Kenshin no Keishousha:Volume 2 Prologue - Revision history

Hiro Hayase at 07:25, 14 December 2015

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	The sunlight streamed through her golden hair, which was tied in a sidetail, she was wearing a pale beige blazer, and the hem of her miniskirt was flapping about.		The sunlight streamed through her golden hair, which was tied in a sidetail, she was wearing a pale beige blazer, and the hem of her miniskirt was flapping about.

	The blade of the sword she was wielding was broad and thick, and it was roughly as long as she was tall. Just ~~once~~ look at it and it was clear that this sword was a genuine broadsword-esque blade. To a normal person, there was no way a slender girl like her would be able to handle such a large object. Even a fifteen year old male like Kurou, who had an average constitution, would find lifting something like that up tough, to say nothing of swinging it about.		The blade of the sword she was wielding was broad and thick, and it was roughly as long as she was tall. Just one look at it and it was clear that this sword was a genuine broadsword-esque blade. To a normal person, there was no way a slender girl like her would be able to handle such a large object. Even a fifteen year old male like Kurou, who had an average constitution, would find lifting something like that up tough, to say nothing of swinging it about.

	However, the blonde girl was handling it lightly—even wielding it single-handedly on occasion. Her practice swings were stirring up wind in the grove, causing the trees to sway and their trunks to bend. It was scenery that didn’t look rooted in reality at all.		However, the blonde girl was handling it lightly—even wielding it single-handedly on occasion. Her practice swings were stirring up wind in the grove, causing the trees to sway and their trunks to bend. It was scenery that didn’t look rooted in reality at all.
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	“I requested the academy to build it. In the future, it will be used for the security guards in the garden to rest.”		“I requested the academy to build it. In the future, it will be used for the security guards in the garden to rest.”

	Kurou nodded, chuckling wryly on the inside. It was hard to the academy to refuse any of Sefi’s requests. She was a Swordie with that much influence and power after all.		Kurou nodded, chuckling wryly on the inside. It was hard for the academy to refuse any of Sefi’s requests. She was a Swordie with that much influence and power after all.

	Living together with Hinako was something that was unavoidable and he couldn’t cancel, but now that Sefi was living together with them…		Living together with Hinako was something that was unavoidable and he couldn’t cancel, but now that Sefi was living together with them…

はじめ at 12:05, 28 January 2014

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	A youth in a school uniform was looking up dreamily at the sky while he walked on.		A youth in a school uniform was looking up dreamily at the sky while he walked on.

	The monotonous sky seemed to be the only one ignoring approaching summer’s presence, ~~it’s~~ appearance as normal as it always was.		The monotonous sky seemed to be the only one ignoring approaching summer’s presence, its appearance as normal as it always was.

	Looking at the scenery in the sky, the youth— Kurou felt a sense of relief.		Looking at the scenery in the sky, the youth— Kurou felt a sense of relief.

SirEatALot at 11:18, 2 January 2014

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			== Prologue ==

	The pale blue sky stretched for miles, with not a single cloud to be seen.		The pale blue sky stretched for miles, with not a single cloud to be seen.

Bakapervert at 00:21, 15 November 2013

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	She was an alien, a being from another world known as a Swordie. Swordies could crush rock with their bare hands, and sprint faster than the wind. From the moment they were born, Swordies possessed speed and power that were superior to normal humans.		She was an alien, a being from another world known as a Swordie. Swordies could crush rock with their bare hands, and sprint faster than the wind. From the moment they were born, Swordies possessed speed and power that were superior to normal humans.

	Above all else though, Swordies were a race that was proficient with the sword from the time they were born into the world. She wasn’t just swinging her sword using brute force, but with a graceful swordsmanship that ~~bellied~~ her age of fifteen. Her sword looked like it could easily cut through iron.		Above all else though, Swordies were a race that was proficient with the sword from the time they were born into the world. She wasn’t just swinging her sword using brute force, but with a graceful swordsmanship that belied her age of fifteen. Her sword looked like it could easily cut through iron.

	A human like Kurou was completely different. Although appearance wise humans and Swordies looked alike, they were two completely different living organisms.		A human like Kurou was completely different. Although appearance wise humans and Swordies looked alike, they were two completely different living organisms.

Bilagaana: fixes

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	“That would have been some fine service, but… hang on. Where did you even get that nurse uniform in the first place?”		“That would have been some fine service, but… hang on. Where did you even get that nurse uniform in the first place?”

	It was inside the closet of clothes Manaka gave to me.		“It was inside the closet of clothes Manaka gave to me.”

	“That woman… Such a needless souvenir to leave behind.”		“That woman… Such a needless souvenir to leave behind.”
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	Living together with Hinako was something that was unavoidable and he couldn’t cancel, but now that Sefi was living together with them…		Living together with Hinako was something that was unavoidable and he couldn’t cancel, but now that Sefi was living together with them…

	“So in other words… It’s an all I can sexually ~~harrass~~ Sefi buffet from dawn to dusk?!”		“So in other words… It’s an all I can sexually harass Sefi buffet from dawn to dusk?!”

	“Like hell it is!”		“Like hell it is!”

Bilagaana: removed alt language category, now that this is in proper english

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removed alt language category, now that this is in proper english

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Bilagaana: typo

2013-11-14T21:17:42Z

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	“Speaking of which, you’re finally discharged. I was wondering how long you were going to spend being cooped up in there.”		“Speaking of which, you’re finally discharged. I was wondering how long you were going to spend being cooped up in there.”

	“I’m a human, you know. I got a deep gouging wound on my shoulder, not to mentioned I was ~~slashedin~~ various other places. The doctor remarked that the fact that I could be discharged in two week was already a miracle of sorts.”		“I’m a human, you know. I got a deep gouging wound on my shoulder, not to mentioned I was slashed in various other places. The doctor remarked that the fact that I could be discharged in two week was already a miracle of sorts.”

	Kurou lightly patted his left shoulder. There was some stiffness left in it, but it had roughly healed from the incident two weeks ago.		Kurou lightly patted his left shoulder. There was some stiffness left in it, but it had roughly healed from the incident two weeks ago.

Thatsjustpeachy at 18:09, 14 November 2013

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