Leviathan:Volume 2 Chapter 4 - Revision history

Zzhk at 07:48, 30 October 2016

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	Stars. Speaking of which, didn't Hinokagutsuchi mention it before?		Stars. Speaking of which, didn't Hinokagutsuchi mention it before?

	"Bow ~~Star~~—of the Southern Sky!"		"Bow Stars—of the Southern Sky!"

	The instant he chanted this name, a group of stars over Hal's head became more dazzling.		The instant he chanted this name, a group of stars over Hal's head became more dazzling.

	Among them, Sirius was without a doubt particularly striking in brightness. It was said that ~~Sirius A~~ in the Canis ~~Majoris~~ constellation was the brightest ~~amongst~~ all stars. Was that the Bow ~~Star~~ of the Southern Sky? ...No.		Among them, Sirius was without a doubt particularly striking in brightness. It was said that Alpha Canis Majoris in the Canis Major constellation was the brightest among all stars. Was that the Bow Stars of the Southern Sky? ...No.

	Diagonally down from it, at the tip of Canis ~~Majoris~~, ''an arched bow'' could be seen.		Diagonally down from it, at the tip of Canis Major, ''an arched bow'' could be seen.

	More precisely, there was a series of stars resembling a bow. That constellation was precisely the Bow ~~Star~~ of the Southern Sky!		More precisely, there was a series of stars resembling a bow. That constellation was precisely the Bow Stars of the Southern Sky!

	At the same as when he realized that, a magic symbol descended from the bow constellation. It was a runic symbol that seemed to embody a "tilted half moon" as a pictograph, the Rune of the Bow.		At the same as when he realized that, a magic symbol descended from the bow constellation. It was a runic symbol that seemed to embody a "tilted half moon" as a pictograph, the Rune of the Bow.

Zzhk: /* Chapter 4 - Awakening */

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Chapter 4 - Awakening

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	After the miraculous survival, Hal was rescued personally by Kenjou who had sneaked into Old Tokyo.		After the miraculous survival, Hal was rescued personally by Kenjou who had sneaked into Old Tokyo.

	Sitting in the escape vehicle was Asya who had been rescued first. Reportedly, the childhood friend had exhibited her prowess as a Level 5 witch by ~~performing Descent Control~~, magic for countering Isaac Newton's law of gravity to slow down an object's rate of fall.		Sitting in the escape vehicle was Asya who had been rescued first. Reportedly, the childhood friend had exhibited her prowess as a Level 5 witch by casting Feather Fall, magic for countering Isaac Newton's law of gravity to slow down an object's rate of fall.

	"I don't think I'd stay in one piece if I had cast my magic thirty seconds later..."		"I don't think I'd stay in one piece if I had cast my magic thirty seconds later..."

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

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Part 4

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	More precisely, there was a series of stars resembling a bow. That constellation was precisely the Bow Star of the Southern Sky!		More precisely, there was a series of stars resembling a bow. That constellation was precisely the Bow Star of the Southern Sky!

	At the same as when he realized that, a magic symbol descended from the bow constellation. It was a runic symbol that seemed to embody a "tilted half moon" as a ~~pictogram~~, the Rune of the Bow.		At the same as when he realized that, a magic symbol descended from the bow constellation. It was a runic symbol that seemed to embody a "tilted half moon" as a pictograph, the Rune of the Bow.

	Next, all he needed to do was find a "bow" for it to inhabit—		Next, all he needed to do was find a "bow" for it to inhabit—

Cthaeh at 22:45, 16 August 2015

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	While attempting the task, Hazumi apologized with a heavy conscience.		While attempting the task, Hazumi apologized with a heavy conscience.

	Hal began to worry. In order to control a "serpent" skillfully, a witch needed the arrogance of self-confidence bordering on shamelessness without considering the possibility of failure at all. In Hazumi'~~scase~~, her reserved personality and lack of confidence were probably reinforcing each other in a vicious cycle.		Hal began to worry. In order to control a "serpent" skillfully, a witch needed the arrogance of self-confidence bordering on shamelessness without considering the possibility of failure at all. In Hazumi's case, her reserved personality and lack of confidence were probably reinforcing each other in a vicious cycle.

	Should he advise her to act less nice? Just as Hal was agonizing over this decision...		Should he advise her to act less nice? Just as Hal was agonizing over this decision...
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	Her summoning voice sounded more forceful.		Her summoning voice sounded more forceful.

	The emerald serpentine dragon suddenly manifested over Hazumi's head in response to her call, taking position behind the metal slime. A bloody mist floated around ~~Minadazuki~~, dyeing the air red.		The emerald serpentine dragon suddenly manifested over Hazumi's head in response to her call, taking position behind the metal slime. A bloody mist floated around Minadzuki, dyeing the air red.

	Slosh! Ripples appeared on the liquid metal.		Slosh! Ripples appeared on the liquid metal.

