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Zzhk: /* Chapter 1 - The World Where There Are Dragons */

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Chapter 1 - The World Where There Are Dragons

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	"I hereby decree to my emblem, the Arrow of Sirius, I, Yukikaze, will now transform into the dragonslaying arrow!"		"I hereby decree to my emblem, the Arrow of Sirius, I, Yukikaze, will now transform into the dragonslaying arrow!"

	"My emblem, the Bow ~~Star~~ of the Southern Sky, manifest the dragonslaying bow in my hand immediately!"		"My emblem, the Bow Stars of the Southern Sky, manifest the dragonslaying bow in my hand immediately!"

	The white dragon held the Rune of the Arrow whereas the red dragon possessed the Rune of the Bow.		The white dragon held the Rune of the Arrow whereas the red dragon possessed the Rune of the Bow.

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	In truth, she was already heavily injured even before the battle began.		In truth, she was already heavily injured even before the battle began.

	The red dragon managed to stop herself from crashing to the ground. Remaining hovering in the air, she stared at the white assailant with determined eyes. However, the magical power residing within her massive body had diminished greatly. Simply to remain hovering was already taxing her limit		The red dragon managed to stop herself from crashing to the ground. Remaining hovering in the air, she stared at the white assailant with determined eyes. However, the magical power residing within her massive body had diminished greatly. Simply to remain hovering was already taxing her limit.

	"So my path of conquest has reached an end here..."		"So my path of conquest has reached an end here..."

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	In fact, the value of these objects was probably no different from junk for people with no interest in antiques and ancient artifacts.		In fact, the value of these objects was probably no different from junk for people with no interest in antiques and ancient artifacts.

	Without exception, they were either filthy, damaged or covered in rust. ~~Aesthetically~~, they were quite poor in appearance. Holding a catalog in his hand, Hal looked at these odds and ends.		Without exception, they were either filthy, damaged or covered in rust. Esthetically, they were quite poor in appearance. Holding a catalog in his hand, Hal looked at these odds and ends.

	"I'm told that there was originally a plan to assign someone like a curator to manage these things properly."		"I'm told that there was originally a plan to assign someone like a curator to manage these things properly."

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Part 2

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	In fact, the value of these objects was probably no different from junk for people with no interest in antiques and ancient artifacts.		In fact, the value of these objects was probably no different from junk for people with no interest in antiques and ancient artifacts.

	Without exception, they were either filthy, damaged or covered in rust. ~~Esthetically~~, they were quite poor in appearance. Holding a catalog in his hand, Hal looked at these odds and ends.		Without exception, they were either filthy, damaged or covered in rust. Aesthetically, they were quite poor in appearance. Holding a catalog in his hand, Hal looked at these odds and ends.

	"I'm told that there was originally a plan to assign someone like a curator to manage these things properly."		"I'm told that there was originally a plan to assign someone like a curator to manage these things properly."

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2015-11-15T13:26:46Z

Part 1

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	In truth, she was already heavily injured even before the battle began.		In truth, she was already heavily injured even before the battle began.

	The red dragon managed to stop herself from crashing to the ground. Remaining hovering in the air, she stared at the white assailant with determined eyes. However, the magical power residing within her massive body had diminished greatly. Simply to remain hovering was already taxing her limit.		The red dragon managed to stop herself from crashing to the ground. Remaining hovering in the air, she stared at the white assailant with determined eyes. However, the magical power residing within her massive body had diminished greatly. Simply to remain hovering was already taxing her limit

	"So my path of conquest has reached an end here..."		"So my path of conquest has reached an end here..."

Zzhk at 11:22, 5 November 2015

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Cthaeh at 23:36, 4 November 2015

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Zzhk at 17:41, 27 October 2015

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	The one who interjected with a question was the middle schooler, the youngest person present.		The one who interjected with a question was the middle schooler, the youngest person present.

	Although Kenjou and Hazumi were mutually acquainted, they were not intimate at all. Since the middle schooler witch who had defended Tokyo New Town for many years was a VIP, her interactions with SAURU's members were limited to technical ~~advisers~~ at most.		Although Kenjou and Hazumi were mutually acquainted, they were not intimate at all. Since the middle schooler witch who had defended Tokyo New Town for many years was a VIP, her interactions with SAURU's members were limited to technical consultants at most.

	However, despite her reserved and polite personality, Hazumi was also highly inquisitive and bold.		However, despite her reserved and polite personality, Hazumi was also highly inquisitive and bold.
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	Luna Francois smiled tenderly while chiding her fellow witch.		Luna Francois smiled tenderly while chiding her fellow witch.

