Kaze no Stigma:Volume5 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Krossrd: /* Part 3 */

2014-02-08T06:45:21Z

Part 3

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	"S - slicing light using wind.....?"		"S - slicing light using wind.....?"

	If he were to explain the spectacle generated in front of him, that's the only explanation he could ~~thing~~ of.		If he were to explain the spectacle generated in front of him, that's the only explanation he could think of.

	Everything else was impossible. But, even so -		Everything else was impossible. But, even so -

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	"T - That's right! I'm sorry for making you come all this way for nothing. B - But I'll cooperate with you! I have friends who know things! So -"		"T - That's right! I'm sorry for making you come all this way for nothing. B - But I'll cooperate with you! I have friends who know things! So -"

	"I don't ~~thing~~ he would behave so stupidly that even shit like you would realize. But, at least a clue must have remained inside you"		"I don't think he would behave so stupidly that even shit like you would realize. But, at least a clue must have remained inside you"

	Ignoring Kou's words, frantically flattering him, Kazuma took out a black glove. He wore it on left hand. Inside the very dim light, it seemed Kazuma's left hand disappeared.		Ignoring Kou's words, frantically flattering him, Kazuma took out a black glove. He wore it on left hand. Inside the very dim light, it seemed Kazuma's left hand disappeared.

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	"Something like that doesn't matter. What I am interested right now is your pain and you screams in the agony of death, only that. I think it's obvious - "		"Something like that doesn't matter. What I am interested right now is your pain and you screams in the agony of death, only that. I think it's obvious - "

	~~from~~ his warped lips, white fangs showed. The quiet insanity dwelling in those golden pupils. The Kehai of a devilish, inhuman person -		From his warped lips, white fangs showed. The quiet insanity dwelling in those golden pupils. The Kehai of a devilish, inhuman person -

	"Don't worry, I won't let you die"		"Don't worry, I won't let you die"

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2013-10-28T07:35:57Z

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Antanaru: /* Part 4 */ Spacing

2013-10-18T07:21:25Z

Part 4: Spacing

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	"Yo"		"Yo"

	" - huh? "		" - huh?"

	His shoulder abruptly clapped from behind, Isurughi Daiki's body shook.		His shoulder abruptly clapped from behind, Isurughi Daiki's body shook.
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	Containing the fact he had been frightened, with a tone full of criticism, Daiki called out the man's name.		Containing the fact he had been frightened, with a tone full of criticism, Daiki called out the man's name.

	"What have you done until now? You made the Chief be worried about you! "		"What have you done until now? You made the Chief be worried about you!"

	"That so? I thought about showing my face around here, though"		"That so? I thought about showing my face around here, though"
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	That attitude, so very usual, secretly made Daiki relieved.		That attitude, so very usual, secretly made Daiki relieved.

	''"What, isn't he completely alright? "''		''"What, isn't he completely alright?"''

	''''Don't make eye contact''''		''''Don't make eye contact''''
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	A dangerous presence was not to be found.		A dangerous presence was not to be found.

	''"I should tell the Chief when she returns. That "There's no need to worry". "''		''"I should tell the Chief when she returns. That "There's no need to worry."''

	Even though a policeman, Daiki was nothing more but a newbie who had only just been assigned.		Even though a policeman, Daiki was nothing more but a newbie who had only just been assigned.
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	Consequently, not realizing Kazuma's eyes were entirely not laughing, Daiki interacted with him just like before.		Consequently, not realizing Kazuma's eyes were entirely not laughing, Daiki interacted with him just like before.

	"So, I don't know where you've been or what you have been doing but did you find something? "		"So, I don't know where you've been or what you have been doing but did you find something?"

	"Absolutely nothing. Your way? "		"Absolutely nothing. Your way?"

	At the light retort that betrayed his expectations, Daiki let out a dry laugh.		At the light retort that betrayed his expectations, Daiki let out a dry laugh.
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	"Ha ha.......instead of progress, the problems increased"		"Ha ha.......instead of progress, the problems increased"

	" - Did something happen? "		" - Did something happen?"

