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	==~~Epilogue:~~ A Pledge・a -a Kitchen ~~Knife・a-~~==		=="A Pledge・a" —a Kitchen Knife・a—==

	~~Dear Diary,~~

	~~Year XX~~ Month XX Day XX. Sunny.		Diary ——Year ×× Month ×× Day ××. Sunny.

	~~Today is the most memorable day of my life. Also the most wonderful and greatest day of my life. Could there ever be a finer day than this?~~

	I am so glad I can write down my feelings at the end of this day. Most of the time this ~~is such a boring record~~. ~~Is it possible~~ I can write down ~~what~~ I am feeling right now? I am ~~not sure~~ of that.		Today is the most memorable day of my life.

			It is the most wonderful and greatest day of my life. Could there ever be a finer day than this?

			I am so glad I can write down my feelings at the end of this day. Most of the time, only trivial things are written down in this diary. As to whether I can write down everything I am feeling right now properly, I don't know.

			What I am certain of though, is that twelve years from now, I shall still remember this day. Yes, and whenever I read this entry, I shall feel the same joy I am feeling right now. And now, I shall write about the most wonderful day of my life.

			Oh——, just thinking about it makes me tremble with happiness.

	~~Twelve years from now, I shall still remember this day, and no matter how many times I will have re-read this diary, I shall feel the same joy I am feeling right now.~~

	Oh God, I am so happy, for today, my daughter was born!		Oh God, I am so happy, for today, my daughter was born!

	~~The hospital called me in the~~ evening, ~~even as~~ the ~~sun set~~.		It was this evening. I received a call, and headed to the hospital immediately.

	When I first laid my eyes on her, she was sleeping so peacefully. Oh, she is so tiny! I felt my eyes mist over.		When I first laid my eyes on her, she was sleeping so peacefully in her baby tray. Oh, she is so tiny! I felt my eyes mist over.

	~~Beside~~ her lay my dear wife, who smiled when she saw my face full of tears. What a pretty smile it was. I wiped away my tears and kissed her deeply without saying a word. ~~"You have~~ done ~~so well," I told~~ her. "No, I should say we have both done very well."		On the bed next to her lay my dear wife, who have accomplished the most important duty in the world. She smiled when she saw my face full of tears. What a pretty smile it was. I wiped away my tears and kissed her deeply without saying a word. She has truly done her best. No, I should say we have both done very well.

	Oh God! Even while writing this diary, I can't stop crying. My tears have smudged some of the ink on the page.		Oh God! Even while writing this diary, I can't stop crying. My tears have smudged some of the ink on the page.

	~~I have received the most precious gift in my life. In her little body flows the blood of my wife and mine. No treasure could ever replace her; she is more precious than anything in the world.~~

	I promise ~~— as~~ long as I live! — I will give her all the love I have, and make her ~~life a~~ happy ~~one~~.		I have received the most precious gift in my life. In her little body flows the blood of my beloved wife and mine. No treasure could ever replace her; she is more precious and more lovely than anything in the world.

			I promise —as long as I live!— I will give her all the love I have, and devote my heart and soul to make her happy.

	Her happiness will be mine, and my wife’s happiness.		Her happiness will be mine, and my wife’s happiness.

	We will care for her always, even if it means making enemies ~~with all~~ the world, even if it ~~mean~~ sacrificing everything. We will fight for her.		Me and my wife will always be on her side. We will care for her always, even if it means making enemies of the whole world, even if it means sacrificing everything. We will fight for her.

	I think she will grow up to be as beautiful as my wife. To think that I will see her grow and watch her life. I… I cannot put this joy into words. Is there anything in this world more wonderful than this?		I think she will grow up to be as beautiful as my wife. To think that I will see her grow and watch her life. I... I cannot put this joy into words. Is there anything in this world more wonderful than this?

