Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter03 12 - Revision history

Georgi: grammar, mostly, but two important word changes as well: "burden" to "bear" and "view" to "image"

2009-06-04T02:29:28Z

grammar, mostly, but two important word changes as well: "burden" to "bear" and "view" to "image"

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Vaelis at 13:56, 3 January 2009

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	Broad Bridge is distorted like it has been squeezed by a giant hand. After coming here in the storm in Tohko-san's buggy and arguing with the guard, Shiki shows up from under the bridge with a blood-soaked arm. The guard runs up to Shiki, but she tackles him and knocks him unconscious.		Broad Bridge is distorted like it has been squeezed by a giant hand. After coming here in the storm in Tohko-san's buggy and arguing with the guard, Shiki shows up from under the bridge with a blood-soaked arm. The guard runs up to Shiki, but she tackles him and knocks him unconscious.
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	Tohko-san says so seriously and drives off. In the summer rain, Shiki and I end up seeking shelter in the nearby warehouse.		Tohko-san says so seriously and drives off. In the summer rain, Shiki and I end up seeking shelter in the nearby warehouse.

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	The ambulance comes in no time and carries off Asagami Fujino. In this storm, I cannot see her face. I cannot make sure that she's the girl from that one night, but I think that's for the best. Shiki blankly stares into the night, wet from the rain. She was glaring at Fujino all this time. I inquire as to her feelings amid the sound of rain.		The ambulance comes in no time and carries off Asagami Fujino. In this storm, I cannot see her face. I cannot make sure that she's the girl from that one night, but I think that's for the best. Shiki blankly stares into the night, wet from the rain. She was glaring at Fujino all this time. I inquire as to her feelings amid the sound of rain.
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217.228.238.247 at 22:01, 9 July 2007

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	"... I finally remember... You say those kinds of jokes with a straight face."		"... I finally remember... You say those kinds of jokes with a straight face."

	To be honest, Shiki found it hard to deal with such things."		To be honest, Shiki found it hard to deal with such things.

	"...... Sigh I see. I do think I can at least carry one girl on me, you know."		"...... Sigh I see. I do think I can at least carry one girl on me, you know."

217.228.238.247 at 22:01, 9 July 2007

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	"Yo. For some reason, I thought you would be here."		"Yo. For some reason, I thought you would be here."

	Shiki says this with a pale face. There ~~were~~ were many things I wanted to say but, they all disappear when I see how weak she is. I run to help her, but Shiki refuses and does not even let me support her.		Shiki says this with a pale face. There were many things I wanted to say but, they all disappear when I see how weak she is. I run to help her, but Shiki refuses and does not even let me support her.

	"So you managed with just one arm, huh, Shiki?"		"So you managed with just one arm, huh, Shiki?"
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	Tohko-san seems surprised. Shiki glares in discontent.		Tohko-san seems surprised. Shiki glares in discontent.

	"Tohko, She came up with Clairvoyance in the end. She'll have a ridiculous amount power if you leave her be."		"Tohko, She came up with Clairvoyance in the end. She'll have a ridiculous amount of power if you leave her be."

	"Clairvoyance, huh? Certainly, if you add that to her power, she'll be invincible. She would be able to make a fulcrum even if you are hiding... Huh? If you leave her be...?"		"Clairvoyance, huh? Certainly, if you add that to her power, she'll be invincible. She would be able to make a fulcrum even if you are hiding... Huh? If you leave her be...?"

Magus at 00:14, 8 June 2007

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	Broad Bridge is distorted like it has been squeezed by a giant hand. After coming here in the storm in Tohko-san's buggy and arguing with the guard, Shiki shows up from under the bridge with a blood-soaked arm. The guard up ~~runs~~ to Shiki, but she tackles him and knocks him unconscious.		Broad Bridge is distorted like it has been squeezed by a giant hand. After coming here in the storm in Tohko-san's buggy and arguing with the guard, Shiki shows up from under the bridge with a blood-soaked arm. The guard runs up to Shiki, but she tackles him and knocks him unconscious.

