Kaze no Stigma:Volume2 Chapter 4 - Revision history

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	==Chapter Four - Fall – The price for power- ==		==Chapter Four - Fall – The price for power- ==

	=== 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===

	(Caught you……)		(Caught you……)

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	She can’t help but begin to complain.		She can’t help but begin to complain.

	=== 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

	“Ta…… Takeshi!?”		“Ta…… Takeshi!?”
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	Looking at the girl who is single-mindedly and greedily seeking move vigor, the youth asks happily from deep within his heart.		Looking at the girl who is single-mindedly and greedily seeking move vigor, the youth asks happily from deep within his heart.

	=== 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

	Seeing the shadow of Kazuma, Ayano shrinks her body at that moment.		Seeing the shadow of Kazuma, Ayano shrinks her body at that moment.
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	“Idiot……”		“Idiot……”


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	Her entire body could not stop trembling. Once again she has experienced first-hand, that she must never become the enemy of this man, Kazuma.		Her entire body could not stop trembling. Once again she has experienced first-hand, that she must never become the enemy of this man, Kazuma.

	Even so, she still ~~must~~ eliminate Misao. If she ~~doesn’t~~, then the Kannagi clan ~~will~~ lose the meaning of their existence.		Even so, she must still eliminate Misao. If she didn’t, then the Kannagi clan would lose the meaning of their existence.

	“Just what do you expect me to do……”		“Just what do you expect me to do……”

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	Raging strong winds constantly trample upon Kazuma’s body, yet Kazuma still carries a fearless smile on his face.		Raging strong winds constantly trample upon Kazuma’s body, yet Kazuma still carries a fearless smile on his face.

	He controls the speed and direction of his fall, and flies to the side of Ikebukuro central park. He lowers his speed, adjusting it to approximately the speed of a fall from the second ~~storey~~ and lands gradually.		He controls the speed and direction of his fall, and flies to the side of Ikebukuro central park. He lowers his speed, adjusting it to approximately the speed of a fall from the second story and lands gradually.

	Right before the “enemy”.		Right before the “enemy”.

84.58.141.9: /* 3 */

2008-11-28T23:12:35Z

84.58.141.9: /* To be killed because of Kazuma------ This is probably the explanation of only those who hate Kazuma would have.---wtf? does not compute, retranslate.*/

2008-11-28T22:48:49Z

To be killed because of Kazuma------ This is probably the explanation of only those who hate Kazuma would have.---wtf? does not compute, retranslate.

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	A hearty laugher came into her ears. Lifting her head, a man came at the centre of her view, mocking them.		A hearty laugher came into her ears. Lifting her head, a man came at the centre of her view, mocking them.

	Yagami Kazuma------ That is the name of her hateful enemy, he person who took everything away from her.		Yagami Kazuma------ That is the name of her hateful enemy, the person who took everything away from her.

	This is the first time Ogami Misao has hated someone so much, so much so that she hopes for him to die. Fantasizing herself stained with the blood spilt by Kazuma made her feel joy.		This is the first time Ogami Misao has hated someone so much, so much so that she hopes for him to die. Fantasizing herself stained with the blood spilt by Kazuma made her feel joy.

Zeferion at 08:55, 19 November 2008

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ShadowZeroHeart: /* Chapter Four - Fall – The price for power- */

2008-11-11T13:46:50Z

Chapter Four - Fall – The price for power-

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	Even if Ayano or Kazuma is to punish Misao, this responsibility is not to be lie on Misao alone. The Ogami family will definitely be dragged in as well!		Even if Ayano or Kazuma is to punish Misao, this responsibility is not to be lie on Misao alone. The Ogami family will definitely be dragged in as well!

	Ogami ~~Makayuki~~ intends to punish his daughter who has committed a forbidden and grave mistake by his very own hands, so as to clear the name of the Ogami.		Ogami Masayuki intends to punish his daughter who has committed a forbidden and grave mistake by his very own hands, so as to clear the name of the Ogami.

	This may be his wishful thinking, but logically it makes sense. As long as he bring up the excuse that “as the duty of her parents”, there is probably no one who can refute him.		This may be his wishful thinking, but logically it makes sense. As long as he bring up the excuse that “as the duty of her parents”, there is probably no one who can refute him.

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	Seeing the shadow of Kazuma, Ayano shrinks her body at that moment.		Seeing the shadow of Kazuma, Ayano shrinks her body at that moment.

