BloodyKitty at 16:29, 26 May 2013

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	==“Land of Heroes” — No Hero —==		==“Land of Heroes” — No Hero —==

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	Kino breathed out white air as she unloaded the bag from Hermes’ carrier. She was wearing a black jacket and a hat on her head, and her goggles remained strapped on her face. ‘Canon’ was hanging beside her right thigh.		Kino breathed out white air as she unloaded the bag from Hermes’ carrier. She was wearing a black jacket and a hat on her head, and her goggles remained strapped on her face. ‘Canon’ was hanging beside her right thigh.

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	* I think it's sort of obvious, but anyway. The men were referring to Kino with masculine pronouns, because they don't know Kino's a girl. In the narration, Kino is referred to with feminine pronouns, 'she', 'her', etc.		* I think it's sort of obvious, but anyway. The men were referring to Kino with masculine pronouns, because they don't know Kino's a girl. In the narration, Kino is referred to with feminine pronouns, 'she', 'her', etc.

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	Along the street, identical buildings of a housing complex were arranged side by side. Heavy clouds cover the surface of the sky, giving it a dull gray and overcast look. From time to time, the cold wind blows strongly. There was no sign of life between the three-story brick buildings along the street, and broken glass windows can be found here and there. On the cobblestones, there are freely growing weeds and naturally-made dead tracks.		Along the street, identical buildings of a housing complex were arranged side by side. Heavy clouds cover the surface of the sky, giving it a dull gray and overcast look. From time to time, the cold wind blows strongly. There was no sign of life between the three-story brick buildings along the street, and broken glass windows can be found here and there. On the cobblestones, there are freely growing weeds and naturally-made dead tracks.

	Kino rushed out and ran at full speed to the other side of the building.At the moment Kino took cover beside the entrance stairs, a bullet came flying towards her, and quickly passed through to her side. A fierce hum was heard as the bullet sped past the speed of sound.		Kino rushed out and ran at full speed to the other side of the building. At the moment Kino took cover beside the entrance stairs, a bullet came flying towards her, and quickly passed through to her side. A fierce hum was heard as the bullet sped past the speed of sound.

	“There you are,” Kino muttered, as she saw a person’s silhouette setting up a rifle on the other side of the street. She then turned her body and disappeared to the other side of the building.		“There you are,” Kino muttered, as she saw a person’s silhouette setting up a rifle on the other side of the street. She then turned her body and disappeared to the other side of the building.
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	The men slowly moved forward along the wall by the side of the street, poising their Persuaders by their hips.		The men slowly moved forward along the wall by the side of the street, poising their Persuaders by their hips.

	As they passed in front of the courtyard where Hermes is parked, ~~Kino~~ silently ~~peeked from~~ the alley ~~she’s~~ been hiding in. There is no other place she can hide in on both sides of the alley.		As they passed in front of the courtyard where Hermes is parked, they silently looked at the alley where Kino has been hiding. There is no other place she can hide in on both sides of the alley.

	Without speaking, the bald man signaled the men with his left arm to move simultaneously in pairs, while providing back-up for each other. From the narrow alley, they came out to a neighboring and similar-looking street. There’s nobody.		Without speaking, the bald man signaled the men with his left arm to move simultaneously in pairs, while providing back-up for each other. From the narrow alley, they came out to a neighboring and similar-looking street. There’s nobody.
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	His legs and stomach were stained a deep red. The rucksack-carrying man was desperately pressing down his clothes, but the pouring of the blood did not show any sign of stopping. He stood up slowly.		His legs and stomach were stained a deep red. The rucksack-carrying man was desperately pressing down his clothes, but the pouring of the blood did not show any sign of stopping. He stood up slowly.

	“I’m sorry……. I ~~was trying to pull my leg……~~.” The man with a hat said with a thin voice.		“I’m sorry……. I failed you, guys…….” The man with a hat said with a thin voice.

	“Don’t talk,” the bald man said.		“Don’t talk,” the bald man said.
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	The tall man nodded. “If we also have that,”		The tall man nodded. “If we also have that,”

	The bald man then said, “It’s too late to ~~start talking~~ about this. What we can do now is to give our best,” he said in a somewhat bad tone.		The bald man then said, “It’s too late to talk about this. What we can do now is to give our best,” he said in a somewhat bad tone.

