Kenshin no Keishousha:Volume 1 Chapter4 - Revision history

Dual Blades at 03:54, 21 July 2014

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D0nut at 05:14, 11 May 2014

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	This light was identical to the one discharged by Hinako when he first encountered her that one night.		This light was identical to the one discharged by Hinako when he first encountered her that one night.

	The ~~girl~~ of the sun————		The maiden of the sun————

	Kurou unwittingly recalled that line. Was it the power to eliminate all traces of flame based mystic arts? In that case, the attack Neena unleashed from before was also stopped by her.		Kurou unwittingly recalled that line. Was it the power to eliminate all traces of flame based mystic arts? In that case, the attack Neena unleashed from before was also stopped by her.

Thatsjustpeachy at 23:47, 7 November 2013

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	Manaka stated as she shrugged.		Manaka stated as she shrugged.

	“However, I feel that this ~~boy————Lars’~~ sword is indeed embedded with a demonic essence.”		“However, I feel that this boy————Lars’s sword is indeed embedded with a demonic essence.”

	“Goodness gracious, no matter who it is they all say approximately the same sort of thing.”		“Goodness gracious, no matter who it is they all say approximately the same sort of thing.”

Scr.zero at 13:03, 7 November 2013

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	Manaka stated as she shrugged.		Manaka stated as she shrugged.

	“However, I feel that this ~~boy————Lars’s~~ sword is indeed embedded with a demonic essence.”		“However, I feel that this boy————Lars’ sword is indeed embedded with a demonic essence.”

	“Goodness gracious, no matter who it is they all say approximately the same sort of thing.”		“Goodness gracious, no matter who it is they all say approximately the same sort of thing.”
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	“Guh!”		“Guh!”

	Accompanying that sound, ~~Kurou’s~~ immediately felt a burning sensation on his shoulders.		Accompanying that sound, Kurou immediately felt a burning sensation on his shoulders.

	It was because he was unable to fully avoid Manaka’s blade which lead to his left shoulder being slashed. Had he not partially evaded her blade, he might have lost his entire left arm. Even until now, he had dreaded being engulfed by a Swordie’s blade.		It was because he was unable to fully avoid Manaka’s blade which lead to his left shoulder being slashed. Had he not partially evaded her blade, he might have lost his entire left arm. Even until now, he had dreaded being engulfed by a Swordie’s blade.
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	Kurou’s maximum currently culminated in astonishing speeds. He instantly closed in————		Kurou’s maximum currently culminated in astonishing speeds. He instantly closed in————

	“Oh jeez, you are really ~~get~~ on my nerves! So annoying!”		“Oh jeez, you are really getting on my nerves! So annoying!”

	Manaka stated as such. She raised the Dancer and jumped back a few meters.		Manaka stated as such. She raised the Dancer and jumped back a few meters.
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	Sefi reacted much quicker than Kurou. Standing by Hinako’s side, she used the Starbreaker to block Neena’s sword.		Sefi reacted much quicker than Kurou. Standing by Hinako’s side, she used the Starbreaker to block Neena’s sword.

	~~Neena~~ strength surpassed Sefi’s. However, it was not to the point where Sefi crumbled under the might of Neena’s sword.		Neena’s strength surpassed Sefi’s. However, it was not to the point where Sefi crumbled under the might of Neena’s sword.

	“Hinako, that’s enough. Come back here with me————”		“Hinako, that’s enough. Come back here with me————”

Morgi: /* Chapter 4 - A Kiss to the Sword */

2013-09-06T09:30:08Z

Chapter 4 - A Kiss to the Sword

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	As Kurou’s body was irradiating white light, the killer strike that was directed toward the beautiful princess————		As Kurou’s body was irradiating white light, the killer strike that was directed toward the beautiful princess————

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Nukie at 11:55, 2 September 2013

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	Lars interrupted immediately.		Lars interrupted immediately.

	“You are Manaka, one of the Seven Swords. The scope of things is way too ~~smalI~~ for this incident to involve someone as significant as you. Even if she’s the princess of the four generals, if it’s just killing Sefi, then having you personally come out is a bit unusual isn’t it?”		“You are Manaka, one of the Seven Swords. The scope of things is way too small for this incident to involve someone as significant as you. Even if she’s the princess of the four generals, if it’s just killing Sefi, then having you personally come out is a bit unusual isn’t it?”

