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	The father immediately stood up, and with a tone completely different from before, “We’re doing this for your own good!”		The father immediately stood up, and with a tone completely different from before, “We’re doing this for your own good!”

	The mother also stood up and stared down at her son. “You need to join the army and become a hero. That way, you will be able to enter a good college and university <!---"College and university" meaning both? Leave if intended.-->, and then you will get to work for a large company. Don’t you understand? We are doing this for you. Didn’t you say that everyone in your class is joining? Do you want to lose to them? Is it okay with you if you get left behind?”		The mother also stood up and stared down at her son. “You need to join the army and become a hero. That way, you will be able to enter a good college and university<!---"College and university" meaning both? Leave if intended.-->, and then you will get to work for a large company. Don’t you understand? We are doing this for you. Didn’t you say that everyone in your class is joining? Do you want to lose to them? Is it okay with you if you get left behind?”

	“But… Johnny’s parents won’t let him go.”		“But… Johnny’s parents won’t let him go.”

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	Kino answered honestly before hopping onto Hermes. “Yeah. It was.”		Kino answered honestly before hopping onto Hermes. “Yeah. It was.”

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			=="Overprotection" -Do You Need It?-==

	It was the second day in the country.		It was the second day in the country.

	While on her way to pick up Hermes at the car park after lunch, Kino encountered a bickering couple in front of the ~~Motorrad~~. They appeared to be a married couple in their thirties, and beside them stood a boy, about ten years old and looking more than a little lost.		While on her way to pick up Hermes at the car park after lunch, Kino encountered a bickering couple in front of the motorrad. They appeared to be a married couple in their thirties, and beside them stood a boy, about ten years old and looking more than a little lost.

			The father spoke. “That’s why I’m telling you -- you’re being over-protective!”

			The mother retaliated. “No! You are being stubborn. This is for his own good!”

			The three were blocking her way to Hermes.

	~~The father said~~, ~~“that’s why I’m telling you -- you’re being over-protective.~~”		Kino began by clearing her throat, “Ahem!”

	~~The mother retaliated with~~, ~~“no! You are being stubborn. This is for his own good.”~~		Before she could manage to say "Excuse me, may I pass through and get to my bike behind you?" the father noticed her and asked,

	~~The three were blocking her way to Hermes, Kino began by clearing her throat. “Ahem!~~”		“What do you think?”

	~~Before she could manage to say “excuse me, may~~ I ~~pass through and get to my bike behind you?~~” the father ~~noticed her and asked~~, ~~“what do you think?”~~		“About what? I didn't hear the conversation...” Kino cocked an eyebrow, amused by the sudden question. But before the father could explain himself, the mother interjected,

	~~“About what? I didn't hear the conversation.” Kino cocked an eyebrow, amused by the sudden question. But before the father could explain himself, the mother interjected, “this~~ stubborn man insists that our boy doesn't need a bullet proof vest.”		"This stubborn man insists that our boy doesn't need a bullet proof vest.”

	“Why would he need something like that?” asked Kino.		“Why would he need something like that?” asked Kino.

	“The war, of course! Our son is joining the army.” replies the father.		“The war, of course! Our son is joining the army,” replies the father.

	“War?”		“War?”
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	“All he needs to do is say it’s a gift from his loving mother.”		“All he needs to do is say it’s a gift from his loving mother.”

	After listening to the parents, Kino glanced at the boy and said in a carefully neutral tone, ~~“why~~ don’t you ask the boy's opinion?”		After listening to the parents, Kino glanced at the boy and said in a carefully neutral tone,

			"Why don’t you ask the boy's opinion?”

	“Oh... you're right! What do you think, Timmy? You will listen to mommy, won't you?” The mother bent down to gently place her hands on his shoulders.		“Oh... you're right! What do you think, Timmy? You will listen to mommy, won't you?” The mother bent down to gently place her hands on his shoulders.
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	The boy answered with a quaver in his voice, “I... I don't wanna go to war!”		The boy answered with a quaver in his voice, “I... I don't wanna go to war!”

	The father immediately stood up and said in a hard voice, ~~“we’re~~ doing this for your own good!”		The father immediately stood up and said in a hard voice, “We’re doing this for your own good!”

