Leviathan:Volume 1 Chapter 5 - Revision history

Zzhk at 07:49, 30 October 2016

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	==Chapter 5 - Akuro-Ou, and the Bow ~~Star~~ of the Southern Sky==		==Chapter 5 - Akuro-Ou, and the Bow Stars of the Southern Sky==

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	Hinokagutsuchi goaded Hal by the side of his ear.		Hinokagutsuchi goaded Hal by the side of his ear.

	(Now issue orders to your rune, the Bow ~~Star~~ of the Southern Sky, to fire the dragonslaying bow!)		(Now issue orders to your rune, the Bow Stars of the Southern Sky, to fire the dragonslaying bow!)

	Bow ~~Star~~ of the Southern Sky. That seemed to be an unexpectedly majestic name.		Bow Stars of the Southern Sky. That seemed to be an unexpectedly majestic name.

	Embracing Asya with his left arm, Hal pushed his other hand forward.		Embracing Asya with his left arm, Hal pushed his other hand forward.

Zzhk at 06:58, 10 February 2016

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	"H-Haruga-kun!? You were just nodding very seriously. You wouldn't be thinking of something weird by any chance, right!?"		"H-Haruga-kun!? You were just nodding very seriously. You wouldn't be thinking of something weird by any chance, right!?"

	"Juujouji, I'm sure you should have noticed by now. Despite appearances, I am actually a ~~repressed~~ perv—"		"Juujouji, I'm sure you should have noticed by now. Despite appearances, I am actually a closet perv—"

	"I don't want to listen. I already understand fully that you're a boy, Haruga-kun, so please stop saying things that will make others embarrassed~~!"		"I don't want to listen. I already understand fully that you're a boy, Haruga-kun, so please stop saying things that will make others embarrassed~~!"

Zzhk: /* Chapter 5 - Akuro-Ou, and the Bow Star of the Southern Sky */

2016-02-06T12:03:39Z

Chapter 5 - Akuro-Ou, and the Bow Star of the Southern Sky

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	"H-Haruga-kun!? You were just nodding very seriously. You wouldn't be thinking of something weird by any chance, right!?"		"H-Haruga-kun!? You were just nodding very seriously. You wouldn't be thinking of something weird by any chance, right!?"

	"Juujouji, I'm sure you should have noticed by now. Despite appearances, I am actually a ~~covert~~ perv—"		"Juujouji, I'm sure you should have noticed by now. Despite appearances, I am actually a repressed perv—"

	"I don't want to listen. I already understand fully that you're a boy, Haruga-kun, so please stop saying things that will make others embarrassed~~!"		"I don't want to listen. I already understand fully that you're a boy, Haruga-kun, so please stop saying things that will make others embarrassed~~!"

Zzhk: Reverted edits by Cheekydarkie (talk) to last revision by Zzhk

2015-11-30T07:12:39Z

Reverted edits by Cheekydarkie (talk) to last revision by Zzhk

Cheekydarkie: /* Chapter 5 - Akuro-Ou, and the Bow Star of the Southern Sky */

2015-11-30T03:10:31Z

Chapter 5 - Akuro-Ou, and the Bow Star of the Southern Sky

Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

2015-11-15T06:49:18Z

Part 2

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	Despite Soth's polite choice of words, his attitude was quite arrogant.		Despite Soth's polite choice of words, his attitude was quite arrogant.

	"Dragons pride themselves on ~~not taking on~~ primate form in the first place. Although there exist hybrids as exceptions... At least, it is not the style of I, Raak Al Soth."		"Dragons pride themselves on eschewing primate form in the first place. Although there exist hybrids as exceptions... At least, it is not the style of I, Raak Al Soth."

	"By the way, may I ask why you wanted to see me?" said Asya while smiling fearlessly.		"By the way, may I ask why you wanted to see me?" said Asya while smiling fearlessly.

Zzhk: you don't use "though" and "but" together; incidence is not the same as incidents; praying FOR someone is different from praying TO someone

2015-03-01T08:19:45Z

you don't use "though" and "but" together; incidence is not the same as incidents; praying FOR someone is different from praying TO someone

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Nick Halden at 14:51, 25 February 2015

2015-02-25T14:51:05Z

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Zzhk at 12:49, 20 January 2015

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	\| Return to [[Leviathan of the Covenant\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Leviathan of the Covenant#Volume_1_.28Full_Text.29\|Main Page]]
	\| Forward to [[Leviathan:Volume 1 Epilogue\|Epilogue]]		\| Forward to [[Leviathan:Volume 1 Epilogue\|Epilogue]]
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Cthaeh: typos

2015-01-19T06:02:14Z

typos

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	The fox-wolf's demeanor was proper and dignified, looking very pretty. Indeed, among specimens of this type of beast, she could be considered a "beauty" perhaps.		The fox-wolf's demeanor was proper and dignified, looking very pretty. Indeed, among specimens of this type of beast, she could be considered a "beauty" perhaps.