	[[image:Leviathan 03 040.jpg\|thumb]]		[[image:Leviathan 03 040.jpg\|thumb]]

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Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

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Part 3

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	"They're crunchy and taste great. Many people like to use them as snacks to go along with beer. It's very popular."		"They're crunchy and taste great. Many people like to use them as snacks to go along with beer. It's very popular."


	"A-Although it sounds a bit scary, I'm quite curious..."		"A-Although it sounds a bit scary, I'm quite curious..."
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	"Do over again! Uh, right. Yeah, it's about Rushalka. I'd like to have a proper discussion with you about her, so could you come with me?"		"Do over again! Uh, right. Yeah, it's about Rushalka. I'd like to have a proper discussion with you about her, so could you come with me?"

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	Smiling, the red dragon plunged her right hand into the hole in her chest.		Smiling, the red dragon plunged her right hand into the hole in her chest.

	What she drew out was a glowing red jewel. Roughly the size of a dragon's fist, it had a massive crack in it. This was the heartmetal of an elite dragon's—no, a great dragon king's.		What she drew out was a glowing red jewel. Roughly the size of a dragon's fist, it had a massive crack in it. This was the heartmetal belonging to an elite dragon—no, a great dragon king.

	"Farewell, Princess Yukikaze, youngest of the dragon kings, wielder of the dragonslaying arrow!"		"Farewell, Princess Yukikaze, youngest of the dragon kings, wielder of the dragonslaying arrow!"
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	"I asked her to give me a brief look. I can't believe I saw stuff ~~along~~ the likes of cosmetic surgery and ~~injecting~~ Botox..."		"I asked her to give me a brief look. I can't believe I saw stuff including the likes of cosmetic surgery and Botox injections..."

	"Oh that. We were watching television together a couple days ago when Shirasaka was curious about why a certain female artiste's facial expression was unnaturally stiff, so I gave her a brief explanation of the technique's pros and cons."		"Oh that. We were watching television together a couple days ago when Shirasaka was curious about why a certain female artiste's facial expression was unnaturally stiff, so I gave her a brief explanation of the technique's pros and cons."
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	"Huh? Isn't that an Indian curry shop?"		"Huh? Isn't that an Indian curry shop?"

	"It is, but the head chef is actually a Nepalese who learned his craft at a Japanese restaurant in India. ~~Compared to~~ curry, his specialty is 'imitation Japanese food.' It's only because curry sells better that he started his business with a curry shop as the main draw. This is something I found out after frequenting the shop for about a week continuously."		"It is, but the head chef is actually a Nepalese who learned his craft at a Japanese restaurant in India. More so than curry, his specialty is 'imitation Japanese food.' It's only because curry sells better that he started his business with a curry shop as the main draw. This is something I found out after frequenting the shop for about a week continuously."

	"So you ordered a custom-made lunchbox..."		"So you ordered a custom-made lunchbox..."
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	"Nothing less expected from the girl who is like the sun. A rather magnanimous speech."		"Nothing less expected from the girl who is like the sun. A rather magnanimous speech."

	Pulled back to reality, Orihime noticed that President M was gazing at her with eyes of wise resignation more than kindness.		Pulled back to reality, Orihime noticed that President M was gazing at her with eyes of wise resignation more than kindness, like a mother who would shrug and remark "no helping it" after listening to a child's willful fancies.

	~~Like~~ a mother who would shrug and remark "no helping it" after listening to a child's willful fancies.

	"But in your case, perhaps this sort of magnanimity might be the correct method. Simply by radiating light on its own, the sun is already the brightest existence."		"But in your case, perhaps this sort of magnanimity might be the correct method. Simply by radiating light on its own, the sun is already the brightest existence."
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	Orihime repeated President M's earlier response.		Orihime repeated President M's earlier response.

	In other words, she shrugged while ~~saying "no helping it" and gazed~~ at Asya with eyes of leniency.		In other words, she shrugged helplessly while gazing at Asya with eyes of leniency.

	Then Orihime showed a faintly wry smile, approached the bench and said to her, "Asya-san, I will be heading over later to Haruga-san and Hazumi to help out with worked that was planned for today. If you are free, would you like to come along?"		Then Orihime showed a faintly wry smile, approached the bench and said to her, "Asya-san, I will be heading over later to Haruga-san and Hazumi to help out with worked that was planned for today. If you are free, would you like to come along?"
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	Raptors numbering three digits at least, combined with foreseeable intervention from elite dragons.		Raptors numbering three digits at least, combined with foreseeable intervention from elite dragons.

	It looked like the grace period for Hal and friends was gradually heading to an end.		It looked like the ''grace period'' for Hal and friends was gradually heading to an end.

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