Leviathan:Volume 2 Chapter 5 - Revision history

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	"Ooooooooh! I can't believe a made such a major blunder..."		"Ooooooooh! I can't believe I made such a major blunder..."

	"Not really, I think it's exactly the kind of blunder you'd make."		"Not really, I think it's exactly the kind of blunder you'd make."

Zzhk at 06:59, 10 February 2016

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	Was Hal reusing a line from the self-styled devil because he had a guilty conscience?		Was Hal reusing a line from the self-styled devil because he had a guilty conscience?

	"But wait, I remember now. Haruga-kun, I think you once described yourself as being a '~~repressed~~' something or other."		"But wait, I remember now. Haruga-kun, I think you once described yourself as being a ''closeted'' something or other."

	"......"		"......"
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	"H-Haruga-san?"		"H-Haruga-san?"

	"Listen carefully, Shirasaka. In this world, all men can be divided into the two categories of 'perverts' and '~~repressed~~ perverts.' By the way, I belong to the ~~repressed~~ type."		"Listen carefully, Shirasaka. In this world, all men can be divided into the two categories of 'perverts' and 'closet perverts.' By the way, I belong to the closeted type."

	"Is that true!?"		"Is that true!?"

	"To think you could confess without hesitation in such a situation, I'm begging to feel that you are some kind of ~~bigshot~~, Haruga-kun..."		"To think you could confess without hesitation in such a situation, I'm begging to feel that you are some kind of big shot, Haruga-kun..."

	"So this is what's known as a man... I-I'm learning so much here..."		"So this is what's known as a man... I-I'm learning so much here..."
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	"Umm, I do count as a gentleman of sorts, you know?"		"Umm, I do count as a gentleman of sorts, you know?"

	"Gentleman, I'll give you that, but an impostor gentleman who openly confessed to being a ~~repressed~~..."		"Gentleman, I'll give you that, but an impostor gentleman who openly confessed to being a closet..."

	"Oh my, that's indeed true."		"Oh my, that's indeed true."

Zzhk: /* Chapter 5 - Time for Another Covenant */

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Chapter 5 - Time for Another Covenant

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	"H-Haruga-san?"		"H-Haruga-san?"

	"Listen carefully, Shirasaka. In this world, all men can be divided into the two categories of 'perverts' and '~~covert~~ perverts.' By the way, I belong to the ~~covert~~ type."		"Listen carefully, Shirasaka. In this world, all men can be divided into the two categories of 'perverts' and 'repressed perverts.' By the way, I belong to the repressed type."

	"Is that true!?"		"Is that true!?"
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	"Umm, I do count as a gentleman of sorts, you know?"		"Umm, I do count as a gentleman of sorts, you know?"

	"Gentleman, I'll give you that, but an ~~imposter~~ gentleman who openly confessed to being a ~~covert~~..."		"Gentleman, I'll give you that, but an impostor gentleman who openly confessed to being a repressed..."

	"Oh my, that's indeed true."		"Oh my, that's indeed true."

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

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Part 3

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	Was Hal reusing a line from the self-styled devil because he had a guilty conscience?		Was Hal reusing a line from the self-styled devil because he had a guilty conscience?

	"But wait, I remember now. Haruga-kun, I think you once described yourself as being a '~~covert~~' something or other."		"But wait, I remember now. Haruga-kun, I think you once described yourself as being a 'repressed' something or other."

	"......"		"......"

Cthaeh at 01:05, 26 August 2015

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Zzhk at 00:15, 12 August 2015

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	"But had I used that ability sooner, Juujouji, you'd—"		"But had I used that ability sooner, Juujouji, you'd—"

	"Stop there and avoid the hypotheticals, okay? Since we're both novices, all we need is to help each other and discuss things together. Just like when we were watching ~~that~~ movie."		"Stop there and avoid the hypotheticals, okay? Since we're both novices, all we need is to help each other and discuss things together. Just like when we were watching a movie."

	"Help each other eh..."		"Help each other eh..."

Nick Halden at 14:11, 11 August 2015

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	"But had I used that ability sooner, Juujouji, you'd—"		"But had I used that ability sooner, Juujouji, you'd—"

	"Stop there and avoid the hypotheticals, okay? Since we're both novices, all we need is to help each other and discuss things together. Just like when we were watching a movie."		"Stop there and avoid the hypotheticals, okay? Since we're both novices, all we need is to help each other and discuss things together. Just like when we were watching that movie."