	"Yo. For some reason, I thought you would be here."		"Yo. For some reason, I thought you would be here."

Ddrddr at 19:37, 13 May 2007

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Bored tenshi at 04:56, 2 March 2007

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Question at 04:34, 15 January 2007

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	Tohko-san says so seriously and drives off. In the summer rain, Shiki and I end up finding shelter under the nearby warehouse.		Tohko-san says so seriously and drives off. In the summer rain, Shiki and I end up finding shelter under the nearby warehouse.

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	The ambulance comes in no time and carries off Asagami Fujino. In this storm, I cannot see her face. I cannot make sure that she's the girl from that one night, but I think that's for the best. Shiki blankly stares into the night. Shiki stands there wet in the rain. She is glaring at Fujino all this time. I ask her heart within the sound of rain.		The ambulance comes in no time and carries off Asagami Fujino. In this storm, I cannot see her face. I cannot make sure that she's the girl from that one night, but I think that's for the best. Shiki blankly stares into the night. Shiki stands there wet in the rain. She is glaring at Fujino all this time. I ask her heart within the sound of rain.

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	Broad Bridge is distorted like it has been squeezed by a giant hand. After coming here in the storm in Touko-san's buggy and arguing with the guard, Shiki shows up from under the bridge with a blood-soaked arm. The guard runs up to Shiki, but she tackles him and knocks him unconscious.		Broad Bridge is distorted like it has been squeezed by a giant hand. After coming here in the storm in Touko-san's buggy and arguing with the guard, Shiki shows up from under the bridge with a blood-soaked arm. The guard runs up to Shiki, but she tackles him and knocks him unconscious.

	"Yo. For some reason, I thought ~~you would~~ be here."		"Yo. For some reason, I thought you’d be here." <!-- Georgi: removed would as it sounded too formal compared to the Yo -->

	Shiki says this with a pale face. There were many things I wanted to say but, they all disappear when I see how weak she is. I run to help her, but Shiki refuses and does not even let me support her.		Shiki says this with a pale face. There were many things I wanted to say, but they all disappear when I see how weak she is. I run to help her, but Shiki refuses and does not even let me support her.

	"So you managed with just one arm, huh, Shiki?"		"So you managed with just one arm, huh, Shiki?"
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	"She returned to pain insensitivity at the very end. That's cheating. Asagami Fujino in that state can't be my target. I couldn't do anything else so I just killed the disease in her stomach. She might make it if you hurry."		"She returned to pain insensitivity at the very end. That's cheating. Asagami Fujino in that state can't be my target. I couldn't do anything else so I just killed the disease in her stomach. She might make it if you hurry."

	Shiki did not kill Asagami Fujino. Understanding that, I quickly call the hospital. I'm not sure if they would be willing to come in this storm, but if they won't, I'll just take her myself. Fortunately, her doctor agrees to come. He was worried when Fujino disappeared, and it seemed he was crying over the phone. There may not be many, but Fujino still has people on her side. I am moved. Behind me, those two are having a dangerous conversation.		Shiki did not kill Asagami Fujino. Understanding that, I quickly call the hospital. I'm not sure if they would be willing to come in this storm, but if they won't, I'll just take her there myself. Fortunately, her doctor agrees to come. He was worried when Fujino disappeared, and it seemed he was crying over the phone. There may not be many, but Fujino still has people on her side. I am moved. Behind me, those two are having a dangerous conversation.

	"Did you stop the bleeding on that arm? It doesn't seem to be, at least."		"Did you stop the bleeding on that arm? It doesn't seem to be, at least."

	"Yeah, I killed it 'cause it was useless. You can make an arm, right? You're a puppet master after all."		"Yeah, I killed it 'cause it was useless. You can make an arm, right? You're a puppet master, after all."

	"All right. That will be your pay for this job. I always thought that your body was too normal in contrast to ~~you~~ eyes. I can make that left arm able to grab spirits and such."		"All right. That will be your pay for this job. I always thought that your body was too normal in contrast to your eyes. I can make that left arm able to grab spirits and such."

