Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	== Chapter Five - Rescue ==		== Chapter Five - Rescue ==

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	== Chapter Five - Rescue ==		== Chapter Five - Rescue ==
	=== 1 ===
			=== Part 1 ===

	Kazuma and Ayano sat on a wide seat within a side-room, quietly waiting for their arrival in Kyoto via the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shinkansen Shinkansen].		Kazuma and Ayano sat on a wide seat within a side-room, quietly waiting for their arrival in Kyoto via the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shinkansen Shinkansen].
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	The unpleasant atmosphere around them made it difficult to stay in that room.		The unpleasant atmosphere around them made it difficult to stay in that room.



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	Unable to verify her own feelings, Ayano locked her confused thoughts into the depths of her consciousness. She then forced herself to concentrate on sleeping. Within a few seconds, Ayano forgot all about her unhappiness and gave off peaceful breathing sounds.		Unable to verify her own feelings, Ayano locked her confused thoughts into the depths of her consciousness. She then forced herself to concentrate on sleeping. Within a few seconds, Ayano forgot all about her unhappiness and gave off peaceful breathing sounds.



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	Her shout echoed throughout the empty mountains.		Her shout echoed throughout the empty mountains.

	=== 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

	At the same time, Kazuma was gliding thirty meters above the ground.		At the same time, Kazuma was gliding thirty meters above the ground.
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	Kazuma leaped up with that shout.		Kazuma leaped up with that shout.

	=== 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

	The wind was very gentle, yet at the same time forcefully took them up to the skies. They overcame gravity easily, flying past tree branches to an even higher place......		The wind was very gentle, yet at the same time forcefully took them up to the skies. They overcame gravity easily, flying past tree branches to an even higher place......
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	"Now, let round two begin......"		"Now, let round two begin......"



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	Ayano shot murderous stares straight at Kazuma, who was sitting diagonally across from her.		Ayano shot murderous stares straight at Kazuma, who was sitting diagonally across from her.
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			Even though it was impossible not to notice her, Kazuma did not even look at Ayano. He shook his leg comfortably as he skimmed through a magazine he bought from a stall.

			Ayano shifted her view back towards the scenery outside once more.

	She currently felt worse than she ever had in her entire life. Having to work together with Kazuma made her very unhappy. Not to mention that her father, Juugo, seemed to have more faith in Kazuma's abilities rather than hers, which agitated her even more.		She currently felt worse than she ever had in her entire life. Having to work together with Kazuma made her very unhappy. Not to mention that her father, Juugo, seemed to have more faith in Kazuma's abilities rather than hers, which agitated her even more.

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	Ayano shot murderous stares straight at Kazuma, who was sitting diagonally across from her.		Ayano shot murderous stares straight at Kazuma, who was sitting diagonally across from her.
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	~~Even though it was impossible not to notice her, Kazuma did not even look at Ayano. He shook his leg comfortably as he skimmed through a magazine he bought from a stall.~~

	~~Ayano shifted her view back towards the scenery outside once more.~~

	She currently felt worse than she ever had in her entire life. Having to work together with Kazuma made her very unhappy. Not to mention that her father, Juugo, seemed to have more faith in Kazuma's abilities rather than hers, which agitated her even more.		She currently felt worse than she ever had in her entire life. Having to work together with Kazuma made her very unhappy. Not to mention that her father, Juugo, seemed to have more faith in Kazuma's abilities rather than hers, which agitated her even more.

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	Kazuma raised his hands to surrender. He was unable to keep his smile. With a calm fighting spirit and the mental energy to control it, Ren had already began his journey to become a first class Jutsushi.		Kazuma raised his hands to surrender. He was unable to keep his smile. With a calm fighting spirit and the mental energy to control it, Ren had already began his journey to become a first class Jutsushi.

	Kazuma walked past Ren and stopped by Ayano, who was now lying motionless on the floor. Looking down at her, he toyed with a bottle he took out from his hidden pocket.~~<!----------------------------------------Mark------------------------------------------------->~~		Kazuma walked past Ren and stopped by Ayano, who was now lying motionless on the floor. Looking down at her, he toyed with a bottle he took out from his hidden pocket.

	To say that he did it without hesitation would definitely be a lie. ~~This~~ was an extremely rare and valuable medicine; even so, as long as it was for ~~Ren’s~~ growth, he did not mind paying such a price since ~~this thing~~ did not cost him a single cent in the first place.		To say that he did it without hesitation would most definitely be a lie. After all, it was an extremely rare and valuable medicine. But even so, as long as it was for Ren's growth, he did not mind paying such a price, especially since it did not cost him a single cent in the first place.

