Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter05 03 - Revision history

65.92.93.170 at 00:44, 14 June 2010

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	"What, if you are strong then that's that. There wont be any instances where you go around getting bashed up like me. And you finished off those three guys in an instant. That'ss an incredible self-created style right there."<br>		"What, if you are strong then that's that. There wont be any instances where you go around getting bashed up like me. And you finished off those three guys in an instant. That'ss an incredible self-created style right there."<br>

	When I ~~speak~~, remembering that refreshing instant of when I met this girl, Ryougi seems a bit surprised.<br>		When I spoke, remembering that refreshing instant of when I met this girl, Ryougi seems a bit surprised.<br>

	"That's different. I only copied what I had seen. More than that, there's never been an instance where I've used our house's school of fighting."<br>		"That's different. I only copied what I had seen. More than that, there's never been an instance where I've used our house's school of fighting."<br>

65.92.93.170 at 00:40, 14 June 2010

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	I ask the lamest questions. But Ryougi goes mmm, and falls into serious thought.<br>		I ask the lamest questions. But Ryougi goes mmm, and falls into serious thought.<br>

	"I suppose I have something along those lines. I train ~~with~~ taking down everything using that as my premise, so if you call it a finishing move, it is one. But we aren't of that school. And it's originally a self-created style as well."(This part could be reworked).		"I suppose I have something along those lines. I train by taking down everything using that as my premise, so if you call it a finishing move, it is one. But we aren't of that school. And it's originally a self-created style as well."(This part could be reworked).

	The thing you train is your mindset, Ryougi adds.<br>		The thing you train is your mindset, Ryougi adds.<br>

69.157.100.116 at 23:32, 13 June 2010

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Zwei7 at 18:36, 5 June 2010

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Zwei7 at 18:22, 5 June 2010

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	"After a while I started getting sick of her. It's not just the surrounding environment. Time, money, even emotions, it felt like a waste to give them to her. I did kind of like her, but satisfying your sexual appetite is something you can do alone ('''!<!--Okay... I'll remove this later but WTF?-->''')<br>		"After a while I started getting sick of her. It's not just the surrounding environment. Time, money, even emotions, it felt like a waste to give them to her. I did kind of like her, but satisfying your sexual appetite is something you can do alone ('''!<!--Okay... I'll remove this later but WTF?-->''')<br>
	--- If I was a normal student, I would have had too much time on my hands. But I didn't have any free time. The more time I spent with her the less sleep I got. For someone like me without even a minute to spare something like a girlfriend was an impossibility from the start."<br>		--- If I was a normal student, I would have had too much time on my hands. But I didn't have any free time. The more time I spent with her the less sleep I got. For someone like me, without even a minute to spare, something like a girlfriend was an impossibility from the start."<br>

	However I didn't try to break up.<br>		However I didn't try to break up.<br>

Zwei7 at 18:18, 5 June 2010

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	Her name is Ryougi Shiki. Surprisingly enough she really is a high school student. I don't know anything more than that.<br>		Her name is Ryougi Shiki. Surprisingly enough she really is a high school student. I don't know anything more than that.<br>

	Ryougi calls me Enjou. Maybe because of that, I call Ryougi Shiki Ryougi. Ryougi herself dislikes being called by her family name, but I can't bring myself to call her Shiki.<br>		Ryougi calls me Enjou. Maybe because of that, I call Ryougi Shiki by the name of Ryougi. Ryougi herself dislikes being called by her family name, but I can't bring myself to call her Shiki.<br>

	The reason is simple. Quite simply, I don't have that strong a resolve. I don't want to become friendlier than necessary with someone I will one day part from forever. If I come to call her Shiki, it will definitely become more difficult to leave this girl. I thought that such a relationship would only be a hindrance to someone like me, who might be caught at any time by the police.<br>		The reason is simple. Quite simply, I don't have that strong a resolve. I don't want to become friendlier than necessary with someone I will one day part from forever. If I come to call her Shiki, it will definitely become more difficult to leave this girl. I thought that such a relationship would only be a hindrance to someone like me, who might be caught at any time by the police.<br>