Zzhk at 03:33, 10 August 2015

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	Like Hal, Pavel Galad was still learning about how to use the power of dragonbane. Hal could deduce this from his various comments. In that case—Hal took a deep breath.		Like Hal, Pavel Galad was still learning about how to use the power of dragonbane. Hal could deduce this from his various comments. In that case—Hal took a deep breath.

	"~~I have~~ a proposal~~, how about it~~?"		"How about a proposal from me?"

	"~~What is it,~~ Successor of the Bow?"		"Successor of the Bow, what is it?"

	"It looks like both of us were testing our weapons just now. In order to put this knowledge to practical application, how about we resume this battle later?"		"It looks like both of us were testing our weapons just now. In order to put this knowledge to practical application, how about we resume this battle later?"
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	"Oh...?"		"Oh...?"

	"You've lost that slimy minion while I want to let my friends rest. I think both sides stand to gain if we ~~choose~~ a ~~time for our~~ rematch..."		"You've lost that slimy minion while I want to let my friends rest. I think both sides stand to gain if we schedule a rematch..."

	Despite saying that quietly, Hal was secretly in trepidation.		Despite saying that quietly, Hal was secretly in trepidation.
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	The silver dragon spoke sonorously in a beautifully masculine voice:		The silver dragon spoke sonorously in a beautifully masculine voice:

	"Although I was very disappointed with you in the beginning, things have changed now. For a moment, I even felt elated ~~about having~~ a showdown against you. I will acknowledge you as a candidate foe formidable enough to make my blood boil in excitement!"		"Although I was very disappointed with you in the beginning, things have changed now. For a moment, I even felt elated for a showdown against you. I will acknowledge you as a candidate foe formidable enough to make my blood boil in excitement!"

	"Thank you very much..."		"Thank you very much..."

Nick Halden at 05:32, 8 August 2015

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	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

	"I sensed the demise of my minion and came to have a look—So it is you."		"I sensed the demise of my minion and came to have a look—So it was you."

	Landing on the ground, Galad spoke in his usual beautiful voice.		Landing on the ground, Galad spoke in his usual beautiful voice.
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	Hal entrusted Orihime's powerless body to Hazumi while motioning with his eyes for them to retreat.		Hal entrusted Orihime's powerless body to Hazumi while motioning with his eyes for them to retreat.

	Although the two girls watched him in worry, Hazumi still tried her hardest to support her stumbling cousin Orihime ~~leave~~.		Although the two girls watched him in worry, Hazumi still tried her hardest to support her stumbling cousin Orihime while leaving.

	The two of them were unable to use "serpents" right now. They were probably worried they would be a liability for Hal.		The two of them were unable to use "serpents" right now. They were probably worried they would be a liability for Hal.
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	Galad swung the dragonslaying sword again. This time, it was a diagonal thrust downwards.		Galad swung the dragonslaying sword again. This time, it was a diagonal thrust downwards.

	~~THe~~ instant he blocked the attack, Hal felt a powerful impact again but he was not injured. Next, Galad chopped straight, sliced sideways, then slashed as though swinging a golf club.		The instant he blocked the attack, Hal felt a powerful impact again but he was not injured. Next, Galad chopped straight, sliced sideways, then slashed as though swinging a golf club.

	Every time it was struck, the pearly protection would shake intensely.		Every time it was struck, the pearly protection would shake intensely.
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	"Hoo—So defense alone is not enough!?"		"Hoo—So defense alone is not enough!?"

	~~THen~~ Galad swung the dragonslaying sword with lightning speed.		Then Galad swung the dragonslaying sword with lightning speed.

	In that instant, Hal guarded his head using his gun, deploying pearly light immediately.		In that instant, Hal guarded his head using his gun, deploying pearly light immediately.
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	With every impact, Hal's heart would suffer sharp pain. It felt almost suffocating.		With every impact, Hal's heart would suffer sharp pain. It felt almost suffocating.

	If this pain were to persist for two or three minutes, Hal feared his heart would rupture and result death. Hal gritted his teeth and stared at the gun in his hand.		If this pain were to persist for two or three minutes, Hal feared his heart would rupture and result in his death. Hal gritted his teeth and stared at the gun in his hand.

	"If possible... Increase the firepower a bit!"		"If possible... Increase the firepower a bit!"
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	Like Hal, Pavel Galad was still learning about how to use the power of dragonbane. Hal could deduce this from his various comments. In that case—Hal took a deep breath.		Like Hal, Pavel Galad was still learning about how to use the power of dragonbane. Hal could deduce this from his various comments. In that case—Hal took a deep breath.

	"I have a proposal, how~~'s that~~?"		"I have a proposal, how about it?"

	"What is it? Successor of the Bow."		"What is it, Successor of the Bow?"

	"It looks like both of us were testing our weapons just now. In order to put this knowledge to practical application, how about we resume this battle later?"		"It looks like both of us were testing our weapons just now. In order to put this knowledge to practical application, how about we resume this battle later?"
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	"Oh...?"		"Oh...?"

	"You've lost that slimy minion while I want to let my friends rest. I think both sides stand to gain if we choose a time for rematch..."		"You've lost that slimy minion while I want to let my friends rest. I think both sides stand to gain if we choose a time for our rematch..."