	Praised so strongly by the girl who was her ~~convenantee~~, the white beast raised her head proudly, her solemn face brightening up.		Praised so strongly by the girl who was her covenantee, the white beast raised her head proudly, her solemn face brightening up.

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	As a bronze dragon, his giant body was enveloped in white—platinum-colored—flames.		As a bronze dragon, his giant body was enveloped in white—platinum-colored—flames.

	Hal had seen this type of flame before. A few days ~~agao~~ when Hinokagutsuchi had saved Hal in Tokyo Station, these were the same flames that had surrounded her remains.		Hal had seen this type of flame before. A few days ago when Hinokagutsuchi had saved Hal in Tokyo Station, these were the same flames that had surrounded her remains.

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	The junior witch's care and consideration was making Asya spin her brain rapidly. She originally intended to give Orihime orders to retreat to the back and provide cover fire.		The junior witch's care and consideration was making Asya spin her brain rapidly. She originally intended to give Orihime orders to retreat to the back and provide cover fire.

	But if she could make her way to Rushalka's side, it might be possible to bring out her last power and invoke ~~pseduo~~-divinity.		But if she could make her way to Rushalka's side, it might be possible to bring out her last power and invoke pseudo-divinity.

	More importantly—		More importantly—
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	(Indeed. The technique of dragonbane allowing one's followers to become "dragonslayers"... The magic of Soth's ilk is merely an imitation after all. Confirm with your own hands the true power I have entrusted to you!)		(Indeed. The technique of dragonbane allowing one's followers to become "dragonslayers"... The magic of Soth's ilk is merely an imitation after all. Confirm with your own hands the true power I have entrusted to you!)

	~~Hinokagutuschi~~ goaded Hal by the side of his ear.		Hinokagutsuchi goaded Hal by the side of his ear.

	(Now issue orders to your rune, the Bow Star of the Southern Sky, to fire the dragonslaying bow!)		(Now issue orders to your rune, the Bow Star of the Southern Sky, to fire the dragonslaying bow!)
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	(This brat named Soth definitely studied the path of unorthodoxy diligently.)		(This brat named Soth definitely studied the path of unorthodoxy diligently.)

	~~Hinokagutuschi~~ sneered lightly.		Hinokagutsuchi sneered lightly.

	(But ultimately, it is ~~mimcry~~ of limited knowledge without the possession of flint. Although this side is an ''imitation'' as well... Thinking that an attack of this level could destroy the Bow would be truly underestimating the Bow's force of will!)		(But ultimately, it is mimicry of limited knowledge without the possession of flint. Although this side is an ''imitation'' as well... Thinking that an attack of this level could destroy the Bow would be truly underestimating the Bow's force of will!)

	Almost at the same time as the queen's shout, Rushalka finished exhaling her Frost Breath.		Almost at the same time as the queen's shout, Rushalka finished exhaling her Frost Breath.

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	At Asya's directions, a blue-white glow emerged from Rushalka's mouth.		At Asya's directions, a blue-white glow emerged from Rushalka's mouth.

	The Fire Breath of dragons had incinerated many human cities. Leviathans, too, were able to discharge similar kinds of attacks from their mouths. However, such attacks required a ~~cool-down~~ of roughly ten minutes between consecutive shots.		The Fire Breath of dragons had incinerated many human cities. Leviathans, too, were able to discharge similar kinds of attacks from their mouths. However, such attacks required a cooldown of roughly ten minutes between consecutive shots.

	Hence, Asya wanted to pour attack power into the enemy's body without reserve.		Hence, Asya wanted to pour attack power into the enemy's body without reserve.
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	She was someone who shared her life with a "dragon" or its close relative. In that case, surely she must be able to hear his voice.		She was someone who shared her life with a "dragon" or its close relative. In that case, surely she must be able to hear his voice.

	Because for ~~dragon-kind~~, I am—we are—their natural enemy, a tyrant and a hated existence as well as being the target of their fear, loyalty and betrayal.		Because for dragonkind, I am—we are—their natural enemy, a tyrant and a hated existence as well as being the target of their fear, loyalty and betrayal.

	Since the girl was listed in the lineage of dragons, there was absolutely no way for her to ignore his call—		Since the girl was listed in the lineage of dragons, there was absolutely no way for her to ignore his call—
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	Soth and Rushalka clashed in midair again.		Soth and Rushalka clashed in midair again.

