Kaze no Stigma:Volume5 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Saronin: /* Part 4 */

2015-12-20T17:49:57Z

Part 4

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	In the park a dry wind was blowing through, Kazuma was alone, looking up at the sky.		In the park a dry wind was blowing through, Kazuma was alone, looking up at the sky.

	There ~~was no one~~ around.		There wasn't anyone around.

	As the <<Seeds>> given power by Pandemonium were loitering around, it produced a change in Shinjuku.		As the <<Seeds>> given power by Pandemonium were loitering around, it produced a change in Shinjuku.

Saronin: /* Part 4 */ misspelled words that are still words

2015-12-20T17:42:11Z

Part 4: misspelled words that are still words

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	No matter how the situation turns out, pondering about it doesn't amount to anything.		No matter how the situation turns out, pondering about it doesn't amount to anything.

	The result was that the homeless around Shinjuku were eradicated. But the parks became less accommodating for normal people ~~that~~ before.		The result was that the homeless around Shinjuku were eradicated. But the parks became less accommodating for normal people than before.

	It's only natural. The <<Seeds>> were only fighting at night but there aren't any people who ~~thread~~ on the blood-stained pavement on their own accord.		It's only natural. The <<Seeds>> were only fighting at night but there aren't any people who tread on the blood-stained pavement on their own accord.

	"Well then........."		"Well then........."

Saronin: /* Part 4 */ fixed grammatical error

2015-12-20T17:36:16Z

Part 4: fixed grammatical error

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	In the park a dry wind was blowing through, Kazuma was ~~solitary~~ looking at the sky.		In the park a dry wind was blowing through, Kazuma was alone, looking up at the sky.

	There was no one around.		There was no one around.

Drejzer: /* Part 3 */

2014-01-26T15:14:59Z

Part 3

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	Instantly the option of turning her back th these two and running away from here at full speed tempted Kirika pretty seriously.		Instantly the option of turning her back to these two and running away from here at full speed tempted Kirika pretty seriously.

	But of course she actually wouldn't give in to mere temptation and deeply bowed her head to Izumi who took the initiative.		But of course she actually wouldn't give in to mere temptation and deeply bowed her head to Izumi who took the initiative.
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	"That's why....he ignored Nanase's kidnapping? "		"That's why....he ignored Nanase's kidnapping? "

	"It seems so. Utsumi is nothing but a high schooler. It would be difficult for him to prepare a place he could confine an abducted girl. The possibility he is relying on Pandemonium is high. Pandemonium too is ~~favoring~~ Utsumi. "		"It seems so. Utsumi is nothing but a high schooler. It would be difficult for him to prepare a place he could confine an abducted girl. The possibility he is relying on Pandemonium is high. Pandemonium too is favouring Utsumi. "

	Pandemonium - Bernhardt went as far as opposing the police to secure Utsumi.		Pandemonium - Bernhardt went as far as opposing the police to secure Utsumi.

	Because his ~~behavior~~ was so pushy Utsumi's value was recognized. Even the degree of convenience for continuing hiding one person was plotted before.		Because his behaviour was so pushy, Utsumi's value was recognized. Even the degree of convenience for continuing hiding one person was plotted before.

	For Utsumi and, for at least one more person.		For Utsumi and, for at least one more person.

74.100.62.225: /* Part 3 */

2013-11-18T07:34:07Z

Part 3

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	Kirika replied coldly, thinking about Kazuma's past.		Kirika replied coldly, thinking about Kazuma's past.

	"Maybe he felt exhausted after carrying out his revenge or something else happened after that? Rather than ~~waisting~~ time asking the person itself would be better. What's important right now - "		"Maybe he felt exhausted after carrying out his revenge or something else happened after that? Rather than wasting time asking the person itself would be better. What's important right now - "

	Her facial expression stiffening again, Ayano continued.		Her facial expression stiffening again, Ayano continued.

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2013-11-18T07:29:55Z

Part 3

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	"So, won't you start explain the state of affairs already? "		"So, won't you start explain the state of affairs already? "

	"Well - just like Ayano-chan says, it seems that lately we do keep ~~loosing~~ at best but it's impossible for us to lose to Utsumi. "		"Well - just like Ayano-chan says, it seems that lately we do keep losing at best but it's impossible for us to lose to Utsumi. "


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	Of course, there was no reply.		Of course, there was no reply.