	... I don't want them talking about such things.		... I don't want them talking about such things.
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	She seems like she's asking herself the question.		She seems like she's asking herself the question.

	"... Yeah, but I sympathize with her. To be honest, I ~~could~~ care less about Fujino killing the guys who violated her."		"... Yeah, but I sympathize with her. To be honest, I couldn’t care less about Fujino killing the guys who violated her."

	"That's unexpected. I was hoping for your popular opinion."		"That's unexpected. I was hoping for your popular opinion."
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	"I don't think anyone exists without a sense of sin. It just means that their sins are lighter to bear, but they are still there. A small sin within their small scope of compassion. For us it might seem trivial, like tripping on a road; but for that person, it becomes a burden. Even the small pain for us becomes an unpleasant feeling for those with small compassion. No matter the weight, the meaning of a sin is the same."		"I don't think anyone exists without a sense of sin. It just means that their sins are lighter to bear, but they are still there. A small sin within their small scope of compassion. For us it might seem trivial, like tripping on a road; but for that person, it becomes a burden. Even the small pain for us becomes an unpleasant feeling for those with small compassion. No matter the weight, the meaning of a sin is the same."

	... Yes. For example, Minato Keita was probably frightened to the point of insanity because of the realization of his sins. He cannot atone for his regret, sense of guilt, fear, or impatience; ~~but~~ all he can do is ''try'' to atone for them.		... Yes. For example, Minato Keita was probably frightened to the point of insanity because of the realization of his sins. He cannot atone for his regret, sense of guilt, fear, or impatience; all he can do is ''try'' to atone for them.

	"Certainly, it must be easier to not be responsible for your sins socially. But if no one punishes you for your sins, you have to carry them yourself. A guilty conscience is not something that goes away, right? You have memories of it. Since no one forgave you for it, you cannot forgive it yourself. The wound in your heart never heals and will continue to hurt. Like her sense of pain remaining, the wound would never heal. As you say, a soul does not have a physical form...... so I don't think a wound on it can be treated.		"Certainly, it must be easier to not be responsible for your sins socially. But if no one punishes you for your sins, you have to carry them yourself. A guilty conscience is not something that goes away, right? You have memories of it. Since no one forgave you for it, you cannot forgive yourself. The wound in your heart never heals and will continue to hurt. Like her sense of pain remaining, the wound would never heal. As you say, a soul does not have a physical form...... so I don't think a wound on it can be treated.

	Shiki is listening silently. Maybe because I looked up Fujino's past, I'm unusually poetic. Shiki suddenly leaves the cover of the warehouse and goes out into the rain.		Shiki is listening silently. Maybe because I looked up Fujino's past, I'm unusually poetic. Shiki suddenly leaves the cover of the warehouse and goes out into the rain.

	"So you're saying this~~. The~~ more common sense you have, the more sense of sin you have. That's why there's no bad people in this world. But I have no such thing. Could you let such a person run unbounded??"		"So you're saying this: the more common sense you have, the more sense of sin you have. That's why there are no bad people in this world. But I have no such thing. Could you let such a person run unbounded?"

	Now that she says so, that is indeed true. Before you can call Shiki good or bad, she has a small concept of common sense.		Now that she says so, that is indeed true. Before you can call Shiki good or bad, she has a small concept of common sense.

	"I see. Then I guess it can't be helped. I'll have to ~~burden~~ all your sins then."		"I see. Then I guess it can't be helped. I'll have to bear all your sins then."

	Those are my true feelings. They seem to have caught Shiki off guard, as she stands there dumbfounded. After being struck by the rain for a while, Shiki murmurs uncomfortably.		Those are my true feelings. They seem to have caught Shiki off guard, as she stands there dumbfounded. After being struck by the rain for a while, Shiki murmurs uncomfortably.
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	I argue timidly, and Shiki laughs.		I argue timidly, and Shiki laughs.

