Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1 Chapter3 - Revision history

Rpapo: Admiral Maehara is actually Maebara.

2021-11-28T10:34:19Z

Admiral Maehara is actually Maebara.

Rpapo: Corrected spelling.

2020-08-03T19:52:45Z

Corrected spelling.

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	This was a guess from looking at what direction the enemy planes were flying. This was a deception on the part of the Japanese.		This was a guess from looking at what direction the enemy planes were flying. This was a deception on the part of the Japanese.

	"Understood. We will pass through the ~~Kauai~~ Channel and proceed north, and then start the fight. We'll probably wind up closer to the enemy that way," said Halsey.		"Understood. We will pass through the Kaua'i Channel and proceed north, and then start the fight. We'll probably wind up closer to the enemy that way," said Halsey.

	"When do we expect to launch planes?"		"When do we expect to launch planes?"
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	Let's return to the story. Well then, our elite submarine group had already come close to Hawaii. A fleet of twenty I-ships had surrounded Oahu Island some time ago, and had been gather intelligence.		Let's return to the story. Well then, our elite submarine group had already come close to Hawaii. A fleet of twenty I-ships had surrounded Oahu Island some time ago, and had been gather intelligence.

	The ships of the Twelfth Submersible Squadron (three ships together with I-168) received information from the Seidens. They knew the enemy aircraft carrier's location at once from their telecommunications, and hurried with all speed to the west side of the ~~Kauai~~ Channel. The intent was to reduce the enemy's war potential by means of a lightning attack.		The ships of the Twelfth Submersible Squadron (three ships together with I-168) received information from the Seidens. They knew the enemy aircraft carrier's location at once from their telecommunications, and hurried with all speed to the west side of the Kaua'i Channel. The intent was to reduce the enemy's war potential by means of a lightning attack.

	At length, submarine I-168 caught an enemy fleet in it's periscope's field of view, on course through the ~~Kauai~~ Channel, heading for its rendezvous. It was now past 7am.		At length, submarine I-168 caught an enemy fleet in it's periscope's field of view, on course through the Kaua'i Channel, heading for its rendezvous. It was now past 7am.

	At the start of the war, the enemy had three aircraft carriers in its Pacific Fleet. The Japanese knew this beforehand. One ship, the Enterprise, was returning from Wake Island under command of Admiral Halsey. Another ship, the Lexington, was en route from Midway Island. Yet another ship was currently in the American west coast port, San Diego.		At the start of the war, the enemy had three aircraft carriers in its Pacific Fleet. The Japanese knew this beforehand. One ship, the Enterprise, was returning from Wake Island under command of Admiral Halsey. Another ship, the Lexington, was en route from Midway Island. Yet another ship was currently in the American west coast port, San Diego.
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	On the other hand, Kimmel was taken by surprise.		On the other hand, Kimmel was taken by surprise.

	The last ray of hope, his comrade in arms Admiral Halsey, was reported as killed in battle. What's more, having received reports about the total destruction in the ~~Kauai~~ Channel, his knees shook.		The last ray of hope, his comrade in arms Admiral Halsey, was reported as killed in battle. What's more, having received reports about the total destruction in the Kaua'i Channel, his knees shook.

	For a short while he was stunned.		For a short while he was stunned.

Rpapo: Not the "Kawaii Strait", nor the "Kawaii Channel

2020-08-03T19:47:17Z

Not the "Kawaii Strait", nor the "Kawaii Channel

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	Let's return to the story. Well then, our elite submarine group had already come close to Hawaii. A fleet of twenty I-ships had surrounded Oahu Island some time ago, and had been gather intelligence.		Let's return to the story. Well then, our elite submarine group had already come close to Hawaii. A fleet of twenty I-ships had surrounded Oahu Island some time ago, and had been gather intelligence.

