Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter6 - Revision history

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	== Chapter Six - Decisive Battle ==		== Chapter Six - Decisive Battle ==

Black Ice Prince at 10:18, 12 October 2013

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	== Chapter Six - Decisive Battle ==		== Chapter Six - Decisive Battle ==

	=== 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===

	Ksssshaaaaaaaaaaaa......		Ksssshaaaaaaaaaaaa......

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	Ignoring Kazuma's mocking salute, Ayano dashed forward. Though she didn't, and probably wouldn't ever, realize it, the fear that had gripped her was now greatly reduced by this meaningless chat.		Ignoring Kazuma's mocking salute, Ayano dashed forward. Though she didn't, and probably wouldn't ever, realize it, the fear that had gripped her was now greatly reduced by this meaningless chat.



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	A great power, formed of a thousand years of training, is about to awaken...		A great power, formed of a thousand years of training, is about to awaken...

	=== 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

	“Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!”		“Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!”
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	The azure wind begins to swirl like a maelstrom, with Ryuuya at its center. The maelstrom was, of course, Kazuma's creation, utilizing all the wind spirits at his command, and the area it spans can be seen even from outer space.		The azure wind begins to swirl like a maelstrom, with Ryuuya at its center. The maelstrom was, of course, Kazuma's creation, utilizing all the wind spirits at his command, and the area it spans can be seen even from outer space.

	=== 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

	''Slice''		''Slice''
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	With no end to the bickering in sight, and no longer with the strength to stop them, Ren leans against his brother's chest, and slowly gives in to his drowsiness, taking the pleasing sounds of his beloved brother and sister as a lullaby.		With no end to the bickering in sight, and no longer with the strength to stop them, Ren leans against his brother's chest, and slowly gives in to his drowsiness, taking the pleasing sounds of his beloved brother and sister as a lullaby.



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Nwms8: /* 2 */ TsoiLing -> Tsoi Rin to match later chapters

2013-08-16T00:30:30Z

2: TsoiLing -> Tsoi Rin to match later chapters

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	<nowiki>--</nowiki> Did I not seek power because I hate seeing those eyes?		<nowiki>--</nowiki> Did I not seek power because I hate seeing those eyes?

	(~~Tsui-Ling~~...)		(Tsoi Rin...)

	The weak girl that I was unable to protect in the past. No matter how difficult, no matter how painful, the girl who wanted to live on no matter what.		The weak girl that I was unable to protect in the past. No matter how difficult, no matter how painful, the girl who wanted to live on no matter what.

Azelf and Jirachi: /* 1 - 2 */

2010-03-21T01:57:51Z

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	“No problem! I swear to God.”		“No problem! I swear to God.”

	“......Which God?”~~<!---------------------------------------------------Mark------------------------------------------------->~~		“......Which God?”

	Ayano gave him an undisguisedly suspicious ~~look~~, but Kazuma ~~only continued to show~~ his untrustworthy smile ~~and replied~~, ~~”Who knows? Which God I pray to doesn’t matter! I am an unbeliever after all.”~~		Ayano gave him an undisguisedly suspicious glare, but Kazuma simply replies with his untrustworthy smile,

	~~Ayano no longer had the strength~~ to ~~remain angry at this and murmured with her voice heavy in resignation, ”……Enough.~~ I'~~ll leave the support to you~~.”		"Who knows? But it doesn't matter who I pray to! I'm an atheist, after all."

	~~”Leave it to me.”~~		Ayano could no longer stay angry by then, so she merely muttered in despair,

	~~Ignoring Kazuma’s mocking salute, Ayano dashed forward~~. ~~Though she doesn't - and probably wouldn~~'~~t ever - realize it,~~ the ~~fear which had gripped her had been greatly reduced by this meaningless chat~~.		"......Enough. I'll leave the support to you."

			"Leave it to me."

