Kaze no Stigma:Volume6 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Eknight: /* Part 3 */

2015-03-21T03:00:36Z

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	Kazuma was neglecting the boy's attack, without even warding it off with wind, he was just avoiding it as much as possible.		Kazuma was neglecting the boy's attack, without even warding it off with wind, he was just avoiding it as much as possible.

	Was that the best he could do, was his composed ~~smile~~ smile only a bluff -		Was that the best he could do, was his composed smile only a bluff -

	"Don't get cocky, small fry!"		"Don't get cocky, small fry!"
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	Without any feeling, Kazuma was simply looking at the boy's bloodless face.		Without any feeling, Kazuma was simply looking at the boy's bloodless face.

	He was thirteen of fourteen. Just a spoiled child.		He was thirteen or fourteen. Just a spoiled child.

	Even if he's the direct descendant of the Fuan Family, his body is immature, his training ten years at most, even the power he can use doesn't amount to much.		Even if he's the direct descendant of the Fuan Family, his body is immature, his training ten years at most, even the power he can use doesn't amount to much.

Eknight: /* Part 2 */

2015-03-21T01:27:18Z

Part 2

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	Kazuma grimaced magnificently.		Kazuma grimaced magnificently.

	At the first glance, Kazuma seems irresponsible and practically he is fairly irresponsible but ~~his~~ his business ethics are unexpectedly high.		At the first glance, Kazuma seems irresponsible and practically he is fairly irresponsible but his business ethics are unexpectedly high.

	Dishonoring a contract was something that never happened.		Dishonoring a contract was something that never happened.
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	To Ayano that boy seemed clearly ahead of Kazuma as a Fujutsushi.		To Ayano that boy seemed clearly ahead of Kazuma as a Fujutsushi.

	Rather ~~that~~ using a different Jutsu, using the same and being defeated by a Jutsushi who has more excellent and had more talent was something she hadn't thought possible.		Rather than using a different Jutsu, using the same and being defeated by a Jutsushi who has more excellent and had more talent was something she hadn't thought possible.

	That is to say, thinking about it rationally, that's how it is. Kazuma cannot win against that boy.		That is to say, thinking about it rationally, that's how it is. Kazuma cannot win against that boy.
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	"Well, there seems to be a chance of success so I should leave it to him, no?"		"Well, there seems to be a chance of success so I should leave it to him, no?"

	But even so, alone, without panicking, Ayano descended at leisure the flight of stairs, aiming for the ground floor.		But even so, alone, without panicking, Ayano descended at leisure the flight of stairs, aiming for the ground floor.




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Eknight: /* Part 1 */

2015-03-20T22:31:42Z

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74.100.62.225: /* Part 3 */

2013-11-19T01:19:00Z

Part 3

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	"You showed me too much, idiot," Kazuma coldly said over his shoulder to the shocked boy.		"You showed me too much, idiot," Kazuma coldly said over his shoulder to the shocked boy.

	"No matter how strong your attack is, if you show it many times over, I will think of one or two countermeasures. What humans can manipulate is not all mighty or absolute. Without even realizing that, you thought yourself invincible just because a somewhat convenient tool happened to fall in your hands, so you ~~loose~~."		"No matter how strong your attack is, if you show it many times over, I will think of one or two countermeasures. What humans can manipulate is not all mighty or absolute. Without even realizing that, you thought yourself invincible just because a somewhat convenient tool happened to fall in your hands, so you lose."

	"Kuu......" Murmured the boy in regret.		"Kuu......" Murmured the boy in regret.

Nwms8: Grammar edits, some rewording done.

2013-10-23T23:46:23Z

Grammar edits, some rewording done.

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Antanaru: /* Part 1 */ Spelling and spacing

2013-10-19T20:18:53Z

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-=TwoFace=-: Duplicate of same words

2013-10-16T04:00:38Z

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	If that's the case, from now on assuming Kazuma would hurt even more would she not even be able to see that?		If that's the case, from now on assuming Kazuma would hurt even more would she not even be able to see that?

	No, everything she saw of Kazuma ~~until now~~ until now was maybe nothing but a mask that concealed his wounded heart.		No, everything she saw of Kazuma until now was maybe nothing but a mask that concealed his wounded heart.

	She was supposed to have come to understand Kazuma, even just a little.		She was supposed to have come to understand Kazuma, even just a little.

-=TwoFace=- at 03:55, 16 October 2013

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	"--------hey"		"--------hey"

	"Huh? Aah. is it over? "		"Huh? Aah, is it over? "

	Glaring at him with half opened eyes, the man - Yagami Kazuma briefly looked over the surroundings and nodded once. And then, he declared without hesitation.		Glaring at him with half opened eyes, the man - Yagami Kazuma briefly looked over the surroundings and nodded once. And then, he declared without hesitation.

137.132.250.11: /* Chapter 1 - Disaster together with the wind */

2013-10-14T22:20:09Z

Chapter 1 - Disaster together with the wind

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	"But, you see......"		"But, you see......"

	"Don't <<But, you see....>> me!! Stop talking immediately like a spoiled mama's boy, it disgusts me! "		"Don't <<But, you see....>> me!! Stop talking immediately like a spoiled mama's boy, it disgusts me!"

	She finished her sentence in one breath.		She finished her sentence in one breath.
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	That was by no means something insincere, a really bad feeling was spreading on her skin.		That was by no means something insincere, a really bad feeling was spreading on her skin.

	""Well, leaving that aside"		"Well, leaving that aside"

	In front of Ayano breathing heavily because of too much stimulation, as if nothing happened, Kazuma quickly regained his usual sarcastic manner.		In front of Ayano breathing heavily because of too much stimulation, as if nothing happened, Kazuma quickly regained his usual sarcastic manner.
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	As if he was waiting for them to prepare, he stood still spear ready.		As if he was waiting for them to prepare, he stood still spear ready.

	''"What is going on---------? "''		''"What is going on---------?"''

	Why did the boy overlooked such a definite gap?		Why did the boy overlooked such a definite gap?

137.132.250.11: /* Part 3 */

2013-10-14T22:17:23Z

Part 3

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	"-------tch!"		"-------tch!"

	""--------"		"--------"

	The power of the boy and Kazuma, one trying to draw back the other to snatch away, competed for a moment.		The power of the boy and Kazuma, one trying to draw back the other to snatch away, competed for a moment.