	However, the elite dragon was speaking to Hal who was on the ground. As for the willpower residing in Rushalka, wanting to defeat ~~dragon-kind~~, that came from Hal.		However, the elite dragon was speaking to Hal who was on the ground. As for the willpower residing in Rushalka, wanting to defeat dragonkind, that came from Hal.

	(Indeed. The technique of dragonbane allowing one's followers to become "dragonslayers"... The magic of Soth's ilk is merely an imitation after all. Confirm with your own hands the true power I have entrusted to you!)		(Indeed. The technique of dragonbane allowing one's followers to become "dragonslayers"... The magic of Soth's ilk is merely an imitation after all. Confirm with your own hands the true power I have entrusted to you!)
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	Instant death—just as Hal believed with certainty, the storm of cold air rampaging in the sky also devoured the seven skulls that were Soth's minions. The bodies of the dragon master and servants were shredded by the cold air, raging wind and ice shards, disintegrating and scattering within the blink of an eye.		Instant death—just as Hal believed with certainty, the storm of cold air rampaging in the sky also devoured the seven skulls that were Soth's minions. The bodies of the dragon master and servants were shredded by the cold air, raging wind and ice shards, disintegrating and scattering within the blink of an eye.

	Currently, the only super ~~life-form~~ remaining in the air was Rushalka.		Currently, the only super lifeform remaining in the air was Rushalka.

	In the center of the storm, the blue wyvern roared as though boasting of her victory.		In the center of the storm, the blue wyvern roared as though boasting of her victory.

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	At Asya's directions, a blue-white glow emerged from Rushalka's mouth.		At Asya's directions, a blue-white glow emerged from Rushalka's mouth.

	The Fire Breath of dragons had incinerated many human cities. Leviathans, too, were able to discharge similar kinds of attacks from their mouths. However, such attacks required a ~~cooldown~~ of roughly ten minutes between consecutive shots.		The Fire Breath of dragons had incinerated many human cities. Leviathans, too, were able to discharge similar kinds of attacks from their mouths. However, such attacks required a cool-down of roughly ten minutes between consecutive shots.

	Hence, Asya wanted to pour attack power into the enemy's body without reserve.		Hence, Asya wanted to pour attack power into the enemy's body without reserve.
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	She was someone who shared her life with a "dragon" or its close relative. In that case, surely she must be able to hear his voice.		She was someone who shared her life with a "dragon" or its close relative. In that case, surely she must be able to hear his voice.

	Because for ~~dragonkind~~, I am—we are—their natural enemy, a tyrant and a hated existence as well as being the target of their fear, loyalty and betrayal.		Because for dragon-kind, I am—we are—their natural enemy, a tyrant and a hated existence as well as being the target of their fear, loyalty and betrayal.

	Since the girl was listed in the lineage of dragons, there was absolutely no way for her to ignore his call—		Since the girl was listed in the lineage of dragons, there was absolutely no way for her to ignore his call—
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	Soth and Rushalka clashed in midair again.		Soth and Rushalka clashed in midair again.

	However, the elite dragon was speaking to Hal who was on the ground. As for the willpower residing in Rushalka, wanting to defeat ~~dragonkind~~, that came from Hal.		However, the elite dragon was speaking to Hal who was on the ground. As for the willpower residing in Rushalka, wanting to defeat dragon-kind, that came from Hal.

	(Indeed. The technique of dragonbane allowing one's followers to become "dragonslayers"... The magic of Soth's ilk is merely an imitation after all. Confirm with your own hands the true power I have entrusted to you!)		(Indeed. The technique of dragonbane allowing one's followers to become "dragonslayers"... The magic of Soth's ilk is merely an imitation after all. Confirm with your own hands the true power I have entrusted to you!)
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	Instant death—just as Hal believed with certainty, the storm of cold air rampaging in the sky also devoured the seven skulls that were Soth's minions. The bodies of the dragon master and servants were shredded by the cold air, raging wind and ice shards, disintegrating and scattering within the blink of an eye.		Instant death—just as Hal believed with certainty, the storm of cold air rampaging in the sky also devoured the seven skulls that were Soth's minions. The bodies of the dragon master and servants were shredded by the cold air, raging wind and ice shards, disintegrating and scattering within the blink of an eye.

	Currently, the only super ~~lifeform~~ remaining in the air was Rushalka.		Currently, the only super life-form remaining in the air was Rushalka.

	In the center of the storm, the blue wyvern roared as though boasting of her victory.		In the center of the storm, the blue wyvern roared as though boasting of her victory.