			Ignoring Kazuma's mocking salute, Ayano dashed forward. Though she didn't, and probably wouldn't ever, realize it, the fear that had gripped her was now greatly reduced by this meaningless chat.



	~~Ayano ran towards Ryuuya, but when her target was just a few steps away, Ryuuya suddenly took to the air.~~

	~~“……Huh?”~~

	~~Looking at~~ Ryuuya, ~~who flew past her, Ayano gave~~ a ~~sound~~ of ~~shock~~.		Ayano closed in on Ryuuya, but he took to the air the moment she reached within a few steps of him.

	~~“Idiot! Don’t get outmaneuvered so easily!~~”		“......Huh?”

	~~”You…… Even if you say that……”~~		Ayano gave a sound of shock as she stared after Ryuuya, who had flown past her.

	~~Completely ignoring Ayano, Ryuuya aimed straight for Kazuma, and as he descended he released wind blades at a rapid speed. Kazuma created a strong up flow of air to cancel out the black winds.~~		“Idiot! Don't get outmaneuvered so easily!”

	~~But this is just a feint, the true attack uses a strength beyond human limits~~. ~~A slice executed by claws~~. ~~Raised high above his head, the originally hidden right claw suddenly lashes out~~.		"You...... Even if you say that......"

	~~That attack could easily rip through a human body~~ as ~~though it was cutting a piece of tofu~~. Kazuma, ~~moving forward at an angle, dodges~~ it ~~barely. At~~ the ~~same time, he places his hand lightly on the back of the enemy’s right arm, and slightly diverts its path~~.		Completely ignoring Ayano, Ryuuya aimed straight for Kazuma, showering him with wind blades as he descended. Kazuma met this with a strong updraft, crashing it into the black blades.

	~~His attack hitting nothing but empty air causes~~ Ryuuya ~~to lose~~ his ~~balance and Kazuma immediately takes the opportunity to use his knee to strike at the side of his enemy’s abdomen~~, ~~aiming for the liver. The force of Ryuuya's own momentum, together~~ with a ~~strong explosion~~ of Kazuma's [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#ki\|''ki'']], focused at a single point, makes Ryuuya’s body arc like a bow and throws him back into the air. Following the flying body closely, Kazuma strikes his enemy’s chin with his elbow, moments before it would have touched the ground. Ryuuya’s head is thrown so far backwards he can almost see his own back.		But that was just a feint. Ryuuya suddenly lashed out with his hidden claw, slicing down with demonic strength that could easily rip through a person as if he was a piece of tofu.

	~~Had Ryuuya been a normal person~~, no, ~~even someone as powerful as a wrestler~~, he ~~would have instantly died from such a violent attack. However, to~~ the ~~demonized Ryuuya, it barely does any damage~~.		Kazuma, moving forward at an angle, barely managed to dodge it. As he did so, he lightly took the enemy's right arm and slightly diverted its path.

	~~Instead~~, in mid-flight, Ryuuya ~~uses~~ his momentum ~~and raises~~ his right knee ~~to aim~~ straight for ~~Kazuma’s~~ jaw.		Ryuuya, missing, lost his balance due to the lack of resistance. Kazuma immediately took the opportunity to knee his enemy's liver through the side of his abdomen. This powerful strike, which was coupled with a strong explosion of ki, smashed into Ryuuya, who was still toppling forward, arcing his body like a bow and throwing him back into the air. Chasing the flying body, Kazuma slammed his elbow into the enemy's chin moments before it touched the ground. Ryuuya's head was bent so far back that he could almost see his own back.

			A normal person, or even a powerful wrestler, would have instantly died from such a violent attack. However, the demonized Ryuuya easily shrugged off the damage.