	The ships of the Twelfth Submersible Squadron (three ships together with I-168) received information from the Seidens. They knew the enemy aircraft carrier's location at once from their telecommunications, and hurried with all speed to the west side of the Kauai ~~channel~~. The intent was to reduce the enemy's war potential by means of a lightning attack.		The ships of the Twelfth Submersible Squadron (three ships together with I-168) received information from the Seidens. They knew the enemy aircraft carrier's location at once from their telecommunications, and hurried with all speed to the west side of the Kauai Channel. The intent was to reduce the enemy's war potential by means of a lightning attack.

	At length, submarine I-168 caught an enemy fleet in it's periscope's field of view, on course through the Kauai ~~channel~~, heading for its rendezvous. It was now past 7am.		At length, submarine I-168 caught an enemy fleet in it's periscope's field of view, on course through the Kauai Channel, heading for its rendezvous. It was now past 7am.

	At the start of the war, the enemy had three aircraft carriers in its Pacific Fleet. The Japanese knew this beforehand. One ship, the Enterprise, was returning from Wake Island under command of Admiral Halsey. Another ship, the Lexington, was en route from Midway Island. Yet another ship was currently in the American west coast port, San Diego.		At the start of the war, the enemy had three aircraft carriers in its Pacific Fleet. The Japanese knew this beforehand. One ship, the Enterprise, was returning from Wake Island under command of Admiral Halsey. Another ship, the Lexington, was en route from Midway Island. Yet another ship was currently in the American west coast port, San Diego.
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	On the other hand, Kimmel was taken by surprise.		On the other hand, Kimmel was taken by surprise.

	The last ray of hope, his comrade in arms Admiral Halsey, was reported as killed in battle. What's more, having received reports about the total destruction in the Kauai ~~Strait~~, his knees shook.		The last ray of hope, his comrade in arms Admiral Halsey, was reported as killed in battle. What's more, having received reports about the total destruction in the Kauai Channel, his knees shook.

	For a short while he was stunned.		For a short while he was stunned.

Rpapo: Added link to next chapter.

2020-05-17T20:21:35Z

Added link to next chapter.

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	\| Back to [[Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]		\| Back to [[Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
	\| Return to [[Konpeki no Kantai#Volume 1 - The Destined Outbreak of War\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Konpeki no Kantai#Volume 1 - The Destined Outbreak of War\|Main Page]]
			\| Forward to [[Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1_Chapter4\|Chapter 4]]
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Rpapo: Pages 130 & 131 done. Chapter 3 done.

2020-05-03T19:00:29Z

Pages 130 & 131 done. Chapter 3 done.

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Rpapo: Pages 128 & 129 done.

2020-04-12T22:10:36Z

Pages 128 & 129 done.

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 "That, also, is so."
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+"Okay then, let's regroup and return to Hawaii," Kimmel decided.
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Rpapo: Corrected percentage complete.

2020-03-29T18:07:27Z

Corrected percentage complete.

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Rpapo: Pages 126 & 127 done.

2020-03-29T18:02:05Z

Pages 126 & 127 done.

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 At any rate, for now, with the loss of its carriers, Kimmel's fleet had lost its eyes.  Though they could launch float-planes to watch over the nearby ocean, they had limitations.
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+Kimmel was no exception.
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Rpapo: Fixed typo.

2020-03-01T23:30:49Z

Fixed typo.

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	Despite his anxiety, Admiral Kimmel shouted at his staff officer.		Despite his anxiety, Admiral Kimmel shouted at his staff officer.

	At any rate, for now, with the loss of its carriers, Kimmel's fleet had lost its eyes. Though they could launch float-planes to watch over the nearby ocean, ~~there~~ had limitations.		At any rate, for now, with the loss of its carriers, Kimmel's fleet had lost its eyes. Though they could launch float-planes to watch over the nearby ocean, they had limitations.

Rpapo: Pages 124 & 125 done.

2020-03-01T23:17:05Z

Pages 124 & 125 done.

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 Once all the heavy cruisers were dealt with, next came the destroyers.  "Let not one warship escape."
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