	The mother also stood up and stared down at her son. “You need to join the army and become a hero. That way you will be able to enter a good college and university, and then you will get to work for a large company. Don't you understand? We are doing this for you. Didn't you say your friends in class are joining too? You don't want to lose touch with them, do you?”		The mother also stood up and stared down at her son. “You need to join the army and become a hero. That way you will be able to enter a good college and university, and then you will get to work for a large company. Don't you understand? We are doing this for you. Didn't you say your friends in class are joining too? You don't want to lose touch with them, do you?”
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	The mother took out a brand new bullet proof vest from her bag. The small vest was still wrapped in plastic, with a card attached that read, “to our brave young soldiers! Specially designed to reduce stress on the shoulders. Now with adjustable height to suit growing children. Ideal for long term use.”		The mother took out a brand new bullet proof vest from her bag. The small vest was still wrapped in plastic, with a card attached that read, “to our brave young soldiers! Specially designed to reduce stress on the shoulders. Now with adjustable height to suit growing children. Ideal for long term use.”

	She half-squatted and ~~place~~ one hand behind her son, gently urging him. “Put this one on and let’s go to the recruitment center. Don't be scared. Mommy will be with you.”		She half-squatted and placed one hand behind her son, gently urging him. “Put this one on and let’s go to the recruitment center. Don't be scared. Mommy will be with you.”

	“See? Like I said, you are being over protective.”		“See? Like I said, you are being over-protective.”

	“I just want the best for our son!”		“I just want the best for our son!”
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	Again the boy protested, now almost crying, “I... really... don't want to go!”		Again the boy protested, now almost crying, “I... really... don't want to go!”

	Kino interjected, her voice still carefully controlled, ~~“maybe~~ you should rethink this, with the boy.”		Kino interjected, her voice still carefully controlled,

			"Maybe you should rethink this, with the boy.”

	The parents gave Kino a horrified and insulted look.		The parents gave Kino a horrified and insulted look.
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	Kino watched as the parents dragged their son away.		Kino watched as the parents dragged their son away.

	She shook her head, and then turned back towards Hermes. The ~~Motorrad~~ greeted Kino as she kicked up the stand.		She shook her head, and then turned back towards Hermes. The motorrad greeted Kino as she kicked up the stand.

	“Must have been tough.”		“Must have been tough.”

	Kino answered honestly before hopping onto Hermes. “Yeah. It was.”		Kino answered honestly before hopping onto Hermes. “Yeah. It was.”

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	“But... Johnny's parents won't let him go.”		“But... Johnny's parents won't let him go.”

	The mother began to raise her voice at her son. “What Johnny ~~did~~ is not our problem, you should decide for yourself.”		The mother began to raise her voice at her son. “What Johnny does is not our problem, you should decide for yourself.”

	“You shouldn't compare yourself with others.”		“You shouldn't compare yourself with others.”
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	The poor boy's face went pale with terror after this outburst from his parents.		The poor boy's face went pale with terror after this outburst from his parents.

	The mother took out a brand new bullet proof vest from her bag. The small vest was still wrapped in plastic, with a ~~piece of~~ card attached ~~which~~ read, “to our brave young soldiers! Specially designed to reduce stress to the shoulders. Now with adjustable height to suit growing children. Ideal for long term use.”		The mother took out a brand new bullet proof vest from her bag. The small vest was still wrapped in plastic, with a card attached that read, “to our brave young soldiers! Specially designed to reduce stress on the shoulders. Now with adjustable height to suit growing children. Ideal for long term use.”

	She half-squatted and place one hand behind her son, gently urging him. “Put this one on and let’s go to the recruitment center. Don't be scared. Mommy will be with you.”		She half-squatted and place one hand behind her son, gently urging him. “Put this one on and let’s go to the recruitment center. Don't be scared. Mommy will be with you.”

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	“Must have been tough.”		“Must have been tough.”

			Kino answered honestly before hopping on to Hermes.

	“It was.”		“It was.”

	~~Kino answer honestly before hopping on to Hermes.~~

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	While on her way to pick up Hermes at the car park after lunch, Kino encountered a bickering couple in front of the motorrad. They appeared to be a married couple in their thirties, and beside them stood a boy, about ten years old and looking more than a little lost.		While on her way to pick up Hermes at the car park after lunch, Kino encountered a bickering couple in front of the motorrad. They appeared to be a married couple in their thirties, and beside them stood a boy, about ten years old and looking more than a little lost.

	The father spoke. “That’s why I’m telling you —— you’re being ~~over-protective~~!”		The father spoke. “That’s why I’m telling you —— you’re being overprotective!”

	The mother retaliated. “No! You are being stubborn. This is for his own good!”		The mother retaliated. “No! You are being stubborn. This is for his own good!”
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	“War?”		“War?”