	He kneeled by ~~Ayano’s~~ side, and ~~planned to place~~ the ~~mouth~~ of the bottle ~~right against the~~ pale lips ~~of Ayano------~~ but gave up in the end. She did not seem to have the strength to even drink it, and ~~to spill~~ the medicine would really be a waste.		He kneeled by Ayano's side and considered tipping the contents of the bottle into Ayano's pale lips, but gave up in the end. She did not seem to have the strength to even drink it, and spilling the medicine would really be a waste.

	Kazuma stretched his hand ~~behind~~ Ayano, and lifted her upper body ~~straight up~~. He drank the medicine himself, ~~and their~~ lips ~~closed together~~ as ~~though~~ his ~~whole~~ body ~~fell on Ayano~~.		Kazuma stretched his hand under Ayano and lifted her upper body. He drank the medicine himself, then closed his lips onto Ayano's as if throwing his entire body onto her.

	“Wah!”		“Wah!”

	From the ~~excess light at the edge~~ of his eyes he could see Ren who was ~~by the~~ side, ~~with his face flushed~~ red yet mesmerized ~~at the same time~~, as Kazuma poured the medicine into ~~Ayano’s mouth~~ by ~~the~~ mouth-to-mouth ~~method~~.		From the corner of his eyes, Kazuma could see Ren, who was at his side, flushing red yet staring, mesmerized, as Kazuma poured the medicine into Ayano's lips by mouth-to-mouth.


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	(~~Hmmm…………~~)		(Hmmm............)

	Ayano first felt warmth~~; something seems~~ to be removing the youki that ~~has invaded~~ her body ~~quickly~~. Heat~~------~~life came back bit by bit.		Ayano first felt warmth. Something seemed to be quickly removing the youki that was invading her body. Heat, or rather, life, came back bit by bit.

	She slowly began ~~to be able~~ to detect the situation ~~outside~~ her. She knew she was being surrounded by a powerful force and that a warm healing spiritual energy was coming in from her lips.		She slowly began to detect the situation around her. She knew she was being surrounded by a powerful force, and that a warm, healing spiritual energy was coming in from her lips.

	Ayano felt ~~that this was~~ someone ~~who~~ had just pulled her back from the gates of death ~~lightly~~, yet ~~strongly at the same time~~.		Ayano felt as if someone had just pulled her back from the gates of death gently, yet powerfully.

	She opened her eyes slowly, and at ~~such a~~ close distance that her ~~focal point was about to focus~~, the one ~~who appeared~~ before her ~~eyes~~ was~~------~~		She opened her eyes slowly, and, at the close distance that her eyes instantly focused on, the one before her was......

	"~~<nowiki>~~~~~</nowiki>~~!"		"......!!!"

	~~Her~~ consciousness became awake in an instant and ~~Ayano~~ used all her strength to push Kazuma away.		Ayano's consciousness became awake in an instant and she used all of her strength to push Kazuma away.

	Kazuma moved away ~~unhurriedly~~, as if he saw through ~~the~~ cute ~~reaction that Ayano gives when she is nervous~~, and stood up ~~in a steady manner~~.		Kazuma moved away lazily, as if he saw through Ayano's cute reactions out of nervousness, and steadily stood up.

	(~~I……I~~ was ~~kissed……~~? ~~Why……~~?)		(I...... I was kissed......? Why......?)

	Ayano ~~used~~ her left hand ~~to press on her lips~~. Her right hand was tightly hugging her own body~~, and just like~~ a weak girl who had just been assaulted by a rapist, she closed her legs tightly and contracted her body.		Ayano pressed her lips with her left hand. Her right hand was tightly hugging her own body. Like a weak girl who had just been assaulted by a rapist, she closed her legs tightly and contracted her body.

	(~~What’s~~ going ~~on……~~?)		(What's going on......?)

	~~Not knowing what was going on, it~~ was impossible to understand the situation.		It was impossible to understand the situation, as she did not know what was going on.

	Maybe ~~it was~~ due to the youki that invaded her, as her memories did not seem to ~~be able to link~~ up. Not ~~only the situation of~~ how she wanted to cut Kazuma with her sword~~, she~~ could not even remember how they met up in the first place.		Maybe due to the youki that had invaded her, her memories did not seem to add up. Not just how she wanted to cut Kazuma with her sword - She could not even remember how they met up in the first place.