	Juugo ~~find~~ it very strange and looks at her with eerie eyes, but looks back at Kazuma after that.		Juugo thinks it to be very strange and looks at her with eerie eyes, but looks back at Kazuma after that.

	Kazuma’s attitude is the same as always. Regarding Ayano who seems unsettled, he does not even bother to look at her, his eyes looking directly at Juugo.		Kazuma’s attitude is the same as always. Regarding Ayano who seems unsettled, he does not even bother to look at her, his eyes looking directly at Juugo.
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	She looks at Kazuma. The usual satirizing smile is not on his face, in replacement, it is an expression of mockery, insult------ and anger.		She looks at Kazuma. The usual satirizing smile is not on his face, in replacement, it is an expression of mockery, insult------ and anger.

	“------That is enough. Just because he intends to finish his daughter by his own hands, so he hopes that this ugly news will be forgotten? And you accepted this proposal?”		“------That is enough. Just because he intends to finish his daughter with his own hands, he hopes that this ugly news will be forgotten? And you accepted this proposal?”

	“------ There is no choice, we cannot just cut our relations with the Ogami.”		“------ There is no choice, we cannot just cut our relations with the Ogami.”
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	Hearing the two’s straight conversation, Ayano finally understood the situation now.		Hearing the two’s straight conversation, Ayano finally understood the situation now.

	What Misao has done is clearly unforgivable. That is not to say that taking a gun to start a terrorist attack can be forgiven, but that is just a normal crime, and can ~~just~~ be settled by the police.		What Misao has done is clearly unforgivable. That is not to say that taking a gun to start a terrorist attack can be forgiven, but that is just a normal crime, and can be settled just by the police.

	But, as a Jutsushi who is meant to exorcise youma, to degenerate into a youma herself. The seriousness of this matter is something the previous example cannot be compared with, as this is a grave matter that can lead to the life or death of a clan.		But, as a Jutsushi who is meant to exorcise youma, to degenerate into a youma herself. The seriousness of this matter is something the previous example cannot be compared with, as this is a grave matter that can lead to the life or death of a clan.

	Even if Ayano or Kazuma is to punish Misao, this responsibility is not to be ~~lie~~ on ~~Misao~~ alone. The Ogami family will definitely be dragged in as well!		Even if Ayano or Kazuma were to punish Misao, this responsibility is not to be on Misao’s alone. The Ogami family will definitely be dragged in as well!

	Ogami Masayuki intends to punish his daughter who has committed a forbidden and grave mistake by his very own hands, so as to clear the name of the Ogami.		Ogami Masayuki intends to punish his daughter who has committed a forbidden and grave mistake by his very own hands, so as to clear the name of the Ogami.

	This may be his wishful thinking, but logically it makes sense. As long as he ~~bring~~ up the excuse that ~~“as~~ the duty of her parents”, there is probably no one who can ~~refute~~ him.		This may be his wishful thinking, but logically it makes sense. As long as he brings up the excuse that “it is the duty of her parents”, there is probably no one who can refuse him.

	(So in this case…… Kazuma must be very angry……)		(So in this case…… Kazuma must be very angry……)
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	From what Kazuma knows, the children of Masayuki are only Takeya, Misao and Takeshi. Masato was not even married.		From what Kazuma knows, the children of Masayuki are only Takeya, Misao and Takeshi. Masato was not even married.

	So assuming that they did not find any ~~illegimate~~ children within these four years, there is no one to take up the title of the next head of the Ogami.		So assuming that they did not find any illegitimate children within these four years, there is no one to take up the title of the next head of the Ogami.

	However, Ayano toppled such a mindset.		However, Ayano toppled such a mindset.

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	“I never dreamt that you would find this place, the searching capabilities of a Fuu-jutsushi is really impressive.”		“I never dreamt that you would find this place, the searching capabilities of a Fuu-jutsushi are really impressive.”

	As if chatting casually, Misao smiles at Kazuma. Maybe because she is at ease in her heart, causing her to seem as though she has no intentions of getting up from that bench. Or maybe she already saw that Kazuma has no intentions of fighting!		As if chatting casually, Misao smiles at Kazuma. Maybe because she is at ease in her heart, causing her to seem as though she has no intentions of getting up from that bench. Or maybe she already saw that Kazuma has no intentions of fighting.

	In fact, it is very rare to see Kazuma being unable to decide what actions to take like now.		In fact, it is very rare to see Kazuma being unable to decide what actions to take like now.
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	Frankly speaking, he is out of ideas now. He has absolutely no idea how to stop Misao without killing her.		Frankly speaking, he is out of ideas now. He has absolutely no idea how to stop Misao without killing her.