	=== Part 4 ===		=== Part 4 ===

74.100.62.225: /* Part 1 */

2013-11-18T07:19:35Z

Part 1

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	Unperturbed by Utsumi's question heavy with intimidation, Bernhardt slowly shook his head.		Unperturbed by Utsumi's question heavy with intimidation, Bernhardt slowly shook his head.

	"I am truly glad. No matter how accomplished one is, you managed to jump over <<Second Class>> and go straight to the <<Seed>>. Isn't normal to worry? "		"I am truly glad. No matter how accomplished one is, you managed to jump over <<Second Class>> and go straight to the <<Seed>>. Isn't it normal to worry? "

	"Then......it's fine"		"Then......it's fine"
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	Utsumi's body trembled at the chill of having his true intention seen through. But he immediately smoothed his face over and showed a nihilistic smile.		Utsumi's body trembled at the chill of having his true intention seen through. But he immediately smoothed his face over and showed a nihilistic smile.

	"You saved me trouble"		"You saved me some trouble"

	Convinced of the fact that they didn't notice he became frightened from the bottom of his heart, Utsumi left the room.		Convinced of the fact that they didn't notice he became frightened from the bottom of his heart, Utsumi left the room.
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	"If so, as a being with a heart, let me rephrase that. I don't remember creating you like a doll. It would be troublesome if you didn't follow my orders but making you to obey blindly would have been in vain. "		"If so, as a being with a heart, let me rephrase that. I don't remember creating you like a doll. It would be troublesome if you didn't follow my orders but making you to obey blindly would have been in vain. "

	"......Do even I hold the flexibility to enjoy myself in the process? "		"......Do I even hold the flexibility to enjoy myself in the process? "

	"Hmm, the ingredients for it are all supposed to be there. Or else - you don't want to meet him again? "		"Hmm, the ingredients for it are all supposed to be there. Or else - you don't want to meet him again? "
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	Although still confused, Lapis nodded meekly.		Although still confused, Lapis nodded meekly.

	The gap between that puppet-like reply and her contrastively bewildered facial expression satisfied Bernhardt exceedingly.		The gap between that puppet-like reply and her contrastively bewildered facial expression satisfied Bernhardt exceedingly.




	=== Part 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

Bilagaana: typo

2013-10-29T20:38:41Z

typo

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	Moreover, he made the sign of slicing his throat with his thumb and sticking that finger out.		Moreover, he made the sign of slicing his throat with his thumb and sticking that finger out.

	"Die. Die and give me all you XP ~~pints~~. You were born only for that. Only to feed me!! "		"Die. Die and give me all you XP points. You were born only for that. Only to feed me!! "

	The resounding scorn of the five part chorus. With woken-up eyes Kazuma turned to those men that didn't doubt their superiority.		The resounding scorn of the five part chorus. With woken-up eyes Kazuma turned to those men that didn't doubt their superiority.

Bilagaana: typo

2013-10-29T20:29:01Z

typo

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	Enough to throw away everything without regret, for the sake of just one girl. Enough to forsake it all, be it morals or righteousness without looking back -		Enough to throw away everything without regret, for the sake of just one girl. Enough to forsake it all, be it morals or righteousness without looking back -

	"That's right. To make matters worse he's glorying her because of her unnatural death. I will be very hard to change his mind, Ayano-chan. "		"That's right. To make matters worse he's glorying her because of her unnatural death. It will be very hard to change his mind, Ayano-chan. "

	"N- no, that's wrong, I don't really - "		"N- no, that's wrong, I don't really - "

Bilagaana: typo

2013-10-29T20:25:36Z

typo

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	"It seems so. Utsumi is nothing but a high schooler. It would be difficult for him to prepare a place he could confine an abducted girl. The possibility he is relying on Pandemonium is high. Pandemonium too is favoring Utsumi. "		"It seems so. Utsumi is nothing but a high schooler. It would be difficult for him to prepare a place he could confine an abducted girl. The possibility he is relying on Pandemonium is high. Pandemonium too is favoring Utsumi. "

	Pandemonium - Bernhardt ~~wen~~ as far as opposing the police to secure Utsumi.		Pandemonium - Bernhardt went as far as opposing the police to secure Utsumi.

	Because his behavior was so pushy Utsumi's value was recognized. Even the degree of convenience for continuing hiding one person was plotted before.		Because his behavior was so pushy Utsumi's value was recognized. Even the degree of convenience for continuing hiding one person was plotted before.