Kino no Tabi:Volume4 Chapter8 - Revision history

BloodyKitty at 16:07, 26 May 2013

2013-05-26T16:07:24Z

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	==“Land of Acknowledgement” —A Vote—==		==“Land of Acknowledgement” —A Vote—==

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	A motorrad (Note: A two-wheeled vehicle. Only to note that it cannot fly) was running on a meadow with a sparse growth of bushes.		A motorrad (Note: A two-wheeled vehicle. Only to note that it cannot fly) was running on a meadow with a sparse growth of bushes.

Pudding321: minor meaning check

2012-11-07T09:47:46Z

minor meaning check

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	“What’s the matter, Kino?”		“What’s the matter, Kino?”

	“You did not make a mistake.”		“You did not make a mistake.” <!-- check: I'm wondering whether you made a mistake or not.-->

	“How ''rude''.”		“How ''rude''.”
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	“Oh, yours too.”		“Oh, yours too.”

	A couple holding hands teased each other. There were also people who come with their families, and ate their breakfasts leisurely on the lawn after ~~the~~ voting.		A couple holding hands teased each other. There were also people who come with their families and ate their breakfasts leisurely on the lawn after voting.

	“It’s so peaceful, isn’t it?” Hermes said.		“It’s so peaceful, isn’t it?” Hermes said.
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	A little past noon. Kino was having a cup of tea in the cafeteria when fireworks set off once more. Someone announced that the election was over. The results were being tabulated, and once it turns out that ‘no one was unnecessary’, the festival will start.		At a little past noon, Kino was having a cup of tea in the cafeteria when fireworks set off once more. Someone announced that the election was over. The results were being tabulated, and once it turns out that ‘no one was unnecessary’, the festival will start.

	“We’ll know by evening. Well, no one gets chosen every year, anyway,” someone said.		“We’ll know by evening. Well, no one gets chosen every year, anyway,” someone said.
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	Later in the afternoon, Kino and Hermes finished their sightseeing and returned to the hotel. Stalls and tables were being set up and decorated in the roads and plaza around the hotel as hastily-made preparations for the festival.		Later in the afternoon, Kino and Hermes finished their sightseeing and returned to the hotel. Stalls and tables were being set up and decorated in the roads and plaza around the hotel as hastily-made preparations for the festival.

	Around the time the sun sank beneath the walls, the fireworks resounded for a third time. And then the public announcement vehicle broadcasted that the festival will be carried out as planned.		Around the time the sun sank beneath the walls, the fireworks resounded for the third time. And then the public announcement vehicle broadcasted that the festival will be carried out as planned.


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	The festival began by twilight. There were lights everywhere, and the town has become lively.		The festival began by twilight. There were lights everywhere, and the town has become lively.

	Kino found the hotel owner and asked whether he was able to inquire about the sale of her winter equipment. ‘Ok! Leave it to me,’ the man, ~~who was~~ considerably drunk, said in a loud voice and led Kino to a nearby store.		Kino found the hotel owner and asked whether he was able to inquire about the sale of her winter equipment. ‘Ok! Leave it to me,’ the man, considerably drunk, said in a loud voice and led Kino to a nearby store.

	He stormed in with a shout, and asked the shop owner how much he will take the items for. The owner gave his price. ‘We were friends, weren’t we? Raise it a bit more,’ the man pushed his considerably unreasonable request. After arguing for a while, the man reluctantly agreed to a much too high price, with a disagreeable look on his face.		He stormed in with a shout, and asked the shop owner how much he will take the items for. The owner gave his price. ‘We were friends, weren’t we? Raise it a bit more,’ the man pushed his considerably unreasonable request. After arguing for a while, the man reluctantly agreed to a much too high price, with a disagreeable look on his face.
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	‘I see,’ Kino murmured quietly.		‘I see,’ Kino murmured quietly.

	After that, Kino slipped into the festival only to eat the food that was handed out. Then she returned to buy ~~cheap~~ the things that she needed.		After that, Kino slipped into the festival only to eat the food that was handed out. Then she returned to buy the things that she needed with a low price.

	By the time she returned to the hotel, the hotel owner was in the streets, ~~drunken, and~~ making a lot of noise.		By the time she returned to the hotel, the hotel owner was drunken in the streets, making a lot of noise.

Ella.servantes at 03:20, 27 August 2012

2012-08-27T03:20:29Z

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	Kino fell silent. The motorrad ran smoothly its well-regulated engine echoing.		Kino fell silent. The motorrad ran smoothly, its well-regulated engine echoing.

