Kaze no Stigma:Ignition Volume1 Chapter 4 - Revision history

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	“Good grief – it can’t be helped...”		“Good grief – it can’t be helped...”
	~~[[File:KnS Ignition 01 157.png\|thumbnail]]~~
	Lightly kicking the floor, Ayano’s silhouette vanished in a blur. Swiftly rushing in, her high speed movement is like she can leap over time restrains. Instantly plunging into the man’s chest she thrusts her elbow, using the force of the rush. Through the blow, purification power is pumped into his face. The golden radiance doesn’t allow any escape and the spirit dwelling on the man is burned to nothing.		Lightly kicking the floor, Ayano’s silhouette vanished in a blur. Swiftly rushing in, her high speed movement is like she can leap over time restrains. Instantly plunging into the man’s chest she thrusts her elbow, using the force of the rush. Through the blow, purification power is pumped into his face. The golden radiance doesn’t allow any escape and the spirit dwelling on the man is burned to nothing.

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Chapter 4 - Haunted Holiday

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	“Good grief – it can’t be helped...”		“Good grief – it can’t be helped...”
			[[File:KnS Ignition 01 157.png\|thumbnail]]
	Lightly kicking the floor, Ayano’s silhouette vanished in a blur. Swiftly rushing in, her high speed movement is like she can leap over time restrains. Instantly plunging into the man’s chest she thrusts her elbow, using the force of the rush. Through the blow, purification power is pumped into his face. The golden radiance doesn’t allow any escape and the spirit dwelling on the man is burned to nothing.		Lightly kicking the floor, Ayano’s silhouette vanished in a blur. Swiftly rushing in, her high speed movement is like she can leap over time restrains. Instantly plunging into the man’s chest she thrusts her elbow, using the force of the rush. Through the blow, purification power is pumped into his face. The golden radiance doesn’t allow any escape and the spirit dwelling on the man is burned to nothing.

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	~~'''~~Haunted ~~holiday'''~~		== Chapter 4 - Haunted Holiday ==

	“Ah, what fine thing did I find ♡?”		“Ah, what fine thing did I find ♡?”
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	With a sidelong glance at the fallen men, Ayano slowly turned back. That glance, no matter how you look at it, was more cold than what a hoodlum deserves.		With a sidelong glance at the fallen men, Ayano slowly turned back. That glance, no matter how you look at it, was more cold than what a hoodlum deserves.
			[[File:KnS Ignition 01 127.png\|thumbnail]]
	“Will you explain?”		“Will you explain?”

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	“………Ua!?”		“………Ua!?”

	Before 10 minutes ~~have~~ passed since leaving, Alta (Alter?) Ayano received a strong hit from the side. She immediately retreated a few steps in order to subdue the impact. Although she somehow avoided falling down, the paper bags she was holding hit the ground.		Before 10 minutes had passed since leaving, Alta (Alter?) Ayano received a strong hit from the side. She immediately retreated a few steps in order to subdue the impact. Although she somehow avoided falling down, the paper bags she was holding hit the ground.

	“What are you doing – uh!?”		“What are you doing – uh!?”

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	“Ah, what fine thing did I find ♡?”		“Ah, what fine thing did I find ♡?”

	Pushing her way, almost sprinting, through the crowd of people, who at the eastern entrance of the Shinjuku Station ~~doesn’t~~ die out even during working days, the lady muttered so with a delightful expression.		Pushing her way, almost sprinting, through the crowd of people, who at the eastern entrance of the Shinjuku Station doesn't die out even during working days, the lady muttered so with a delightful expression.

	This particular day, after practically no free time since the beginning of the new school term, Kannagi Ayano was in an extremely good mood. That figure, lightly stepping forward, ~~showing~~ a soft smile is so lovely~~, to the extent~~ that it ~~would be impossible to conceive~~ that such a body contains a tremendous combat ability.		This particular day, after practically no free time since the beginning of the new school term, Kannagi Ayano was in an extremely good mood. That figure, lightly stepping forward, showed a soft smile so lovely that it was inconceivable that such a body contains tremendous combat ability.

	The season is light spring. The sunlight ~~is worm~~, the people ~~are~~ lightly ~~dress~~, that sort of day.		The season was light spring. The sunlight felt warm, the people lightly dressed, that sort of day.

	Ayano put on a bolero on top of her dress, her outfit excluding a novel, high-class lady appearance. Her figure – lovely because of her cleanliness and tidiness – just by standing there resembles a painting, drawing hot glances from the mesmerized men.		Ayano put on a bolero on top of her dress, her outfit excluding a novel, high-class lady appearance. Her figure – lovely because of her cleanliness and tidiness – just by standing there resembles a painting, drawing hot glances from the mesmerized men.

