Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter05 04 - Revision history

Zwei7 at 16:06, 19 June 2010

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	... Let's see.<br>		... Let's see.<br>

	That night, I was handling myself recklessly. I thought it perfectly fine to beat someone to death, and on the other hand, I thought it would be perfectly fine to be beaten to death. But... I didn't want to die. At the time, yeah... ~~it was~~ simply ~~that~~ living had become exhausting. I hated myself, a fake living without any goals in life. This self of mine that thought it wanted to die but couldn't even kill itself was so loathsome that I couldn't take it.<br>		That night, I was handling myself recklessly. I thought it perfectly fine to beat someone to death, and on the other hand, I thought it would be perfectly fine to be beaten to death. But... I didn't want to die. At the time, yeah... simply living had become exhausting. I hated myself, a fake living without any goals in life. This self of mine that thought it wanted to die but couldn't even kill itself was so loathsome that I couldn't take it.<br>

	Even now, when I've confessed all my sins to Ryougi like this, I don't want to die. --- But nevertheless, humans will ultimately die. For me it will just be a little quicker, a little shabbier, and less meaningful than another person's.<br>		Even now, when I've confessed all my sins to Ryougi like this, I don't want to die. --- But nevertheless, humans will ultimately die. For me it will just be a little quicker, a little shabbier, and less meaningful than another person's.<br>

Zwei7 at 15:54, 19 June 2010

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222.145.114.106 at 12:25, 13 April 2009

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Alyeris at 11:40, 30 June 2008

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Alyeris at 02:06, 2 June 2007

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	A few seconds pass and the kimono girl bursts into laughter.<br>		A few seconds pass and the kimono girl bursts into laughter.<br>

	"Hahaha, what are you saying Enjoh! You've fallen for me? Did that guy in the red coat hypnotize you or something? Try going through ~~you~~ memory, there will definitely be a weird noise mixed up in there!"<br>		"Hahaha, what are you saying Enjoh! You've fallen for me? Did that guy in the red coat hypnotize you or something? Try going through your memory, there will definitely be a weird noise mixed up in there!"<br>

	Ryougi --- Shiki, laughs it off and will not face me.<br>		Ryougi --- Shiki, laughs it off and will not face me.<br>
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	Ryougi's voice is cold like the time when I first met her.<br>		Ryougi's voice is cold like the time when I first met her.<br>

	... My family went from rent to rent. We were chased around because after half a year we wouldn't be able to pay the rent, or the harassment of the debt collectors would be too much to take. I hated that --- I hated it from when I was young, so I envied a normal household.<br>		... My family went from rent to rent. We were chased around either because after half a year we wouldn't be able to pay the rent, or the harassment of the debt collectors would be too much to take. I hated that --- I hated it from when I was young, so I envied a normal household.<br>

	"What are you going to do with the answer? It's number 405 in some mansion."<br>		"What are you going to do with the answer? It's number 405 in some mansion."<br>

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	That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>		That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>

	Even in these daylight hours there's no one about and not even the myriad noises of the streets can be heard. Exhaling clouds of vapour into the cold air <!-- TN: Does English have a phrase for this? You know, the white fog you get when its a cold morning \| yup. they do! :) - oni -->, I was standing in that place from which the bloodstains of that time had neatly disappeared.<br>		Even in these daylight hours there's no one about and not even the myriad noises of the streets can be heard. Exhaling clouds of vapour into the cold air ('''!<!-- TN: Does English have a phrase for this? You know, the white fog you get when its a cold morning \| yup. they do! :) - oni -->'''), I was standing in that place from which the bloodstains of that time had neatly disappeared.<br>

	Clickclickclickclick.<br>		Clickclickclickclick.<br>

Onizuka-gto: wow. still got things to do. marked places that need looking at. will get back to it :)

2007-05-31T14:05:43Z

wow. still got things to do. marked places that need looking at. will get back to it :)

