Leviathan:Volume 2 Chapter 1 - Revision history

85.9.8.147: /* Part 3 */

2015-09-13T09:18:09Z

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	"Yes, she has ''also'' entered those types of competitions. Nee-sama has been training in kendo until she graduated middle school, even emerging victorious in a national competition once."		"Yes, she has ''also'' entered those types of competitions. Nee-sama has been training in kendo until she graduated middle school, even emerging victorious in a national competition once."

	Probably happy to discuss Orihime's excellence, Hazumi was showing a gentle.		Probably happy to discuss Orihime's excellence, Hazumi was showing a gentle smile.

	It was not a fake smile put on intentionally.		It was not a fake smile put on intentionally.

Zzhk: I've never seen "scoop" in the journalistic sense being used in plural

2015-08-14T23:52:16Z

I've never seen "scoop" in the journalistic sense being used in plural

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	Orihime also interjected with interest.		Orihime also interjected with interest.

	"The UFO Research Club, the Drama Club, the Mass Media Research Club, the Literature Club, the Science ~~Scoop~~ Club... A total of five cultural clubs, and a person of unknown gender to boot... It feels quite interesting."		"The UFO Research Club, the Drama Club, the Mass Media Research Club, the Literature Club, the Science Insider Club... A total of five cultural clubs, and a person of unknown gender to boot... It feels quite interesting."

	"Anyway, it's definitely not someone who lacks individuality," muttered Hal. He recalled Mutou-san's explanation.		"Anyway, it's definitely not someone who lacks individuality," muttered Hal. He recalled Mutou-san's explanation.
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	Sakuraba-senpai was apparently quite zealous in these activities.		Sakuraba-senpai was apparently quite zealous in these activities.

	"From what I've heard, he's the complete opposite of a shut-in and never goes home obediently. But that's exactly why he's able to get his hands on all kinds of astounding ~~scoops~~. For example—"		"From what I've heard, he's the complete opposite of a shut-in and never goes home obediently. But that's exactly why he's able to get his hands on the scoop for all kinds of astounding stories. For example—"

	Mutou-san pulled one of the laptops on the table closer.		Mutou-san pulled one of the laptops on the table closer.

Cthaeh at 23:32, 14 August 2015

2015-08-14T23:32:27Z

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

2015-07-30T20:13:28Z

Part 4

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	Hazumi showed a slightly solemn expression again. This news was part of what Hiiragi-san had told them.		Hazumi showed a slightly solemn expression again. This news was part of what Hiiragi-san had told them.

	'Although we are currently still gathering information, the various islands are apparently under attack from flocks of Raptors. Simultaneously. All personnel involved in Japan's domestic defense are apparently bickering fiercely over the matter. If a solution is found to take care of the Raptors flying towards the Kantou region, Orihime might need to be dispatched to regions that are lacking manpower.'		'Although we are currently still gathering information, the various islands are apparently under attack from flocks of Raptors. Simultaneously. All personnel involved in Japan's domestic defense are apparently bickering fiercely over the matter. If a solution is found to take care of the Raptors flying towards the Kantou region, Orihime-san might need to be dispatched to regions that are lacking manpower.'

	"Dragon Strikes" launched by lesser dragons, Raptors.		"Dragon Strikes" launched by lesser dragons, Raptors.

Nick Halden at 16:09, 30 July 2015

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	The silver dragon, Pavel Galad, had acquired the power of dragonbane.		The silver dragon, Pavel Galad, had acquired the power of dragonbane.

	Unbeknownst to Hal and ~~compnay~~, his invasion was going to change the future dramatically—		Unbeknownst to Hal and company, his invasion was going to change the future dramatically—

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

2015-07-30T04:20:16Z

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Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2015-07-29T07:25:49Z

Part 3

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	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

	"That Research Club is a gathering of many people even stranger than imagined..."		"That Research Club turns out to be a gathering of many people even stranger than imagined..."

	"Yeah, it's quite surprising..."		"Yeah, it's quite surprising..."
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	"Fufufu. Haruomi, you'll understand sooner or later..."		"Fufufu. Haruomi, you'll understand sooner or later..."

	The two of them arrived in front of a certain ~~shinto~~ shrine then passed through a torii gate to enter its premises. The place was quite vast but they did not see the person they were supposed to meet.		The two of them arrived in front of a certain Shinto shrine then passed through a torii gate to enter its premises. The place was quite vast but they did not see the person they were supposed to meet.

	Just as Hal and Asya were looking around next to the worship hall and offering box, someone called out to them:		Just as Hal and Asya were looking around next to the worship hall and offering box, someone called out to them:
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	Headed by Hiiragi-san, involved personnel were currently busy running all over the place to secure a place to serve as a temporary Mansion and move these items over.		Headed by Hiiragi-san, involved personnel were currently busy running all over the place to secure a place to serve as a temporary Mansion and move these items over.