	“Hermes…”		“Hermes…”
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	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

	{{Navigation		{{Navigation

	\| Kino no Tabi		\| Kino no Tabi

	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter7\|Chapter 7]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter7\|Chapter 7]]

	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter9\|Chapter 9]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter9\|Chapter 9]]

	}}		}}

	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

Ella.servantes: proofreading

2012-08-27T01:57:28Z

proofreading

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Ella.servantes: fixed partitions

2012-07-31T07:57:28Z

fixed partitions

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	The driver called Kino opened the collar of the coat to let in some air. She was wearing a black jacket underneath.		The driver called Kino opened the collar of the coat to let in some air. She was wearing a black jacket underneath.

	“Do you want to stop to take it off?” the ~~motorad~~ asked.		“Do you want to stop to take it off?” the motorrad asked.

	“Nope, it’s fine. I can see it. See, Hermes.”		“Nope, it’s fine. I can see it. See, Hermes.”
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	“There was an author who was like that. He suffered because he can’t throw away his books,” said Kino.		“There was an author who was like that. He suffered because he can’t throw away his books,” said Kino.

			The walls quickly became higher as they approached, and eventually they arrived in front of the gates.


	--		--


	~~The walls quickly became higher as they approached, and eventually they arrived in front of the gates.~~

	They passed through the immigration inspection by the gates.		They passed through the immigration inspection by the gates.
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	“We decide on a ‘person who is not needed’. And that person will be ordered dead. You see, unnecessary things should be disposed of completely,” he lowered his voice on purpose.		“We decide on a ‘person who is not needed’. And that person will be ordered dead. You see, unnecessary things should be disposed of completely,” he lowered his voice on purpose.


			--


	The man said that this was a historically significant thing, and began to explain about the election.		The man said that this was a historically significant thing, and began to explain about the election.
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	Every year, everybody’s name was written down. In this country, all people lived interdependently. Everyone celebrates that fact.		Every year, everybody’s name was written down. In this country, all people lived interdependently. Everyone celebrates that fact.


			--


	“I see.... Then, the truth is no one is actually disposed of?” Kino asked.		“I see.... Then, the truth is no one is actually disposed of?” Kino asked.
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	Several fireworks went off as Kino was eating her breakfast. In the road, a public announcement vehicle has been going around to broadcast, ‘Everyone, today is the election day. Please do not forget to cast your votes.'		Several fireworks went off as Kino was eating her breakfast. In the road, a public announcement vehicle has been going around to broadcast, ‘Everyone, today is the election day. Please do not forget to cast your votes.'


			--


	Kino returned to her room after her meal.		Kino returned to her room after her meal.
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	“It’s so peaceful, isn’t it?” Hermes said.		“It’s so peaceful, isn’t it?” Hermes said.


			--


	A little past noon. Kino was having a cup of tea in the cafeteria when fireworks set off once more. Someone announced that the election was over. The results were being tabulated, and once it turns out that ‘No one was unnecessary’, the festival will start.		A little past noon. Kino was having a cup of tea in the cafeteria when fireworks set off once more. Someone announced that the election was over. The results were being tabulated, and once it turns out that ‘No one was unnecessary’, the festival will start.
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	Around the time the sun sank beneath the walls, the fireworks resounded for a third time. And then the public announcement vehicle broadcasted that the festival will be carried out as planned.		Around the time the sun sank beneath the walls, the fireworks resounded for a third time. And then the public announcement vehicle broadcasted that the festival will be carried out as planned.


			--


	The festival has begun at twilight. There were lights everywhere, and the town has become lively.		The festival has begun at twilight. There were lights everywhere, and the town has become lively.
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	The doctor replied, “Well, I don’t know if you’ll find it interesting or not, but I’m sure it will make a good souvenir for your travels. It’s about this country’s wonderful system.”		The doctor replied, “Well, I don’t know if you’ll find it interesting or not, but I’m sure it will make a good souvenir for your travels. It’s about this country’s wonderful system.”


			--


	The doctor finished working on the details in the documents and closed the file. After that, he guided Kino and Hermes to the nearest lounge.		The doctor finished working on the details in the documents and closed the file. After that, he guided Kino and Hermes to the nearest lounge.
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	“I see. Yup. That was quite interesting,” Hermes said. The doctor was embarrassed for being slightly fired up.		“I see. Yup. That was quite interesting,” Hermes said. The doctor was embarrassed for being slightly fired up.

	“Thank you for listening to my story. Inside the country, such a thing cannot be mentioned, so now I’m totally refreshed. Miss traveler, if ever your body’s condition gets bad, don’t hesitate to come anytime. I will take responsibility for your care. No matter how difficult an operation is, or how long the hospitalization will take, and even if it’s a traveler, we do not take any payment. This country is proud of delivering the best treatment there is.” ~~The doctor lightly shook hands and returned to the gates.~~		“Thank you for listening to my story. Inside the country, such a thing cannot be mentioned, so now I’m totally refreshed. Miss traveler, if ever your body’s condition gets bad, don’t hesitate to come anytime. I will take responsibility for your care. No matter how difficult an operation is, or how long the hospitalization will take, and even if it’s a traveler, we do not take any payment. This country is proud of delivering the best treatment there is.”


