Kino no Tabi:Volume5 Chapter1 - Revision history

BloodyKitty at 16:23, 26 May 2013

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 ==“Reminiscence”<ref>Original title is ''“Ano Toki no Koto”'', or literally, “About That Time”.</ref> — Blue Rose —==
 “Okay! I have a good idea. Take me with you. I wanna travel too,” the child said.
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 The old man quietly smiled and bowed respectfully to his king.
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Ella.servantes: proofread for pdf

2012-12-16T03:13:54Z

proofread for pdf

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	==~~"Reminiscence" —Blue Rose—~~==		==“Reminiscence”<ref>Original title is ''“Ano Toki no Koto”'', or literally, “About That Time”.</ref> — Blue Rose —==

	~~"Okay! I have a good idea. Take me with you. I wanna travel too," the child said.~~

	~~The traveler~~ with ~~the short black hair~~, ~~and~~ the ~~motorrad (Note: A motorcycle. Only to note that it cannot fly) beside her, upon hearing this, fell to an awkward silence~~.		“Okay! I have a good idea. Take me with you. I wanna travel too,” the child said.

	~~It was a pretty looking garden which seemed to be taken~~ with ~~great care~~. ~~Beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around~~, ~~and there was also a marble fountain~~.		The traveler with the short black hair, and the motorrad (Note: A two-wheeled vehicle. Only to note that it cannot fly) beside her, upon hearing this, fell to an awkward silence.

	~~"Great idea, huh? I've been thinking about what you said. I'll~~ be ~~able to look at a lot of other countries~~. Oh, and ~~I'll be able to study~~ a ~~lot too, right? So take me with you~~."		It was a pretty looking garden that seemed to be taken with great care. Beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around, and there was also a marble fountain.

	~~The~~ child said ~~this~~ with an ecstatic expression on his face.		“Great idea, huh? I’ve been thinking about what you said. I’ll be able to look at a lot of other countries. Oh, and I’ll be able to study a lot too, right? So take me with you,” the child said with an ecstatic expression on his face.

	The traveler who was telling stories about her travels upon the ~~child's~~ request, made an awkward expression.		The traveler who was telling stories about her travels upon the child’s request, made an awkward expression.

	"I apologize, but I ~~won't~~ be able to fulfill that wish."		“I apologize, but I won’t be able to fulfill that wish.”

	~~"Uh~~-huh, no way," added the motorrad, and the child spoke in a loud voice.		“Uh-huh, no way,” added the motorrad, and the child spoke in a loud voice.

	~~"Why~~! How come miss traveler is able to travel, but ~~I'm~~ not to?"		“Why! How come miss traveler is able to travel, but I’m not to?”

	He turned to face the old man on his side.		He turned to face the old man on his side.

	"I can go, right?"		“I can go, right?”

	The old man made an awkward expression, but firmly said.		The old man made an awkward expression, but firmly said.

	~~"No~~, ~~that's~~ impossible~~, Sire~~."		“No, that’s impossible.”

	~~"Why~~? Are you saying you ~~won't~~ follow my orders? Is that what ~~you're~~ trying to say? Huh? Huh?"		“Why? Are you saying you won’t follow my orders? Is that what you’re trying to say? Huh? Huh?”

	The child held onto the man and shouted this as if he was attacking him.		The child held onto the man and shouted this as if he was attacking him.
	~~Seeing the man's embarrassed expression, the traveler got up from her seat, and held on to the motorrad's handlebars to push it~~.

	~~"If you'll~~ excuse me."		Seeing the man’s embarrassed expression, the traveler got up from her seat, and held on to the motorrad’s handlebars to push it.

			“If you’ll excuse me.”

	The child held onto the traveler after wobbling towards her.		The child held onto the traveler after wobbling towards her.

	~~"Why~~?! Tell me why!!"		“Why?! Tell me why!!”

	The traveler looked down towards the child and answered,		The traveler looked down towards the child and answered,

	~~"Traveling~~ is very dangerous."		“Traveling is very dangerous.”

	~~"Yeah~~, and ~~there's~~ no room for you to sit down, you know," the motorrad chimed in.		“Yeah, and there’s no room for you to sit down, you know,” the motorrad chimed in.

	After she bade the old man farewell, the traveler started to leave, pushing the ~~motorad~~ with her. The child screamed desperately while pursuing the traveler.		After she bade the old man farewell, the traveler started to leave, pushing the motorrad with her. The child screamed desperately while pursuing the traveler.

	~~"Take~~ me with you! ~~I'll~~ do anything you say! ~~I'll~~ even eat my carrots! ~~I'll~~ behave! I ~~won't~~ even say that I ~~can't~~ sleep without mom! So please, take me!"		“Take me with you! I’ll do anything you say! I’ll even eat my carrots! I’ll behave! I won’t even say that I can’t sleep without mom! So please, take me!”

	After telling the child not to follow her one last time, the traveler left, ignoring the ~~child's~~ frantic cries.		After telling the child not to follow her one last time, the traveler left, ignoring the child’s frantic cries.