	When she has grown up, she will work with us. Oh God, I believe I will cry on her wedding day! Now I understand how my father-in-law felt during the wedding. I thought him such a fool, now I regret that I felt that way about him. I must apologize to him when he comes to see his granddaughter.		When she has grown up, she will work with us. Oh God, I believe I will cry on her wedding day! Now I understand how my father-in-law felt during the wedding. I thought him such a fool, now I regret that I felt that way about him. I must apologize to him when he comes to see his granddaughter.


	Our days will be wonderful together. My tiny family of two is now three. Will we live happily ever after? Will all my past worries turn to happiness? Will everything go well, as I pray?		Our days will be wonderful together. My tiny family of two is now three. Will we live happily ever after? Will all my past worries turn to happiness? Will everything go well, as I pray?


	I have already taken a leave from work. Tomorrow I shall go to the hospital. Never mind that I will see her as often as I wish later, I still want to see my daughter!		I have already taken a leave from work. Tomorrow I shall go to the hospital. Never mind that I will see her as often as I wish later, I still want to see my daughter!
			We must choose her name. We toyed with so many names for both a boy and a girl, but could never decide on one.

	~~We must choose her name. We toyed with so many names for both a boy~~ and a ~~girl, but could never decide on one~~.		On my way home today, I came across some fellows, border guards from the looks of them, and overheard their conversation — a very fine name was mentioned.

	~~On my way home today, I came across some fellows, border guards from the looks of them, and overheard their conversation — a very fine name was mentioned.~~ They were talking about a type of bright red flower, found just beyond the borders of this country. These flowers ~~bloom and cover~~ the ~~whole of the valley in~~ a bright red ~~carpet at~~ this very ~~season~~.		They were talking about a type of bright red flower, found just beyond the borders of this country. These flowers stain the land with a bright red color, far across to the horizon. It blooms splendidly during this season, but only for a very short time.

	Neither me, nor my wife ever seen this flower before. Perhaps we will never have the chance to see it. Our daughter too.		Neither me, nor my wife have ever seen this flower before. Perhaps we will never have the chance to see it. Our daughter too.

	But I still want to name my daughter after this flower. I think my wife will agree to it.		But I still want to name my daughter after this flower. I think my wife will agree to it.

	Every year, ~~the~~ flower will bloom all over the ~~valley~~, as if celebrating her birthday.		Every year, this flower will bloom all over the prairie, as if celebrating her birthday.

	~~The~~ name of this flower is "×××××".		According to them, the name of this flower is "×××××".

	And then...		And then...

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			==Epilogue: A Pledge・a -a Kitchen Knife・a-==

	Dear Diary,		Dear Diary,

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	When I first laid my eyes on her, she was sleeping so peacefully. Oh, she is so tiny! I felt my eyes mist over.		When I first laid my eyes on her, she was sleeping so peacefully. Oh, she is so tiny! I felt my eyes mist over.

	Beside her lay my dear wife, who ~~wept happy tears~~ when she saw ~~me there~~. What a pretty ~~face she has~~. I ~~tried to wipe~~ away ~~her~~ tears and I kissed her deeply. "You have done so well," I told her. "No, I should say we have both done very well."		Beside her lay my dear wife, who smiled when she saw my face full of tears. What a pretty smile it was. I wiped away my tears and kissed her deeply without saying a word. "You have done so well," I told her. "No, I should say we have both done very well."

	Oh God! Even while writing this diary, I can't stop crying. My tears have smudged some of the ink on the page.		Oh God! Even while writing this diary, I can't stop crying. My tears have smudged some of the ink on the page.

	I have received the most precious gift in my life. In her little body flows the blood of my wife and mine. No treasure could ever replace her; she is more precious ~~then~~ anything in the world.		I have received the most precious gift in my life. In her little body flows the blood of my wife and mine. No treasure could ever replace her; she is more precious than anything in the world.

	I promise -- as long as I live! -- I will give her all the love I have, and make her life a happy one.		I promise — as long as I live! — I will give her all the love I have, and make her life a happy one.

