Kaze no Stigma:Volume5 Chapter 4 - Revision history

Eknight: /* Part 1 */

2015-03-21T03:28:13Z

Part 1

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	Screwing with both hands the innocent pillow, Ayano decided so.		Screwing with both hands the innocent pillow, Ayano decided so.

	The chances of success were exceedingly low, she didn't know the method but it was still better ~~that~~ the alternative and above all, she felt refreshed.		The chances of success were exceedingly low, she didn't know the method but it was still better than the alternative and above all, she felt refreshed.

	Feeling like she settled one more problem, Ayano's thoughts changed.		Feeling like she settled one more problem, Ayano's thoughts changed.

144.59.252.50: /* Part 1 */

2015-03-19T06:12:28Z

Part 1

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	Lying upside-down on the bed in her room, Ayano let out a profound breath, emptying her lungs.		Lying upside-down on the bed in her room, Ayano let out a profound breath, emptying her lungs.

	~~Burring~~ her face in the pillow, she let out all her power. After several seconds -		Burying her face in the pillow, she let out all her power. After several seconds -

	"........Stopping Kazuma, huh........"		"........Stopping Kazuma, huh........"

	Those isolated grumbled words, naturally, reached no one's ears ~~bur~~ her own.		Those isolated grumbled words, naturally, reached no one's ears but her own.

	A second sigh.		A second sigh.
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	No matter how she thought about it, there wasn't even a particle of a chance of success.		No matter how she thought about it, there wasn't even a particle of a chance of success.

	Just who on earth will try and stop that man ~~that~~ snapped and lost even his discrimination ability.		Just who on earth will try and stop that man who snapped and lost even his discrimination ability.

	Recalling the conversation during the evening, Ayano let out a third sigh.		Recalling the conversation during the evening, Ayano let out a third sigh.
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	"Ren? What happened, so suddenly? "		"Ren? What happened, so suddenly? "

	Close to the bewildered Ayano, Kirika pointed a sharp gaze to Ren. She asked to verify.		Close to the bewildered Ayano, Kirika pointed a sharp gaze at Ren. She asked to verify.

	"You met him? "		"You met him? "
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	''"Is Nanase all right........"''		''"Is Nanase all right........"''



	=== Part 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

23.122.117.75: /* Part 4 */

2014-07-03T04:37:02Z

Part 4

23.122.117.75: /* Part 2 */

2014-07-03T04:25:18Z

Part 2

23.122.117.75: /* Chapter 4 - Determination and hesitation and... */

2014-07-03T03:54:56Z

Chapter 4 - Determination and hesitation and...

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	A second sigh.		A second sigh.

	Sluggishly turning around, she ~~look~~ upwards. She held her hand out in front oh her eyes blocking the fluorescent light.		Sluggishly turning around, she looked upwards. She held her hand out in front of her eyes, blocking the fluorescent light.

	''"What are you telling me to do........"''		''"What are you telling me to do........"''
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	No matter how she thought about it, there wasn't even a particle of a chance of success.		No matter how she thought about it, there wasn't even a particle of a chance of success.

	Just who on earth will try and stop that man, that snapped and lost even his discrimination ability.		Just who on earth will try and stop that man that snapped and lost even his discrimination ability.

	Recalling the conversation during the evening, Ayano let out a third sigh.		Recalling the conversation during the evening, Ayano let out a third sigh.

68.57.166.111: /* Part 4 */

2014-06-25T22:28:21Z

Part 4

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	Utsumi's body trembled and after a few seconds, he turned his back on them and walked out without saying anything. Without being ordered, Nanase followed him.		Utsumi's body trembled and after a few seconds, he turned his back on them and walked out without saying anything. Without being ordered, Nanase followed him.

	Obviously, since she was caught by Nanase, so ~~was~~ Yukari.		Obviously, since she was caught by Nanase, so did Yukari.

	"Where are you going - ?"		"Where are you going - ?"

68.57.166.111: /* Part 3 */

2014-06-25T22:20:30Z

Part 3

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	Not finding any other appropriate comments, she made agreeable comments absentmindedly. The next mail.		Not finding any other appropriate comments, she made agreeable comments absentmindedly. The next mail.

	The literary ~~stile~~ was suddenly different.		The literary style was suddenly different.

	''''"Right now I am in one room of some desolated, unknown building. The <<Grand Mage>> Utsumi noticed me. He is definitely chasing me, right? "''''		''''"Right now I am in one room of some desolated, unknown building. The <<Grand Mage>> Utsumi noticed me. He is definitely chasing me, right? "''''

68.57.166.111: /* Part 2 */

2014-06-25T22:11:00Z

Part 2

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	A magician. He was looking exactly like a magician from the fairy tales.		A magician. He was looking exactly like a magician from the fairy tales.

