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Ella.servantes: proofreading

2012-10-07T16:35:15Z

proofreading

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	=="Amidst the Clouds・b" —Blinder・b—==		=="Amidst the Clouds・b" —Blinder・b—==


	It was completely white.		It was completely white.

	Above, below, to the right, to the left, there was only white. It was a space of nothing but the color white.		Above, below, to the right, to the left, there was only white. It was a space of nothing but the color white.

	And then, the low wind, like the ~~howl~~ of a ~~giant~~ animal~~, was~~ heard.		And then, the low rumble of the wind was heard; it was like the roar of a gigantic animal.

			“Wait.” A voice could be heard calling out. It seemed like that of a boy.

	~~"Wait." A~~ voice ~~could be heard calling out. It seemed like~~ the ~~voice of a boy~~.		“Can you see me?” This voice asked towards the space where nothing was visible.

	~~"Can you see me?" This~~ voice ~~asked toward~~ the ~~space where nothing was visible~~.		“No, not at all.” Another voice immediately answered. It was a bit higher than the first voice.

	~~"No~~, ~~not at all." Another voice immediately answered. It was~~ a ~~bit higher-pitched than~~ the first voice.		“You can’t, even though we’re so close? I think it’s best if we don’t move for a while,” said the first voice. ‘Okay,’ the second voice agreed shortly, and continued,

	~~"You can't~~, ~~even though we're so close? For now~~, ~~I think it's best if we don't move for a while," said~~ the ~~first~~ voice~~. 'Alright,'~~ said ~~the second voice shortly~~. ~~And then,~~		“It’s magnificent, not being able to see anything at all,” the voice said as though its owner was having fun.

	~~"It's magnificent, not being able to see anything at all," the voice said as though its owner is having fun.~~		“It’s magnificent to not see anything, huh?” the first voice replied.

	~~"It's~~ magnificent to not see anything, huh?" the first voice replied.

	The echo of the roaring wind grew louder for just a moment.		The echo of the roaring wind grew louder for just a moment.

	The other voice, in a lower tone, ~~said, "But~~ soon ~~we'll~~ be able to see again."		The other voice spoke in a lower tone, “But soon we’ll be able to see again.”

	~~"We'll~~ be able to see, huh?" said the first voice. At that time, the white world quivered. The direction in which the wind was blowing became bright for a moment.		“We’ll be able to see, huh?” said the first voice. At that time, the white world quivered. The direction in which the wind was blowing became bright for a moment.

	~~"Hey~~. If you were able to see again, but there was nothing at all before your eyes, what would you do? ~~Wouldn't~~ you be a little ~~happy~~?" the first voice asked.		“Hey. If you were able to see again, but there was nothing at all before your eyes, what would you do? Wouldn’t you be a little happier?” the first voice asked.

	~~"Yeah~~. But, ~~it would be because~~ I know something like that is impossible."		“Well, yeah. But, I know something like that is impossible.”

	~~"What~~ if things cleared up? What would you do then?"		“What if things cleared up? What would you do then?”

	~~"In~~ that ~~case... There's nothing~~ I ~~can even do about being here~~, ~~much less anything~~ I can do ~~in that situation~~. I would just leave. ~~That's~~ all."		“Well… it can’t be helped that I am in this kind of place, and there’s nothing I can do. I would just leave. That’s all.”

	~~"There was a person~~ who ~~couldn't~~ do that," the first voice said.		“There are also people who couldn’t do that,” the first voice said.

	~~"Yeah~~.~~.. One~~ tiny bit of information~~. If~~ only they ~~had that~~ little ~~bit of information~~. If only someone somewhere told them about it. If only we arrived here one day earlier."		“Yeah…. Just one tiny bit of information — if only they knew about it even a little. If only someone somewhere told them about it. If only we arrived here one day earlier.”

	~~"Don't~~ be so hard on yourself."		“Don’t be so hard on yourself.”

	~~"Yeah~~. ~~It's~~ possible that ~~there's~~ something that I ~~don't~~ know as well. And in that case, I might have ended up in similar circumstances. Of course I want to avoid it, but if I ~~don't~~ know how, ~~there's~~ nothing I can do.~~" The voice said this,~~ paused for a moment, and then asked,		“Yeah. It’s possible that there’s something that I don’t know as well. And in that case, I might have ended up in similar circumstances. Of course I want to avoid that, but if I don’t know how, there’s nothing I can do,” said the voice. It paused for a moment, and then asked,

	~~"Hey~~, Hermes. Would I have known?"		“Hey, Hermes. Would I have known?”

	A response came immediately.		A response came immediately.

	~~"Who~~ knows?"		“Who knows?”

	The windward brightness increased, and the white grew even lighter.		The windward brightness increased, and the white grew even lighter.