	Her happiness will be mine, and my wife’s happiness.		Her happiness will be mine, and my wife’s happiness.
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	We will care for her always, even if it means making enemies with all the world, even if it mean sacrificing everything. We will fight for her.		We will care for her always, even if it means making enemies with all the world, even if it mean sacrificing everything. We will fight for her.

	I think she will grow up to be as beautiful as my wife. To think that I will see her grow and watch her life. I… I cannot put this joy into words. Is there anything in this world more wonderful ~~then~~ this?		I think she will grow up to be as beautiful as my wife. To think that I will see her grow and watch her life. I… I cannot put this joy into words. Is there anything in this world more wonderful than this?

	When she has grown up, she will work with us. Oh God, I believe I will cry on her wedding day! Now I understand how my father-in-law felt during the wedding. I thought him such a fool, now I regret that I felt that way about him. I must apologize to him when he comes to see his granddaughter.		When she has grown up, she will work with us. Oh God, I believe I will cry on her wedding day! Now I understand how my father-in-law felt during the wedding. I thought him such a fool, now I regret that I felt that way about him. I must apologize to him when he comes to see his granddaughter.
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	We must choose her name. We toyed with so many names for both a boy and a girl, but could never decide on one.		We must choose her name. We toyed with so many names for both a boy and a girl, but could never decide on one.

	On my way home today, I came across some fellows, border guards from the looks of them, and overheard their conversation -- a very fine name was mentioned. They were talking about a type of bright red flower, found just beyond the borders of this country. These flowers bloom and cover the whole of the valley in a bright red carpet at this very season.		On my way home today, I came across some fellows, border guards from the looks of them, and overheard their conversation — a very fine name was mentioned. They were talking about a type of bright red flower, found just beyond the borders of this country. These flowers bloom and cover the whole of the valley in a bright red carpet at this very season.

	~~Although we have never~~ seen this flower before~~, and perhaps~~ never ~~shall~~ have the chance to see it, I still want to name my daughter after this flower. I think my wife will agree to it.		Neither me, nor my wife ever seen this flower before. Perhaps we will never have the chance to see it. Our daughter too.

			But I still want to name my daughter after this flower. I think my wife will agree to it.

	Every year, the flower will bloom all over the valley, as if celebrating her birthday.		Every year, the flower will bloom all over the valley, as if celebrating her birthday.

	~~What was the~~ name of ~~that~~ flower ~~again~~...?		The name of this flower is "×××××".

			And then...

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	What was the name of that flower again...?		What was the name of that flower again...?

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	Diary		Dear Diary,

	Year XX Month XX Day XX. Sunny		Year XX Month XX Day XX. Sunny.

			Today is the most memorable day of my life. Also the most wonderful and greatest day of my life. Could there ever be a finer day than this?

	~~Today~~ is ~~the most memorable in my life~~.		I am so glad I can write down my feelings at the end of this day. Most of the time this is such a boring record. Is it possible I can write down what I am feeling right now? I am not sure of that.

	~~This is also~~ the ~~most wonderful and greatest day of my life~~. ~~Could there even be a greater day in my life?~~		Twelve years from now, I shall still remember this day, and no matter how many times I will have re-read this diary, I shall feel the same joy I am feeling right now.

	I am so ~~glad I can write down my feelings at the end of the day. Most of the time it is just some boring record~~, ~~could I even write down what I am feeling right now~~, ~~I am not even sure of it.~~		Oh God, I am so happy, for today, my daughter was born!

	~~Twelve years later, I bet I would still remember this day and no matter how many times I will have read this diary again~~, ~~I would still feel~~ the ~~same joy I am feeling right now.~~.		The hospital called me in the evening, even as the sun set.

	Oh ~~God~~! I ~~am so happy!~~		When I first laid my eyes on her, she was sleeping so peacefully. Oh, she is so tiny! I felt my eyes mist over.

