, three, four... four...... four...... four, no matter how many times ~~it's counted~~!! She is astonished. ...One is missing...		And she kicks at one of the limbs scattered around the floor. Am I more angry at getting dirtied by their blood than the fact that they have violated me up to now? Fujino thinks as she is surprized by her own violentness. It's raining outside... there should be less people walking about in about an hour. Even though it's raining, it's summertime so it shouldn't be too cold. I'll soak myself in the rain and then wash off the blood at some park. ...As she reaches that solution, she suddenly calms down. She walks away from the pool of blood and finally counts the corpses scattered around. One, two, three, four... four...... four...... four, no matter how many times I count!! She is astonished. ...One is missing...

	"One has gotten away, huh...?"		"One has gotten away, huh...?"

Question at 01:41, 15 January 2007

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	Talking to herself, Fujino stands up. She looks at her stomach. There is a trace of blood there... the place where she was stabbed by these people scattered around here.		Talking to herself, Fujino stands up. She looks at her stomach. There is a trace of blood there... the place where she was stabbed by these people scattered around here.

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	The one who stabbed Fujino was a famous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was known as a leader-like person for the people who played around. He gathered people that liked the same thing as he did and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not much reason were there. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Lady Academy and was also beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not done by just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their mind when they found out that Fujino did not tell anyone. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times and they were completely relaxed, and also getting bored of the action. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this repeated habit. The leader of the kids had his pride hurt since Fujino lived normally even after they have raped her. He wanted a definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. As an extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change even after showing the knife, so he pushed her down and...		The one who stabbed Fujino was a famous person in town. He stood out more than most of the others that dropped out of high school and was known as a leader-like person for the people who played around. He gathered people that liked the same thing as he did and did what they wanted. As part of the fun, they raped Fujino. Not much reason were there. Probably because Fujino was a student of the Reien Lady Academy and was also beautiful. As they were violent and selfish, they were not done by just once. It seems they knew they could be accused for their actions, but they changed their mind when they found out that Fujino did not tell anyone. They found out they were the ones in power and they brought Fujino into this place many times. Tonight was another one of those times and they were completely relaxed, and also getting bored of the action. The guy probably brought out the knife to bring some excitement into this repeated habit. The leader of the kids had his pride hurt since Fujino lived normally even after they have raped her. He wanted a definite proof that he was the one who ruled over her. As an extreme violence, he readied a knife, but the girl only made a cool face. He got angry at the girl whose expression didn't change even after showing the knife, so he pushed her down and...

	~~***~~		---

	"I can't walk outside like this."		"I can't walk outside like this."

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	Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one here, Fujino is in a room. The room's light is off... no, there is no such thing to begin with. Only darkness surrounds her.		Still a bit dazed, Asagami Fujino raises herself up. There is no one here, Fujino is in a room. The room's light is off... no, there is no such thing to begin with. Only darkness surrounds her.

Question at 18:03, 14 January 2007

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Question at 17:44, 14 January 2007

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July nears its end and my surrounding has started to fill with events. Like a friend who has been in a coma for two years regaining conciousness, like finishing the second big job at my workplace, and like my sister whom I haven't seen for five years coming to see me. The nineteenth summer of I, Kokutoh Mikiya, started in such a commotion.

Today is a rare off day I had, but I accompanied my high school friend to go drink and when I noticed, I have missed the last train. Others took cabs home but as my payday is tomorrow, I do not have such extra money. It can't be helped, so I decide to walk home. Fortunately, my house is only two stations away from here. The date has just changed from July 20 to July 21.

Past midnight, I walk through the night town alone. Being a weekday tomorrow, the shopping district is fast asleep. It has rained hard tonight. The rain stopped by midnight but the asphalt still shows remains of the rain as the wet ground makes splashing sounds. It is the middle of summer and the temperature is way above 30 degrees. The hot night air and the humid air from the rain irritates me... and then I see a girl crouched on the sidewalk. A girl wearing a black school uniform is holding her stomach in pain as she is crouching on the guardrail. ... I notice the church's sister-like uniform. That plain but party dress-like fancy design is of the Asagami Lady Academy. According to Gakuto, it's really famous to those kinds of people... as they say it's like a maid's costume. ...It's not that I'm one of those people, but I know because my sister goes there.

"I heard all the students there lived in dorms..."

But to see her here at this time is too strange. She must be in some kind of trouble or just a bad student that doesn't follow the school rules. With my sister going to the same school and all, I decide to talk to her. When I call to her, she slowly turns to me and her long hair sways.

".........."

It seems the girl gasped really faintly. She has really long hair. Her eyes look calm and she too looks calm. Her face is small... it's cute but she has some handsomeness in her features. That balance is more like Japanese beauty. Her long hair is cast straight behind her and a small piece of it is seperated around her ears to drape down to her chests. It seems the left side of her hair is cut though. The front hair is cut straight and it reminds me of a good lady from a respected family.

"Yes? What is it?"