	"Speaking of which, that Hinokagutsuchi hasn't shown up lately.		"Speaking of which, that Hinokagutsuchi hasn't shown up lately."

	Hal recalled the self-styled devil who had a habit of hiding.		Hal recalled the self-styled devil who had a habit of hiding.

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2015-07-29T07:19:57Z

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Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

2015-07-25T17:19:39Z

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Nick Halden at 15:46, 20 July 2015

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	"H-Haruomi, you guys are talking about joining club activities right? Can I come along!?"		"H-Haruomi, you guys are talking about joining club activities right? Can I come along!?"

	"Wow, the transfer ~~students~~ wants to come too? Of course, I welcome you with open arms."		"Wow, the transfer student wants to come too? Of course, I welcome you with open arms."

	"I want to join the club while I'm at it! The numbers aren't full, right!?"		"I want to join the club while I'm at it! The numbers aren't full, right!?"

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	President M placed her head on Asya's shoulder and spoke.		President M placed her head on Asya's shoulder and spoke.

	"What you lack is the sensuality, luck, judgment, vitality, ~~actings~~ skills, perceptiveness and self-expression abilities required to bring out your hidden potential..."		"What you lack is the sensuality, luck, judgment, vitality, acting skills, perceptiveness and self-expression abilities required to bring out your hidden potential..."

	"H-Hold on, that's going too far. You're making me sound like I have no merits whatsoever."		"H-Hold on, that's going too far. You're making me sound like I have no merits whatsoever."
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	"It suddenly feels so quiet..." muttered Hal with deep feeling.		"It suddenly feels so quiet..." muttered Hal with deep feeling.

	"Anyway, I guess the president's gender can be ~~find~~ out with a bit of investigation."		"Anyway, I guess the president's gender can be found out with a bit of investigation."

	"Indeed. After all, the school has physical examinations too."		"Indeed. After all, the school has physical examinations too."
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	Sakuraba-senpai was apparently quite zealous in these activities.		Sakuraba-senpai was apparently quite zealous in these activities.

	"From what I've heard, he's the complete opposite of a shut-in and never goes home obediently. But that's exactly why he's able to get his hands on all kinds of astounding ~~scoop~~. For example—"		"From what I've heard, he's the complete opposite of a shut-in and never goes home obediently. But that's exactly why he's able to get his hands on all kinds of astounding scoops. For example—"

	Mutou-san pulled one of the laptops on the table closer.		Mutou-san pulled one of the laptops on the table closer.
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	"Nice to see you again. Sorry for causing trouble for you last time..."		"Nice to see you again. Sorry for causing trouble for you last time..."

	Orihime's younger cousin, the leviathan Minadzuki's ~~covanantee~~, as well as Hal's underclassman in the middle school division.		Orihime's younger cousin, the leviathan Minadzuki's covenantee, as well as Hal's underclassman in the middle school division.

	This petite girl, dressed as a shrine maiden, was named Shirasaka Hazumi.		This petite girl, dressed as a shrine maiden, was named Shirasaka Hazumi.
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	Hazumi smiled demurely.		Hazumi smiled demurely.

	Her smiles were still so strikingly ~~memorablle~~.		Her smiles were still so strikingly memorable.

	Perhaps one could say her smiles were extremely dazzlingly. In particular, the sense of transparency was shocking. Even Hal forgot his earlier embarrassment and could not help but gaze intently.		Perhaps one could say her smiles were extremely dazzlingly. In particular, the sense of transparency was shocking. Even Hal forgot his earlier embarrassment and could not help but gaze intently.
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	"Are you sure you want to take a girl like her on an overseas trip with a densely packed itinerary when she's not used to long journeys?"		"Are you sure you want to take a girl like her on an overseas trip with a densely packed itinerary when she's not used to long journeys?"

	"Well, I just wanted to try asking first. If you could book a itinerary that seems nice, I would then recommend it to Hazumi—Oh, a call from Yukari-san."		"Well, I just wanted to try asking first. If you could book an itinerary that seems nice, I would then recommend it to Hazumi—Oh, a call from Yukari-san."

	Orihime took out her suddenly ringing cellphone from her bag.		Orihime took out her suddenly ringing cellphone from her bag.

	Then she ~~placed~~ placed her phone on the center of the table.		Then she placed her phone on the center of the table.

	Displayed on the LCD screen was Hiiragi Yukari's photo. Wearing red-rimmed glasses, her appearance was that of an intellectual beauty. However, that inexplicably weary gaze of hers was very striking.		Displayed on the LCD screen was Hiiragi Yukari's photo. Wearing red-rimmed glasses, her appearance was that of an intellectual beauty. However, that inexplicably weary gaze of hers was very striking.