			Beside her lay my dear wife, who wept happy tears when she saw me there. What a pretty face she has. I tried to wipe away her tears and I kissed her deeply. "You have done so well," I told her. "No, I should say we have both done very well."

	~~Today~~, ~~my daughter was born~~.		Oh God! Even while writing this diary, I can't stop crying. My tears have smudged some of the ink on the page.

			I have received the most precious gift in my life. In her little body flows the blood of my wife and mine. No treasure could ever replace her; she is more precious then anything in the world.

	~~The hospital called me nearing evening~~.		I promise -- as long as I live! -- I will give her all the love I have, and make her life a happy one.

	~~When I first laid eyes on her~~, ~~she was sleeping so peacefully, OH! She is so tiny! I felt~~ my ~~eye moist over~~.		Her happiness will be mine, and my wife’s happiness.

	~~Next to~~ her ~~lay my dear wife~~, ~~she began to cry happy tears when she saw me there~~. ~~What a pretty face. I tried to wipe off her tears and kissed~~ her ~~deeply. You have done very well, no, I should say we have both done very well~~.		We will care for her always, even if it means making enemies with all the world, even if it mean sacrificing everything. We will fight for her.

	~~Oh God! Even writing~~ this ~~diary I can't stop crying, the tears have spoiled some of the ink on the page~~.		I think she will grow up to be as beautiful as my wife. To think that I will see her grow and watch her life. I… I cannot put this joy into words. Is there anything in this world more wonderful then this?

			When she has grown up, she will work with us. Oh God, I believe I will cry on her wedding day! Now I understand how my father-in-law felt during the wedding. I thought him such a fool, now I regret that I felt that way about him. I must apologize to him when he comes to see his granddaughter.

	~~I have received the most precious gift in my life~~. ~~In her body flow the blood~~ of my ~~wife and me~~, ~~nothing in the world could ever replace her to us. She is even more beautiful then anything in the world.~~		Our days will be wonderful together. My tiny family of two is now three. Will we live happily ever after? Will all my past worries turn to happiness? Will everything go well, as I pray?

	I ~~promise~~.		I have already taken a leave from work. Tomorrow I shall go to the hospital. Never mind that I will see her as often as I wish later, I still want to see my daughter!

	~~As long as I live, I will give~~ her ~~all the love I have~~ and ~~make her life~~ a ~~happy~~ one.		We must choose her name. We toyed with so many names for both a boy and a girl, but could never decide on one.

	~~Her happiness will be mine~~ and ~~my wife’s happiness~~.		On my way home today, I came across some fellows, border guards from the looks of them, and overheard their conversation -- a very fine name was mentioned. They were talking about a type of bright red flower, found just beyond the borders of this country. These flowers bloom and cover the whole of the valley in a bright red carpet at this very season.

	~~We will support her always~~, ~~even if it mean’s making enemy with~~ the ~~world, even if~~ it ~~mean sacrificing everything~~, we will ~~fight for her~~.		Although we have never seen this flower before, and perhaps never shall have the chance to see it, I still want to name my daughter after this flower. I think my wife will agree to it.

			Every year, the flower will bloom all over the valley, as if celebrating her birthday.

	I think she will grow up to be as beautiful as my wife. To think that I will get to see her grow and watch her life… I …I cannot put this joy into words, is there anything in this world even more wonderful then this?		What was the name of that flower again...?

	When she is all grown up, she will work with us. Oh God! I believe I will cry on her wedding day. Now I understand how my Father-in-law felt during the wedding. I have thought to myself how much a fool he was~~, now I am sorry that I felt that way about him (I~~
	~~guess I will apologize to him when he see his granddaughter).~~


	Our days will be wonderful together; from a small family of two now is three, and will we live happily ever after? Will all my past worry not turn to happiness, will everything be going well as I pray? (Alternate: All my past worry will not turn to happiness, everything will be going well as I pray?)