	"Utsumi Kousuke escaped "		"Utsumi Kousuke escaped"

	"........."		"........."
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	Ten seconds passed. And then, looking at Daiki holding his breath and waiting for Kazuma's reaction, he replied with a serious face.		Ten seconds passed. And then, looking at Daiki holding his breath and waiting for Kazuma's reaction, he replied with a serious face.

	"Who is that? "		"Who is that?"

	"Whaaaa!? "		"Whaaaa!?"

	Daiki collapsed.		Daiki collapsed.

	"Is that comedic stupidity? It's the spell user acting violently at Ayano-san's school! "		"Is that comedic stupidity? It's the spell user acting violently at Ayano-san's school!"

	".....aah, now that you mention it there was that story "		".....aah, now that you mention it there was that story"

	Finally remembering, Kazuma made a small nod. As if searching around for memories, he spoke slowly.		Finally remembering, Kazuma made a small nod. As if searching around for memories, he spoke slowly.

	"But, didn't you catch him? The barrier there is not something an amateur can break, no? "		"But, didn't you catch him? The barrier there is not something an amateur can break, no?"

	"Yeah, that's right but - "		"Yeah, that's right but -"

	Pulling himself together, Daiki explained the situation with a serious face. As the story progressed, Kazuma's face became more and more sharp.		Pulling himself together, Daiki explained the situation with a serious face. As the story progressed, Kazuma's face became more and more sharp.

	"humph - I see "		"humph - I see"

	For one moment all expression disappeared from Kazuma's face. From the ruin of the smiling face mask came undone, a terribly dry and hollow face with no ~~makeup~~ peeked.		For one moment all expression disappeared from Kazuma's face. From the ruin of the smiling face mask came undone, a terribly dry and hollow face with no make-up peeked.

	But Daiki didn't became aware of it.		But Daiki didn't became aware of it.

	"I understand. I'll also look for him "		"I understand. I'll also look for him"

	"Aah, we're saved"		"Aah, we're saved"
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	Without showing distrust towards Kazuma's words, who instantly smoothed over his facial expression, he was innocently glad.		Without showing distrust towards Kazuma's words, who instantly smoothed over his facial expression, he was innocently glad.

	"Ooh, this became a major incident. Even though we're short-handed even at the best of times, we even had to guard the girl Utsumi is aiming at! "		"Ooh, this became a major incident. Even though we're short-handed even at the best of times, we even had to guard the girl Utsumi is aiming at!"

	"Well, it can't be helped right? It's Ayano's acquittance. If you were to make a blunder she could kill all of you in a fit of anger. Even Kirika's desperate, right? "		"Well, it can't be helped right? It's Ayano's acquittance. If you were to make a blunder she could kill all of you in a fit of anger. Even Kirika's desperate, right?"

	"........I don't think Ayano-san is that kind of person. "		"........I don't think Ayano-san is that kind of person."

	"........aah? "		"........aah?"

	Kazuma raised his eyebrows quizzical and Daiki started to justify himself red in the face.		Kazuma raised his eyebrows quizzical and Daiki started to justify himself red in the face.

	"Aah, no, you see, there's no special meaning, ugh.......Ayano-san is a kind person, so maybe she won't have such an unreasonable behavior or something.........it's...it's just that! Deeper feelings than those, I really....... "		"Aah, no, you see, there's no special meaning, ugh....... Ayano-san is a kind person, so maybe she won't have such an unreasonable behavior or something.........it's...it's just that! Deeper feelings than those, I really......."

	"Aah......., well, isn't that fine? "		"Aah......., well, isn't that fine?"

	With a careless expression, Kazuma interrupted the excuse that continued for too long.		With a careless expression, Kazuma interrupted the excuse that continued for too long.

	"I think that's a peculiar taste but it's got nothing to do with me. "		"I think that's a peculiar taste but it's got nothing to do with me."