	His whole body was wrapped in a black robe. Because the ~~rove~~ was covering the most of him, his face wasn't visible. Particularly thorough he was even holding a a curved staff made of wood in his hand.		His whole body was wrapped in a black robe. Because the robe was covering the most of him, his face wasn't visible. Particularly thorough he was even holding a a curved staff made of wood in his hand.

	That appearance was seen by everyone in this place. Even the person most separated from the stage could see without interruption as the robe figure's entire body was filling the field of vision.		That appearance was seen by everyone in this place. Even the person most separated from the stage could see without interruption as the robe figure's entire body was filling the field of vision.

68.57.166.111: /* Part 2 */

2014-06-25T22:09:38Z

Part 2

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	A magician. He was looking exactly like a magician from the fairy tales.		A magician. He was looking exactly like a magician from the fairy tales.

	His ~~hole~~ body was wrapped in a black robe. Because the rove was covering the most of him, his face wasn't visible. Particularly thorough he was even holding a a curved staff made of wood in his hand.		His whole body was wrapped in a black robe. Because the rove was covering the most of him, his face wasn't visible. Particularly thorough he was even holding a a curved staff made of wood in his hand.

	That appearance was seen by everyone in this place. Even the person most separated from the stage could see without interruption as the robe figure's entire body was filling the field of vision.		That appearance was seen by everyone in this place. Even the person most separated from the stage could see without interruption as the robe figure's entire body was filling the field of vision.

Drejzer: /* Part 3 */

2014-01-26T21:57:36Z

Part 3

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	"----------!? No."		"----------!? No."

	Th hand pressing keys stopped, and Kirika flipped up with a face full of surprise.		The hand pressing keys stopped, and Kirika flipped up with a face full of surprise.

	Ayano waived her bangs in open despair.		Ayano waived her bangs in open despair.
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	"Yukari, Nanase......please be well........"		"Yukari, Nanase......please be well........"

	A frail murmur escaped.		A frail murmur escaped.




	=== Part 4 ===		=== Part 4 ===

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	A tall man cloaked in a red mantle, a simple mask was covering his face.		A tall man cloaked in a red mantle, a simple mask was covering his face.

	For Yukari the background of the man ~~impeccability~~ dressed, as if he expected visitors was very clear.		For Yukari the background of the man impeccably dressed, as if he expected visitors was very clear.

	Bowing her head, she smiled sweetly.		Bowing her head, she smiled sweetly.
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	Bernhardt answered as a matter of course.		Bernhardt answered as a matter of course.

	"It doesn't matter whether she found out something or not. The fact that the Police will intervene in the ceremony has already been factored in. There is no uncertainty ~~factor~~. "		"It doesn't matter whether she found out something or not. The fact that the Police will intervene in the ceremony has already been factored in. There is no uncertainty. "

	" - What if they find this place before the ceremony? "		" - What if they find this place before the ceremony? "
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	"Hee.....what incredible self-confidence"		"Hee.....what incredible self-confidence"

	"It's not self-confidence but the statement of mere facts. Apart from that - did you ~~sent~~ the message? "		"It's not self-confidence but the statement of mere facts. Apart from that - did you send the message? "

	With an arrogant attitude, Utsumi nodded ~~whev~~ asked by Bernhardt about the right and wrongs of being an errand boy.		With an arrogant attitude, Utsumi nodded when asked by Bernhardt about the right and wrongs of being an errand boy.

	"Aah, I told them. Almost everyone was gathered. But, why must we be so roundabout about it? Wouldn't it have been easier just to send an order? "		"Aah, I told them. Almost everyone was gathered. But, why must we be so roundabout about it? Wouldn't it have been easier just to send an order? "
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	"Ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Bua ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha !!"		"Ha ha ha! Aha ha ha ha! Bua ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha !!"

	Bernhardt was indifferently ~~looking~~ Utsumi, rolling about with laughter monstrously rather ~~that~~ lively, like he was one part of the landscape.		Bernhardt was looking indifferently at Utsumi, rolling about with laughter monstrously rather than lively, like he was one part of the landscape.

	"Aah, don't worry about it. He sometimes gets like this. "		"Aah, don't worry about it. He sometimes gets like this. "
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	"The pupil is supposed to overcome his teacher sooner or later. "		"The pupil is supposed to overcome his teacher sooner or later. "

	Yet again, with an attitude full of self-confidence and composure Utsumi strikes again.		Yet again, with an attitude full of self-confidence and composure Utsumi strikes again.