			In fact, in mid-flight, Ryuuya directed his momentum into his right knee, aiming straight for Kazuma's jaw.<!-----------------------------------------------------Mark------------------------------------------------------------->

	Even though the attack came from what should have been a blind spot, to Kazuma, who is synchronized with the wind spirits, there is no such thing. He steps forward, leaning to the left to avoid Ryuuya's knee, grabs the front of Ryuuya’s shirt, at the same time sweeping his left leg horizontally.		Even though the attack came from what should have been a blind spot, to Kazuma, who is synchronized with the wind spirits, there is no such thing. He steps forward, leaning to the left to avoid Ryuuya's knee, grabs the front of Ryuuya’s shirt, at the same time sweeping his left leg horizontally.

Azelf and Jirachi: /* 1 - 1 */

2010-02-28T16:04:00Z

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	~~Ksssshaaaaaaaaaaaa……~~.		Ksssshaaaaaaaaaaaa......

	The forest rustled ~~with unease. Such were~~ the sounds made by the forest inhabitants, ~~which had run~~ away with all their might ~~upon feeling~~ the immense ~~[[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Youki\|''~~youki~~'']]~~. The bugs, which had no means of sensing the danger, were unable to withstand the abnormal pressure and disappeared without a trace. Even animals, unable to escape~~, had come~~ in contact with the youki ~~and instantly perished~~. The sound of their corpses raining out of the trees and littering the forest floor ~~could be heard~~. ~~Though there~~ were no ~~external injuries~~, ~~nonetheless~~ they ~~had~~ all ~~died instantly~~.		The forest rustled uneasily, shifting from the sounds made by the forest inhabitants, who were running away with all their might from the immense youki. The bugs, which had no means of sensing the danger, were unable to withstand the abnormal pressure and disappeared without a trace. Even animals that were unable to escape perished from coming in contact with the youki. The sound of their corpses raining out of the trees and littering the forest floor resounded throughout the forest. There were no visible wounds, yet they were all dead.

	~~Then, all~~ sound ceased. All the youki within Ryuuya was released, and its mere existence ~~had~~ spread death around the world.		All sound ceased. All the youki within Ryuuya was released, and its mere existence spread death around the world.

	~~Facing Ryuuya, who stood there silently,~~ Ayano ~~took up~~ Enraiha. ~~Unable~~ to take ~~even~~ a ~~single~~ step in his direction~~, simply lifting it was all she could do~~. The youki, which felt as though it would freeze her blood, ~~rendered~~ her ~~unable to move~~. And ~~no matter what she tried~~, she could not stop her knees from trembling.		Ayano raised Enraiha to face the silently watching Ryuuya. However, she was unable to do any more than that - She couldn't even take a step in his direction. The youki, which felt as though it would freeze her blood, petrified her. And not only that, she could not stop her knees from trembling.

	An immense fear had gripped ~~Ayano’s~~ soul. It was difficult enough to ~~just~~ force herself to stand there without running away~~; to advance would have been~~ impossible.		An immense fear had gripped Ayano's soul. It was difficult enough just to force herself to stand there without running away - Advancing was impossible.

	Ayano had inherited Enraiha at the age of twelve, ~~when she was still young. It~~ might have been a mistake. Because of this, Ayano had never fought an enemy more powerful than herself. ~~For someone who~~ always ~~defeated~~ her enemies with brute strength, there was no way for her to ~~make confident combat decisions~~ when she was the one at a disadvantage.		Ayano had inherited Enraiha at the young age of twelve, which might have been a mistake. Because of this, Ayano had never fought an enemy more powerful than herself. Since she was always able to defeat her enemies with brute strength, there was no way for her to fight strategically when she was the one at a disadvantage.

	To put it simply, after suffering her first defeat, Ayano ~~had not been able~~ to find the courage to go up against Ryuuya.		To put it simply, after suffering her first defeat, Ayano was unable to find the courage to go up against Ryuuya.

	“What are you doing? Go on!” ~~Kazuma said to the trembling Ayano.~~		“What are you doing? Go on!”