222.145.114.106 at 11:09, 13 April 2009

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	But today that's fortunate.<br>		But today that's fortunate.<br>

	Hiding my ~~pummelled~~ cheek, I plonk myself down on the floor.<br>		Hiding my pummeled cheek, I plonk myself down on the floor.<br>

	Ticktickticktick.<br>		Ticktickticktick.<br>
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	Ryougi is sleeping like the dead. There's no signs that she will wake up.<br>		Ryougi is sleeping like the dead. There's no signs that she will wake up.<br>

	That profile of her face, I ~~unthinkly~~ stared at it.<br>		That profile of her face, I unthinkingly stared at it.<br>

	--- In the 2 weeks that we've lived together I've come to know only one thing.<br>		--- In the 2 weeks that we've lived together I've come to know only one thing.<br>
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	When I speak remembering that refreshing instant of when I met this girl, Ryougi seems a bit surprised.<br>		When I speak remembering that refreshing instant of when I met this girl, Ryougi seems a bit surprised.<br>

	"That's different. I only copied what I had seen. More than that, there's never been an instance where I've used ~~out~~ house's school of fighting."<br>		"That's different. I only copied what I had seen. More than that, there's never been an instance where I've used our house's school of fighting."<br>

	She nonchalantly spat out that frightening statement, ~~than~~ Ryougi collapsed onto the bed and fell asleep.<br>		She nonchalantly spat out that frightening statement, then Ryougi collapsed onto the bed and fell asleep.<br>


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	As if she's still upset Ryougi doesn't answer. I ignore the silence and continue.<br>		As if she's still upset Ryougi doesn't answer. I ignore the silence and continue.<br>

	"That person you said is a friend. What your relationship with them? A friend from high school?"<br>		"That person you said is a friend. What's your relationship with them? A friend from high school?"<br>

	"--- Yeah, he's a high school friend but he's like a poet."<br>		"--- Yeah, he's a high school friend but he's like a poet."<br>

Alyeris at 11:36, 30 June 2008

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	"Enjoh, don't you have a girl?"<br>		"Enjoh, don't you have a girl?"<br>

	On a night no different from any other, sitting on the bed with the gabuza ('''!<-- TN: What the hell is this?-->''') on, Ryougi threw an unexpected question at me without any warning.<br>		On a night no different from any other, sitting on the bed with the gabuza ('''!<!-- TN: What the hell is this?-->''') on, Ryougi threw an unexpected question at me without any warning.<br>

	Ryougi's questions, they always begin abruptly like this.<br>		Ryougi's questions, they always begin abruptly like this.<br>
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	... It felt like Ryougi was listening properly to my soliloquy.<br>		... It felt like Ryougi was listening properly to my soliloquy.<br>

	"After a while I started getting sick of her. It's not just the surrounding environment. Time, money, even emotions, it felt like a waste to give them to her. I did kind of like her, but satisfying your sexual appetite is something you can do alone ('''!<--Okay... I'll remove this later but WTF?-->''')<br>		"After a while I started getting sick of her. It's not just the surrounding environment. Time, money, even emotions, it felt like a waste to give them to her. I did kind of like her, but satisfying your sexual appetite is something you can do alone ('''!<!--Okay... I'll remove this later but WTF?-->''')<br>
	--- If I was a normal student, I would have had too much time on my hands. But I didn't have any free time. The more time I spent with her the less sleep I got. For someone like me without even a minute to spare something like a girlfriend was an impossibility from the start."<br>		--- If I was a normal student, I would have had too much time on my hands. But I didn't have any free time. The more time I spent with her the less sleep I got. For someone like me without even a minute to spare something like a girlfriend was an impossibility from the start."<br>

Alyeris at 11:35, 30 June 2008

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	'''/3'''<br>		'''/3 Paradox Spiral'''<br>