	Not one willing to step aside, their glints in the eyes gave off sparks.		Not one willing to step aside, their glints in the eyes gave off sparks.

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	The air, the atmosphere were were only coercing to silence the group that was gathered here by no ordinary means.		The air, the atmosphere were were only coercing to silence the group that was gathered here by no ordinary means.

	Rather, you could say it was the antipode of it. There were rare groups of people but most of them were ~~rare wolfs~~ that seemed to have forgotten the spirit of cooperation inside their mothers' wombs.		Rather, you could say it was the antipode of it. There were rare groups of people but most of them were lone wolves that seemed to have forgotten the spirit of cooperation inside their mothers' wombs.

	The <<Seeds>> rampaging on the stage called Shinjuku - all of them were gathered here. Not one was missing.		The <<Seeds>> rampaging on the stage called Shinjuku - all of them were gathered here. Not one was missing.
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	Properly speaking, it wasn't a likely event.		Properly speaking, it wasn't a likely event.

	All those people who regarded ~~other~~ like nothing more ~~but~~ XP were gathered in this place.		All those people who regarded others like nothing but more XP were gathered in this place.

	It's impossible that conflict ~~won~~'t arise.		It's impossible that conflict wouldn't arise.

	But, they were waiting in absolute silence.		But, they were waiting in absolute silence.
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	Without putting on air, she just observed the surroundings in a casual manner.		Without putting on air, she just observed the surroundings in a casual manner.

	Men and women with bad disposition were filling up the hall. Of course, there wasn't any running electricity but the bonfires placed here and there illuminated the gloomy ~~indoor~~.		Men and women with bad disposition were filling up the hall. Of course, there wasn't any running electricity but the bonfires placed here and there illuminated the gloomy interior.

	The atmosphere was so strained that if one were to throw a firecracker in, a great brawl would start on the spot.		The atmosphere was so strained that if one were to throw a firecracker in, a great brawl would start on the spot.
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	"Close........"		"Close........"

	The ~~all~~ <<Seeds>> looking in different directions, without exchanging words or signals, collected their gazes in the same direction as if they previously agreed on.		The <<Seeds>> all looking in different directions, without exchanging words or signals, collected their gazes in the same direction as if they previously agreed on.

	The wall.		The wall.

	For Yukari it looked just like a usual wall. A bleak, bare, gray wall. There was nothing there to look at of to talk about -		For Yukari it looked just like a usual wall. A bleak, bare, gray wall. There was nothing there to look at or to talk about -

	''"Eeh? Hey, is that - "''		''"Eeh? Hey, is that - "''
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	Those gazes didn't gathered there to look at it. From the beginning, that space gaping wide in front of that wall was becoming less crowded.		Those gazes didn't gathered there to look at it. From the beginning, that space gaping wide in front of that wall was becoming less crowded.

	In spite of the fact that there were enough people inside the room to make one feel ~~oppressive~~.		In spite of the fact that there were enough people inside the room to make one feel oppressed.

	Especially carefully the bonfires were concentrated in front of the wall ~~delimitation~~ the space.		Especially carefully the bonfires were concentrated in front of the wall delimitating the space.

	Once you realized it, it was obvious. That was a stage. The ~~curtains~~ bells were heard, the spectators focused on the stage, it was only that.		Once you realized it, it was obvious. That was a stage. The curtain bells were heard, the spectators focused on the stage, it was only that.

	''"'This is.......kind of clumsy? "''		''"'This is.......kind of clumsy? "''

	The straightforward stage setting, the ostentatious gap - what will happen there from now on, Yukari was more uneasy about that rather than the fact she ~~will~~ definitely be spotted since she couldn't recognize such an overt abnormality.		The straightforward stage setting, the ostentatious gap - what will happen there from now on, Yukari was more uneasy about that rather than the fact that she would definitely be spotted since she couldn't recognize such an overt abnormality.

	It would still be alright if her cognizant ability was disturbed because she used some hallucinogen but the magic stuff couldn't be helped.		It would still be alright if her cognizant ability was disturbed because she used some hallucinogen but the magic stuff couldn't be helped.
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	A magician. He was looking exactly like a magician from the fairy tales.		A magician. He was looking exactly like a magician from the fairy tales.

	His whole body was wrapped in a black robe. Because the robe was covering ~~the~~ most of him, his face wasn't visible. Particularly thorough he was even holding a a curved staff made of wood in his hand.		His whole body was wrapped in a black robe. Because the robe was covering most of him, his face wasn't visible. Particularly thorough, he was even holding a curved staff made of wood in his hand.

	That appearance was seen by everyone in this place. Even the person most separated from the stage could see without interruption as the ~~robe~~ figure's entire body was filling the field of vision.		That appearance was seen by everyone in this place. Even the person most separated from the stage could see without interruption as the robed figure's entire body was filling the field of vision.

	Because, the <<Magician>> was floating in midair. As if there was an invisible foothold, it was very safe and firm.		Because, the <<Magician>> was floating in midair. As if there was an invisible foothold, it was very safe and firm.
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	Casually informed of the mechanism behind the level up that no one knew before, the <<Seeds>> were rendered speechless.		Casually informed of the mechanism behind the level up that no one knew before, the <<Seeds>> were rendered speechless.

	That detailed knowledge by far more profound than that of <<Seeds>> - was the best evidence the <<Grand Mage>> was at the center of this series of events, at the center of Pandemonium.		That detailed knowledge - by far more profound than that of <<Seeds>> - was the best evidence the <<Grand Mage>> was at the center of this series of events, at the center of Pandemonium.

	"But, I am different. I, who held the greatest ability since the beginning, could receive a great amount of power without any kind of adjustment and was able to manipulate it.		"But, I am different. I, who held the greatest ability since the beginning, could receive a great amount of power without any kind of adjustment and was able to manipulate it.
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	Ignoring the piercing killing intent the <<Grand Mage>> declared.		Ignoring the piercing killing intent the <<Grand Mage>> declared.

	"Only those sincerely desiring power should come. Of course, you're free to do what you want in the meantime. Pandemonium doesn't try to restrict you in any way. I'm looking forward the time I'll fight with you. "		"Only those sincerely desiring power should come. Of course, you're free to do what you want in the meantime. Pandemonium doesn't try to restrict you in any way. I'm looking forward to the time I'll fight with you. "


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	Holding her breath, calmly, extremely calmly, Yukari caught the <<Grand Mage>>'s words.		Holding her breath, calmly, extremely calmly, Yukari caught the <<Grand Mage>>'s words.

	Fumbling and confirming the IC ~~recorded~~ she grasped tightly inside her pocket was indeed recording, she took a light breath.		Fumbling and confirming the IC recorder she grasped tightly inside her pocket was indeed recording, she took a light breath.

	This seemed like the last directive from Pandemonium. Staying here any longer ~~has~~ no purpose.		This seemed like the last directive from Pandemonium. Staying here any longer had no purpose.

	She was worried about Nanase but she couldn't help her by herself. Deciding it was time to go, she looked once more at the <<Grand Mage>>.		She was worried about Nanase but she couldn't help her by herself. Deciding it was time to go, she looked once more at the <<Grand Mage>>.
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	Thrusting away those who stood in her way and pushing them aside, without caring about the public notice she ran like a startled hare.		Thrusting away those who stood in her way and pushing them aside, without caring about the public notice she ran like a startled hare.

	Running up the stairs, she left the building. No one seemed to pursue her but she relax just yet.		Running up the stairs, she left the building. No one seemed to pursue her but she couldn't relax just yet.

	She must quickly hide herself - ~~wiping~~ her body enough to breath hard, Yukari kicked the asphalt.		She must quickly hide herself - whipping her body enough to breath hard, Yukari kicked the asphalt.

	- and, a few minutes after.		- and, a few minutes after.
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	Yukari took refuge in an inhabited room from another building. Because she was panicking, she neglected tracking her current position and couldn't identify even the buildings' name.		Yukari took refuge in an inhabited room from another building. Because she was panicking, she neglected tracking her current position and couldn't identify even the buildings' name.

	From the start, Yukari's strong point was intelligence gathering but being a spy was outside her area of expertise.		From the start, Yukari's strong point was intelligence gathering, but being a spy was outside her area of expertise.

	She didn't know how to successfully escape while being chased, besides she had no way of fighting a magic user.		She didn't know how to successfully escape while being chased, besides she had no way of fighting a magic user.
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	"Hmmm, it was too rash, huh? "		"Hmmm, it was too rash, huh? "

	For the sake of saving Nanase, for the sake of helping Ayano, she tried to sneak in knowing it was dangerous but as expected, it was too impertinent.		For the sake of saving Nanase, for the sake of helping Ayano, she tried to sneak in knowing it was dangerous, but, as expected, it was too impertinent.

	If she were to get caught, she'll also become an encumbrance to Ayano.		If she were to get caught, she'll also become an encumbrance to Ayano.