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	''(—What a poor child he was.)''		''(—What a poor child he was.)''

	If Kazuma had been born to any but the Kannagi ~~family~~, he would probably have been considered a superior child. Excellent intellect, good reflexes, and great promise in learning the jutsu; all jutsu except one. He was unable to manipulate fire.		If Kazuma had been born to any family but the Kannagi, he would probably have been considered a superior child. Excellent intellect, good reflexes, and great promise in learning the jutsu; all jutsu except one. He was unable to manipulate fire.

	However, for the Kannagi family, this was the most important ability.		However, for the Kannagi family, this was the most important ability.

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	That day, rumors about Kazuma were the talk of the Kannagi main house. Of the elders (the general term for those who retired from active service and are now overseeing the management of the practitioners) who heard Shinji's report, only one refrained from jokingly spreading around nonsense.		That day, rumors about Kazuma were the talk of the Kannagi main house. Of the elders (the general term for those who retired from active service and are now overseeing the management of the practitioners) who heard Shinji's report, only one refrained from jokingly spreading around nonsense.

	Shinji was currently under probation for the offense of the aforesaid failure of his duty. Tail fin, dorsal fin, belly fins; all were wildly added to the rumor, until it grew to maturity. Not ~~one~~ person tried to stop it.		Shinji was currently under probation for the offense of the aforesaid failure of his duty. Tail fin, dorsal fin, belly fins; all were wildly added to the rumor, until it grew to maturity. Not a single person tried to stop it.

	The source of the rumors, the elders, appeared to be in ~~complete~~ delight. The people known as ''elders''—excluding the extremely serious exceptions—were basically men of leisure. "Looking important is work," and so on, was the gossip some attacked with.		The source of the rumors, the elders, appeared to be in wholesome delight. The people known as ''elders''—excluding the extremely serious exceptions—were basically men of leisure. "Looking important is work," and so on, was the gossip some attacked with.

	When there was no work, they would drink tea all day and amuse themselves by talking about various topics. Obviously, they could not resist something interesting to talk about.		When there was no work, they would drink tea all day and amuse themselves by talking about various topics. Obviously, they could not resist something interesting to talk about.
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	"Kazuma made a contract with the wind spirits. An evil demon."		"Kazuma made a contract with the wind spirits. An evil demon."

	The truth was subtly mixed in, but it was distorted ~~so much~~ that nobody could really interpret it. Obviously, no one feared Kazuma's retribution.		The truth was subtly mixed in, but it was distorted to such an extent that nobody could really interpret it. Obviously, no one feared Kazuma's retribution.

	Kazuma, the main family's failure who had left all his talent in his mother's womb, like liquid skimmed off the top, had found a preferable power to take in, it seemed. Nobody laughed at that.		Kazuma, the main family's failure who had left all his talent in his mother's womb, like liquid skimmed off the top, had found a preferable power to take in, it seemed. Nobody laughed at that.
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	"A-and, I now have the privilege of being allowed to give this report."		"A-and, I now have the privilege of being allowed to give this report."




	"…I see."		"…I see."

	After Shinji finished recounting ~~everything~~, Juugo remained silent for a while after saying that.		After Shinji finished recounting the happenings, Juugo remained silent for a while after saying that.

	"…I see."		"…I see."
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	''Still—'' Juugo thought.		''Still—'' Juugo thought.

	''(Why didn't you ask me for help, Kazuma? There was no need to disown you from the family. If it was me, I would have made a place for you. Whatever Genma said, I wouldn't have cared about the Enjutsu, I would have made use of your talent, ~~yet~~ despite that…)''		''(Why didn't you ask me for help, Kazuma? There was no need to disown you from the family. If it was me, I would have made a place for you. Whatever Genma said, I wouldn't have cared about the Enjutsu, I would have made use of your talent, despite that…)''

	Juugo looked down at his right leg. It was made of metal and plastic. If that accident hadn't happened, and the "rule of inheritance" hadn't been rushed, would Kazuma be here right now?		Juugo looked down at his right leg. It was made of metal and plastic. If that accident hadn't happened, and the "rule of inheritance" hadn't been rushed, would Kazuma be here right now?
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	Hearing his art publicly insulted, Hyoue twisted his face in humiliation. However, nobody paid any attention to Hyoue nor his face.		Hearing his art publicly insulted, Hyoue twisted his face in humiliation. However, nobody paid any attention to Hyoue nor his face.

	To the Kannagi family, who only valued fighting power, the Fuuga clan, having been given the reconnaissance and battle support duties, was limited to a lower status. Genma was not trying to start a fight. He was not ~~saying~~ anything beyond the normal beliefs of the other Kannagi.		To the Kannagi family, who only valued fighting power, the Fuuga clan, having been given the reconnaissance and battle support duties, was limited to a lower status. Genma was not trying to start a fight. He was not stating anything beyond the normal beliefs of the other Kannagi.

	"…We will go no further with this talk~~. Dinner~~ will ~~become~~ unpleasant."		"…We will go no further with this talk or the dinner will turn unpleasant."

	At Juugo's words, everyone clearly showed relieved expressions on their faces. As if on cue, cheerful talk began, and they rolled around laughing at silly jokes.		At Juugo's words, everyone clearly showed relieved expressions on their faces. As if on cue, cheerful talk began, and they rolled around laughing at silly jokes.

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Fallguy Sid: /* Chapter One - The Disinherited Son Returns */

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	== Chapter One - The Disinherited Son Returns ==		== Chapter One - The Disinherited Son Returns ==

	~~=== Part 1 ===~~

	=== Part 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===

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Chapter One - The Disinherited Son Returns: English Grammar. Singular Subject.

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	''(Maybe I should just go back…)''		''(Maybe I should just go back…)''

	Nagged by a horribly bad premonition, Kazuma's thought ~~were~~ halfway serious. The dark aura covering the mansion was something more unearthly than he had expected, but it wasn't so bad that he couldn't deal with it. For this reason, his premonition was that of a bad omen.		Nagged by a horribly bad premonition, Kazuma's thought was halfway serious. The dark aura covering the mansion was something more unearthly than he had expected, but it wasn't so bad that he couldn't deal with it. For this reason, his premonition was that of a bad omen.

	<!-- Georgi: I don't get this sentence; would it mean that his premonition was not caused by the aura, or perhaps that the premonition was not trustworthy?-->Yet, something else was up.		<!-- Georgi: I don't get this sentence; would it mean that his premonition was not caused by the aura, or perhaps that the premonition was not trustworthy?-->Yet, something else was up.

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	== Chapter One - The Disinherited Son Returns ==		== Chapter One - The Disinherited Son Returns ==

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	A low and gloomy voice echoed with resentment darker than darkness...		A low and gloomy voice echoed with resentment darker than darkness...

			***



	''"U-uwaaaaaaaaaaaa! Wha-what, what are you doing-?!"''		''"U-uwaaaaaaaaaaaa! Wha-what, what are you doing-?!"''

	Late at night on that same day, Shinji screamed out in terror. Nearby were two freshly severed heads, which tumbled down onto the floor. Following them were two headless corpses. And standing before him, a human?		Late at night on that same day, Shinji screamed out in terror. Nearby were two freshly severed heads, which had tumbled down onto the floor. Following them were two headless corpses. And standing before him, a human?

	Shinji was unable to say for certain. There was nothing different from a human by outward appearance, but it possessed an aura that a human could not possibly have.		Shinji was unable to say for certain. There was nothing different from a human by outward appearance, but it possessed an aura that a human could not possibly have.
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	Silence remained even after severing those heads. The two blood-covered heads rolling on the ground seemed not to have noticed their own deaths as they still had their drunken, relaxed slack smiles.		Silence remained even after severing those heads. The two blood-covered heads rolling on the ground seemed not to have noticed their own deaths as they still had their drunken, relaxed slack smiles.

	Shinji knew of only one person who could do what this ''thing'' had just done. He had just met that person yesterday. In addition, that person had a motive to kill them.		Shinji knew of only one person who could do what this ''thing'' had just done. He had just met that person yesterday. In addition, that person had a just motive to kill them.

	Shinji became frantic, begging the ''thing'' for forgiveness. His voice did a complete turn.		Shinji became frantic, begging the ''thing'' for forgiveness. His voice did a complete turn.
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	"Y-yeah! I think I——"		"Y-yeah! I think I——"

	Suddenly, ''that thing'', now a huge torch, began to move. Shinji's face, full of hope, froze.		Suddenly, ''that thing'', now a huge torch, began to move. Shinji's face, full of hope till now, froze.

	The ''thing'' stretched out a hand, taking hold of the golden flame, ''and in one movement, tore it from its body.'' <!-- There is an exclamation mark, even though it seems strange to me. -->		The ''thing'' stretched out a hand, taking hold of the golden flame, ''and in one movement, tore it from its body.'' <!-- There is an exclamation mark, even though it seems strange to me. -->

	The ''thing'' emerged from the flame's restraints completely uninjured. Its body, and even its clothes, remained undamaged without any sign of having been engulfed by fire.		The ''thing'' emerged from the flame's restraints, completely uninjured. Its body, and even its clothes, remained undamaged without any sign of having been engulfed by fire.

	The ''thing'' slowly turned to Shinji and began walking. Underneath the freezing moonlight, without a sound, it came closer, an ominous shadow.		The ''thing'' slowly turned to Shinji and began walking. Underneath the freezing moonlight, without a sound, it came closer, an ominous shadow.
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	As the raw stink of blood and meat drifted through the kekkai, the ''thing'' laughed cruelly and vanished as if melting into the air.		As the raw stink of blood and meat drifted through the kekkai, the ''thing'' laughed cruelly and vanished as if melting into the air.

	~~Afterwards~~, three severed heads remained. Though the bodies were in pieces, there was not ~~one~~ injury on those heads.		However, the three severed heads remained. Though the bodies were in pieces, there was not a single injury on those heads.

	~~Somehow, the three heads had ended up facing the gate in a straight line. Each had a strange smile, as if to say to anyone coming through that gate, "Welcome to a nightmare."~~


			Somehow, the three heads had ended up facing the gate in a straight line. Each had a strange smile, as if saying to anyone coming through that gate, "Welcome to a nightmare."

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	=== Part 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

	Even among the ''Enjutsu'' users who could freely manipulate fire, the Kannagi family was famous for their superior strength. It was not simply because their power was great. The reason ~~laid~~ in the special ability passed on in their family's blood. The flame they manipulated was not created by the physical phenomenon of simply accelerating molecular motion. It possessed the power to burn away impurities and destroy evil.		Even among the ''Enjutsu'' users who could freely manipulate fire, the Kannagi family was famous for their superior strength. It was not simply because their power was great. The reason lay in the special ability passed on in their family's blood. The flame they manipulated was not created by the physical phenomenon of simply accelerating molecular motion. It possessed the power to burn away impurities and destroy evil.

	Because of this "purifying flame" the Kannagi family practitioners held absolute dominance over ''youma'', evil spirits, and all beings who transgressed the law. However, even with the ability given by blood, depending on the extent to which their blood was diluted with each generation, it was inevitable that their power would eventually deteriorate.		Because of this "purifying flame" the Kannagi family practitioners held absolute dominance over ''youma'', evil spirits, and all beings who transgressed the law. However, even with the ability given by blood, depending on the extent to which their blood was diluted with each generation, it was inevitable that their power would eventually deteriorate.

	The branch family practitioners had long lost the highest rank of the "gold" flame attribute. If a youma with a fire attribute was their opponent, the flame that they released would merely be absorbed by the youma instead of purifying ~~and~~ destroying it.		The branch family practitioners had long lost the highest rank of the "gold" flame attribute. If a youma with a fire attribute was their opponent, the flame that they released would merely be absorbed by the youma instead of purifying or destroying it.

	...Which was what had happened just now——		...Which was what had happened just now——
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	"I wonder if he's dead..." Kazuma muttered with a refreshed face.		"I wonder if he's dead..." Kazuma muttered with a refreshed face.

	A cool breeze wrapped ~~around~~ Kazuma, ~~preventing~~ the raging fire ~~from touching~~ him. Even the heat that the flame emitted was sealed off; not a drop of sweat was on Kazuma's face. <!-- Nwms8: Changed 'Even the heat that the flame present in the room emitted' to 'Even the heat that the flame emitted'. The part about the flame being in the room is obvious -->		A cool breeze wrapped Kazuma, keeping the raging fire off him. Even the heat that the flame emitted was sealed off; not a drop of sweat was on Kazuma's face. <!-- Nwms8: Changed 'Even the heat that the flame present in the room emitted' to 'Even the heat that the flame emitted'. The part about the flame being in the room is obvious -->

	"H-help……"		"H-help……"
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	Sakamoto's face writhed in pain as he was mercilessly trampled upon. Since Kazuma didn't want to touch anything beyond his slippers, he brought down his heel instead of stepping on him. The skull could have been making a creaking sound, but that wasn't a big problem.		Sakamoto's face writhed in pain as he was mercilessly trampled upon. Since Kazuma didn't want to touch anything beyond his slippers, he brought down his heel instead of stepping on him. The skull could have been making a creaking sound, but that wasn't a big problem.

	Kazuma stepped on Sakamoto's head and stated clearly, "~~you~~'re not my client and I don't have a ~~habit~~ of saving middle-aged men."		Kazuma stepped on Sakamoto's head and stated clearly, "You're not my client and I don't have a knack of saving middle-aged men."

	"If it's money, I'll pay. Twice as much, or so…"		"If it's money, I'll pay. Twice as much, or so…"
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	"Twice? Is your life worth only a million?"		"Twice? Is your life worth only a million?"

	Kazuma took a cigarette from his pocket. He gently stretched out his hand, exposing the cigarette's tip outside of the kekkai and began to smoke.		Kazuma took out a cigarette from his pocket. He gently stretched out his hand, exposing the cigarette's tip outside of the kekkai and began to smoke.

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	Sakamoto didn't have the luxury to be so relaxed though. Whether by chance or on purpose, there were holes in the area of the kekkai near Sakamoto. Some of the flames passed through the holes and touched him.		Sakamoto didn't have the luxury to be so relaxed, though. Whether by chance or on purpose, there were holes in the area of the kekkai near Sakamoto. Some of the flames passed through the holes and touched him.

	"Hot-! Ee-eeee! Help! Fine!! I'll pay 10 million!"		"Hot-! Ee-eeee! Help! Fine!! I'll pay 10 million!"
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	"All right now. Then, won't you please stand back?"		"All right now. Then, won't you please stand back?"

	Kazuma kicked Sakamoto in the rear, and, while sending Sakamoto rolling into the side of the room, Kazuma proclaimed, "~~you~~'re in the way."		Kazuma kicked Sakamoto in the rear, and, while sending Sakamoto rolling into the side of the room, Kazuma proclaimed, "You're in the way."

	He began muttering in a low voice and waved his right hand sideways in a mowing motion. As if being squeezed out by his hand, the raging fire was instantly expelled through the window.		He began muttering in a low voice and waved his right hand sideways in a mowing motion. As if being squeezed out by his hand, the raging fire was instantly expelled through the window.
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	In place of the extinguished fire, wind raged across the room. Kazuma stood quietly and with his hand still in his jacket pocket, directed the wind to erase the flames still remaining in the room.		In place of the extinguished fire, wind raged across the room. Kazuma stood quietly and with his hand still in his jacket pocket, directed the wind to erase the flames still remaining in the room.

	The fight was already over. The youma was unable to even put up any resistance against Kazuma's overwhelming power ~~as it was~~ torn to pieces. All that was left to do was wait for its annihilation.		The fight was already over. The youma was unable to even put up any resistance against Kazuma's overwhelming power while being torn to pieces. All that was left to do was wait for its annihilation.

	"And with this…"		"And with this…"
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	There were no spirit fragments remaining. Kazuma quietly observed the destroyed youma with a calm look.		There were no spirit fragments remaining. Kazuma quietly observed the destroyed youma with a calm look.





	"Finished," Kazuma told Sakamoto. Sakamoto was still lying on the floor, dumbfounded.		"Finished," Kazuma told Sakamoto. Sakamoto was still lying on the floor, dumbfounded.
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	"Pay the money in three days. Otherwise, would you like to regret having ever been born?"		"Pay the money in three days. Otherwise, would you like to regret having ever been born?"

	It was identical to what a criminal would say. Even if it was a mistake, it wasn't the way one would speak to a ~~customer~~.		It was identical to what a criminal would say. Even if it was a mistake, it wasn't the way one would speak to a client.

	However, Sakamoto, realizing the horror of going against Kazuma, didn't even dare to complain.		However, Sakamoto, realizing the horror of going against Kazuma, didn't even dare to complain.
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	Without a word Kazuma approached what appeared to be the ashes of Shinji's remains and trampled on them to Sakamoto's despair. As expected, Sakamoto protested... <!-- Nwms8: Changed 'trampled on them in despair' to 'trampled on them to Sakamoto's despair' since Kazuma would not trample in despair. Also changed 'Sakamoto detested' to 'Sakamoto protested' -->		Without a word Kazuma approached what appeared to be the ashes of Shinji's remains and trampled on them to Sakamoto's despair. As expected, Sakamoto protested... <!-- Nwms8: Changed 'trampled on them in despair' to 'trampled on them to Sakamoto's despair' since Kazuma would not trample in despair. Also changed 'Sakamoto detested' to 'Sakamoto protested' -->

	"Wh-what are you doing!? I don't know what happened between you ~~two~~ but please show some respect for the dead!"		"Wh-what are you doing!? I don't know what happened between the two of you but please show some respect for the dead!"

	"He's not dead..." Kazuma dryly spat the words out and then continued to kick Shinji again and again.		"He's not dead..." Kazuma dryly spat the words out and then continued to kick Shinji again and again.
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	''(I have to tell this to the [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Soushu\|soushu]] as soon as possible…)''		''(I have to tell this to the [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Soushu\|soushu]] as soon as possible…)''

	In a sense, Shinji's unease was on the mark. From that moment, a war to push the Kannagi into the abyss of ruin began.		In a sense, Shinji's unease was right on the mark. From that moment, a war to push the Kannagi into the abyss of ruin began.

	=== Part 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===