	There is nothing left to be said between the two, and so the two ~~stares~~ at each other silently------ Alas, the still tension in the area was broken immediately.		There is nothing left to be said between the two, and so the two stare at each other silently------ Alas, the still tension in the area was broken immediately.

	“Is this the place!?”		“Is this the place!?”

	A loud and clear voice sounded off in the area, together with a crimson red divine aura ~~announced~~ the arrival of a divine descendent of flames. An astonishing power like the sun swept away all the youki in the park.		A loud and clear voice sounded off in the area, together with a crimson red divine aura announcing the arrival of a divine descendent of flames. An astonishing power like the sun swept away all the youki in the park.

	Kazuma turns his head slightly, and uses one corner of his eye to look at her valiant appearance. She------ Ayano Kannagi seems more courageous than usual, it makes one want to clap to praise her.		Kazuma turns his head slightly, and uses one corner of his eye to look at her valiant appearance. She------ Ayano Kannagi seems more courageous than usual, it makes one want to clap to praise her.
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	“How…… How can this……”		“How…… How can this……”

	Ayano’s eyes ~~stares~~ hard at Misao as she shakes her head weakly.		Ayano’s eyes stare hard at Misao as she shakes her head weakly.

	To her, this is perhaps the worst situation, much worse than any nightmare. As a member of a clan that ~~exorcises~~ as an occupation, an En-jutsushi that manipulates the purifying flames, Misao ironically became the youma that they must defeat.		To her, this is perhaps the worst situation, much worse than any nightmare. As a member of a clan that does exorcising as an occupation, an En-jutsushi that manipulates the purifying flames, Misao ironically became the youma that they must defeat.

	On the other hand, Misao no longer takes note of this newly arrived character after a few seconds. She let Ayano who has yet to recover from the shock to become part of the background, and focuses on Kazuma.		On the other hand, Misao no longer takes note of this newly arrived character after a few seconds. She let Ayano who has yet to recover from the shock become part of the background, and focuses on Kazuma.

	A never-changing smile. Looking clear and pure, a simple smile that bears only one emotion.		A never-changing smile. Looking clear and pure, a simple smile that bears only one emotion.
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	To be killed because of Kazuma------ This is probably the explanation of only those who hate Kazuma would have.		To be killed because of Kazuma------ This is probably the explanation of only those who hate Kazuma would have.

	But, Kazuma ignores the irony within, and asks calmly:		But, Kazuma ignores the irony within, and asks calmly:

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	”No matter how powerful you may be, you are still only a human. As long as I continue taking in the vigor of hundreds or thousands of people, my power will definitely surpass yours.”		”No matter how powerful you may be, you are still only a human. As long as I continue taking in the vigor of hundreds or thousands of people, my power will definitely surpass yours.”

	“……Doesn’t matter, as long as you can control it.”		“……Doesn’t matter, as long as you can not control it.”

	“I can. I only need to take in enough to defeat you. After this is over, it doesn’t matter what I become.”		“I can. I only need to take in enough to defeat you. After this is over, it doesn’t matter what I become.”

	This is not the encouraging tone that one would have when making a declaration. Even though she challenged a Jutsushi ~~powerful as Kazuma~~, Misao does not seem agitated at all.		This is not the encouraging tone that one would have when making a declaration. Even though she challenged Kazuma, such a powerful Jutsushi, Misao does not seem agitated at all.

	But, can this really be considered a clear and still state of mind? After draining the life of others to obtain power, can she really laugh it out?		But, can this really be considered a clear and still state of mind? After draining the life of others to obtain power, can she really laugh it out?
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	Kazuma does not know how to express his feelings now. He exaggeratedly swallows his saliva, and looks at the big face that swallowed Ayano up.		Kazuma does not know how to express his feelings now. He exaggeratedly swallows his saliva, and looks at the big face that swallowed Ayano up.

	Because it was too spectacular, he was unable to say anything at all. This kamikaze attack style is just like Ayano. Maybe he should worry about her, but things having become the way ~~it is~~ now, it is very comical------ In fact, he can only laugh.		Because it was too spectacular, he was unable to say anything at all. This kamikaze attack style is just like Ayano. Maybe he should worry about her, but things having become the way they are now, it is very comical------ In fact, he can only laugh.

