Leviathan:Volume 1 Chapter 4 - Revision history

Zzhk: Reverted edits by Cheekydarkie (talk) to last revision by Zzhk

2015-11-30T07:12:34Z

Reverted edits by Cheekydarkie (talk) to last revision by Zzhk

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	After reading the text message she had received on her cellphone, Shirasaka Hazumi sighed.		After reading the text message she had received on her cellphone, Shirasaka Hazumi sighed.

	Last night at ~~11 pm~~ or so, a ''pillar of fire'' had appeared in the sky in Old Tokyo's direction, adding crimson illumination to the dark sky that only had the moon and the stars as light sources.		Last night at 11pm or so, a ''pillar of fire'' had appeared in the sky in Old Tokyo's direction, adding crimson illumination to the dark sky that only had the moon and the stars as light sources.

	Like the majority of residents, Hazumi was also witnessing the scene from her window at home.		Like the majority of residents, Hazumi was also witnessing the scene from her window at home.
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	"You evidently need a lesson on how to express gratitude to your savior."		"You evidently need a lesson on how to express gratitude to your savior."

	"Aren't you an extraterrestrial ~~life-form~~ that only saved me out of ulterior motives? You even made me shoulder a whole load of different risks. Calling yourself my 'savior" is way too unconvincing. However, I don't care if you follow me."		"Aren't you an extraterrestrial lifeform that only saved me out of ulterior motives? You even made me shoulder a whole load of different risks. Calling yourself my 'savior" is way too unconvincing. However, I don't care if you follow me."

	This was a dragon's ghost calling herself the devil. Driving her away was probably impossible.		This was a dragon's ghost calling herself the devil. Driving her away was probably impossible.
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	In any case, Hal made his way to the gate leading to New Town, accompanied by the girl who called herself Hinokagutsuchi.		In any case, Hal made his way to the gate leading to New Town, accompanied by the girl who called herself Hinokagutsuchi.

	Hal had no idea that from this point ~~onward~~, his life was going to change nonstop like a tumbling rock.		Hal had no idea that from this point onwards, his life was going to change nonstop like a tumbling rock.


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	As a teenage boy who had no desire to live in a house resembling a model home, Hal felt that leaving things the way they were would be fine—But Orihime simply said, "Oh, it has nothing to do with the ritual. I just happen to be free today. Haruga-kun, could you tell me the time right now?"		As a teenage boy who had no desire to live in a house resembling a model home, Hal felt that leaving things the way they were would be fine—But Orihime simply said, "Oh, it has nothing to do with the ritual. I just happen to be free today. Haruga-kun, could you tell me the time right now?"

	"It's currently 10:~~28 am~~."		"It's currently 10:28am."

	Hal confirmed the time on his cellphone. Orihime smiled deliberately and nodded.		Hal confirmed the time on his cellphone. Orihime smiled deliberately and nodded.
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	Hal's classmate was considerate of other's feelings despite her upfront personality.		Hal's classmate was considerate of other's feelings despite her upfront personality.

	If she were to voice her current thoughts and feelings, perhaps her ~~new-found~~ friend might be forced into hopeless peril. However, Asya never failed to live up to expectations.		If she were to voice her current thoughts and feelings, perhaps her newfound friend might be forced into hopeless peril. However, Asya never failed to live up to expectations.

	She stared at the mini-Monolith and the sleeping "serpent" Minadzuki for quite a while.		She stared at the mini-Monolith and the sleeping "serpent" Minadzuki for quite a while.
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	"Drinking blood, you say?"		"Drinking blood, you say?"

	"For ~~dragon-kind~~, the blood of female dragons or similar lifeforms are akin to a wonder drug with a multitude of uses. Used as a drastic measure, it can temporarily augment their powers. It can also be used as an elixir to cure the heavy injuries you inflicted."		"For dragonkind, the blood of female dragons or similar lifeforms are akin to a wonder drug with a multitude of uses. Used as a drastic measure, it can temporarily augment their powers. It can also be used as an elixir to cure the heavy injuries you inflicted."

	"..."		"..."

Cheekydarkie: /* Chapter 4 - Soth's Counterattack */

2015-11-30T03:05:15Z

Chapter 4 - Soth's Counterattack

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	After reading the text message she had received on her cellphone, Shirasaka Hazumi sighed.		After reading the text message she had received on her cellphone, Shirasaka Hazumi sighed.

	Last night at ~~11pm~~ or so, a ''pillar of fire'' had appeared in the sky in Old Tokyo's direction, adding crimson illumination to the dark sky that only had the moon and the stars as light sources.		Last night at 11 pm or so, a ''pillar of fire'' had appeared in the sky in Old Tokyo's direction, adding crimson illumination to the dark sky that only had the moon and the stars as light sources.

	Like the majority of residents, Hazumi was also witnessing the scene from her window at home.		Like the majority of residents, Hazumi was also witnessing the scene from her window at home.
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	"You evidently need a lesson on how to express gratitude to your savior."		"You evidently need a lesson on how to express gratitude to your savior."

	"Aren't you an extraterrestrial ~~lifeform~~ that only saved me out of ulterior motives? You even made me shoulder a whole load of different risks. Calling yourself my 'savior" is way too unconvincing. However, I don't care if you follow me."		"Aren't you an extraterrestrial life-form that only saved me out of ulterior motives? You even made me shoulder a whole load of different risks. Calling yourself my 'savior" is way too unconvincing. However, I don't care if you follow me."

	This was a dragon's ghost calling herself the devil. Driving her away was probably impossible.		This was a dragon's ghost calling herself the devil. Driving her away was probably impossible.
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	In any case, Hal made his way to the gate leading to New Town, accompanied by the girl who called herself Hinokagutsuchi.		In any case, Hal made his way to the gate leading to New Town, accompanied by the girl who called herself Hinokagutsuchi.

	Hal had no idea that from this point ~~onwards~~, his life was going to change nonstop like a tumbling rock.		Hal had no idea that from this point onward, his life was going to change nonstop like a tumbling rock.


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	As a teenage boy who had no desire to live in a house resembling a model home, Hal felt that leaving things the way they were would be fine—But Orihime simply said, "Oh, it has nothing to do with the ritual. I just happen to be free today. Haruga-kun, could you tell me the time right now?"		As a teenage boy who had no desire to live in a house resembling a model home, Hal felt that leaving things the way they were would be fine—But Orihime simply said, "Oh, it has nothing to do with the ritual. I just happen to be free today. Haruga-kun, could you tell me the time right now?"

	"It's currently 10:~~28am~~."		"It's currently 10:28 am."

	Hal confirmed the time on his cellphone. Orihime smiled deliberately and nodded.		Hal confirmed the time on his cellphone. Orihime smiled deliberately and nodded.
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	Hal's classmate was considerate of other's feelings despite her upfront personality.		Hal's classmate was considerate of other's feelings despite her upfront personality.

	If she were to voice her current thoughts and feelings, perhaps her ~~newfound~~ friend might be forced into hopeless peril. However, Asya never failed to live up to expectations.		If she were to voice her current thoughts and feelings, perhaps her new-found friend might be forced into hopeless peril. However, Asya never failed to live up to expectations.

	She stared at the mini-Monolith and the sleeping "serpent" Minadzuki for quite a while.		She stared at the mini-Monolith and the sleeping "serpent" Minadzuki for quite a while.
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	"Drinking blood, you say?"		"Drinking blood, you say?"

	"For ~~dragonkind~~, the blood of female dragons or similar lifeforms are akin to a wonder drug with a multitude of uses. Used as a drastic measure, it can temporarily augment their powers. It can also be used as an elixir to cure the heavy injuries you inflicted."		"For dragon-kind, the blood of female dragons or similar lifeforms are akin to a wonder drug with a multitude of uses. Used as a drastic measure, it can temporarily augment their powers. It can also be used as an elixir to cure the heavy injuries you inflicted."

	"..."		"..."

Zzhk: Reverted edits by Kurotora (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

2015-08-12T23:07:48Z

Reverted edits by Kurotora (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

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	"Uh, 'I am truly sorry for worrying everyone. I will refrain from this type of neglect henceforth, always remembering to report back, make contact and discuss with you at all times, to act with self-awareness as a teammate'..."		"Uh, 'I am truly sorry for worrying everyone. I will refrain from this type of neglect henceforth, always remembering to report back, make contact and discuss with you at all times, to act with self-awareness as a teammate'..."
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	"Totally unacceptable. Lacking in both sincerity and ardor."		"Totally unacceptable. Lacking in both sincerity and ardor."