	As the ~~traveller~~ disappeared with the noise of the ~~motorrad's~~ engine, the child cried and wailed loudly.		As the traveler disappeared with the noise of the motorrad’s engine, the child cried and wailed loudly.

	~~It was a pretty looking garden which seemed to be taken with great care. Some beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around, and there was also a marble fountain~~.

	The child buried his face into the old man~~'s arms~~ who knelt next to him.		It was a pretty looking garden that seemed to be taken with great care. Some beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around, and there was also a marble fountain.

			The child buried his face into the arms of the old man who knelt next to him.

	And he cried. He cried and cried.		And he cried. He cried and cried.


	--		<center><span style="font-size: 200%;">—</span></center>


	The old man who aged even more greatly than before waked the child who was now a young man.		The old man who aged even more greatly than before waked the child who was now a young man.

	The child who was now a young man had ~~fell~~ asleep in a chair in a luxurious office. After the young man thanked the old man, he told him about the dream he just had.		The child who was now a young man had fallen asleep in a chair in a luxurious office. After the young man thanked the old man, he told him about the dream he just had.

	~~"Sorry~~ for being a pain in the neck."		“Sorry for being a pain in the neck.”

	And he told the old man that he still remembered that day clearly, and apologized to the old man in a gentle voice.		And he told the old man that he still remembered that day clearly, and apologized to the old man in a gentle voice.

	The old man quietly smiled and bowed ~~slightly~~.		The old man quietly smiled and bowed respectfully to his king.


			<noinclude>

			==Notes==
			<references/>

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>
	{{Navigation		{{Navigation
	\| Kino no Tabi		\| Kino no Tabi
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume5_Prologue\|Prologue]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume5_Prologue\|Prologue]]
	\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume5_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]		\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume5_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
	}}		}}
	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

Ella.servantes: minor spell check

2012-07-31T13:56:53Z

minor spell check

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	==~~Chapter 1:~~ Reminiscence ~~-Blue Rose-~~==		=="Reminiscence" —Blue Rose—==

	"Okay! I have a good idea. Take me with you. I wanna travel too."		"Okay! I have a good idea. Take me with you. I wanna travel too," the child said.
	~~The~~ child said.

	The ~~traveller~~ with the short black hair and the ~~motorad~~, upon hearing this, fell to an awkward silence.		The traveler with the short black hair, and the motorrad (Note: A motorcycle. Only to note that it cannot fly) beside her, upon hearing this, fell to an awkward silence.
	It was a pretty looking garden which seemed to be taken with great care.
	Beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around, and there was also a marble fountain.		It was a pretty looking garden which seemed to be taken with great care. Beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around, and there was also a marble fountain.

	"Great idea, huh? I've been thinking about what you said. I'll be able to look at a lot of other countries. Oh, and I'll be able to study a lot too, right? So take me with you."		"Great idea, huh? I've been thinking about what you said. I'll be able to look at a lot of other countries. Oh, and I'll be able to study a lot too, right? So take me with you."

	The child said this with an ecstatic expression on his face.		The child said this with an ecstatic expression on his face.
	The ~~traveller~~ who was telling stories about her travels upon the child's request, made an awkward expression.
			The traveler who was telling stories about her travels upon the child's request, made an awkward expression.

	"I apologize, but I won't be able to fulfill that wish."		"I apologize, but I won't be able to fulfill that wish."

	"Uh-huh, no way."		"Uh-huh, no way," added the motorrad, and the child spoke in a loud voice.

	"Why! How come ~~Ms. Traveller~~ is able to travel, but I'm not to?"		"Why! How come miss traveler is able to travel, but I'm not to?"

	He turned to face the old man on his side.		He turned to face the old man on his side.

	"I can go, right?		"I can go, right?"

	The old man made an awkward expression, but firmly said.		The old man made an awkward expression, but firmly said.
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	The child held onto the man and shouted this as if he was attacking him.		The child held onto the man and shouted this as if he was attacking him.
	Seeing the man's ~~embarassed~~ expression, the ~~traveller~~ got up from her seat, and held on to the ~~motorad~~'s handlebars to push it.		Seeing the man's embarrassed expression, the traveler got up from her seat, and held on to the motorrad's handlebars to push it.

	"If you'll excuse me."		"If you'll excuse me."

	The child held onto the ~~traveller~~ after wobbling towards her.		The child held onto the traveler after wobbling towards her.

	"Why?! Tell me why!!"		"Why?! Tell me why!!"

	The ~~traveller~~ looked down towards the child and answered		The traveler looked down towards the child and answered,

	"~~Travelling~~ is very dangerous."		"Traveling is very dangerous."

	"Yeah, and there's no room for you to sit down, you know."		"Yeah, and there's no room for you to sit down, you know," the motorrad chimed in.
	~~The motorad~~ chimed in. After she bade the old man farewell, the ~~traveller~~ started to leave, pushing the motorad with her.
	The child screamed desperately while pursuing the ~~traveller~~.		After she bade the old man farewell, the traveler started to leave, pushing the motorad with her. The child screamed desperately while pursuing the traveler.