	However, those glances, always unpleasant, didn’t damage Ayano’s mood. If it’s now, even player-wannabes ~~would call~~ out to her in an over familiar manner, maybe she ~~wouldn’t~~ show those men the depths of Hell. I repeat again, Ayano is in a very good mood.		However, those glances, always unpleasant, didn’t damage Ayano’s mood. If it’s now, even if player-wannabes called out to her in an over familiar manner, maybe she wouldn't show those men the depths of Hell. I repeat again, Ayano is in a very good mood.

	-At the very least, a few more seconds.		-At the very least, for a few more seconds.

	“………Ua!?”		“………Ua!?”

	Before 10 minutes have passed since leaving Alta Ayano received a strong hit from the side. She immediately retreated a few steps in order to subdue the impact. Although she somehow avoided falling down, the paper bags she was holding hit the ground.		Before 10 minutes have passed since leaving, Alta (Alter?) Ayano received a strong hit from the side. She immediately retreated a few steps in order to subdue the impact. Although she somehow avoided falling down, the paper bags she was holding hit the ground.

	“What are you doing – uh!?”		“What are you doing – uh!?”

	The instant she started shouting at the aggressor, her face became stiff. Before her eyes is a smiling, beautiful woman in the middle of her twenties she met a few times before. Her thoughts stopped by an ominous premonition, Ayano ~~can~~ only stare dumbly at the woman.		The instant she started shouting at the aggressor, her face became stiff. Before her eyes was a smiling, beautiful woman in the middle of her twenties she had met a few times before. Her thoughts stopped by an ominous premonition, Ayano could only stare dumbly at the woman.

	“Y – You…”		“Y – You…”
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	“Good day to you, Ayano-chan!”		“Good day to you, Ayano-chan!”

	Facing a petrified Ayano the woman ~~greets~~ her with an out of place cheerful salute.		Facing a petrified Ayano the woman greeted her with an out of place cheerful salute.

	“This may be sudden, but I’m leaving it to you.”		“This may be sudden, but I’m leaving it to you.”

	The white finger ~~indicates~~ something behind Ayano. The three running men she saw instinctively ~~turning~~ her head around – every one of them were two meters tall.		The white finger indicated something behind Ayano. The three running men she saw instinctively turned her head around – every one of them were two meters tall.

	“W-Wait….what is happ…”		“W-Wait….what is happ…”

	With exquisite timing, a bewildered Ayano is pushed forward by the shoulders. Almost like falling forward she comes forth and realizes, standing in front of these men to protect another woman, that she has fallen to a new low.		With exquisite timing, a bewildered Ayano was pushed forward by the shoulders. Almost like falling forward she comes forth and realizes, standing in front of these men to protect another woman, that she has fallen to a new low.

	“Just stop it alr…”		“Just stop it alr…”
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	Naturally they didn’t stop.		Naturally they didn’t stop.

	The feet of the men ~~step~~ on the paper bags spread on the road almost as if taking careful aim to do so. The shoes, probably thirty centimeters long, ~~tear off~~ the paper bags trampling on the wrapping paper.		The feet of the men stepped on the paper bags spread on the road almost as if taking careful aim to do so. The shoes, probably thirty centimeters long, tore through the paper bags, trampling on the wrapping paper.
	The white skirt hidden inside was smudged with distinct black shoe marks. The silk blouse ~~was~~ a total loss. The ~~sound~~ of accessories being transformed in junk ~~can~~ be heard. With a strange sound, something snapped inside her head.		The white skirt hidden inside was smudged with distinct black shoe marks. The silk blouse a total loss. The sounds of accessories being transformed into junk could be heard. With a strange sound, something snapped inside her head.

	“Y ...You...”		“Y ...You...”

	In front of the young lady’s anger, even the animosity towards the woman is forgotten. Towards the men who ruined the shopping’s results, the power of Ayano’s retort is similar to a hurricane. A charge full of force was placed on the fist driven into the stomach of the man in the middle.		In front of the young lady’s anger, even the animosity towards the woman was forgotten. Towards the men who ruined the shopping’s results, the power of Ayano’s retort was similar to a hurricane. A charge full of force was placed on the fist driven into the stomach of the man in the middle.

	Critical hit.		Critical hit.

	You ~~can~~ tell the shock pierced through the stomach, penetrating as far as the back. Ayano drew near to the remaining two, interposing between them. With no hesitation, she approached the left one first.		You could tell the shock pierced through the stomach, penetrating as far as the back. Ayano drew near to the remaining two, interposing between them. With no hesitation, she approached the left one first.

	Evading the large strike she used his arm for a judo shoulder throw. Even if he was an amateur, the man’s defense wasn’t breached even as he was falling down. This much damage should be fine – he should walk again – in a week or so.		Evading the large strike she used his arm for a judo shoulder throw. Even if he was an amateur, the man’s defense wasn’t breached even as he was falling down. This much damage should be fine – he should walk again – in a week or so.