	~~Kino pushed Hermes out of the cemetery and started the engine. She looked once at the stone monument, and took off.~~		--


	--		The doctor lightly shook hands and returned to the gates.

			Kino pushed Hermes out of the cemetery and started the engine. She looked once at the stone monument, and took off.

	“......”		“......”
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	“What now? Are we going back?”		“What now? Are we going back?”

	“We can’t do that.” ~~Was~~ Kino’s firm answer to Hermes’ question.		“We can’t do that,” was Kino’s firm answer to Hermes’ question.

	“What about the gloves?”		“What about the gloves?”

Ella.servantes at 09:19, 27 July 2012

2012-07-27T09:19:22Z

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	==“Land of Acknowledgement” —A Vote—==		==“Land of Acknowledgement” —A Vote—==

	A motorrad (Note: A motorcycle. Only to note that it cannot fly) is running on a meadow with a sparse growth of bushes.		A motorrad (Note: A motorcycle. Only to note that it cannot fly) was running on a meadow with a sparse growth of bushes.

	The motorrad was loaded with traveling luggage on both sides and on top of its rear wheel. It was running on a road extending straight ahead, while letting its engine’s roar resound loudly without reserve. The reddish brown earth of the road was finely cracked due to the dry season.		The motorrad was loaded with traveling luggage on both sides and on top of its rear wheel. It was running on a road extending straight ahead, while letting its engine’s roar resound loudly without reserve. The reddish brown earth of the road was finely cracked due to the dry season.
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	Probably due to the glare of the sun right ahead, the driver lowered the brim of her hat a little with her left hand.		Probably due to the glare of the sun right ahead, the driver lowered the brim of her hat a little with her left hand.

	“Yup, I ~~don’ t~~ need it after all,” the driver said all of a sudden. The motorrad asked in return.		“Yup, I don’t need it after all,” the driver said all of a sudden. The motorrad asked in return.

	“What? Kino,”		“What? Kino.”

	“My coat. I don’t need it while riding in this kind of season. It’s a little hot, see.”		“My coat. I don’t need it while riding in this kind of season. It’s a little hot, see.”

Ella.servantes: minor spell check

2012-07-27T09:18:24Z

minor spell check

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Dammitt at 18:19, 4 July 2012

2012-07-04T18:19:44Z

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	{{Navigation		{{Navigation
	\| Kino no Tabi		\| Kino no Tabi
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:~~Volume2_Chapter7~~\|Chapter 7]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter7\|Chapter 7]]
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:~~Volume2_Chapter9~~\|Chapter 9]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume4_Chapter9\|Chapter 9]]
	}}		}}
	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

Dammitt: added footer

2012-07-04T18:17:09Z

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	In a moment, the spinning rear wheel kicked up dirt, and the motorad rode away.		In a moment, the spinning rear wheel kicked up dirt, and the motorad rode away.

			<noinclude>
			{{Navigation
			\| Kino no Tabi
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Chapter7\|Chapter 7]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume2_Chapter9\|Chapter 9]]
			}}
			</noinclude>

Dammitt at 22:09, 1 July 2012

2012-07-01T22:09:21Z

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	“You see, I am this hotel’s owner. Well, have a seat. If there’s anything you don’t understand about this country, I’ll tell you various things,”		“You see, I am this hotel’s owner. Well, have a seat. If there’s anything you don’t understand about this country, I’ll tell you various things,”

	To the puzzled Kino, the man spoke in a loud voice that echoed in the lobby. He seemed a little drunk. ~~A number of employees~~ at the ~~front~~ overtly frowned upon this, looking at Kino.		To the puzzled Kino, the man spoke in a loud voice that echoed in the lobby. He seemed a little drunk. An employee at the reception desk overtly frowned upon this, looking at Kino.

	Kino introduced herself and sat on the sofa. The man sat facing her.		Kino introduced herself and sat on the sofa. The man sat facing her.
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	The owner looked at Kino,		The owner looked at Kino,

	~~“You’ve seen it yourself~~. ~~I had to give in to~~ that ~~man~~, ~~since he is quite an important person…… Well~~, ~~I probably just did not handle it properly~~. Well, whatever. Don’t worry about it”		“And when you realized that, you asked him for assistance... that makes your one ugly customer. But if you don't do such things, travelling would be hard, i suppose. Well, whatever. Don’t worry about it”

	“Thanks. By the way, will you please give me four of those shirts?”		“Thanks. By the way, will you please give me four of those shirts?”
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	Kino nodded. And spoke.		Kino nodded. And spoke.

	“But I heard that no one has been ~~discard~~ of from the start up to now.”		“But I heard that no one has been discarded of from the start up to now.”

	The doctor slightly jested, “All of those were lies.”		The doctor slightly jested, “All of those were lies.”