	"Take me with you! I'll do anything you say! I'll even eat my carrots! I'll behave! I won't even say that I can't sleep without mom! So please, take me!"		"Take me with you! I'll do anything you say! I'll even eat my carrots! I'll behave! I won't even say that I can't sleep without mom! So please, take me!"

	After telling the child not to follow her one last time, the ~~traveller~~ left, ignoring the child's frantic cries.		After telling the child not to follow her one last time, the traveler left, ignoring the child's frantic cries.
	As the traveller disappeared with the noise of the ~~motorad~~'s engine, the child cried and wailed loudly.
	It was a pretty looking garden which seemed to be taken with great care.		As the traveller disappeared with the noise of the motorrad's engine, the child cried and wailed loudly.
	Some beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around, and there was also a marble fountain.
			It was a pretty looking garden which seemed to be taken with great care. Some beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around, and there was also a marble fountain.

	The child buried his face into the old man's arms who knelt next to him.		The child buried his face into the old man's arms who knelt next to him.

	And he cried. He cried and cried.		And he cried. He cried and cried.


			--


	The old man who aged even more greatly than before waked the child who was now a young man.		The old man who aged even more greatly than before waked the child who was now a young man.
	The child who was now a young man had fell asleep in a chair in a luxurious office.
	After the young man thanked the old man, he told him about the dream he just had.		The child who was now a young man had fell asleep in a chair in a luxurious office. After the young man thanked the old man, he told him about the dream he just had.

	"Sorry for being a pain in the neck."		"Sorry for being a pain in the neck."

	And he told the old man that he still remembered that day clearly, and apologized to the old man in a gentle voice.		And he told the old man that he still remembered that day clearly, and apologized to the old man in a gentle voice.

	The old man quietly smiled and bowed slightly.		The old man quietly smiled and bowed slightly.

Dammitt at 18:34, 4 July 2012

2012-07-04T18:34:12Z

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	Reminiscence -Blue Rose-		==Chapter 1: Reminiscence -Blue Rose-==

	"Okay! I have a good idea. Take me with you. I wanna travel too."		"Okay! I have a good idea. Take me with you. I wanna travel too."

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2012-07-04T18:31:34Z

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	And he told the old man that he still remembered that day clearly, and apologized to the old man in a gentle voice.		And he told the old man that he still remembered that day clearly, and apologized to the old man in a gentle voice.
	The old man quietly smiled and bowed slightly.		The old man quietly smiled and bowed slightly.

			<noinclude>
			{{Navigation
			\| Kino no Tabi
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume5_Prologue\|Prologue]]
			\| [[Kino_no_Tabi:Volume5_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
			}}
			</noinclude>

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Reminiscence -Blue Rose-

"Okay! I have a good idea. Take me with you. I wanna travel too."
The child said.

The traveller with the short black hair and the motorad, upon hearing this, fell to an awkward silence.
It was a pretty looking garden which seemed to be taken with great care.
Beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around, and there was also a marble fountain.

"Great idea, huh? I've been thinking about what you said. I'll be able to look at a lot of other countries. Oh, and I'll be able to study a lot too, right? So take me with you."

The child said this with an ecstatic expression on his face.
The traveller who was telling stories about her travels upon the child's request, made an awkward expression.

"I apologize, but I won't be able to fulfill that wish."

"Uh-huh, no way."

"Why! How come Ms. Traveller is able to travel, but I'm not to?"

He turned to face the old man on his side.

"I can go, right?

The old man made an awkward expression, but firmly said.

"No, that's impossible, Sire."

"Why? Are you saying you won't follow my orders? Is that what you're trying to say? Huh? Huh?"

The child held onto the man and shouted this as if he was attacking him.
Seeing the man's embarassed expression, the traveller got up from her seat, and held on to the motorad's handlebars to push it.

"If you'll excuse me."

The child held onto the traveller after wobbling towards her.

"Why?! Tell me why!!"

The traveller looked down towards the child and answered

"Travelling is very dangerous."

"Yeah, and there's no room for you to sit down, you know."
The motorad chimed in. After she bade the old man farewell, the traveller started to leave, pushing the motorad with her.
The child screamed desperately while pursuing the traveller.

"Take me with you! I'll do anything you say! I'll even eat my carrots! I'll behave! I won't even say that I can't sleep without mom! So please, take me!"

After telling the child not to follow her one last time, the traveller left, ignoring the child's frantic cries.
As the traveller disappeared with the noise of the motorad's engine, the child cried and wailed loudly.
It was a pretty looking garden which seemed to be taken with great care.
Some beautiful red and blue roses blossomed all around, and there was also a marble fountain.

The child buried his face into the old man's arms who knelt next to him.

And he cried. He cried and cried.

The old man who aged even more greatly than before waked the child who was now a young man.
The child who was now a young man had fell asleep in a chair in a luxurious office.
After the young man thanked the old man, he told him about the dream he just had.

"Sorry for being a pain in the neck."

And he told the old man that he still remembered that day clearly, and apologized to the old man in a gentle voice.
The old man quietly smiled and bowed slightly.