	~~"It'll~~ clear up soon, Kino," the first voice ~~said~~.		“It’ll clear up soon, Kino,” said the first voice.

			“Yeah.”

			The wind rapidly grew stronger, and with a muffled sound, the white air was blown away all at once.

	~~"Yeah."~~

	~~The wind suddenly grew stronger, and with a muffled sound, the white air was blown away all at once.~~

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

Ella.servantes: translation check

2012-08-07T10:39:00Z

translation check

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	=="Amidst the Clouds・b" ~~-Blinder・b-~~==		=="Amidst the Clouds・b" —Blinder・b—==

	It was completely white.		It was completely white.

	Above, below, to the right, to the left, there was only white. It was a space of nothing but the color white~~. And then, the low wind, like the howl of a giant animal, was heard~~.		Above, below, to the right, to the left, there was only white. It was a space of nothing but the color white.

	~~"Wait~~."		And then, the low wind, like the howl of a giant animal, was heard.

	A voice could be heard calling out. It seemed like the voice of a boy.		"Wait." A voice could be heard calling out. It seemed like the voice of a boy.

	"Can you see me?"		"Can you see me?" This voice asked toward the space where nothing was visible.

	~~This~~ voice ~~asked toward~~ the ~~space where nothing was visible~~.		"No, not at all." Another voice immediately answered. It was a bit higher-pitched than the first voice.

	"No, ~~not at all~~."		"You can't, even though we're so close? For now, I think it's best if we don't move for a while," said the first voice. 'Alright,' said the second voice shortly. And then,

	~~Another voice immediately answered. It was a bit higher-pitched than the first voice.~~		"It's magnificent, not being able to see anything at all," the voice said as though its owner is having fun.

	~~"You can't, even though we're so close? For now, I think it's best if we don't move for a while," said the first voice.~~

	~~"Alright," said the second voice shortly.~~

	~~And then,~~

	"It's magnificent, not being able to see anything at all."

	~~The owner of~~ the voice said ~~this~~ as though ~~he's~~ having fun.

	"It's magnificent to not see anything, huh?" the first voice replied.		"It's magnificent to not see anything, huh?" the first voice replied.
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	The other voice, in a lower tone, said, "But soon we'll be able to see again."		The other voice, in a lower tone, said, "But soon we'll be able to see again."

	"We'll be able to see, huh?" said the first voice. At that time, the white world ~~shook~~. The direction in which the wind was blowing became bright for a moment.		"We'll be able to see, huh?" said the first voice. At that time, the white world quivered. The direction in which the wind was blowing became bright for a moment.

	"Hey. If you were able to see again, but there was nothing at all before your eyes, what would you do? Wouldn't you be a little happy?" the first voice asked.		"Hey. If you were able to see again, but there was nothing at all before your eyes, what would you do? Wouldn't you be a little happy?" the first voice asked.

	"Yeah... But, it would be because I know ~~things~~ like that ~~are~~ impossible..."		"Yeah. But, it would be because I know something like that is impossible."

	"What if things cleared up? What would you do then?"		"What if things cleared up? What would you do then?"

	"In that case... There's nothing I can even do about being here~~...~~ much less anything I can do in that situation. I would just leave. ~~Just leave..~~."		"In that case... There's nothing I can even do about being here, much less anything I can do in that situation. I would just leave. That's all."

	"There was ~~also~~ a person who couldn't do that," the first voice said.		"There was a person who couldn't do that," the first voice said.

	"Yeah... ~~I'm aware~~ of ~~that~~. ~~I know a~~ little bit ~~about it~~. ~~Someone~~ somewhere told me about it. ~~We settled~~ here a day earlier."		"Yeah... One tiny bit of information. If only they had that little bit of information. If only someone somewhere told them about it. If only we arrived here one day earlier."

	"~~How relentless~~."		"Don't be so hard on yourself."

	"Yeah. ~~Maybe~~ there's something I don't know as well. And ~~not knowing~~ that, ~~maybe~~ I~~'ll~~ have ~~to suffer something~~ similar. Of course I want to avoid it, but if I don't know how, there's nothing I can do." The voice said this, paused for a moment, and then asked,		"Yeah. It's possible that there's something that I don't know as well. And in that case, I might have ended up in similar circumstances. Of course I want to avoid it, but if I don't know how, there's nothing I can do." The voice said this, paused for a moment, and then asked,

	"Hey, Hermes. ~~Should~~ I ~~know~~?"		"Hey, Hermes. Would I have known?"

	A response came immediately.		A response came immediately.

	"~~Come on nowー~~"		"Who knows?"

	The windward brightness increased, and the white grew even lighter.		The windward brightness increased, and the white grew even lighter.