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	It felt like she was giving him both the carrot and the stick with great finesse. At this moment, even Asya started talking frantically:		It felt like she was giving him both the carrot and the stick with great finesse. At this moment, even Asya started talking frantically:
			[[image:Leviathan 01 201.jpg\|thumb]]

	"I-I'll only say this here as well, okay? Actually, once I found out you were safe and sound, Haruomi, I also cried on the bed until my pillow was completely drenched!"		"I-I'll only say this here as well, okay? Actually, once I found out you were safe and sound, Haruomi, I also cried on the bed until my pillow was completely drenched!"

Kurotora: /* Part 3 */

2015-08-12T19:16:18Z

Part 3

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	"Uh, 'I am truly sorry for worrying everyone. I will refrain from this type of neglect henceforth, always remembering to report back, make contact and discuss with you at all times, to act with self-awareness as a teammate'..."		"Uh, 'I am truly sorry for worrying everyone. I will refrain from this type of neglect henceforth, always remembering to report back, make contact and discuss with you at all times, to act with self-awareness as a teammate'..."
			[[image:Leviathan 01 201.jpg\|thumb]]
	"Totally unacceptable. Lacking in both sincerity and ardor."		"Totally unacceptable. Lacking in both sincerity and ardor."

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	It felt like she was giving him both the carrot and the stick with great finesse. At this moment, even Asya started talking frantically:		It felt like she was giving him both the carrot and the stick with great finesse. At this moment, even Asya started talking frantically:
	~~[[image:Leviathan 01 201.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	"I-I'll only say this here as well, okay? Actually, once I found out you were safe and sound, Haruomi, I also cried on the bed until my pillow was completely drenched!"		"I-I'll only say this here as well, okay? Actually, once I found out you were safe and sound, Haruomi, I also cried on the bed until my pillow was completely drenched!"

Cthaeh at 13:55, 2 August 2015

2015-08-02T13:55:50Z

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	Soth and the imprisoned witch, Shirasaka Hazumi, stayed in the Mansion the whole time without appearing once.		Soth and the imprisoned witch, Shirasaka Hazumi, stayed in the Mansion the whole time without appearing once.

	However, a ~~changes~~ was occurring with the mini-Monolith and the leviathan Minadzuki.		However, a change was occurring with the mini-Monolith and the leviathan Minadzuki.

	—A change in color. The mini-Monolith where the "serpent" was pinned was originally a transparent equilateral triangular prism.		—A change in color. The mini-Monolith where the "serpent" was pinned was originally a transparent equilateral triangular prism.

Zzhk at 22:27, 2 March 2015

2015-03-02T22:27:08Z

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Nick Halden at 15:30, 24 February 2015

2015-02-24T15:30:31Z

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Zzhk at 14:27, 20 January 2015

2015-01-20T14:27:47Z

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	The half-man half-dragon monster spoke to Hazumi who could not help but scream.		The half-man half-dragon monster spoke to Hazumi who could not help but scream.

	"My name is Raak Al Soth, the wanderer who seeks the ~~Path~~ to Kingship."		"My name is Raak Al Soth, the wanderer who seeks the Road to Kingship."

	The dragon opened his jaws wide.		The dragon opened his jaws wide.

Zzhk at 12:48, 20 January 2015

2015-01-20T12:48:43Z

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	The half-man half-dragon monster spoke to Hazumi who could not help but scream.		The half-man half-dragon monster spoke to Hazumi who could not help but scream.

	"My name is Raak Al Soth, the wanderer who seeks the ~~path~~ to ~~kingship~~."		"My name is Raak Al Soth, the wanderer who seeks the Path to Kingship."

	The dragon opened his jaws wide.		The dragon opened his jaws wide.
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Zzhk: /* Part 1 */

2015-01-20T12:25:15Z

Part 1

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	The half-man half-dragon monster spoke to Hazumi who could not help but scream.		The half-man half-dragon monster spoke to Hazumi who could not help but scream.

	"My name is Raak Al Soth, the wanderer who seeks the ~~road~~ to kingship."		"My name is Raak Al Soth, the wanderer who seeks the path to kingship."

	The dragon opened his jaws wide.		The dragon opened his jaws wide.