The girl says with a pale face. Her lips are purple. It's obvious she has cyanosis. She has one of her hands on her stomach, her face twisted in pain.

"Does your stomach hurt?"

"No, um... I, um..."

She tries to act calm yet her words are not. The girl looks rather fragile. She has the feeling that she's going to break down any second, just like Shiki when I first met her.

"You're a student of the Reien Academy, right? Did you miss your train? That place is far from here. Do you want me to go get a taxi for you?"

"No, it's all right. I don't have any money."

"Yeah, I don't have any too."

The girl looks at me in surprize. ... I notice that I gave a surprizingly stupid reply.

"I see. Then your house must be near here. I heard everyone there lived in a dorm but I guess you're allowed to go out."

"No, my house is far from here."

I tilt my head in wonder.

"Then is it something like running away?"

"Yes, I think that is what I have to resort to."

... I'm troubled. Looking at her, the girl is soaked. Maybe she didn't find cover in that rain before but she is dripping wet. ... Since that time, I hated girls wet with rain. That must be why these words came out of my mouth.

"You want to come to my place just for tonight?"

"Can I...?"

Still sitting down, she looks at me as if she's desperate. I nod.

"I live alone, so there's no problem. But I won't make any gurantees. I don't have any intentions but if anything weird happens, I might get in the mood. I'm a healthy man so put that into consideration too. If you're still okay with that, then come along. Unfortunately, it's before my payday so I don't have anything, but I should at least have some painkillers."

The girl becomes happy. The defenceless and the pure smile also makes me happy. When I extend my hands to her, she gracefully gets up.

... It seemed there was red stains where the girl has been sitting...

I take this unknown girl and start walking through the night town again.

"We're going to walk a bit but tell me if you're suffering. I should at least be able to carry a girl on my back."

"Yes, but my wound is healed so it doesn't hurt."

She says so but her hand is still on her stomach. It's obvious she's in some kind of pain. I ask her again.

"Does your stomach hurt?"

The girl denies it and grows silent again. We walk a bit more. After a small silence, the girl shakes her head.

"... Yes. It really, really hurts. I'm about to cry... can I cry?"

When I nod, the girl closes her eyes looking satisfied. It looks as if she is watching a dream.

***

The girl did not tell me her name so I decide not to either. I feel that it's more romantic that way. Once we get to the apartment, the girl says she wants to borrow the shower. She also says she wants to dry her cloth so I decide to stay outside. Giving her a cheap excuse that I'm going to go buy some smokes, I leave the room. I feel I am really good natured as I'm going out to buy something I would not smoke.

After spending about an hour outside and coming back, I find her asleep on the sofa. I set my alarm clock to seven thirty and lay on my bed. As I fall asleep, I worry about the cut in her uniform around the stomach area.

***

When I wake up the next morning, the girl is sitting in the living room as she has nothing to do. She gives me a bow once she notices I'm awake.

"Thank you for last night. I cannot do anything in return but I am really thankful."

The girl gets up and starts to leave. ... I feel a bit bad about making her sit and wait just to say that to me.

"Wait, at least wait and get some breakfast."

The girl obediently follows what I say. The only thing left are pasta and olive oil so naturally, our breakfast becomes spagetti. I quickly make it for the two of us and carry it to the table to eat. Since it's so quiet, I turn on the TV and see a terrible news.

"... Wow, this is the kind of story Tohko-san would like."

I murmur something aloud that if she was there, she'll be throwing something at me. ... But that's how weird the content of the news is. I listen to the newscaster who talks about what happened last night.

Last night, in the basement of a bar that has been abandoned for half a year, four dead bodies were found. It seems all four victims had their limbs torn off and the scene of the crime was a pool of blood. The place is pretty close to here, maybe around four stations away from last night's place. It's strange that they said the limbs were torn off rather than cut off, but the news does not go into detail about it, but rather goes into the information on the victims.

All four of the victims were high-schoolers and they were just kids that played around near that place. It seems they did some drugs too and a person who has the newscater's mike pointed at them is talking about the victim's personal lives.

...... I think they deserved to die, those kids.

Those words flow from the TV and I get annoyed by those words that seems to talk bad about the dead, so I turn off the TV. Looking at the girl, she is placing her hand on her stomach painfully. Seeing that she hasn't taken a bite of food, she might be really hurt. I can't tell her expression as she is looking down.

'...... There's nobody that deserves to die."

She says so with ragged breath.

"Why... I'm healed, so why...?!"

The girl gets up from the chair and runs to the door. I quickly follow her but she raises her hand to stop me. It shows she does not want me to go near her.

"Wait. I think you should calm down."

"It's all right. I knew it... I cannot go back."

Her face twists in pain. The face that bears the pain seems similar to Shiki. The girl calms down and bows at me before she opens the door.

"Good bye. I never want to see you again."

The girl leaves just like that. Her face like a Japanese doll, only her eyes seemed like it was about to cry.