	She lifted her head to look at Kazuma suspiciously, who~~, in turn looked~~ back ~~with a calm stare~~ as though he was observing some animal in an experiment. Actually, he was observing how ~~efficient~~ the medicine was, but it was impossible for Ayano to know that.		She lifted her head to look at Kazuma suspiciously, who stared back calmly as though he was observing some animal in an experiment. Actually, he was observing how effective the medicine was, but it was impossible for Ayano to know that.

	Anger began to grow within her. After taking a ~~girl’s~~ kiss~~----a~~ first kiss at that~~------ away~~, the other party did not even seem to have a shred of guilt. She could not accept this ~~kind of thing happening~~ at all.		Anger began to grow within her. After taking away a girl's kiss, and her first kiss at that, the other party did not even seem to have a shred of guilt. She could not accept this at all.

	“What the hell were you doing~~------~~!!”		“What the hell were you doing......!!!”

	“Is that how you talk to your benefactor?”		“Is that how you talk to your benefactor?”

	~~“Huh……”~~		“Huh......?”

	The cold reply weakened ~~Ayano’s~~ attitude. Ren ran over ~~at this time~~ with wet eyes and raised his head to look at Ayano, fighting back ~~his~~ tears.		The cold reply weakened Ayano's attitude. Ren ran over with wet eyes and raised his head to look at Ayano, fighting back tears.

	~~“Nee……Nee~~-~~sama……”~~		“Nee...... Nee-sama......”<!--------------------------------------------Mark------------------------------------------------------->

	The revived Ayano with her body brimming with energy makes it hard to imagine the way she looked when she was about to die earlier. Even her wounds and blood traces disappeared.		The revived Ayano with her body brimming with energy makes it hard to imagine the way she looked when she was about to die earlier. Even her wounds and blood traces disappeared.

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	The characteristic of fire is “aggressive flames”. A strong rage is the key factor of synchronizing with flame spirits. They will never lend their full powers to a human who is usually calm and timid.		The characteristic of fire is “aggressive flames”. A strong rage is the key factor of synchronizing with flame spirits. They will never lend their full powers to a human who is usually calm and timid.

	Only when one possesses great rage, and is able to control that rage, can he be a first rate Enjutsushi.~~<!------------------------------------------------Mark----------------------------------------------------------------------->~~		Only when one possesses great rage, and is able to control that rage, can one be a first rate Enjutsushi.

	~~With a~~ heat ~~so hot it seemed~~ like a metal smelting furnace ~~surrounded the area~~, the flame spirits responded to ~~Ren’s~~ rage and continued to gather.		Filling the area with stifling heat that felt like a metal smelting furnace, the flame spirits responded to Ren's rage and continued to gather.

	“Give me the medicine.”		“Give me the medicine.”

	Ren ordered softly. He had no need to roar now, as he knew very well what he needed to do. If the opponent ~~resists~~, he ~~will~~ have to get the medicine even if he ~~might die~~ in ~~order to get it~~. Whether he ~~succeeds~~ or not ~~is not a problem; this is~~ something he ~~must~~ do.		Ren ordered softly. He had no need to roar now, as he knew very well what he needed to do. If the opponent decided to resist, he would have to get the medicine even if he died in the process. Whether he succeeded or not was inconsequential - This was something he had to do.

	~~“OK------~~ I got it, ~~don’t~~ threaten me anymore.”		“Okay...... I got it, don't threaten me anymore.”

	~~Raising~~ his hands to surrender~~, Kazuma~~ was unable to keep ~~the~~ smile ~~at his mouth~~. ~~Calm~~ fighting spirit and the mental energy to control it, Ren ~~has~~ already ~~begun~~ his journey to become a first class Jutsushi.		Kazuma raised his hands to surrender. He was unable to keep his smile. With a calm fighting spirit and the mental energy to control it, Ren had already began his journey to become a first class Jutsushi.

	~~Going past Ren’s side,~~ Kazuma walked to Ayano who was lying on the floor. Looking down at ~~the motionless Ayano~~, he toyed with a bottle he took out from his hidden pocket.		Kazuma walked past Ren and stopped by Ayano, who was now lying motionless on the floor. Looking down at her, he toyed with a bottle he took out from his hidden pocket.<!----------------------------------------Mark------------------------------------------------->

	To say that he did it without hesitation would definitely be a lie. This was an extremely rare and valuable medicine; even so, as long as it was for Ren’s growth, he did not mind paying such a price since this thing did not cost him a single cent in the first place.		To say that he did it without hesitation would definitely be a lie. This was an extremely rare and valuable medicine; even so, as long as it was for Ren’s growth, he did not mind paying such a price since this thing did not cost him a single cent in the first place.

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