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	The reason is simple. Quite simply, I don't have that strong a resolve. I don't want to become friendlier than necessary with someone I will one day part from forever. If I come to call her Shiki, it will definitely become more difficult to leave this girl. I thought that such a relationship would only be a hindrance to someone like me, who might be caught at any time by the police.<br>		The reason is simple. Quite simply, I don't have that strong a resolve. I don't want to become friendlier than necessary with someone I will one day part from forever. If I come to call her Shiki, it will definitely become more difficult to leave this girl. I thought that such a relationship would only be a hindrance to someone like me, who might be caught at any time by the police.<br>

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	"Enjoh, don't you have a girl?"<br>		"Enjoh, don't you have a girl?"<br>

	On a night no different from any other, sitting on the bed with the gabuza '''(? - TN: What the hell is this?)''' on, Ryougi threw an unexpected question at me without any warning.<br>		On a night no different from any other, sitting on the bed with the gabuza ('''!<-- TN: What the hell is this?-->''') on, Ryougi threw an unexpected question at me without any warning.<br>

	Ryougi's questions, they always begin abruptly like this.<br>		Ryougi's questions, they always begin abruptly like this.<br>
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	... It felt like Ryougi was listening properly to my soliloquy.<br>		... It felt like Ryougi was listening properly to my soliloquy.<br>

	"After a while I started getting sick of her. It's not just the surrounding environment. Time, money, even emotions, it felt like a waste to give them to her. I did kind of like her, but satisfying your sexual appetite is something you can do alone (Okay... I'll remove this later but WTF?)<br>		"After a while I started getting sick of her. It's not just the surrounding environment. Time, money, even emotions, it felt like a waste to give them to her. I did kind of like her, but satisfying your sexual appetite is something you can do alone ('''!<--Okay... I'll remove this later but WTF?-->''')<br>
	--- If I was a normal student, I would have had too much time on my hands. But I didn't have any free time. The more time I spent with her the less sleep I got. For someone like me without even a minute to spare something like a girlfriend was an impossibility from the start."<br>		--- If I was a normal student, I would have had too much time on my hands. But I didn't have any free time. The more time I spent with her the less sleep I got. For someone like me without even a minute to spare something like a girlfriend was an impossibility from the start."<br>

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	Turning off the light, I though as I fell into sleep. I'm a complete dunderhead when it comes to those people that I have feelings for called 'women' but, I think that if it was this girl there wouldn't be any such unilateral demands. No, if it was Ryougi, wouldn't I be able to take even such annoying things with a smile on my face?<br>		Turning off the light, I though as I fell into sleep. I'm a complete dunderhead when it comes to those people that I have feelings for called 'women' but, I think that if it was this girl there wouldn't be any such unilateral demands. No, if it was Ryougi, wouldn't I be able to take even such annoying things with a smile on my face?<br>

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	A night of the second week.<br>		A night of the second week.<br>
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	But today that's fortunate.<br>		But today that's fortunate.<br>

	Hiding my ~~pummeled~~ cheek, I plonk myself down on the floor.<br>		Hiding my pummelled cheek, I plonk myself down on the floor.<br>

	Ticktickticktick.<br>		Ticktickticktick.<br>
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	The bedside clock goes around. Both the hands are pointing to the 12.<br>		The bedside clock goes around. Both the hands are pointing to the 12.<br>

	... For some reason, I hate clock faces. Digital displays are my preference. A feeling comes to me that there's no place for me inside the spinning clock I I get afraid.<br>		... For some reason, I hate clock faces. Digital displays are my preference. A feeling comes to me that there's no place for me inside the spinning clock and I get afraid.<br>

	"Ow."<br>		"Ow."<br>
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	I suppose tensing your body and mind as a fight starts and while you are fighting is the foundation of all martial arts. However we followed only that too much and as a result our path went too far."<br>		I suppose tensing your body and mind as a fight starts and while you are fighting is the foundation of all martial arts. However we followed only that too much and as a result our path went too far."<br>

	In response to this ~~dialog~~ that seemed to scorn oneself I couldn't do anything but cock my head.<br>		In response to this dialogue that seemed to scorn oneself I couldn't do anything but cock my head.<br>