	"I'll confess one more thing, I think I've borne another sin with this thing today. But I found out something in return. What my life is, and what I want. It's vague and fragile, but I will have to follow it for now. It turns out that what I'm following isn't as ugly as I thought it was. I'm a bit happy. A bit... A killing impulse that is slightly leaning towards your ~~view~~..."		"I'll confess one more thing, I think I've borne another sin with this thing today. But I found out something in return. What my life is, and what I want. It's vague and fragile, but I will have to follow it for now. It turns out that what I'm following isn't as ugly as I thought it was. I'm a bit happy. A bit... A killing impulse that is slightly leaning towards your image..." <!-- Georgi: Changed view to image, hope it makes sense. -->

	... I can only frown at her last sentence, but Shiki is beautiful as she smiles against the rain. The storm should go away by morning.		... I can only frown at her last sentence, but Shiki is beautiful as she smiles against the rain. The storm should go away by morning.

	I keep staring at Shiki, surrounded by the summer rain. Come to think of it, ~~the~~ is the first true smile she's ever shown me since she recovered from the coma...		I keep staring at Shiki, surrounded by the summer rain. Come to think of it, this is the first true smile she's ever shown me since she recovered from the coma...

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	Broad Bridge is distorted like it has been squeezed by a giant hand. After coming here in the storm in ~~Tohko~~-san's buggy and arguing with the guard, Shiki shows up from under the bridge with a blood-soaked arm. The guard runs up to Shiki, but she tackles him and knocks him unconscious.		Broad Bridge is distorted like it has been squeezed by a giant hand. After coming here in the storm in Touko-san's buggy and arguing with the guard, Shiki shows up from under the bridge with a blood-soaked arm. The guard runs up to Shiki, but she tackles him and knocks him unconscious.

	"Yo. For some reason, I thought you would be here."		"Yo. For some reason, I thought you would be here."
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	"So you managed with just one arm, huh, Shiki?"		"So you managed with just one arm, huh, Shiki?"

	~~Tohko~~-san seems surprised. Shiki glares in discontent.		Touko-san seems surprised. Shiki glares in discontent.

	"~~Tohko~~, ~~She~~ came up with ~~Clairvoyance~~ in the end. She'll have a ridiculous amount of power if you leave her be."		"Touko, she came up with clairvoyance in the end. She'll have a ridiculous amount of power if you leave her be."

	"Clairvoyance, huh? Certainly, if you add that to her power, she'll be invincible. She would be able to make a fulcrum even if you are hiding... Huh? If you leave her be...?"		"Clairvoyance, huh? Certainly, if you add that to her power, she'll be invincible. She would be able to make a fulcrum even if you are hiding... Huh? If you leave her be...?"
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	"An ambulance is going to come here. It'll be lots of trouble to stay here, so do you want to get away?"		"An ambulance is going to come here. It'll be lots of trouble to stay here, so do you want to get away?"

	~~Tohko~~-san nods but Shiki is silent. ... She probably wants to make sure that Asagami Fujino does get taken away safely.		Touko-san nods, but Shiki is silent. ...She probably wants to make sure that Asagami Fujino does get taken away safely.

	"Since I contacted them, I'll stay here. I'll tell you what happened, so you can go back."		"Since I contacted them, I'll stay here. I'll tell you what happened, so you can go back."
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	"In this strong rain? You sure are strange. All right, let's go back, Shiki."		"In this strong rain? You sure are strange. All right, let's go back, Shiki."

	Shiki refuses ~~Tohko~~-san's offer. ~~Tohko~~-san ~~makes a mean smile~~ and gets in her off-road buggy, which seems totally illegal.		Shiki refuses Touko-san's offer. Touko-san smiles somewhat meanly and gets in her off-road buggy, which seems totally illegal.

	"Shiki. Don't kill ~~Kokuto~~ just because you couldn't kill Asagami Fujino."		"Shiki. Don't kill Kokutou just because you couldn't kill Asagami Fujino."

	~~Tohko~~-san says so seriously and drives off. In the summer rain, Shiki and I end up seeking shelter in the nearby warehouse.		Touko-san says so seriously and drives off. In the summer rain, Shiki and I end up seeking shelter in the nearby warehouse.