	~~Tomorrow (I have already took leave from work) I am going to~~ the ~~hospital, never mind that I will get to see her as often as I want later, but I still want to see my daughter.~~

	~~We are going to decide on her~~ name~~. We have come up with lots~~ of ~~names for both a boy and girl but could never decide on one.~~

	~~But on my way home today, I came across a few fellows, border guards from the looks of them, and overheard their conversation; a very good name was mentioned.~~

	~~They were talking about a type of bright red~~ flower ~~found beyond the border of this country~~. ~~These flowers would bloom and cover the whole of the valley in a bright red carpet for this particular season~~.

	~~Although we never saw this flower before, and maybe never even get a chance to see it as well, much like our daughter~~.

	~~But I still want to name her after this flower. I think my wife would agree to it as well.~~

	~~Every year nearing her birthday, the flower would bloom all over the valley as if celebrating her birth .~~

	~~They told me the flower is called,~~

	~~xxx~~

	~~And then,~~

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New page: Diary Year XX Month XX Day XX. Sunny Today is the most memorable in my life. This is also the most wonderful and greatest day of my life. Could there even be a greater day in my life...

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Diary

Year XX Month XX Day XX. Sunny

Today is the most memorable in my life.

This is also the most wonderful and greatest day of my life. Could there even be a greater day in my life?

I am so glad I can write down my feelings at the end of the day. Most of the time it is just some boring record, could I even write down what I am feeling right now, I am not even sure of it.

Twelve years later, I bet I would still remember this day and no matter how many times I will have read this diary again, I would still feel the same joy I am feeling right now..

Oh God! I am so happy!

Today, my daughter was born.

The hospital called me nearing evening.

When I first laid eyes on her, she was sleeping so peacefully, OH! She is so tiny! I felt my eye moist over.

Next to her lay my dear wife, she began to cry happy tears when she saw me there. What a pretty face. I tried to wipe off her tears and kissed her deeply. You have done very well, no, I should say we have both done very well.

Oh God! Even writing this diary I can't stop crying, the tears have spoiled some of the ink on the page.

I have received the most precious gift in my life. In her body flow the blood of my wife and me, nothing in the world could ever replace her to us. She is even more beautiful then anything in the world.

I promise.

As long as I live, I will give her all the love I have and make her life a happy one.

Her happiness will be mine and my wife’s happiness.

We will support her always, even if it mean’s making enemy with the world, even if it mean sacrificing everything, we will fight for her.

I think she will grow up to be as beautiful as my wife. To think that I will get to see her grow and watch her life… I …I cannot put this joy into words, is there anything in this world even more wonderful then this?

When she is all grown up, she will work with us. Oh God! I believe I will cry on her wedding day. Now I understand how my Father-in-law felt during the wedding. I have thought to myself how much a fool he was, now I am sorry that I felt that way about him (I
guess I will apologize to him when he see his granddaughter).

Our days will be wonderful together; from a small family of two now is three, and will we live happily ever after? Will all my past worry not turn to happiness, will everything be going well as I pray? (Alternate: All my past worry will not turn to happiness, everything will be going well as I pray?)

Tomorrow (I have already took leave from work) I am going to the hospital, never mind that I will get to see her as often as I want later, but I still want to see my daughter.

We are going to decide on her name. We have come up with lots of names for both a boy and girl but could never decide on one.

But on my way home today, I came across a few fellows, border guards from the looks of them, and overheard their conversation; a very good name was mentioned.

They were talking about a type of bright red flower found beyond the border of this country. These flowers would bloom and cover the whole of the valley in a bright red carpet for this particular season.

Although we never saw this flower before, and maybe never even get a chance to see it as well, much like our daughter.

But I still want to name her after this flower. I think my wife would agree to it as well.

Every year nearing her birthday, the flower would bloom all over the valley as if celebrating her birth .

They told me the flower is called,

xxx

And then,