	" - You're not mad? "		" - You're not mad?"

	"Why would I? ", asked Kazuma with a serious face.		"Why would I?", asked Kazuma with a serious face.

	"I think it would be terrible (for you) if it would turn out well but do your best. I'll secretly root for you"		"I think it would be terrible (for you) if it would turn out well but do your best. I'll secretly root for you"
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	With an irrelevant expression, Daiki nodded his head ambiguously. Taking that as the end of conversation Kazuma announced.		With an irrelevant expression, Daiki nodded his head ambiguously. Taking that as the end of conversation Kazuma announced.

	"Well then, tell me if you find something new "		"Well then, tell me if you find something new"

	"Aah, yes, roger that. Yagami-san too, get in tough with the Chief as soon as possible"		"Aah, yes, roger that. Yagami-san too, get in tough with the Chief as soon as possible"
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	Scattering an ominous presence that would put the fear of God even into a yakuza, Kazuma stepped forward inside the crowd of people as if conquering an inhabited land.		Scattering an ominous presence that would put the fear of God even into a yakuza, Kazuma stepped forward inside the crowd of people as if conquering an inhabited land.

	"Utsumi Kousuke, huh......? "		"Utsumi Kousuke, huh......?"

	From that mouth chiseled in a smile one guy's name leaked out. The thoughtless, foolish boy who could see only under his nose.		From that mouth chiseled in a smile one guy's name leaked out. The thoughtless, foolish boy who could see only under his nose.

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2013-10-18T07:15:36Z

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Antanaru: /* Part 2 */

2013-10-17T23:01:37Z

Part 2

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	"Che, shut the fuck up", Kou swore, without showing any hint of being shaken by Shin's words.		"Che, shut the fuck up", Kou swore, without showing any hint of being shaken by Shin's words.

	"Don't be so conceited for a tumbler whose only redeeming feature is sparkling. A boy from an elite school shouldn't fight, how about you go home and study for a test, huh? With that power of yours you could lower<ref>Editor's note: I guess that's the word lost in translation~~--~~~~~~</ref> your electric bill so it's pretty convenient, huh? "		"Don't be so conceited for a tumbler whose only redeeming feature is sparkling. A boy from an elite school shouldn't fight, how about you go home and study for a test, huh? With that power of yours you could lower<ref>Editor's note: I guess that's the word lost in translation [[User:Antanaru\|Antanaru]] ([[User talk:Antanaru\|talk]])</ref> your electric bill so it's pretty convenient, huh? "

	" - Those words will cost you greatly", announced Shin in a frozen voice, closing his eyes partly.		" - Those words will cost you greatly", announced Shin in a frozen voice, closing his eyes partly.

Antanaru: /* Chapter 2 - The mad Fujutsushi */

2013-10-17T22:57:08Z

Chapter 2 - The mad Fujutsushi

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Antanaru: /* Part 2 */ Spelling, spacing and missing word.

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Part 2: Spelling, spacing and missing word.

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	Late at night, there was a countless number of people surrounding the already closed public ~~parc~~.		Late at night, there was a countless number of people surrounding the already closed public park.

	Everyone was young. The eldest was maybe in the first half of his twenty. But, considering it was a gathering of young people a ~~bizare~~ silence was floating around that place.		Everyone was young. The eldest was maybe in the first half of his twenty. But, considering it was a gathering of young people a bizarre silence was floating around that place.

	A heavy silence.		A heavy silence.
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	The other one, with a black leather jacket and black pants and metal accessories dangling here and there - <<Devil Master>> Kou.		The other one, with a black leather jacket and black pants and metal accessories dangling here and there - <<Devil Master>> Kou.

	At the time the spectators started flustering about the two continuing to stand off against each other, as if ~~signaling~~ the start of battle, Shin got the ball rolling.		At the time the spectators started flustering about the two continuing to stand off against each other, as if signalling the start of battle, Shin got the ball rolling.