	The bald man spread a map he took out from his breast pocket. He held it in a way that wouldn’t let it get blown away by the wind. In the faded map, the appearance of the circular country was accurately drawn. Towards the eastern sector, a long park extends parallel to several streets and dead ends.		The bald man spread a map he took out from his breast pocket. He held it in a way that wouldn’t let it get blown away by the wind. In the faded map, the appearance of the circular country was accurately drawn. Towards the eastern sector, a long park extends parallel to several streets and dead ends.
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	“Oh, alive, still alive.”		“Oh, alive, still alive.”
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	“I was found so easily!” Kino said while running down the stairs of a building.The short man and the rucksack-carrying man shot several rounds towards the third floor balcony where Kino was hiding.Kino landed on the first floor and rushed through the living room after kicking open the doorway. Bullets came flying immediately and while she skipped over a hole of chipped wood, two more opened at the same time.		“I was found so easily!” Kino said while running down the stairs of a building. The short man and the rucksack-carrying man shot several rounds towards the third floor balcony where Kino was hiding. Kino landed on the first floor and rushed through the living room after kicking open the doorway. Bullets came flying immediately and while she skipped over a hole of chipped wood, two more opened at the same time.

	“There are two people at the right…… They separated into two groups, huh.”		“There are two people at the right…… They separated into two groups, huh.”
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	“Where did that guy disappeared to…… Is he dead?” the short man asked while wiping away the blood from his cheeks.		“Where did that guy disappeared to…… Is he dead?” the short man asked while wiping away the blood from his cheeks.

	The bald man answered. “No, he’s still alive. Like us, he used the explosion as a chance to continue through the courtyard, he ~~must be~~ afraid of getting cornered on the south side. We ~~did not see~~ his ~~footprints~~ in the dust.”		The bald man answered. “No, he’s still alive. Like us, he used the explosion as a chance to continue through the courtyard, he was afraid of getting cornered, so he must have ran to the south side. We can't trace his footsteps in the dust .”

	“Son of a bitch……” The short man murmured annoyingly. Blood dripped from his mouth. The rucksack-carrying man silently passed the water bottle.		“Son of a bitch……” The short man murmured annoyingly. Blood dripped from his mouth. The rucksack-carrying man silently passed the water bottle.
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	The man in the scope’s view did not change his position.		The man in the scope’s view did not change his position.

	“No good, huh……. I thought ~~I’ll be able to get~~ him ~~with just one shot~~.” Kino stood up quickly, and while thin smoke is still rising from the heated barrel, she carried Flute under her arms and ran the remaining distance to the park. She cut across towards the main street. In front of here is a mountain of rubble.		“No good, huh……. I thought that at least one bullet will hit him.” Kino stood up quickly, and while thin smoke is still rising from the heated barrel, she carried Flute under her arms and ran the remaining distance to the park. She cut across towards the main street. In front of here is a mountain of rubble.

	“Let’s follow. Spread out horizontally. He fled avoiding the front street and will soon cross the park. Don’t climb high on the street rubble. Be alert out front” As the bald man gave instructions, the lying men raised their heads. With their wrinkled glittering eyes, they stared towards the direction they’re heading to.		“Let’s follow. Spread out horizontally. He fled avoiding the front street and will soon cross the park. Don’t climb high on the street rubble. Be alert out front” As the bald man gave instructions, the lying men raised their heads. With their wrinkled glittering eyes, they stared towards the direction they’re heading to.
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	“What?”		“What?”

	The tall man took out five ~~pink~~ bullets from his ammunition pouch.		The tall man took out five bullets from his ammunition pouch.

	“That guy, that bastard……, I’ll kill him……”		“That guy, that bastard……, I’ll kill him……”
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	“It’s not yet over? —— Could it be that Kino is having such a hard time? —— That, or the other side is having trouble?” Hermes complained.		“It’s not yet over? —— Could it be that Kino is having such a hard time? —— That, or the other side is having trouble?” Hermes complained.

	“How boring……. Well, since the weather is bad, it’s not a bad idea to stay underneath this building. Finally it’s getting cold, but what will Kino do if the snow continues to fall. I don’t like it to fall down ~~like this~~ everyday……” He complained once again.		“How boring……. Well, since the weather is bad, it’s not a bad idea to stay underneath this building. Finally it’s getting cold, but what will Kino do if the snow continues to fall. I don’t like to fall down everyday……” He complained once again.
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	“There……” the rucksack-carrying man said.		“There……” the rucksack-carrying man said.
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	“We have something to say!”		“We have something to say!”