	Despite saying that quietly, Hal was secretly in trepidation.		Despite saying that quietly, Hal was secretly in trepidation.
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	The silver dragon spoke sonorously in a beautifully masculine voice:		The silver dragon spoke sonorously in a beautifully masculine voice:

	"Although I was very disappointed with you in the beginning, things have changed now. For a moment, I even felt elated ~~for~~ a showdown against you. I will acknowledge you as a candidate foe formidable enough to make my blood boil in excitement!"		"Although I was very disappointed with you in the beginning, things have changed now. For a moment, I even felt elated about having a showdown against you. I will acknowledge you as a candidate foe formidable enough to make my blood boil in excitement!"

	"Thank you very much..."		"Thank you very much..."

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Part 4

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	Leaving these courageous words as a parting gift, Galad flew away.		Leaving these courageous words as a parting gift, Galad flew away.

	Meanwhile, Hal had no desire for a contest of valor at all. Sighing, he slumped his shoulders greatly.\		Meanwhile, Hal had no desire for a contest of valor at all. Sighing, he slumped his shoulders greatly.

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

Zzhk at 18:45, 5 August 2015

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Nick Halden at 16:18, 5 August 2015

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	Orihime reacted uncharacteristically. Namely, she sighed.		Orihime reacted uncharacteristically. Namely, she sighed.

	Her current location was the entrance lobby of high-rise building in west Shinjuku.		Her current location was the entrance lobby of a high-rise building in west Shinjuku.

	This was actually a ruin without any lighting except for sunlight streaming in from outside.		This was actually a ruin without any lighting except for sunlight streaming in from outside.
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	The heat haze barrier was created by Akuro-Ou using the pseudo-divinity of Fire.		The heat haze barrier was created by Akuro-Ou using the pseudo-divinity of Fire.

	Thanks to that, the enemy's invasion was halted and molten metal's high temperature did not enter the building. Defenses were impregnable for the time being.		Thanks to that, the enemy's invasion was halted and the molten metal's high temperature did not enter the building. Defenses were impregnable for the time being.

	"It's very safe right now but I have no idea whether it will be the same three hours later."		"It's very safe right now but I have no idea whether it will be the same three hours later."
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	"This building is protected by Fire pseudo-divinity..."		"This building is protected by Fire pseudo-divinity..."

	The mercury-colored slime ~~smashing~~ itself into pieces against the heat haze barrier repeatedly, but each time, it reformed itself into a tsunami to challenge the heat haze—Hal watched this repeating scenario while speaking quietly.		The mercury-colored slime smashed itself into pieces against the heat haze barrier repeatedly, but each time, it reformed itself into a tsunami to challenge the heat haze—Hal watched this repeating scenario while speaking quietly.

	He had gotten off the car with Hazumi.		He had gotten off the car with Hazumi.
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	When Hal asked to confirm, Hazumi lowered her eyes.		When Hal asked to confirm, Hazumi lowered her eyes.

	"I really am not good at asking a 'serpent' to attack... Even when I beg her to 'defeat that dragon,' Minadzuki always moves very slowly. I'm barely able to defeat small ~~dragon~~ slowly, but—"		"I really am not good at asking a 'serpent' to attack... Even when I beg her to 'defeat that dragon,' Minadzuki always moves very slowly. I'm barely able to defeat small dragons slowly, but—"

	Hazumi spoke timidly, never looking up the whole time.		Hazumi spoke timidly, never looking up the whole time.
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	Distancing himself from the girl whose personality was supposed to be reserved and polite, he came over to Hinokagutsuchi.		Distancing himself from the girl whose personality was supposed to be reserved and polite, he came over to Hinokagutsuchi.

	(...What friendly teacher act you're putting on. How unlike you.)		(...What a friendly teacher act you're putting on. How unlike you.)

	(I made a deal—or rather, am going to make one—after all. Naturally, I will look after her as appropriate.)		(I made a deal—or rather, am going to make one—after all. Naturally, I will look after her as appropriate.)
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	(But all you did was give brief advice? How can things proceed that smoothly...)		(But all you did was give brief advice? How can things proceed that smoothly...)

	Paying no attention to the pair who ~~was~~ neither benevolent nor honest, Hazumi finally began.		Paying no attention to the pair who were neither benevolent nor honest, Hazumi finally began.

	"Minadzuki, respond to my voice."		"Minadzuki, respond to my voice."
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	Ooooooooooooooooooooooommmm—		Ooooooooooooooooooooooommmm—

	Her voice sounded like a call to a faraway companion. At this moment, the heat haze barrier guarding the building suddenly vanished, because Minadzuki's was a message to kin that it was safe now.		Her voice sounded like a call to a faraway companion. At this moment, the heat haze barrier guarding the building suddenly vanished, because Minadzuki's cry was a message to her kin that it was safe now.

	Then the faint red mist in the air around the hovering Minadzuki grew more and more dense—		Then the faint red mist in the air around the hovering Minadzuki grew more and more dense—