Onizuka-gto at 13:49, 31 May 2007

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	That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>		That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>

	Even in these daylight hours there's no one about and not even the myriad noises of the streets can be heard. ~~exhaling, my breathe condensed in~~ the cold air <!-- TN: Does English have a phrase for this? You know, the white fog you get when its a cold morning \| yup. they do! :) - oni -->, I was standing in that place from which the bloodstains of that time had neatly disappeared.<br>		Even in these daylight hours there's no one about and not even the myriad noises of the streets can be heard. Exhaling clouds of vapour into the cold air <!-- TN: Does English have a phrase for this? You know, the white fog you get when its a cold morning \| yup. they do! :) - oni -->, I was standing in that place from which the bloodstains of that time had neatly disappeared.<br>

	Clickclickclickclick.<br>		Clickclickclickclick.<br>

Onizuka-gto at 13:47, 31 May 2007

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	'''Translator's Note: It might be just my clumsy translation but even after I spent a while straightening this chapter out Enjoh's monologues in this chapter chapter are very disjointed. Please bear with on this one, I suspect that it's just Enjoh being an emo anyway.'''

	That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>		That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>

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	That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>		That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>

	Even in these daylight hours there's no one about and not even the myriad noises of the streets can be heard. ~~Blowing white steam from~~ my ~~mouth '''(~~TN: Does English have a phrase for this? You know, the white fog you get when its a cold morning), I was standing in that place from which the bloodstains of that time had neatly disappeared.<br>		Even in these daylight hours there's no one about and not even the myriad noises of the streets can be heard. exhaling, my breathe condensed in the cold air <!-- TN: Does English have a phrase for this? You know, the white fog you get when its a cold morning \| yup. they do! :) - oni -->, I was standing in that place from which the bloodstains of that time had neatly disappeared.<br>

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	The wind's picked up. I came walking out of the back alley as if I was being chased by the cold north wind. I was walking through the downtown area ~~like that~~ when I saw Ryougi at a far-off pedestrian crossing. A red jacket over a kimono - it couldn't be anyone but her.<br>		The wind's picked up. I came walking out of the back alley as if I was being chased by the cold north wind. I was walking through the downtown area when I saw Ryougi at a far-off pedestrian crossing. A red jacket over a kimono - it couldn't be anyone but her.<br>

	Looking at that figure from far away --- I spotted a familiar face.<br>		Looking at that figure from far away --- I spotted a familiar face.<br>
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	It seems that they don't actually plan to do anything to Ryougi but simply stalk her. Even so --- for them their movements are too faultless and well-organized to be not suspicious.<br>		It seems that they don't actually plan to do anything to Ryougi but simply stalk her. Even so --- for them their movements are too faultless and well-organized to be not suspicious.<br>

	I kept watch on them for an hour, and then decided that I needed to know where the one that had ~~gone~~ off ~~before~~ had gone. Fortunately the one that fainted after eating Ryougi's high kick finishes his shadowing and starts to go back.<br>		I kept watch them for an hour, and then decided that I needed to know where the one that had trailed off had gone. Fortunately the one that fainted after eating Ryougi's high kick finishes his shadowing and starts to head back.<br>

	When I hurried after him he -------- went into the alleyway that I had been in till just a little before.<br>		When I hurried after him he -------- went into the alleyway that I had been in till just a little before.<br>
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	It's not for me to know what this is all for. But... this whole thing definitely has an ominous feeling to it.<br>		It's not for me to know what this is all for. But... this whole thing definitely has an ominous feeling to it.<br>

	Stopping at the entrance of that string-like path leading into the back alley, I looked inwards. Wouldn't it be possible to find out what they ~~are~~ doing from here?<br>		Stopping at the entrance of that string-like path leading into the back alley, I looked inwards. Wouldn't it be possible to find out what they were doing from here?<br>

	Looking carefully, I see someone standing there.<br>		Looking carefully, I see someone standing there.<br>
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	"Oh, really?"<br>		"Oh, really?"<br>