	When the bearded man advanced halfway through, ~~“Do not get any closer, please talk from there.”~~		When the bearded man advanced halfway through,

	From there a voice replied. The man finally spoke with a voice just loud enough to be heard. “We have something to say! I don’t have a Persuader! I’ll go there!”		“Do not get any closer, please talk from there.”

			From there a voice replied. The man finally spoke with a voice just loud enough to be heard.

			“We have something to say! I don’t have a Persuader! I’ll go there!”

	The man continued to walk as he shouted.		The man continued to walk as he shouted.
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	“We did it. He bled considerably” the short man said,		“We did it. He bled considerably” the short man said,

	“Depends on ~~the place……~~. However, ~~we sure were heavily injured,”~~ the bald man said, without changing expression.		“Depends on where he was hit……. However, he is definitely injured” the bald man said, without changing expression.

	“Let’s follow.”		“Let’s follow.”
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	“An ambush?” the rucksack-carrying man suggested.		“An ambush?” the rucksack-carrying man suggested.

	“Grenade. Can it be done from this distance? How ~~about the rest~~?” the bald man asked as he lowered his body, looking out front with the binoculars. The rucksack-carrying man answered. “It can be done. Barely, since our aim is low. There are five shots left.”		“Grenade. Can it be done from this distance? How many left?” the bald man asked as he lowered his body, looking out front with the binoculars. The rucksack-carrying man answered. “It can be done. Barely, since our aim is low. There are five shots left.”

	“I’ll get him to come out. I’ll be the decoy. His leg has also been shot, so he can’t escape. Fire four grenades in a row towards that room. Got it?”		“I’ll get him to come out. I’ll be the decoy. His leg has also been shot, so he can’t escape. Fire four grenades in a row towards that room. Got it?”
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	Dried bloodstains were left on the staircase on the right side of the schoolhouse, and headed towards the second floor hallway. The short man put out his head towards the long and dark corridor. The bloodstains extend to the third classroom. Even from the corridor, a door dangling from one hinge can be seen.		Dried bloodstains were left on the staircase on the right side of the schoolhouse, and headed towards the second floor hallway. The short man put out his head towards the long and dark corridor. The bloodstains extend to the third classroom. Even from the corridor, a door dangling from one hinge can be seen.

	The men walked the hallway while preparing to shoot at any moment. They came in front of the door; while one person was poising his Persuader, the other kicked the door open.They saw what’s inside. The grenade’s fragments pierced the ceiling, floor and inner walls. Several desks rolled over, their frames made of iron pipes bent.		The men walked the hallway while preparing to shoot at any moment. They came in front of the door; while one person was poising his Persuader, the other kicked the door open. They saw what’s inside. The grenade’s fragments pierced the ceiling, floor and inner walls. Several desks rolled over, their frames made of iron pipes bent.

	“There’s nothing here……” the short man said, slowly entering. In there, there was nobody. There was no corpse.		“There’s nothing here……” the short man said, slowly entering. In there, there was nobody. There was no corpse.

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Ella.servantes at 02:00, 6 April 2012

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	“Eh? What kind?”		“Eh? What kind?”

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			== Translator's Notes ==
			* There are a number of sentences which don't make sense. Most likely those are idiomatic expressions this inexperienced translator haven't come across yet.

	~~* end ***~~		* I think it's sort of obvious, but anyway. The men were referring to Kino with masculine pronouns, because they don't know Kino's a girl. In the narration, Kino is referred to with feminine pronouns, 'she', 'her', etc.

Ella.servantes: /* Chapter 4: “Land of Heroes” ~No Hero~ */

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Chapter 4: “Land of Heroes” ~No Hero~

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BloodyKitty at 16:29, 26 May 2013

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Ella.servantes at 02:00, 6 April 2012

Ella.servantes: /* Chapter 4: “Land of Heroes” ~No Hero~ */

Teh Ping: Seeing an update on Kino no Tabi after who knew how long, here's something I have to correct for reading purposes...if this is a first-time effort, I applaud you.