	While she was turned the other way, the last man attacked. Without even turning back she jumped toward him and just before touching him she moved her leg, twisting her body ninety degrees while pushing out her elbow. By kicking her hind foot, ~~the~~ speed ~~increases~~ to ~~max~~ and by concentrating all her kinetic energy she ~~thrusts~~ her left fist in the pit of the stomach. There was a strong backlash.		While she was turned the other way, the last man attacked. Without even turning back she jumped toward him and just before touching him she moved her leg, twisting her body ninety degrees while pushing out her elbow. By kicking her hind foot, her speed was increased to its maximum and concentrating all her kinetic energy she thrust her left fist into the pit of the man's stomach. There was a strong backlash.

	It was practically a certain kill. The large built man flew ten centimeters and collapsed like a doll, whose threads have been cut.		It was practically a certain kill. The large built man flew ten centimeters and collapsed like a doll, whose threads have been cut.

Nwms8: changed: returning the Heaven. --> returning to Heaven.

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changed: returning the Heaven. --> returning to Heaven.

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	Resistance and the like, there wasn’t any from the beginning. The thoughts raised by the departed souls were shots of joy, congratulations on their liberation. The spirits, released from the Ghost Tamer’s curse, by their own will dissolved the possession and accepted the power of purification.		Resistance and the like, there wasn’t any from the beginning. The thoughts raised by the departed souls were shots of joy, congratulations on their liberation. The spirits, released from the Ghost Tamer’s curse, by their own will dissolved the possession and accepted the power of purification.

	The shapes of the dead spirits changed from the gruesomeness in the moment of death to those when they were alive. The healed spirits’ contours morphed, while floating with content smiles, being reduced to balls of light returning ~~the~~ Heaven.		The shapes of the dead spirits changed from the gruesomeness in the moment of death to those when they were alive. The healed spirits’ contours morphed, while floating with content smiles, being reduced to balls of light returning to Heaven.

	The countless light balls, while dancing, ran beyond the sky. That fairytale-like spectacle, Ayano looks up at it, simply amazed.		The countless light balls, while dancing, ran beyond the sky. That fairytale-like spectacle, Ayano looks up at it, simply amazed.

76.14.186.119: reached his ears much too natural. --> reached his ears much too naturally.

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	“Well, ~~anyway”~~		“Well, anyway.”

	Unusually restraining herself before exploding, Ayano makes the conversation advance.		Unusually restraining herself before exploding, Ayano makes the conversation advance.
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	“Stop it. That one’s is probably really hard to manipulate.”		“Stop it. That one’s is probably really hard to manipulate.”

	That answer reached his ears much too ~~natural~~. Searching for the rebuttal words, Ronald turned around in terror.		That answer reached his ears much too naturally. Searching for the rebuttal words, Ronald turned around in terror.

	A hundred and eighty degrees rotation, a body suspended in the air.		A hundred and eighty degrees rotation, a body suspended in the air.
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	Looking up with disgrace and humiliation, in the field of vision is reflected a man’s face, showing a cynical smile.		Looking up with disgrace and humiliation, in the field of vision is reflected a man’s face, showing a cynical smile.


	“I’ve decided I’m the only one allowed to play with her AND that’s the law of this country, you know!”		“I’ve decided I’m the only one allowed to play with her AND that’s the law of this country, you know!”


	With these words the sensation of Ronald’s last moment was the smashing of his cranium and his consciousness faded into darkness.		With these words the sensation of Ronald’s last moment was the smashing of his cranium and his consciousness faded into darkness.

76.14.186.119: changed the gender since a female is referenced: using a civilian to do his work! -> using a civilian to do her work!

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	Unintentionally forgetting about the crisis right in front of her, she turns around. She shouts, letting anger take its natural course:		Unintentionally forgetting about the crisis right in front of her, she turns around. She shouts, letting anger take its natural course:

	“A public servant using a civilian to do ~~his~~ work!”		“A public servant using a civilian to do her work!”

	“Well – don’t say that. Look look! They’re coming from behind.”		“Well – don’t say that. Look look! They’re coming from behind.”

Nwms8: Fixed some punctuation, grammar and typos. there're -> they're. rime -> rhyme. s -> as. It it's -> If it's. You're everyday -> Your everyday. m -> my.

2012-09-23T18:18:53Z

Fixed some punctuation, grammar and typos. there're -> they're. rime -> rhyme. s -> as. It it's -> If it's. You're everyday -> Your everyday. m -> my.

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Sab at 19:12, 18 September 2012

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	“Y – You…”		“Y – You…”

	“Good day to you, Ayano-~~chan”~~		“Good day to you, Ayano-chan!”

	Facing a petrified Ayano the woman greets her with an out of place cheerful salute.		Facing a petrified Ayano the woman greets her with an out of place cheerful salute.