	“That’s because the numbers of my group is insufficient. Everyone has to share the responsibility even if it’s just some diminutive task. Due to this cumbersome yet convenient Seven Swords standing, I’m able to do numerous things. Furthermore, even now I need to begin attending to some trivial matters.”		“That’s because the numbers of my group is insufficient. Everyone has to share the responsibility even if it’s just some diminutive task. Due to this cumbersome yet convenient Seven Swords standing, I’m able to do numerous things. Furthermore, even now I need to begin attending to some trivial matters.”

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	Each of the nine streaks of light from the sword maneuver headed towards the incoming enemy.		Each of the nine streaks of light from the sword maneuver headed towards the incoming enemy.

	Kurou still should have been ~~able to spot it,~~ that minute opening from the incredible speed of the Dancer.		Kurou still should have been incapable of spotting that minute opening from the incredible speed of the Dancer.

	However, as long as his sword was in motion it should be fine. It was as if he was trying to chase after the light and become one with it.		However, as long as his sword was in motion it should be fine. It was as if he was trying to chase after the light and become one with it.

Thatsjustpeachy at 07:11, 2 September 2013

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D0nut: /* Chapter 4 - A Kiss to the Sword */

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Chapter 4 - A Kiss to the Sword

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	A Swordie’s light surfaces the moment they are born. Thenceforth, they are able to harness it with training and amplify it through a refining process. Manaka possessed this innate powerful light force and after much bitter training, she was able to control the light regarded as the “strongest among the seven”.		A Swordie’s light surfaces the moment they are born. Thenceforth, they are able to harness it with training and amplify it through a refining process. Manaka possessed this innate powerful light force and after much bitter training, she was able to control the light regarded as the “strongest among the seven”.

	Without needing to mention humans, even Swordies would probably have a strenuous time holding a sword upright in face of Manaka’s fully emitted light.		Without needing to mention humans, even Swordies would probably have a strenuous time holding a sword upright in the face of Manaka’s fully emitted light.

	Nevertheless, Lars maintained his cool when confronted with Manaka’s light force.		Nevertheless, Lars maintained his cool when confronted with Manaka’s light force.
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	“Fufu, you won’t be able to win if you’re just defending Lars.”		“Fufu, you won’t be able to win if you’re just defending Lars.”

	Due to the acute angles at which her sword maneuvers struck at, Manaka’s Dancer would never break regardless of how their blades crossed. In some ways, it resembled the Olden Style utilized by Kurou.		Due to the acute angles at which her sword maneuvers struck, Manaka’s Dancer would never break regardless of how their blades crossed. In some ways, it resembled the Olden Style utilized by Kurou.

	“As expected of Onee-sama! You’re so strong!”		“As expected of Onee-sama! You’re so strong!”
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	“Putting on an act or messing around wouldn’t result in such fluid wielding of the sword.”		“Putting on an act or messing around wouldn’t result in such fluid wielding of the sword.”

	Manaka’s sword was much lighter compared to Lars’s or Sefi’s swords. Being lighter only ~~results~~ in increased agility. Although there was a trade off in power, as long as she struck the opponent’s weak points then she would be able to remedy the issue. Of course, that kind of technique was already refined by Manaka ages ago.		Manaka’s sword was much lighter compared to Lars’s or Sefi’s swords. Being lighter only resulted in increased agility. Although there was a trade off in power, as long as she struck the opponent’s weak points then she would be able to remedy the issue. Of course, that kind of technique was already refined by Manaka ages ago.

	“Flames, go forth!”		“Flames, go forth!”

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	What was shocking was things went about as usual as if yesterday’s disturbance within the warehouse never happened. The elimination matches stayed on track and resumed as usual.		What was shocking was things went about as usual as if yesterday’s disturbance within the warehouse never happened. The elimination matches stayed on track and resumed as usual.

	Because of the agreement between Kurou and the ~~sun cultists~~, they did not pursue them. In consideration of Lima’s honor, the matter of her being wounded by a human was never disclosed. However, it was quite unimaginable that the incident’s follow up was conducted in a way as if nothing ever occurred.		Because of the agreement between Kurou and the Sun Cultists, they did not pursue them. In consideration of Lima’s honor, the matter of her being wounded by a human was never disclosed. However, it was quite unimaginable that the incident’s follow up was conducted in a way as if nothing ever occurred.