	"What, if you are strong that's that. There wont be any instances where you go around getting bashed up like me. And you finished off those three guys in an instant. That is an incredible self-created style, that."<br>		"What, if you are strong that's that. There wont be any instances where you go around getting bashed up like me. And you finished off those three guys in an instant. That is an incredible self-created style, that."<br>
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	She nonchalantly spat out that frightening statement, than Ryougi collapsed onto the bed and fell asleep.<br>		She nonchalantly spat out that frightening statement, than Ryougi collapsed onto the bed and fell asleep.<br>

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	... Steam is rising from somewhere.<br>		... Steam is rising from somewhere.<br>
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	Ryougi thinks briefly.<br>		Ryougi thinks briefly.<br>

	"Nah. Walking at night is my hobby, and my murder impulse is mine ~~along~~. No one else is involved. The problem is mine, so I know what kind of state I'm in right now. ... Hmm, in short, I'm so ~~unbalance~~ right now that I make even you feel uneasy around me."<br>		"Nah. Walking at night is my hobby, and my murder impulse is mine alone. No one else is involved. The problem is mine, so I know what kind of state I'm in right now. ... Hmm, in short, I'm so unbalanced right now that I make even you feel uneasy around me."<br>

	Ryougi speaks serenely as if describing someone else's affairs.<br>		Ryougi speaks serenely as if describing someone else's affairs.<br>

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	"I couldn't help it. The other side kept provoking me for no reason."<br>		"I couldn't help it. The other side kept provoking me for no reason."<br>

	I tell it ~~as it was~~. While coming back today, I got tangled up with two people I didn't know and we beat each other up. Of course I laid them out, but I'm also unskilled at fighting and get a lot of wounds.<br>		I tell her how it happened. While coming back today, I got tangled up with two people I didn't know and we beat each other up. Of course I laid them out, but I'm also unskilled at fighting and get a lot of wounds.<br>

	"You did something, didn't you? To be so weak even with ~~that~~. Do you like being hit?"<br>		"You did something, didn't you? To be so weak even with just two people. Do you like being hit?"<br>

	Ryougi says as she sits up on the bed.<br>		Ryougi says as she sits up on the bed.<br>
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	"Oh? I definitely thought you would, since you used your palm when fighting. --- Then how did you know to use the palm of your hand?"<br>		"Oh? I definitely thought you would, since you used your palm when fighting. --- Then how did you know to use the palm of your hand?"<br>

	Ah, I should have guessed. Now that I think about it I was once congratulated about that. When hitting someone, a person who hasn't trained his fist will just hurt his hand, and after a few hits their own bones get damaged. So it's better for half-baked amateurs like me to use our palms to hit with. No, there are martial arts where the palm is more effective instead.<br>		Ah, I should have guessed. Now that I think about it, I was once congratulated about that. When hitting someone, a person who hasn't trained his fist will just hurt his hand, and after a few hits their own bones get damaged. So it's better for half-baked amateurs like me to use our palms to hit with. No, there are martial arts where the palm is more effective and is used instead.<br>

	Of course, I don't know anything like that.<br>		Of course, I don't know anything like that.<br>
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	She cautiously looks at my face. Getting embarrassed by her scrutiny, I struggled and kept talking.<br>		She cautiously looks at my face. Getting embarrassed by her scrutiny, I struggled and kept talking.<br>

	"So what did you do ~~some of~~, Ryougi? Aikido?"<br>		"So what did you do, Ryougi? Some Aikido?"<br>

	"Aikido is just for fun. There's only one thing I've done since I was young."<br>		"Aikido is just for fun. There's only one thing I've done since I was young."<br>
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	"You remake your body. From your breathing to the placement of your feet, awareness, thoughts, to be able to remake all of them for combat. Even the way of using your muscles changes, so it might feel like you become a different person.<br>		"You remake your body. From your breathing to the placement of your feet, awareness, thoughts, to be able to remake all of them for combat. Even the way of using your muscles changes, so it might feel like you become a different person.<br>
	I suppose tensing your body and mind as a fight starts and while you are fighting is the foundation of all martial arts. However, we followed only that too much, and as a result our path went too far."<br>		I suppose tensing your body and mind as a fight starts, and while you are fighting, is the foundation of all martial arts. However, we followed only that too much, and as a result our path went too far."<br>