Ella.servantes: added title, minor spell check

2012-07-17T09:30:09Z

added title, minor spell check

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	~~Prologue~~ "Amidst the ~~Clouds - b~~" -~~Blinder - b~~-		=="Amidst the Clouds・b" -Blinder・b-==


	It was completely white.		It was completely white.

	Above, below, to the right, to the left, there was only white. It was a space of nothing but the color white. And then, the low wind, like the howl of a giant animal, ~~could be~~ heard.		Above, below, to the right, to the left, there was only white. It was a space of nothing but the color white. And then, the low wind, like the howl of a giant animal, was heard.

	"Wait."		"Wait."
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	"It's magnificent, not being able to see anything at all."		"It's magnificent, not being able to see anything at all."

	The voice said this as though having fun.		The owner of the voice said this as though he's having fun.

	"It's magnificent to not see anything, huh?" the first voice replied.		"It's magnificent to not see anything, huh?" the first voice replied.
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	"Hey. If you were able to see again, but there was nothing at all before your eyes, what would you do? Wouldn't you be a little happy?" the first voice asked.		"Hey. If you were able to see again, but there was nothing at all before your eyes, what would you do? Wouldn't you be a little happy?" the first voice asked.

	"Yeah... But, it would be because I know things like that are impossible..."		"Yeah... But, it would be because I know things like that are impossible..."

	"What if things cleared up? What would you do then?"		"What if things cleared up? What would you do then?"

	"In that case... There's nothing I can even do about being here... much less anything I can do in that situation. I would just leave. Just leave..."		"In that case... There's nothing I can even do about being here... much less anything I can do in that situation. I would just leave. Just leave..."

	"There was also a person who couldn't do that," the first voice said.		"There was also a person who couldn't do that," the first voice said.

	"Yeah... I'm aware of that. I know a little bit about it. Someone somewhere told me about it. We settled here a day earlier."		"Yeah... I'm aware of that. I know a little bit about it. Someone somewhere told me about it. We settled here a day earlier."

	"How relentless."		"How relentless."
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	A response came immediately.		A response came immediately.

	"Come on ~~now--~~"		"Come on nowー"

	The windward brightness increased, and the white grew even lighter.		The windward brightness increased, and the white grew even lighter.

Dammitt: added footer

2012-07-04T18:05:54Z

added footer

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	The wind suddenly grew stronger, and with a muffled sound, the white air was blown away all at once.		The wind suddenly grew stronger, and with a muffled sound, the white air was blown away all at once.

			<noinclude>
			{{Navigation
			\| Kino no Tabi
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume3_Frontispiece\|Frontispiece]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume3_Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]
			}}
			</noinclude>

Amazing Buffalo at 21:00, 25 December 2009

2009-12-25T21:00:53Z

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2009-12-25T20:59:11Z

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Prologue "Amidst the Clouds - b" -Blinder - b-

It was completely white.

Above, below, to the right, to the left, there was only white. It was a space of nothing but the color white. And then, the low wind, like the howl of a giant animal, could be heard.

"Wait."

A voice could be heard calling out. It seemed like the voice of a boy.

"Can you see me?"

This voice asked toward the space where nothing was visible.

"No, not at all."

Another voice immediately answered. It was a bit higher-pitched than the first voice.

"You can't, even though we're so close? For now, I think it's best if we don't move for a while," said the first voice.

"Alright," said the second voice shortly.

And then,

"It's magnificent, not being able to see anything at all."

The voice said this as though having fun.

"It's magnificent to not see anything, huh?" the first voice replied.

The echo of the roaring wind grew louder for just a moment.

The other voice, in a lower tone, said, "But soon we'll be able to see again."

"We'll be able to see, huh?" said the first voice. At that time, the white world shook. The direction in which the wind was blowing became bright for a moment.

"Hey. If you were able to see again, but there was nothing at all before your eyes, what would you do? Wouldn't you be a little happy?" the first voice asked.

"Yeah... But, it would be because I know things like that are impossible..."

"What if things cleared up? What would you do then?"

"In that case... There's nothing I can even do about being here... much less anything I can do in that situation. I would just leave. Just leave..."

"There was also a person who couldn't do that," the first voice said.

"Yeah... I'm aware of that. I know a little bit about it. Someone somewhere told me about it. We settled here a day earlier."

"How relentless."

"Yeah. Maybe there's something I don't know as well. And not knowing that, maybe I'll have to suffer something similar. Of course I want to avoid it, but if I don't know how, there's nothing I can do." The voice said this, paused for a moment, and then asked,

"Hey, Hermes. Should I know?"

A response came immediately.

"Come on now--"

The windward brightness increased, and the white grew even lighter.

"It'll clear up soon, Kino," the first voice said.

"Yeah."

The wind suddenly grew stronger, and with a muffled sound, the white air was blown away all at once.