Kino no Tabi:Volume3 Chapter3 - Revision history

BloodyKitty at 15:44, 26 May 2013

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 ==“Land of Identical Faces” —HACCP—<ref>‘HACCP’ (Hazard Analysis and Critical Control Points) is originally a production process for monitoring of artillery shells during WWII and later on, applied to food, cosmetics, pharmaceuticals and other commercial products.</ref>==
 It was as if the place was filled with low tables.
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 “If you have the will to survive, it is not that easy to perish.”
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2012-10-09T08:00:38Z

2012-10-07T16:36:02Z

proofreading

2012-09-30T12:54:44Z

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	==“Land of Identical Faces” —HACCP—==		==“Land of Identical Faces” —HACCP—<ref>I'm still baffled as to what the title really means. The closest I can get to understanding it is knowing that 'HACCP' is a food quality control system used worldwide (it means 'Hazard Analysis and Critical Control Points'). The only connection I found is with the 'quality control' of the factory the guide was referring to.
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	"If you have the will to survive, it is not that easy to perish," the guide said with a grin.		"If you have the will to survive, it is not that easy to perish," the guide said with a grin.

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	==Translator's Notes==		==Translator's Notes==
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	I'm still baffled as to what the title really means. The closest I can get to understanding it is knowing that 'HACCP' is a food quality control system used worldwide (it means 'Hazard Analysis and Critical Control Points'). The only connection I found is with the 'quality control' of the factory the guide was referring to.

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2012-08-07T14:40:58Z

like this?

2012-08-07T13:36:49Z

separator replacement test... there's something odd.

2012-08-07T10:13:36Z

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	I'm still baffled as to what the title really means. The closest I can get to understanding it is knowing that 'HACCP' is a food quality control system used worldwide (it means 'Hazard Analysis and Critical Control Points'). The only connection I found is with the 'quality control' of the factory the guide was referring to.		I'm still baffled as to what the title really means. The closest I can get to understanding it is knowing that 'HACCP' is a food quality control system used worldwide (it means 'Hazard Analysis and Critical Control Points'). The only connection I found is with the 'quality control' of the factory the guide was referring to.

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			{{Navigation
			\| Kino no Tabi
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume3_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume3_Chapter4\|Chapter 4]]
			}}
			</noinclude>

2012-08-06T14:26:55Z

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	Kino was guided through their spacious garden. Over there was a pretty lawn and plants that looked like a lot of care had gone into them, as well as a large table. On the table, dishes were arranged.		Kino was guided through their spacious garden. Over there was a pretty lawn and plants that looked like a lot of care had gone into them, as well as a large table. On the table, dishes were arranged.

	The guide told his children to line up in the order of their birth, as ~~the~~ was going to introduce them. The children all lined up in a row.		The guide told his children to line up in the order of their birth, as he was going to introduce them. The children all lined up in a row.

	"Now then, starting from the right: My eldest daughter, Hen, twelve years old; my second eldest daughter, Duo, eleven years old; my eldest son Tria, ten years old.”		"Now then, starting from the right: My eldest daughter, Hen, twelve years old; my second eldest daughter, Duo, eleven years old; my eldest son Tria, ten years old.”

2012-08-05T10:00:59Z

Completed the last third of the chapter, plus major translation check.

2012-07-04T18:06:10Z

added footer

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	As Kino said this, one of the soldiers crouched on the ground, and lifted up a cloth. There was a hole, in which was hidden a small buggy.		As Kino said this, one of the soldiers crouched on the ground, and lifted up a cloth. There was a hole, in which was hidden a small buggy.

			<noinclude>
			{{Navigation
			\| Kino no Tabi
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume3_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume3_Chapter4\|Chapter 4]]
			}}
			</noinclude>