	In response to this dialogue that seemed to scorn oneself, I couldn't do anything but cock my head.<br>		In response to this dialogue that seemed to scorn oneself, I couldn't do anything but cock my head.<br>

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	"But you still broke up. How did you dump her?"<br>		"But you still broke up. How did you dump her?"<br>

	"You know, stop treating me like ~~some criminal~~. I was the one that got dumped. She told me suddenly after we did everything to do at a hotel. That 'you never looked at me. You just looked at my body and never saw my mind'. Honestly ~~speaking~~ it was a bit of a shock."<br>		"You know, you should stop treating me like the bad guy. I was the one that got dumped. She told me suddenly after we did everything to do at a hotel. That 'you never looked at me. You just looked at my body and never saw my mind'. Honestly, saying it was a bit of a shock."<br>

	As I told the story's conclusion with a shrug, Ryougi rudely burst into laughter.<br>		As I told the story's conclusion with a shrug, Ryougi rudely burst into laughter.<br>
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	I get angry and bolt upright. Ryougi then stopped laughing and stared at me.<br>		I get angry and bolt upright. Ryougi then stopped laughing and stared at me.<br>

	"It's weird. The only thing humans can see is the outward appearance. But that girl said that you ~~who~~ only looked at that ~~wasn't needed~~, to say that you don't like someone because they can't see something invisible like the mind, that kind of girl isn't normal. Not being normal means you are abnormal. See, it's funny. That girl, if she wanted you to see her mind she could have written a letter. Enjoh, you did well to break up with that girl."<br>		"It's weird. The only thing humans can see is the outward appearance. But that girl said that you only looked at the body that she thought was insignificant, to say that you don't like someone because they can't see something invisible like the mind, that kind of girl isn't normal. Not being normal means you are abnormal. See, it's funny. That girl, if she wanted you to see her mind she could have written a letter. Enjoh, you did well to break up with that girl."<br>

	Coldly making fun of me, Ryougi lay back on the bed.<br>		Coldly making fun of me, Ryougi lay back on the bed.<br>
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	Like a cat she stared at me blankly from that position, then Ryougi opened her mouth as if it was difficult for her to say what followed.<br>		Like a cat she stared at me blankly from that position, then Ryougi opened her mouth as if it was difficult for her to say what followed.<br>

	"... Well, it's not something for me to say, but. If you speak out loud about an uneasiness that 'cannot be seen' it becomes a lie. I can't know myself but love is believing in something. The blindness of love, isn't that ~~it's~~ meaning?"<br>		"... Well, it's not something for me to say, but. If you speak out loud about an uneasiness that 'cannot be seen' it becomes a lie. I can't know myself but love is believing in something. The blindness of love, isn't that its meaning?"<br>

	It's something I heard from ~~another~~ though, Ryougi added and fell asleep.<br>		It's something I heard from someone else though, Ryougi added and fell asleep.<br>

	Ending the conversation as usual in an abrupt manner like splitting bamboo, I also went to bed with a troubled mind.<br>		Ending the conversation as usual in an abrupt manner like splitting bamboo, I also went to bed with a troubled mind.<br>

	Turning off the light, I ~~though~~ as I fell into sleep. I'm a complete dunderhead when it comes to those people that I have feelings for called 'women' but, I think that if it was this girl there wouldn't be any such unilateral demands. No, if it was Ryougi, wouldn't I be able to take even such annoying things with a smile on my face?<br>		Turning off the light, I thought as I fell into sleep. I'm a complete dunderhead when it comes to those people that I have feelings for called 'women' but, I think that if it was this girl, there wouldn't be any such unilateral demands. No, if it was Ryougi, wouldn't I be able to take even such annoying things with a smile on my face?<br>