	“Yes, it broke out a few months back. It is the first one we’ve had since the country was founded. The army has been recruiting soldiers for the front lines. My son will be joining the army today. Not to boast, but he will make a fine soldier, probably ~~will~~ return a hero too! But this foolish wife of mine keeps insisting that he wears a bulletproof vest. What nonsense.”		“Yes, it broke out a few months back. It is the first one we’ve had since the country was founded. The army has been recruiting soldiers for the front lines. My son will be joining the army today. Not to boast, but he will make a fine soldier, and probably return a hero too! But this foolish wife of mine keeps insisting that he wears a bulletproof vest. What nonsense.”

	“Honey, the vest will protect our son from shrapnel!”		“Honey, the vest will protect our son from shrapnel!”
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	“Even so, it will protect him from all sorts of things. He can’t be a hero if he gets hurt; our son needs to be able to do his best to become a hero.”		“Even so, it will protect him from all sorts of things. He can’t be a hero if he gets hurt; our son needs to be able to do his best to become a hero.”

	“But won’t the vest be heavy? He can’t move freely if he’s bogged down. Soldiers should have the grace of a butterfly and the sting of a bee! Also his squad will ridicule him if he’s the only one wearing one.”		“But won’t the vest be heavy? He can’t move freely if he’s bogged down. Soldiers should have the grace of a butterfly and the sting of a bee! Also, his squad will ridicule him if he’s the only one wearing one.”

	“All he needs to do is say it’s a gift from his loving mother.”		“All he needs to do is say it’s a gift from his loving mother.”
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	The father immediately stood up, and with a tone completely different from before, “We’re doing this for your own good!”		The father immediately stood up, and with a tone completely different from before, “We’re doing this for your own good!”

	The mother also stood up and stared down at her son. “You need to join the army and become a hero. That way you will be able to enter a good college and university, and then you will get to work for a large company. Don’t you understand? We are doing this for you. Didn’t you say that everyone in your class is joining? Do you want to lose to them? Is it okay with you to get left behind?”		The mother also stood up and stared down at her son. “You need to join the army and become a hero. That way, you will be able to enter a good college and university <!---"College and university" meaning both? Leave if intended.-->, and then you will get to work for a large company. Don’t you understand? We are doing this for you. Didn’t you say that everyone in your class is joining? Do you want to lose to them? Is it okay with you if you get left behind?”

	“But… Johnny’s parents won’t let him go.”		“But… Johnny’s parents won’t let him go.”

	The mother began to raise her voice at her son. “What Johnny does is not our problem~~, you~~ should decide for yourself!”		The mother began to raise her voice at her son. “What Johnny does is not our problem. You should decide for yourself!”

	“That’s right! You shouldn’t compare yourself to others!”		“That’s right! You shouldn’t compare yourself to others!”
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	The poor boy’s face went pale with terror after this outburst from his parents.		The poor boy’s face went pale with terror after this outburst from his parents.

	The mother took out a brand new bulletproof vest from her bag. The small vest was still wrapped in plastic~~, with a~~ card ~~attached that~~ read, “To our brave young soldiers! Specially designed to reduce stress on the shoulders. Now with adjustable height to suit growing children. Ideal for long term use.”		The mother took out a brand new bulletproof vest from her bag. The small vest was still wrapped in plastic. An attached card read: “To our brave young soldiers! Specially designed to reduce stress on the shoulders. Now with adjustable height to suit growing children. Ideal for long term use.”

	She half-squatted and placed one hand behind her son, gently urging him. “Put this one on and let’s go to the recruitment center. Don’t be scared. Mommy will be with you.”		She half-squatted and placed one hand behind her son, gently urging him. “Put this one on and let’s go to the recruitment center. Don’t be scared. Mommy will be with you.”

	“See? Like I said, you are being ~~over-protective~~.”		“See? Like I said, you are being overprotective.”

	“I just want the best for our son!”		“I just want the best for our son!”
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	Kino interjected, her voice still carefully controlled,		Kino interjected, her voice still carefully controlled,

	“Maybe you should rethink this, with the boy.”		“Maybe you should rethink this with the boy.”

	The parents gave Kino a horrified and insulted look.		The parents gave Kino a horrified and insulted look.
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	“Why don’t you mind your own business? This is a family matter.”		“Why don’t you mind your own business? This is a family matter.”

	“Yeah, this is our problem! We ~~really~~ are doing this for our child.”		“Yeah, this is our problem! We are doing this for our child.”

	“Right,” Kino nodded. “I’ll do that.”		“Right,” Kino nodded. “I’ll do that.”
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	Kino watched as the parents dragged their son away.		Kino watched as the parents dragged their son away.

	She shook her head, and ~~then~~ turned back towards Hermes. The motorrad greeted Kino as she kicked up the stand.		She shook her head, and turned back towards Hermes. The motorrad greeted Kino as she kicked up the stand.

	“Must have been tough.”		“Must have been tough.”