	Lars’s cover up of the incident was quite horrifying. You wouldn’t want this guy as your enemy.		Lars’s cover up of the incident was quite horrifying. You wouldn’t want this guy as your enemy.
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	“......”		“......”

	However, Hinako wasn’t a fast runner. It was obvious that she didn’t have adequate exercise since she had always been imprisoned in a ~~sun cult~~ facility. Nevertheless, there was no way he could just ditch her.		However, Hinako wasn’t a fast runner. It was obvious that she didn’t have adequate exercise since she had always been imprisoned in a Sun Cult facility. Nevertheless, there was no way he could just ditch her.

	“Kurou-kun.”		“Kurou-kun.”
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	Manaka took a peek at the girl who was laid down on the spectator stands————Hinako.		Manaka took a peek at the girl who was laid down on the spectator stands————Hinako.

	“Oh, so that means the Blazes are in cahoots with the ~~sun cult~~?”		“Oh, so that means the Blazes are in cahoots with the Sun Cult?”

	“Didn’t I just mention this? We were originally a rare race. The ~~sun cult~~ on the other hand consists only of humans. To us, there is some ~~exploitive~~ value in them.”		“Didn’t I just mention this? We were originally a rare race. The Sun Cult on the other hand consists only of humans. To us, there is some exploitative value in them.”

	“Rounding up people......could it be, you guys are plotting a military coup?”		“Rounding up people......could it be, you guys are plotting a military coup?”
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	He didn’t feel stressed in the least bit from that sudden exchange.		He didn’t feel stressed in the least bit from that sudden exchange.

	Manaka was a Blaze and there was the fear that she was the one manipulating the entire situation from behind the scenes. He trusted her and even handed over Hinako who was now taken away————was she planning on using her? Or did she plan on returning her to the ~~sun cult~~? Furthermore, just when did she realize that Kurou and Lars had to be eliminated as well?		Manaka was a Blaze and there was the fear that she was the one manipulating the entire situation from behind the scenes. He trusted her and even handed over Hinako who was now taken away————was she planning on using her? Or did she plan on returning her to the Sun Cult? Furthermore, just when did she realize that Kurou and Lars had to be eliminated as well?

	Without a doubt, the Sword General was Kurou’s enemy.		Without a doubt, the Sword General was Kurou’s enemy.
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	That kind of thing, why would it happen now————		That kind of thing, why would it happen now————

	“I......I see. Now I see why the ~~sun cult~~ highly coveted Hinako. Perhaps the group’s orders to obliterate Sefi were also————”		“I......I see. Now I see why the Sun Cult highly coveted Hinako. Perhaps the group’s orders to obliterate Sefi were also————”

	“Perhaps so......however, I’ll have to contemplate over this later. Right now we still need to determine a victor.”		“Perhaps so......however, I’ll have to contemplate over this later. Right now we still need to determine a victor.”
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	Sefi and Hinako, what happened between them? In order to find out, he had to protect his own life here.		Sefi and Hinako, what happened between them? In order to find out, he had to protect his own life here.

	“Yes, if Kurou-kun were to lose here then I’ll end up killing Sefi. Hinako will probably once again be imprisoned by the ~~sun cult~~.”		“Yes, if Kurou-kun were to lose here then I’ll end up killing Sefi. Hinako will probably once again be imprisoned by the Sun Cult.”

	“How regrettable, I won’t let that happen. Although bathing with you was nice, it’s unfortunate that it wasn’t with a younger girl.”		“How regrettable, I won’t let that happen. Although bathing with you was nice, it’s unfortunate that it wasn’t with a younger girl.”

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	“That’s true.”		“That’s true.”

	Despite her attitude, Manaka was someone worthy of being one of the Seven Swords. One or two arts users ~~was~~ probably no big deal.		Despite her attitude, Manaka was someone worthy of being one of the Seven Swords. One or two arts users were probably no big deal.

	Kurou and Sefi both walked out of the lounge and scurried along the path. They kept a close watch on all sides as Kurou retrieved his cellphone to call Manaka.		Kurou and Sefi both walked out of the lounge and scurried along the path. They kept a close watch on all sides as Kurou retrieved his cellphone to call Manaka.
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	Sword Saint Hyouka cheerfully stated towards her disciple who disgracefully had his sword knocked to the ground.		Sword Saint Hyouka cheerfully stated towards her disciple who disgracefully had his sword knocked to the ground.

	Kurou pressed against his hand as he gazed towards the katana that had been sent flying a couple meters away. He tightly bit his lips. He understood he was clearly defeated, but having this mentioned to him made him ~~felt~~ as if he was slayed.		Kurou pressed against his hand as he gazed towards the katana that had been sent flying a couple meters away. He tightly bit his lips. He understood he was clearly defeated, but having this mentioned to him made him feel as if he was slayed.

	Almost seven years ~~has~~ passed since he became Hyouka’s disciple and embarked on training deep into the mountains with her.		Almost seven years had passed since he became Hyouka’s disciple and embarked on training deep into the mountains with her.

	The mountains were solely chosen as a place for training. Except for the small hut he lived in with the Sword Saint, there weren’t any other man-made structures. Nearly every day involved crossing swords with authentic swords by a small stream next to the hut. This sort of thing would repeat itself daily.		The mountains were solely chosen as a place for training. Except for the small hut he lived in with the Sword Saint, there weren’t any other man-made structures. Nearly every day involved crossing swords with authentic swords by a small stream next to the hut. This sort of thing would repeat itself daily.
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	The Olden Style relied on preventing your opponent from being able to predict you while being able to thoroughly read your opponent’s movements. This kind of prediction did not rely on visualizing those movements or physical capabilities, but rather experience and intuition. Of course, this sort of matter wasn’t facilely attainable.		The Olden Style relied on preventing your opponent from being able to predict you while being able to thoroughly read your opponent’s movements. This kind of prediction did not rely on visualizing those movements or physical capabilities, but rather experience and intuition. Of course, this sort of matter wasn’t facilely attainable.

	“Do you think you can master the Olden Style? Although Kurou is far from being capable of doing so, your father’s research was incredible. As his son, it would be a disservice to him if you are only able to become some dabbling sword master.”		“Do you think you can master the Olden Style? Although Kurou is far from being capable of doing so, your father’s research was incredible. As his son, it would be a disservice to him if you are only able to become some dabbling sword master.”

	“Guh......”		“Guh......”
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	“We let her escape again. Curses......aren’t we about to be eliminated by Neena?”		“We let her escape again. Curses......aren’t we about to be eliminated by Neena?”

	Kurou surveyed his surroundings. Not only was he unable to find a fire extinguisher, the sprinkler system was also unresponsive. The flames on the other hand ~~was~~ burning more intensely without any indication of dying out.		Kurou surveyed his surroundings. Not only was he unable to find a fire extinguisher, the sprinkler system was also unresponsive. The flames on the other hand were burning more intensely without any indication of dying out.

	“We have no choice, let’s go around that way. Sefi, follow me. As things stand, we no longer know who to trust anymore.”		“We have no choice, let’s go around that way. Sefi, follow me. As things stand, we no longer know who to trust anymore.”
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	This action, which exuded womanly charms, sent the heartstrings shaking.		This action, which exuded womanly charms, sent the heartstrings shaking.

	“As expected, Manaka is ~~sure~~ terrifying.”		“As expected, Manaka sure is terrifying.”

	There it was, Kurou’s heart began pounding nonstop.		There it was, Kurou’s heart began pounding nonstop.
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	This time there wasn’t seven duplicates, but five instead. Looks like the wound she had suffered from Lars was quite grave.		This time there wasn’t seven duplicates, but five instead. Looks like the wound she had suffered from Lars was quite grave.

	However, the disparity in strength between Kurou and hers was still too great even though she had been dealt a wound like this. Even just five of them utilizing the Chaos Dancer would probably desecrate Kurou without difficulty.		However, the disparity in strength between Kurou and hers was still too great even though she had been dealt a wound like this. Even just five of them utilizing the Chaos Dancer would probably desecrate Kurou without difficulty.

	However, he couldn’t lose here.		However, he couldn’t lose here.