	~~“Don’t worry! I am with you~~.”		Kazuma said to the trembling Ayano. He continued,

	~~”How can I not~~ worry?!” ~~Ayano retorted angrily.~~		“Don't worry! I'll be with you.”

	"How ~~dare he say 'don’t~~ worry~~' so simply~~?"		"How can I not worry?!"

	~~“There is no reason to run, now is there? Therefore, I won~~'t ~~run this time. Trust me.”~~		Ayano retorted angrily. How dare this man say "Don't worry" so casually?

	~~Who could trust someone who had just said “he would~~ run ~~if there was a reason”~~? ~~Ayano stared back to see Kazuma smiling deviously~~.		“There's no reason to run now, right? I won't run this time. Trust me.”

	~~“This…… This is the last time~~. ~~If you dare to betray me again, before I die, I will kill you!”~~		Who could trust someone who just said "I'll run if there's a reason"? Ayano stared back to see Kazuma smiling deviously.

	~~“No problem~~, I ~~swear to God.~~”		“This...... This is the last time. If you betray me again, I'll kill you first!”

	~~“……God? Which one?~~”		“No problem! I swear to God.”

	Ayano gave him an undisguisedly suspicious look, but Kazuma only continued to show ~~that~~ smile ~~that couldn't be trusted~~ and replied, ”Who knows? Which God I pray to doesn’t matter! I am an unbeliever after all.”		“......Which God?”<!---------------------------------------------------Mark------------------------------------------------->

			Ayano gave him an undisguisedly suspicious look, but Kazuma only continued to show his untrustworthy smile and replied, ”Who knows? Which God I pray to doesn’t matter! I am an unbeliever after all.”

	Ayano no longer had the strength to remain angry at this and murmured with her voice heavy in resignation, ”……Enough. I'll leave the support to you.”		Ayano no longer had the strength to remain angry at this and murmured with her voice heavy in resignation, ”……Enough. I'll leave the support to you.”

Dyne: /* Poor word choice. old meaning = no way to ultimately win the fight. new way = not able to win a long fight */

2009-10-01T18:29:55Z

Poor word choice. old meaning = no way to ultimately win the fight. new way = not able to win a long fight

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	Kazuma could feel the end of the road looming.		Kazuma could feel the end of the road looming.

	Even when combining their powers, they had been unable to deliver Ryuuya a fatal blow. Though they currently appeared to hold the advantage, there was no way to win ~~to in the long run~~.		Even when combining their powers, they had been unable to deliver Ryuuya a fatal blow. Though they currently appeared to hold the advantage, there was no way to win a prolonged fight.

	There had never been a human that could exceed the youma in terms of physical stamina. This was because the youma possessed minds far surpassing their bodies, and could easily overcome their bodies limitations through sheer willpower.		There had never been a human that could exceed the youma in terms of physical stamina. This was because the youma possessed minds far surpassing their bodies, and could easily overcome their bodies limitations through sheer willpower.

Dyne: /* more grammar */

2009-10-01T18:15:29Z

more grammar

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	“Ahhhhhh……ah?”		“Ahhhhhh……ah?”

	But at precisely this moment, a cold gust of wind blows past his body, cooling his ~~and~~ and calming his madness in an instant. The youth, shocked, turns to look in the direction the wind originated from.		But at precisely this moment, a cold gust of wind blows past his body, cooling his head and calming his madness in an instant. The youth, shocked, turns to look in the direction the wind originated from.

	Kazuma was looking attentively at his brother. Basking in those clear eyes, Ren returns to normal.		Kazuma was looking attentively at his brother. Basking in those clear eyes, Ren returns to normal.
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	“I, as a member of Kannagi main family, declare! Hyoue Kazamaki: the many lives that you've taken away shall now be repaid with your own!” surrounded by that blurry glow, Ren says loudly.		“I, as a member of Kannagi main family, declare! Hyoue Kazamaki: the many lives that you've taken away shall now be repaid with your own!” surrounded by that blurry glow, Ren says loudly.

	Faced with tiny body that yet unleashes an immense pressure, Hyoue curls up in fear.		Faced with a tiny body that yet unleashes an immense pressure, Hyoue curls up in fear.

	This is the descendant of a respected and powerful bloodline. The top of the En-jutsushis, a rightful son of the Kannagi.		This is the descendant of a respected and powerful bloodline. The top of the En-jutsushis, a rightful son of the Kannagi.

Dyne: /* fixed some gramatical errors */

2009-10-01T17:58:58Z

fixed some gramatical errors

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	Ayano ~~rans~~ towards Ryuuya, but when her target was just a few steps away, Ryuuya suddenly took to the air.		Ayano ran towards Ryuuya, but when her target was just a few steps away, Ryuuya suddenly took to the air.

	“……Huh?”		“……Huh?”
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	”You…… Even if you say that……”		”You…… Even if you say that……”

	Completely ignoring Ayano, Ryuuya aimed straight for Kazuma, and as he descended he released wind blades at a rapid speed. Kazuma ~~createed~~ a strong ~~upflow~~ of air to cancel out the black winds.		Completely ignoring Ayano, Ryuuya aimed straight for Kazuma, and as he descended he released wind blades at a rapid speed. Kazuma created a strong up flow of air to cancel out the black winds.

	But this is just a feint, the true attack uses a strength beyond human limits. A slice executed by claws. Raised high above his head, the originally hidden right claw suddenly lashes out.		But this is just a feint, the true attack uses a strength beyond human limits. A slice executed by claws. Raised high above his head, the originally hidden right claw suddenly lashes out.
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	His attack hitting nothing but empty air causes Ryuuya to lose his balance and Kazuma immediately takes the opportunity to use his knee to strike at the side of his enemy’s abdomen, aiming for the liver. The force of Ryuuya's own momentum, together with a strong explosion of Kazuma's [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#ki\|''ki'']], focused at a single point, makes Ryuuya’s body arc like a bow and throws him back into the air. Following the flying body closely, Kazuma strikes his enemy’s chin with his elbow, moments before it would have touched the ground. Ryuuya’s head is thrown so far backwards he can almost see his own back.		His attack hitting nothing but empty air causes Ryuuya to lose his balance and Kazuma immediately takes the opportunity to use his knee to strike at the side of his enemy’s abdomen, aiming for the liver. The force of Ryuuya's own momentum, together with a strong explosion of Kazuma's [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#ki\|''ki'']], focused at a single point, makes Ryuuya’s body arc like a bow and throws him back into the air. Following the flying body closely, Kazuma strikes his enemy’s chin with his elbow, moments before it would have touched the ground. Ryuuya’s head is thrown so far backwards he can almost see his own back.

	Had Ryuuya been a normal person, no, even someone as powerful as a wrestler, he would ~~yet~~ have instantly died from such a violent attack. However, to the demonized Ryuuya, it barely does any damage.		Had Ryuuya been a normal person, no, even someone as powerful as a wrestler, he would have instantly died from such a violent attack. However, to the demonized Ryuuya, it barely does any damage.

	Instead, in mid-flight, Ryuuya uses his momentum and raises his right knee to aim straight for Kazuma’s jaw.		Instead, in mid-flight, Ryuuya uses his momentum and raises his right knee to aim straight for Kazuma’s jaw.

Dagger: /* 1 */

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	”Leave it to me.”		”Leave it to me.”

	Ignoring Kazuma’s mocking salute, Ayano dashed forward. Though she doesn't - and probably wouldn't ever - realize it, the fear which had gripped her ~~has~~ been greatly reduced by this meaningless chat.		Ignoring Kazuma’s mocking salute, Ayano dashed forward. Though she doesn't - and probably wouldn't ever - realize it, the fear which had gripped her had been greatly reduced by this meaningless chat.