	So? ~~She~~ asks, with her flawlessly clear eyes.<br>		"So?", she asks, with her flawlessly clear eyes.<br>

	Even I lost my grip on reason this time around.<br>		Even I lost my grip on reason this time around.<br>
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	Those creeps --- no, that guy is real.<br>		Those creeps --- no, that guy is real.<br>

	I and those jerks are either fake, or have no possibility of being ~~an imitation~~. Unlike us, Ryougi has pure impulses.<br>		Me and those jerks are either fake, or have no possibility of being imitations. Unlike us, Ryougi has pure impulses.<br>

	"Listen to me! This isn't somebody else's business. It involves none other than yourself! At least spare some thought for my worried mind!"<br>		"Listen to me! This isn't somebody else's business. It involves none other than yourself! At least spare some thought for my worried mind!"<br>
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	Stabbing down the knife as usual, she will flippantly kill me.<br>		Stabbing down the knife as usual, she will flippantly kill me.<br>

	Ryougi isn't asking if I can die doing something for her. She's saying, I'm going to kill you for my enjoyment. That's what the question ~~just then~~ means.<br>		Ryougi isn't asking if I can die doing something for her. She's saying, I'm going to kill you for my enjoyment. That's what the question means.<br>

	--- This girl can't feel affection except through something like that.<br>		--- This girl can't feel affection except through something like that.<br>

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	'''/4'''		'''/4 Paradox Spiral'''<br>


	That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>		That day, I was at the back alley where I first met Ryougi.<br>
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	I was feeling the end of autumn and the end of my existence.<br>		I was feeling the end of autumn and the end of my existence.<br>

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	Night fell and I told Ryougi about the fact that she was being stalked. That the creeps from that night were actively keeping watch on her. ('''!<!-- TN: For some reason my copy said 'keeping watch on you' but I guessed it was a typo, don't agree? Change it then -->''') <br>		Night fell and I told Ryougi about the fact that she was being stalked. That the creeps from that night were actively keeping watch on her. ('''!<!-- TN: For some reason my copy said 'keeping watch on you' but I guessed it was a typo, don't agree? Change it then -->''') <br>
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	Those creeps --- no, that guy is real.<br>		Those creeps --- no, that guy is real.<br>

	I and those jerks are either fake, or have no possibility of being an imitation. ~~Like~~ Ryougi ~~we have~~ pure impulses.<br>		I and those jerks are either fake, or have no possibility of being an imitation. Unlike us Ryougi has pure impulses.<br>

	"Listen to me! This isn't somebody else's business. It involves none other than yourself! At least spare some thought for my worried mind!"<br>		"Listen to me! This isn't somebody else's business. It involves none other than yourself! At least spare some thought for my worried mind!"<br>
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	A few seconds pass and the kimono girl bursts into laughter.<br>		A few seconds pass and the kimono girl bursts into laughter.<br>

	"Hahaha, what are you saying Enjoh! You've fallen for me? Did that guy in the red coat ~~hypnotize~~ you or something? Try going through your memory, there will definitely be a weird noise mixed up in there!"<br>		"Hahaha, what are you saying Enjoh! You've fallen for me? Did that guy in the red coat hypnotise you or something? Try going through your memory, there will definitely be a weird noise mixed up in there!"<br>

	Ryougi --- Shiki, laughs it off and will not face me.<br>		Ryougi --- Shiki, laughs it off and will not face me.<br>
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	It really did. I'm stupid, so I couldn't think of any other way to run away, but I don't regret it. Even if I'm bound to be caught by the police, I will still feel better that I did in those nightmare filled days.<br>		It really did. I'm stupid, so I couldn't think of any other way to run away, but I don't regret it. Even if I'm bound to be caught by the police, I will still feel better that I did in those nightmare filled days.<br>

	... But, one little thing. It's something I ~~realized~~ as I told my story.<br>		... But, one little thing. It's something I realised as I told my story.<br>