	"Help each other eh..."		"Help each other eh..."
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	The two of them released their hands. With that, they had accomplished what they needed to do that night.		The two of them released their hands. With that, they had accomplished what they needed to do that night.

	Hurrying to sleep and saving up energy was probably what they should be doing next. However, neither of them wanted to stand p. Somehow, they felt a little reluctant to part.		Hurrying to sleep and saving up energy was probably what they should be doing next. However, neither of them wanted to stand up. Somehow, they felt a little reluctant to part.

	"B-By the way, Haruga-kun, going out with me... Is it really okay with you?"		"B-By the way, Haruga-kun, going out with me... Is it really okay with you?"
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	"Or does the dragon have ulterior motives?"		"Or does the dragon have ulterior motives?"

	"There's probably no need to be concerned about that. ~~AFter~~ all, there's nothing we could do apart from slight adjustments in combat forces to support Asya-san's group."		"There's probably no need to be concerned about that. After all, there's nothing we could do apart from slight adjustments in combat forces to support Asya-san's group."

	"Your description is definitely over the top, but you're very right."		"Your description is definitely over the top, but you're very right."

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Zzhk at 13:47, 10 August 2015

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	"P-Please do."		"P-Please do."

	In fact, Hal was nervous too but to reassure her, he pretended to be very experienced. That being said, it was his second time conducting the ritual. This time, he was calmer.		In fact, Hal was nervous too, but to reassure her, he pretended to be very experienced. That being said, it was his second time conducting the ritual. This time, he was calmer.

	Thanks to that, Hal could even sense what sort of magic had been cast on the heartmetal in his right hand. No, not just his hand. This place—there was magic cast on the entire "venue." Hal noticed this for the first time. It was the magic that Hinokagutsuchi had cast before the ritual began.		Thanks to that, Hal could even sense what sort of magic had been cast on the heartmetal in his right hand. No, not just his hand. This place—there was magic cast on the entire "venue." Hal noticed this for the first time. It was the magic that Hinokagutsuchi had cast before the ritual began.
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	"But Haruga-kun, I can't believe you had all this stuff stored here?"		"But Haruga-kun, I can't believe you had all this stuff stored here?"

	"There's been recurring trouble in the Concession wasteland lately after all, so I thought I'd ~~making~~ various preparations in case of emergencies. I came over here whenever I had time, transporting water and equipment while I was at it."		"There's been recurring trouble in the Concession wasteland lately after all, so I thought I'd make various preparations in case of emergencies. I came over here whenever I had time, transporting water and equipment while I was at it."

	That was Hal's reply to Orihime when she came over to check thing out.		That was Hal's reply to Orihime when she came over to check thing out.
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	"...If anything, I suppose it's due to my virtues of fraternity and benevolence. I am very happy to help someone out."		"...If anything, I suppose it's due to my virtues of fraternity and benevolence. I am very happy to help someone out."

	Was Hal reusing a line from the self-styled ~~deil~~ because he had a guilty conscience?		Was Hal reusing a line from the self-styled devil because he had a guilty conscience?

	"But wait, I remember now. Haruga-kun, I think you once described yourself as being a 'covert' something or other."		"But wait, I remember now. Haruga-kun, I think you once described yourself as being a 'covert' something or other."
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	Splash, splish, splosh. The sound of water could be heard.		Splash, splish, splosh. The sound of water could be heard.

	Then there was the cracking of the wood fire under the steel drum. Hal found himself more sensitive to sound due to the blindfold blocking his vision. ~~RIght~~ now, he was sitting next to the fire.		Then there was the cracking of the wood fire under the steel drum. Hal found himself more sensitive to sound due to the blindfold blocking his vision. Right now, he was sitting next to the fire.

	Next, he heard Juujouji exclaiming in pleasure—		Next, he heard Juujouji exclaiming in pleasure—
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	"Of course."		"Of course."

	"But you've already go Asya-san. T-This is too sudden. I've never thought about this sort of thing in my entire life!"		"But you've already got Asya-san. T-This is too sudden. I've never thought about this sort of thing in my entire life!"

	Finishing with a torrent of words, Orihime then added hastily:		Finishing with a torrent of words, Orihime then added hastily: