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	== Chapter Two - The Sudden Disaster ==		== Chapter Two - The Sudden Disaster ==

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	The miserable condition in front of his eyes, the corpses of Shingo, Takeya and the Fuuga practitioner, seemed just as if it was done by Kazuma.		The miserable condition in front of his eyes, the corpses of Shingo, Takeya and the Fuuga practitioner, seemed just as if it was done by Kazuma.

	The ~~spirita~~ disobeyed the contract? —— Impossible.		The spirits disobeyed the contract? —— Impossible.

	If Kazuma were to hear this kind of situation from someone else, he would have highly doubted the mental state of that person. This was why what just happened was a very irregular situation.		If Kazuma were to hear this kind of situation from someone else, he would have highly doubted the mental state of that person. This was why what just happened was a very irregular situation.

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Black Ice Prince at 09:56, 12 October 2013

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	== Chapter Two - The Sudden Disaster ==		== Chapter Two - The Sudden Disaster ==

	=== 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===

	“Still not ready? How much longer do we have to wait, Hyoue?”		“Still not ready? How much longer do we have to wait, Hyoue?”

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	The person waiting for Hyoue closed his eyes pensively and walked away. Hyoue felt the wind blowing against him. The air was filled with the ''ki'' of the youma and passed beneath Hyoue’s palm like a wind that would swallow anyone. It was already dawn by the time the shredded remains of the three people were discovered. This unbelievably serious situation completely shocked the entire Kannagi clan. The Kannagi clan was undeniably astonished. Before their reflexes could respond, the three defensively-prepared people were killed, without anyone else even being alerted. The Fuuga clan had been summoned in order to better understand the situation. Hyoue had gathered the youma ''ki'' to understand who the enemy was.		The person waiting for Hyoue closed his eyes pensively and walked away. Hyoue felt the wind blowing against him. The air was filled with the ''ki'' of the youma and passed beneath Hyoue’s palm like a wind that would swallow anyone. It was already dawn by the time the shredded remains of the three people were discovered. This unbelievably serious situation completely shocked the entire Kannagi clan. The Kannagi clan was undeniably astonished. Before their reflexes could respond, the three defensively-prepared people were killed, without anyone else even being alerted. The Fuuga clan had been summoned in order to better understand the situation. Hyoue had gathered the youma ''ki'' to understand who the enemy was.




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	Juugo sighed as he muttered this. But despite his tone being so bitter, he was still unable to hide the overflowing love he had for her.		Juugo sighed as he muttered this. But despite his tone being so bitter, he was still unable to hide the overflowing love he had for her.

	=== 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

	It was easy for the information network of the Kannagi clan to find out where Kazuma was.		It was easy for the information network of the Kannagi clan to find out where Kazuma was.

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	Already forgetting to hide himself, this person stood while dumbly staring at Kazuma. As Kazuma turned to leave, he became fearful. “The one we lured was him? The prey we were hunting is this frightening thing——?"		Already forgetting to hide himself, this person stood while dumbly staring at Kazuma. As Kazuma turned to leave, he became fearful. “The one we lured was him? The prey we were hunting is this frightening thing——?"

	=== 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

	“Seriously, Father worries too much. I alone am enough. I don’t know how many times I have repeated this. When will he acknowledge me? Am I that untrustworthy?”		“Seriously, Father worries too much. I alone am enough. I don’t know how many times I have repeated this. When will he acknowledge me? Am I that untrustworthy?”

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	His uncle’s reply already forgotten, Takeshi once again looked at Ayano.		His uncle’s reply already forgotten, Takeshi once again looked at Ayano.



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	Deep within herself, she was submitting to such a type of anger. Ayano had already begun a rampage for revenge.		Deep within herself, she was submitting to such a type of anger. Ayano had already begun a rampage for revenge.

	=== 4 ===		=== Part 4 ===

	In the sky, the ki of a youma suddenly appeared.		In the sky, the ki of a youma suddenly appeared.

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Rava at 00:52, 27 April 2013

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	“Hmm—— earlier, three people had been killed without being ~~notice~~. This is a serious situation!"		“Hmm—— earlier, three people had been killed without being noticed. This is a serious situation!"

	Although they were distant relatives, Ayano quieted after hearing how three people from the family had been killed. The “serious situation” wasn’t the fact that “three people had been killed.” Rather, it was because it was “without being ~~notice~~.”		Although they were distant relatives, Ayano quieted after hearing how three people from the family had been killed. The “serious situation” wasn’t the fact that “three people had been killed.” Rather, it was because it was “without being noticed.”

	This was not some callous sentiment, but it was an understanding of what was of primary importance. For a girl of only sixteen years of age, who had such a strong will and discipline, it was surprising.		This was not some callous sentiment, but it was an understanding of what was of primary importance. For a girl of only sixteen years of age, who had such a strong will and discipline, it was surprising.

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	“You—! Who but Kazuma could have done this...?”		“You—! Who but Kazuma could have done this...?”

	“Yorimichi, please hold your tongue. When you ~~talk~~ like that, it becomes impossible for us to discuss the issue.”		“Yorimichi, please hold your tongue. When you speak like that, it becomes impossible for us to discuss the issue.”

	Genma coolly interrupted Yorimichi's ear-shattering ranting, with a cold look that clearly expressed scorn. The truth is, Genma looked down on Yorimichi from the depths of his heart. To him, Yorimichi was a person who had no strength apart from scheming, yet was chosen as the Suzerain. In Yorimichi’s thirty years as Suzerain, the strength of the Kannagi clan ~~hit~~ rock bottom. Yorimichi's inability to control the representative sword of the Kannagi clan and his inability to pass the sword onto someone else resulted in it being buried deep in the warehouse before Juugo’s succession to the Suzerain position.		Genma coolly interrupted Yorimichi's ear-shattering ranting, with a cold look that clearly expressed his scorn. The truth is, Genma looked down on Yorimichi with disrespect from the depths of his heart. To him, Yorimichi was a person who had no strength apart from scheming, yet was chosen as the Suzerain. In Yorimichi’s thirty years as Suzerain, the strength of the Kannagi clan reached rock bottom. Yorimichi's inability to control the representative sword of the Kannagi clan and his inability to pass the sword onto someone else resulted in it being buried deep in the warehouse before Juugo’s succession to the Suzerain position.

	However, Genma was not thinking about such a foolish item. He believed that the one to succeed the position of Suzerain should be the strongest practitioner of Kannagi. Because of this, he did not hate the current Suzerain, Juugo. Genma understood that his own strength couldn't compare. Previously, he wanted to prepare his son to be the next Suzerain. This was not really a scheme; he just wanted to train and prepare Kazuma to give him the strength to become the next Suzerain.		However, Genma was not thinking about such a foolish item. He believed that the one to succeed the position of Suzerain should be the strongest practitioner of Kannagi. Because of this, he did not hate the current Suzerain, Juugo. Genma understood that his own strength couldn't compare. Previously, he wanted to prepare his son to be the next Suzerain. This was not really a scheme; he just wanted to train and prepare Kazuma to give him the strength to become the next Suzerain.
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	“Hmm—— earlier, three people had been killed without notice. This is a serious situation!"		“Hmm—— earlier, three people had been killed without being notice. This is a serious situation!"

	Although they were distant relatives, Ayano quieted after hearing how three people from the family had been killed. The “serious situation” wasn’t the fact that “three people had been killed.” Rather, it was because it was “without notice.”		Although they were distant relatives, Ayano quieted after hearing how three people from the family had been killed. The “serious situation” wasn’t the fact that “three people had been killed.” Rather, it was because it was “without being notice.”

	This was not some callous sentiment, but it was an understanding of what was of primary importance. For a girl of only sixteen years of age, who had such a strong will and discipline, it was surprising.		This was not some callous sentiment, but it was an understanding of what was of primary importance. For a girl of only sixteen years of age, who had such a strong will and discipline, it was surprising.

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	“I understand that much. But, who did it?!”		“I understand that much. But, who did it?!”

	“If you require a detailed report, I would like you to allow more time,” Hyoue replied indistinctly.		“If you require a detailed report, I would like you to allow me more time,” Hyoue replied indistinctly.

	“Then do it quickly! You and your clan can act...”		“Then do it quickly! You and your clan can act...”

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	“I’m home, [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Otou-sama\|Otou-sama]]! Ehh...? What’s going on?”		“I’m home, [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Otou-sama\|Otou-sama]]! Ehh...? What’s going on?”

	An assertive young teenage girl appeared before the crowd, noticing the mood a moment later. Her long, ~~black~~ hair that almost reached her back flowed along with the movements of her head, representing the blooming of a [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Bishoujo\|bishoujo]]. At that moment, the 'dark and cold' atmosphere completely vanished. Her spiritual energy completely cleansed the room's atmosphere in one breath. The appearance of an unclear enemy who killed family members became muted. The people who had been discussing this situation nonstop now faced a blinding light. Their feelings of discomfort and distress completely vanished.		An assertive young teenage girl appeared before the crowd, noticing the mood a moment later. Her long, pink hair that almost reached her back flowed along with the movements of her head, representing the blooming of a [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Bishoujo\|bishoujo]]. At that moment, the 'dark and cold' atmosphere completely vanished. Her spiritual energy completely cleansed the room's atmosphere in one breath. The appearance of an unclear enemy who killed family members became muted. The people who had been discussing this situation nonstop now faced a blinding light. Their feelings of discomfort and distress completely vanished.

	As if facing the rays of the sun, all movements in the dark ceased to exist. The girl in the doorway, a girl who had the ability to vanquish darkness with spiritual powers not unlike the power of light, was heir of the Suzerain, owner of Enraiha and Juugo’s daughter: Kannagi Ayano.		As if facing the rays of the sun, all movements in the dark ceased to exist. The girl in the doorway, a girl who had the ability to vanquish darkness with spiritual powers not unlike the power of light, was heir of the Suzerain, owner of Enraiha and Juugo’s daughter: Kannagi Ayano.

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	“This was caused by Fuujutsu, and was created by a practitioner who is on a completely different level from my Fuuga clan. This practitioner trapped the three victims in a wind ''kekkai'' and then killed them.”		“This was caused by Fuujutsu, and was created by a practitioner who is on a completely different level from my Fuuga clan. This practitioner trapped the three victims in a wind ''kekkai'' and then killed them.”

	Hyoue’s report was not in the least beneficial. Any practitioner could have easily deduced that from the sight of the incident.		Hyoue’s report was not in the least, beneficial. Any practitioner could have easily deduced that from the sight of the incident.

	“I understand that much. But, who did it?!”		“I understand that much. But, who did it?!”
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	Hyoue bowed to Juugo’s words of gratitude<!-- Sounds too western -->.		Hyoue bowed to Juugo’s words of gratitude<!-- Sounds too western -->.

	“Yes… Thank you very much. I will give instructions to my ~~subordinates as I will now retire…~~.”		“Yes… Thank you very much. I will now give instructions to my subordinates….”

	“Then please, I await your reply, Hyoue.”		“Then please, I await your reply, Hyoue.”
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	The head of the Fuuga clan bowed silently and left.		The head of the Fuuga clan bowed silently and left.

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	The enemy was a Fuujutsu practitioner who loathed the Kannagi clan. Naturally, everyone thought of a certain person who had—coincidentally—just returned to Japan.		The enemy was a Fuujutsu practitioner who loathed the Kannagi clan. Naturally, everyone thought of a certain person who had—coincidentally—just returned to Japan.
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	“It’s Kazuma! He obtained strength for revenge and returned to Japan! My fellow clan members, let us destroy the traitor Kazuma. Find him without delay and kill him!”		“It’s Kazuma! He obtained strength for revenge and returned to Japan! My fellow clan members, let us destroy the traitor Kazuma. Find him without delay and kill him!”

	The person who made such an aggressive comment was the previous Suzerain, Yorimichi. Even though he was retired, he still had the air of a Suzerain. The entire clan loathed him, though he was unaware of ~~this~~.		The person who made such an aggressive comment was the previous Suzerain, Yorimichi. Even though he was retired, he still had the air of a Suzerain. The entire clan loathed him, though he was unaware of it.

	“[[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Chichiue\|Chichiue]], please. We don’t have enough evidence to prove that Kazuma did this.” Juugo said in an attempt to stop Yorimichi's tirade.		“[[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Chichiue\|Chichiue]], please. We don’t have enough evidence to prove that Kazuma did this.” Juugo said in an attempt to stop Yorimichi's tirade.