Konpeki no Kantai::Volume1 Chapter4 - Revision history

Rpapo at 20:30, 10 October 2021

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Rpapo at 12:31, 3 October 2021

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	===Chapter Four: The ~~Deciding~~ Battle at Pearl Harbor===		===Chapter Four: The Decisive Battle at Pearl Harbor===
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Rpapo: Page 174 done. Chapter four done.

2021-09-19T22:19:31Z

Page 174 done. Chapter four done.

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	~~<nowiki><~~98% Completed~~></nowiki><!-- 42~~ of ~~43 pages -->~~		'''Footnote:''' Hawaii at this time is America's 50th state, but in 1898 an American possession, and from 1900 onwards an American territory. The Kamehameha dynasty was established in the 19th century, but the islands in the middle of the Pacific Ocean were being threatened by the influence of the United States, Great Britain and France. Since the fall of the Tokugawa Shogunate, the Japanese people had been witnessing the invasion of Asia by the Western powers.


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 "That will do," nodded Takano.
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+"That's good thinking.  Let's tell Prime Minister Ootaka as soon as possible."
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 "It sounds like Hawaii is a nice place."
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+"I really envy you.  Tokyo, indeed, all of Japan, because it has entered a wartime state of frugality and saving, is as cold as all get-out," laughed Takano.
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Rpapo: Fixed typo.

2021-08-22T09:39:12Z

Fixed typo.

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	The jurisdiction was limited to the former American base, and they did not interfere with the local government in any way. Sometimes they even let us help out in the pineapple fields.		The jurisdiction was limited to the former American base, and they did not interfere with the local government in any way. Sometimes they even let us help out in the pineapple fields.

	~~Sakamoro~~ Ryouma reported there were hardly any of the problems he’d been worried about, perhaps due to there being so many people of Japanese descent.		Sakamoto Ryouma reported there were hardly any of the problems he’d been worried about, perhaps due to there being so many people of Japanese descent.

	Thus we see that Hawaii was doing well in general. The Japanese Navy was making effective use of the huge naval base in Pearl Harbor, turning it into a strategic base.		Thus we see that Hawaii was doing well in general. The Japanese Navy was making effective use of the huge naval base in Pearl Harbor, turning it into a strategic base.

Rpapo: Pages 168 & 169 done.

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 "If we could connect to Bangkok, then the end point would be Singapore."
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 "That it is."
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+"Haha!" Ootaka laughed and nodded.
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Rpapo: Changed "Ruby" to "Red Jade" throughout. I wonder if "Deep Blue" is a gemstone reference too...

2021-07-04T12:38:36Z

Changed "Ruby" to "Red Jade" throughout. I wonder if "Deep Blue" is a gemstone reference too...

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	Ootaka asked, "You told me that eventually you would like to build a new fleet based on these six battleships, didn't you?"		Ootaka asked, "You told me that eventually you would like to build a new fleet based on these six battleships, didn't you?"

	"Yes. I am thinking I would like to christen it 'The ~~Ruby~~ Fleet', how about that?"		"Yes. I am thinking I would like to christen it 'The Red Jade Fleet', how about that?"

	"That's a good name."		"That's a good name."
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	"That's great."		"That's great."

	Ootaka clapped himself on the knees. "So it's the Deep Blue Fleet in the east, and in the west the ~~Ruby~~ Fleet, eh? It is plain to see that you read from the worlds of <span class="plainlinks">[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shunr%C5%8D_Oshikawa Oshikawa Shinrou]</span> when you were a kid."		Ootaka clapped himself on the knees. "So it's the Deep Blue Fleet in the east, and in the west the Red Jade Fleet, eh? It is plain to see that you read from the worlds of <span class="plainlinks">[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shunr%C5%8D_Oshikawa Oshikawa Shinrou]</span> when you were a kid."

	"There were also <span class="plainlinks">[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Unno_Juza Unno Juuza]</span>, Minami Youichirou and Yamanaka Minetarou."		"There were also <span class="plainlinks">[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Unno_Juza Unno Juuza]</span>, Minami Youichirou and Yamanaka Minetarou," said Takano, who for his part looked like he had returned briefly to his childhood.

			"The sake is really good."

			"That it is."

Rpapo: Pages 164 & 165 done.

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 Ootaka had been determined to carry out a military purge as well.
-"By the way, this Deep Blue Fleet that we have been keeping secret, where is it now?"
+"By the way, this Deep Blue Fleet that we have been keeping secret, where is it now?" This time it was Ootaka changing the subject.
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