	Till now I've lived thinking that only I was important. Even supposing such a person was serious, to say that they've fallen for someone isn't something they could do. ... They don't have the right to do that. It's natural that Ryougi would just laugh it off. Still ... the fact that I want to protect this girl at least is real. It's the only real thing to this false me. But in the hands of a dirty murderer like me, even that thought becomes polluted. --- If I had any regrets that is what I regret most right now.<br>		Till now I've lived thinking that only I was important. Even supposing such a person was serious, to say that they've fallen for someone isn't something they could do. ... They don't have the right to do that. It's natural that Ryougi would just laugh it off. Still ... the fact that I want to protect this girl at least is real. It's the only real thing to this false me. But in the hands of a dirty murderer like me, even that thought becomes polluted. --- If I had any regrets that is what I regret most right now.<br>

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	After stalking Ryougi for a long time the guy goes off somewhere. Shortly afterwards, another guy from that time replaced him and continued to stalk Ryougi.<br>		After stalking Ryougi for a long time the guy goes off somewhere. Shortly afterwards, another guy from that time replaced him and continued to stalk Ryougi.<br>

	It seems that they don't actually plan to do anything to Ryougi but simply stalk her. Even so --- for them their movements are too faultless and well-organised to be ~~unsuspicious~~.<br>		It seems that they don't actually plan to do anything to Ryougi but simply stalk her. Even so --- for them their movements are too faultless and well-organised to be not suspicious.<br>

	I kept watch on them for an hour, and then decided that I needed to know where the one that had gone off before had gone. Fortunately the one that fainted after eating Ryougi's high kick finishes his shadowing and starts to go back.<br>		I kept watch on them for an hour, and then decided that I needed to know where the one that had gone off before had gone. Fortunately the one that fainted after eating Ryougi's high kick finishes his shadowing and starts to go back.<br>
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	Night fell and I told Ryougi about the fact that she was being stalked. That the creeps from that night were actively keeping watch on her. '''(TN: For some reason my copy said 'keeping watch on you' but I guessed it was a typo, don't agree? Change it then)'''<br>		Night fell and I told Ryougi about the fact that she was being stalked. That the creeps from that night were actively keeping watch on her. ('''!<!-- TN: For some reason my copy said 'keeping watch on you' but I guessed it was a typo, don't agree? Change it then -->''') <br>

	But Ryougi's reply was brief as usual.<br>		But Ryougi's reply was brief as usual.<br>
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	"Listen to me! This isn't somebody else's business. It involves none other than yourself! At least spare some thought for my worried mind!"<br>		"Listen to me! This isn't somebody else's business. It involves none other than yourself! At least spare some thought for my worried mind!"<br>

	My shouting may have annoyed her, the kimono girl nimbly turned the gabuza '''(TN: again... what is this thing?)''' on the bed around and looked up at me.<br>		My shouting may have annoyed her, the kimono girl nimbly turned the gabuza ('''!<!-- TN: again... what is this thing? -->''') on the bed around and looked up at me.<br>

	At that time, I think I was wearing a very serious face.<br>		At that time, I think I was wearing a very serious face.<br>
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	"--- A drastic error. Enduring was your forte, but in the end you chose the painful path. When we first met, you weren't you. Having lost your future did the empty you want to die like just before?"<br>		"--- A drastic error. Enduring was your forte, but in the end you chose the painful path. When we first met, you weren't you. Having lost your future did the empty you want to die like just before?"<br>

	... The girl who tried to kill me for a change of mood '''(TN: bad phrase here but I couldn't think of anything that fit)'''.<br>		... The girl who tried to kill me for a change of mood ('''!<!--TN: bad phrase here but I couldn't think of anything that fit -->)'''.<br>
	... The girl who I thought I would be happy to be killed by.<br>		... The girl who I thought I would be happy to be killed by.<br>
	The two throw the question at me.<br>		The two throw the question at me.<br>