	But, laughing will not solve all the problems at hand. Kazuma gives a dry laugh for a while, and then leisurely begins to summon the wind.		But, laughing will not solve all the problems at hand. Kazuma gives a dry laugh for a while, and then leisurely begins to summon the wind.
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	Kazuma grumbles in a tired voice, and sat down at a bench nearby.		Kazuma grumbles in a tired voice, and sat down at a bench nearby.

	At the same time, Ayano’s scent suddenly appeared. The distance is a little far------ But, Kazuma has no intentions of ~~traveling~~ specially to welcome her.		At the same time, Ayano’s scent suddenly appeared. The distance is a little far------ But, Kazuma has no intentions of travelling specially to welcome her.

	(Anyway she will definitely be angry again.)		(Anyway she will definitely be angry again.)
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	The place Ayano was thrown off, is on the other side of the station. Even though the direct distance is not even three kilometers, but with confusing paths and many traffic lights, it is not that easy to pass through.		The place Ayano was thrown off, is on the other side of the station. Even though the direct distance is not even three kilometers, but with confusing paths and many traffic lights, it is not that easy to pass through.

	Yet Ayano reached here in less than ten minutes. From this it is easily seen that, be it the question about her physical fitness or traffic morals, she ~~have~~ tossed them at the far ends of her mind.		Yet Ayano reached here in less than ten minutes. From this it is easily seen that, be it the question about her physical fitness or traffic morals, she had tossed them to the far ends of her mind.

	Seeing Ayano who is panting continuously, Kazuma says in his regular tone:		Seeing Ayano who is panting continuously, Kazuma says in his regular tone:
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	“------Where are you going?”		“------Where are you going?”

	“Home. She will probably not come out again today?”		“Home. She will probably not come out again today.”

	Against the back of that man leaving as if nothing happened, Ayano uses a nervous voice to declare:		Against the back of that man leaving as if nothing happened, Ayano uses a nervous voice to declare:
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	Her entire body could not stop trembling. Once again she has experienced first-hand, that she must never become the enemy of this man, Kazuma.		Her entire body could not stop trembling. Once again she has experienced first-hand, that she must never become the enemy of this man, Kazuma.

	Even so, she still must eliminate Misao. If she ~~don’t~~, then the Kannagi will lose the meaning of existence.		Even so, she still must eliminate Misao. If she doesn’t, then the Kannagi will lose the meaning of existence.

	“Just what do you expect me to do……”		“Just what do you expect me to do……”

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	The monster that covers the entire floor completely were packed up to two meters in height, forming an area that could be called a sea of goo.		The monster that covers the entire floor completely were packed up to two meters in height, forming an area that could be called a sea of goo.

	The slime that stretches out from within like tentacles are tangling on a statue of Jesus pinned on a cross. This scene is disrespectful to God that it would make a faithful believer ~~faith~~ upon seeing this.		The slime that stretches out from within like tentacles are tangling on a statue of Jesus pinned on a cross. This scene is disrespectful to God that it would make a faithful believer faint upon seeing this.

	At the bottom of this sea of goo, Misao is floating within, naked. Maybe because ~~that~~ she is still dreaming, her expression gets distorted from sadness from time to time.		At the bottom of this sea of goo, Misao is floating within, naked. Maybe because she is still dreaming, her expression gets distorted from sadness from time to time.

	It has been over a week since this kind of dream has begun. A dream mixed with both fantasies and reality, is slowly and gradually invading ~~into~~ Misao’s consciousness.		It has been over a week since this kind of dream has begun. A dream mixed with both fantasies and reality, is slowly and gradually invading Misao’s consciousness.

	Which part is real, which part is but a fantasy, Misao cannot differentiate clearly anymore. She only hates Kazuma, the Kazuma who took away her precious family members from her------		Which part is real, which part is but a fantasy, Misao cannot differentiate clearly anymore. She only hates Kazuma, the Kazuma who took away her precious family members from her------
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	Misao who is unable to find an answer, lifts her head and uses begging eyes to look at the youth.		Misao who is unable to find an answer, lifts her head and uses begging eyes to look at the youth.

	Before her eyes lie a being beyond any, giving off a holy glow from all around his body. Despite how young he ~~seem~~ from the outside, the wisdom hidden within his eyes are beyond measure, showing a dignified figure worshipped by thousands.		Before her eyes lie a being beyond any, giving off a holy glow from all around his body. Despite how young he seems to be from the outside, the wisdom hidden within his eyes are beyond measure, showing a dignified figure worshipped by thousands.