	"No way, you don't really think you can win this match right?"		"No way, you don't really think you can win this match right?"
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	"Che, shut the fuck up", Kou swore, without showing any hint of being shaken by Shin's words.		"Che, shut the fuck up", Kou swore, without showing any hint of being shaken by Shin's words.

	"Don't be so conceited for a tumbler whose only redeeming feature is sparkling. A boy from an elite school shouldn't fight, how about you go home and study for a test, huh? With that power of yours you could your electric bill so it's pretty convenient, huh? "		"Don't be so conceited for a tumbler whose only redeeming feature is sparkling. A boy from an elite school shouldn't fight, how about you go home and study for a test, huh? With that power of yours you could lower<ref>Editor's note: I guess that's the word lost in translation--~~~~</ref> your electric bill so it's pretty convenient, huh? "

	" - Those words will cost you greatly", announced Shin in a frozen voice, closing his eyes partly.		" - Those words will cost you greatly", announced Shin in a frozen voice, closing his eyes partly.
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	"Coma out, Harpas!"		"Coma out, Harpas!"

	"You're slow! "		"You're slow!"

	In front of Kou the space was warped. The summoned demon was an omen that appeared from the underworld, beyond our dimension. But, without waiting for it, Shin pushed out his right hand straight ahead.		In front of Kou the space was warped. The summoned demon was an omen that appeared from the underworld, beyond our dimension. But, without waiting for it, Shin pushed out his right hand straight ahead.
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	Realizing the battle reached its climax the spectators screamed from the bottom of their lungs and stamped their feet.		Realizing the battle reached its climax the spectators screamed from the bottom of their lungs and stamped their feet.

	At that time - that man appeared.		At that time - that man appeared.




	=== Part 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

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	== Chapter 2 - The mad Fujutsushi ==		== Chapter 2 - The mad Fujutsushi ==



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	The dead of night - Without even a slight movement, Kazuma opened his eyes wide in silence.		The dead of night - Without even a slight movement, Kazuma opened his eyes wide in silence.
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	He believed so because he was a chosen man. Because it's impossible for him to loose to that scum.		He believed so because he was a chosen man. Because it's impossible for him to loose to that scum.

	~~that~~'s why he ought to have a hidden power.		That's why he ought to have a hidden power.

	at that time, something pulsated inside his body. A pulse that seemed to make his heart explode and made his blood boil.		At that time, something pulsated inside his body. A pulse that seemed to make his heart explode and made his blood boil.

	Simultaneously he strangely could see clearly the movements of the beasts that until now only seemed an afterimage.		Simultaneously he strangely could see clearly the movements of the beasts that until now only seemed an afterimage.
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	Even their paths as of now, their position one moment in the future were decided with level of foresight that exceeded simple prediction.		Even their paths as of now, their position one moment in the future were decided with level of foresight that exceeded simple prediction.

	His pupils lengthened vertically and captured all vectors ~~glittering yellow~~.		His glittering yellow pupils lengthened vertically and captured all vectors.

	Equally simple like shooting the targets in slow motion, no as if they stopped, Shin shot the huge beast jumping low.		Equally simple like shooting the targets in slow motion, no as if they stopped, Shin shot the huge beast jumping low.
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	"R - retreat, Fenrir!"		"R - retreat, Fenrir!"

	With a suspicions discomposure, Kou made Fenrir retreat. The big wolf's image blurred and returned to the underworld with a ~~wound~~ body.		With a suspicions discomposure, Kou made Fenrir retreat. The big wolf's image blurred and returned to the underworld with a wounded body.

	The fact that Kou became confused and was panicking over Fenrir's wounds was only natural.		The fact that Kou became confused and was panicking over Fenrir's wounds was only natural.

	Summoning magic was a double edged sword. He was able to use the power of a mighty demon but the moment the demon died, his own receives those damages.		Summoning magic was a double edged sword. He was able to use the power of a mighty demon but the moment the demon died, his own body receives those damages.

	Kou personally tested that with his own body.		Kou personally tested that with his own body.