Kenshin no Keishousha:Volume 2 Chapter2 - Revision history

Rxls at 06:10, 5 April 2017

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	=The Maidens' Day Off=		==Chapter 2 - The Maidens' Day Off==

Kemm: Found the part. Those sentences are said by the guys on the other side. The first one is jealous and in disbelief that he didn't accept feeling honoured. The second one is jealous and talking to him in a cocky tone, telling him he's going to trash him.

2015-03-13T20:17:04Z

Found the part. Those sentences are said by the guys on the other side. The first one is jealous and in disbelief that he didn't accept feeling honoured. The second one is jealous and talking to him in a cocky tone, telling him he's going to trash him.

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	What should I do? Kurou stressed over the situation, which was a rare occurrence for him.		What should I do? Kurou stressed over the situation, which was a rare occurrence for him.

	“What the, do you ~~address people with ‘chan’~~?”		“What the heck, even though Rinne-chan has expressly talked to you?”

	~~“Alright~~, hurry and have a seat. ~~Let me~~ knock you down a peg.”		“Listen up, hurry and have a seat. I'll knock you down a peg.”

	Sitting in front of the console that was across from Rinne was a brown-haired boy and a friend of his who had short hair standing close to Kurou. The two of them were approximately the same age as Kurou.		Sitting in front of the console that was across from Rinne was a brown-haired boy and a friend of his who had short hair standing close to Kurou. The two of them were approximately the same age as Kurou.

D0nut at 07:08, 10 August 2014

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	The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.		The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.

	~~Due to being~~ the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and Hinako. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.		Being the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and Hinako. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.

	“The weather has been quite good today.”		“The weather has been quite good today.”

Thatsjustpeachy at 07:04, 10 August 2014

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	The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.		The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.

	~~Being~~ the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and Hinako. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.		Due to being the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and Hinako. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.

	“The weather has been quite good today.”		“The weather has been quite good today.”
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	“That’s what’s on your mind under these circumstances……?		“That’s what’s on your mind under these circumstances……?

	Akari, who was at ~~her~~ wits end, glanced over.		Akari, who was at wits end, glanced over.

	Having been surrounded by the widely known armed division of the Sun Cult, this was perhaps not even an issue for him. However, Kurou displayed no fear at all.		Having been surrounded by the widely known armed division of the Sun Cult, this was perhaps not even an issue for him. However, Kurou displayed no fear at all.

Thatsjustpeachy at 06:59, 10 August 2014

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	The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.		The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.

	~~Due to being~~ the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and Hinako. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.		Being the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and Hinako. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.

	“The weather has been quite good today.”		“The weather has been quite good today.”

Dual Blades at 07:40, 5 August 2014

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	“That’s what’s on your mind under these circumstances……?		“That’s what’s on your mind under these circumstances……?

	Akari, who was at wits end, glanced over.		Akari, who was at her wits end, glanced over.

	Having been surrounded by the widely known armed division of the Sun Cult, this was perhaps not even an issue for him. However, Kurou displayed no fear at all.		Having been surrounded by the widely known armed division of the Sun Cult, this was perhaps not even an issue for him. However, Kurou displayed no fear at all.
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	The cultists who were given the order immediately charged at Rinne.		The cultists who were given the order immediately charged at Rinne.

	Damn, those guys ~~do not~~ know Rinne is a Swordie.		Damn, those guys don't know Rinne is a Swordie.

	When Kurou remembered that it was already too late.		When Kurou remembered that it was already too late.
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	Akari and the other two nuns just stood there stupefied.		Akari and the other two nuns just stood there stupefied.

	The situation afterwards can just be passed on to them perhaps. Of course, Kurou never planning on assaulting human girls.		The situation afterwards can just be passed on to them perhaps. Of course, Kurou was never planning on assaulting human girls.

	“Hey hey, what’s going on? Rolling over like a dead fish. So much for me helping out, it even looked quite interesting around here.”		“Hey hey, what’s going on? Rolling over like a dead fish. So much for me helping out, it even looked quite interesting around here.”
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	The bulky guy laughed after he spoke. He leisurely closed in on Kurou and Rinne.		The bulky guy laughed after he spoke. He leisurely closed in on Kurou and Rinne.

	He very casually closed the distance. Moreover, it did not seem as if it was a technique from any ~~swordsman~~ or wrestling.		He very casually closed the distance. Moreover, it did not seem as if it was a technique from any swordsmanship or wrestling.

	However————		However————
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	“Yes, it is Hinako.”		“Yes, it is Hinako.”

	She had her usual stoic expression while she was ~~slowing~~ eating a crepe-like treat.		She had her usual stoic expression while she was slowly eating a crepe-like treat.

	It was just one thing after another————From the looks of it, the time to feel at ease for Kurou seemed to be far away.		It was just one thing after another————From the looks of it, the time to feel at ease for Kurou seemed to be far away.

Bilagaana: added simplenav

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added simplenav

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	It was just one thing after another————From the looks of it, the time to feel at ease for Kurou seemed to be far away.		It was just one thing after another————From the looks of it, the time to feel at ease for Kurou seemed to be far away.

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Acolyte: If you want to take it that way, 'due to' will sound even better

2014-08-04T22:17:37Z

If you want to take it that way, 'due to' will sound even better

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	The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.		The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.

	~~Because of~~ being the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and Hinako. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.		Due to being the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and Hinako. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.

	“The weather has been quite good today.”		“The weather has been quite good today.”

Bilagaana: think that's what it should be

2014-08-04T22:09:31Z

think that's what it should be

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	The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.		The one who struck a conversation was Sefi, who was carrying a backpack with her. It would appear that she had just returned from her classes.

	~~On behalf~~ of being the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and ~~Sefi~~. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.		Because of being the one who “monitors the two humans”, Sefi was now able to casually converse with Kurou and Hinako. However, she would never show her good relations with them in public. With Kurou’s coarse attitude, it was not like he cared about what they were perceived as in front of other people.

	“The weather has been quite good today.”		“The weather has been quite good today.”

Thatsjustpeachy at 06:16, 4 August 2014

2014-08-04T06:16:15Z

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