Kaze no Stigma:Volume5 Chapter 5 - Revision history

Drejzer: /* Part 4 */

2014-01-29T22:10:07Z

Part 4

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	"I'm willful and greedy"		"I'm willful and greedy"

	Saying so, he kissed her lightly on the ~~rape~~ of the neck.		Saying so, he kissed her lightly on the nape of the neck.

	"Hyan!?"		"Hyan!?"

Drejzer: /* Part 4 */

2014-01-29T19:31:21Z

Part 4

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	I won't gave up on anything. I'll obtain everything I want.		I won't gave up on anything. I'll obtain everything I want.

	"I willful and greedy"		"I'm willful and greedy"

	Saying so, he kissed her lightly on the rape of the neck.		Saying so, he kissed her lightly on the rape of the neck.

Drejzer: /* Part 2 */

2014-01-29T17:26:04Z

Part 2

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	Kazuma screamed at the top of his voice - or so he wanted but what came through his broken throat resembled a hoarse stridor not recognizable words.		Kazuma screamed at the top of his voice - or so he wanted but what came through his broken throat resembled a hoarse stridor not recognizable words.

	The man didn't ~~turned~~ around.		The man didn't turn around.

	He looked at him once at the beginning but then perfectly ignoring Kazuma's existence he performed the ceremony - and the he carried it out.		He looked at him once at the beginning but then perfectly ignoring Kazuma's existence he performed the ceremony - and the he carried it out.
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	But, even so - as expected, death is scary.		But, even so - as expected, death is scary.

	Without reason, he purely thought ''I don't want to die''. And then -		Without reason, he purely thought ''I don't want to die''. And then -





	=== Part 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

Drejzer: /* Chapter 5 - Suppression */

2014-01-26T22:10:13Z

Chapter 5 - Suppression

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	"Yeah. After all, it seems like most of the members are participating. "		"Yeah. After all, it seems like most of the members are participating. "

	In the end, the to days passed without any kind of progress.		In the end, the two days passed without any kind of progress.

	Not finding Pandemonium or getting hold of where Kazuma was, Ayano's group arrived to this day when Pandemonium will descent.		Not finding Pandemonium or getting hold of where Kazuma was, Ayano's group arrived to this day when Pandemonium will descent.

Bilagaana: typo

2013-10-29T22:24:47Z

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	Kazuma informed Ren, perplexed by the unexpected reaction, in a matter of fact.		Kazuma informed Ren, perplexed by the unexpected reaction, in a matter of fact.

	"Those harboring dreams, those mad with hatred, those that loved others, when they die everything turns to nothing. Therefore, no matter what I do, the dead won't be delighted. ~~they~~ won't be sad. They don't feel - anything. "		"Those harboring dreams, those mad with hatred, those that loved others, when they die everything turns to nothing. Therefore, no matter what I do, the dead won't be delighted. They won't be sad. They don't feel - anything. "

	"......nii,sama........"		"......nii,sama........"

109.220.56.124: /* Chapter 5 - Suppression */

2013-10-08T16:03:16Z

Chapter 5 - Suppression

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	That girl he had no interest in except the fact that she was ''the Suzerain's daughter'', the brilliance of her soul.		That girl he had no interest in except the fact that she was ''the Suzerain's daughter'', the brilliance of her soul.

	He had no intention of telling anyone but Kazuma secretly ~~maned~~ that flame ''''Kouen''''.		He had no intention of telling anyone but Kazuma secretly named that flame ''''Kouen''''.

	For this girl who gives off a brilliance like that of the sun, the name ''''Kouen'''' (trad: solar prominence) suits her.		For this girl who gives off a brilliance like that of the sun, the name ''''Kouen'''' (trad: solar prominence) suits her.

Ninjask at 03:07, 8 October 2013

2013-10-08T03:07:04Z

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	"Well then"		"Well then"

	~~Loosing~~ his interest towards Kazuma, Erwin left the room.		Losing his interest towards Kazuma, Erwin left the room.

	"Clean this up"		"Clean this up"
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	The fact that she was forced back by fighting from the front was unexpected.		The fact that she was forced back by fighting from the front was unexpected.

	The Enjutsushi who was supposed to be the strongest was underpowered in front of the ~~Enjutsushi~~ who was supposed to be the weakest - if it's a fight between two users beyond first-class, that was a very improbable phenomenon.		The Enjutsushi who was supposed to be the strongest was underpowered in front of the Fuujutsushi who was supposed to be the weakest - if it's a fight between two users beyond first-class, that was a very improbable phenomenon.

	But, the reason is simple. Kazuma strength easily breaks trough what is known as common sense. It was just that.		But, the reason is simple. Kazuma strength easily breaks trough what is known as common sense. It was just that.
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	Rebuking her body becoming numb from the two layered attack - high impact and lightning strike, Ayano grasped Enraiha tightly.		Rebuking her body becoming numb from the two layered attack - high impact and lightning strike, Ayano grasped Enraiha tightly.

	''"I won't ~~loose~~. I'll never ~~loose~~! Not, not when Kazuma became so weak!"''		''"I won't lose. I'll never lose! Not, not when Kazuma became so weak!"''

	If the opponent was the real Kazuma, she would have been killed ten times already.		If the opponent was the real Kazuma, she would have been killed ten times already.
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	For the sake of protecting - Then, what happens to those he couldn't protect?		For the sake of protecting - Then, what happens to those he couldn't protect?

	The power he obtained after ~~loosing~~ everything - how the heck should he use it?		The power he obtained after losing everything - how the heck should he use it?

	Even his revenge was already over.		Even his revenge was already over.

Ayame: Created page with "== Chapter 5 - Suppression == === Part 1 === By the time Ayano's group appeared, the fight already started. Flying about lightning, roaring explosions, echoing scream..."

2013-10-07T21:36:52Z

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