	Just questioning ~~him~~ whether his words are true seems like a disrespectful act.		Just questioning whether his words are true seems like a disrespectful act.

	There was no need to consider, as he is an existence that stands above all man. That absolute will of heaven allows no arguments, ~~man~~ should just follow the orders blindly------		There was no need to consider, as he is an existence that stands above all man. That absolute will of heaven allows no arguments, Man should just follow the orders blindly------

	Misao does not know at all, that this is not the first time she has met this youth, nor the fact that her memories has been changed countless times already.		Misao does not know at all, that this is not the first time she has met this youth, nor the fact that her memories has been changed countless times already.
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	“What is the matter, Misao? Don’t you want power?”		“What is the matter, Misao? Don’t you want power?”

	The youth continues to ~~well~~ a kind and loving smile, constantly seducing her with the forbidden method of consuming her own kind. Misao lifts her head to look at the youth, her eyes were those of fear.		The youth continues to wear a kind and loving smile, constantly seducing her with the forbidden method of consuming her own kind. Misao lifts her head to look at the youth, her eyes were those of fear.

	(B…… But…… This is……)		(B…… But…… This is……)
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	(Power…… I need even more power!)		(Power…… I need even more power!)

	Her hatred for Kazuma grows inflates consistently, logic and views being ripped off entirely. Massive power continues flowing into that unstable mind.		Her hatred for Kazuma grows and inflates consistently, logic and views being ripped off entirely. Massive power continues flowing into that unstable mind.

	If it was an average person, he would have had a mental breakdown long ago, and to not even be able to maintain the shape of a human. Even for Misao, ~~she~~ is merely using her desire for revenge against Kazuma to support her, ~~and~~ is barely able to maintain consciousness.		If it was an average person, he would have had a mental breakdown long ago, and not even be able to maintain the shape of a human. Even for Misao, who is merely using her desire for revenge against Kazuma to support her, is barely able to maintain consciousness.

	“Not bad, to actually not breakdown yet. The Kannagi bloodline is really not to be underestimated.”		“Not bad, to actually not breakdown yet. The Kannagi bloodline is really not to be underestimated.”
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	His large eyes squints to a line, from those eyes, a glow similar to that of a carnivore was reflected within.		His large eyes squints to a line, from those eyes, a glow similar to that of a carnivore was reflected within.

	But that was just for an instant, those green eyes returned to their original shine instantly. Those eyes are just that a kid that knows not of ~~other’s~~ suffering, with innocence and cruelty mixed together at the same time.		But that was just for an instant, those green eyes returned to their original shine instantly. Those eyes are just that of a kid that knows not of the suffering of others, with innocence and cruelty mixed together at the same time.

	“Misao------ Since your child wants to take revenge, as parents you should help out too. Don’t you think so?”		“Misao------ Since your child wants to take revenge, as parents you should help out too. Don’t you think so?”
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	“------Huh? W……Why?”		“------Huh? W……Why?”

	“Misao’s punishment, will be conducted ~~under~~ the ~~lead~~ of the Ogami. This has been decided.”		“Misao’s punishment, will be conducted with the leadership of the Ogami. This has been decided.”

	Juugo ~~bans~~ all objections with a tone that does not allow any doubt.		Juugo disregards all objections with a tone that does not allow any doubt.

	Ayano who is at a loss lifts her head to look at her father, but her father seems to have no intentions of continuing to explain.		Ayano, who is at a loss, lifts her head to look at her father, but her father seems to have no intentions of continuing to explain.

	She looks at Kazuma. The usual satirizing smile is not on his face, in replacement, it is an expression of mockery, insult------ and anger.		She looks at Kazuma. The usual satirizing smile is not on his face, in replacement, it is an expression of mockery, insult------ and anger.
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	“Oh------ That is really……”		“Oh------ That is really……”

	Maybe he felt that he is getting old, that is why Kazuma ~~has~~ such an emotional reply.		Maybe he felt that he was getting old, that is why Kazuma had such an emotional reply.

	“Maybe I should have sent his wife a bouquet of flowers?”		“Maybe I should have sent his wife a bouquet of flowers?”
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	“It doesn’t concern you.”		“It doesn’t concern you.”

	A very cold reply. The paper door as if to ~~lock~~ further questions, closes coldly.		A very cold reply. The paper door, as if to obstruct further questions, closes coldly.

	Hearing the footsteps that leave gradually, Ayano curses softly:		Hearing the footsteps that leave gradually, Ayano curses softly: