Leviathan:Volume 3 Chapter 5 - Revision history

Zzhk at 07:02, 10 February 2016

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	"O-Of course not, Juujouji."		"O-Of course not, Juujouji."

	Although Hal had admitted to being a ~~repressed~~ pervert, he still asserted instantly with his honor on the line.		Although Hal had admitted to being a closet pervert, he still asserted instantly with his honor on the line.

	"Let's speculate. I think Asya did a Double Cast of pseudo-divinity when firing the bow. Perhaps that's why she didn't need my assistance?"		"Let's speculate. I think Asya did a Double Cast of pseudo-divinity when firing the bow. Perhaps that's why she didn't need my assistance?"
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	Hal did not know if it was because she was already plunged into confusion or not, but Orihime was inexplicably speaking in polite forms.		Hal did not know if it was because she was already plunged into confusion or not, but Orihime was inexplicably speaking in polite forms.

	"B-Besides, other than me, no girl could possibly be generous enough to accept a ~~repressed~~ pervert ~~like~~ you, Haruga-kun."		"B-Besides, other than me, no girl could possibly be generous enough to accept a closet pervert such as you, Haruga-kun."

	"Well... That's certainly true."		"Well... That's certainly true."

Zzhk at 07:18, 7 February 2016

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Zzhk: /* Chapter 5 - Bow and Arrow, as well as... */

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Chapter 5 - Bow and Arrow, as well as...

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	"O-Of course not, Juujouji."		"O-Of course not, Juujouji."

	Although Hal had admitted to being ~~the covert~~ pervert, he still asserted instantly with his honor on the line.		Although Hal had admitted to being a repressed pervert, he still asserted instantly with his honor on the line.

	"Let's speculate. I think Asya did a Double Cast of pseudo-divinity when firing the bow. Perhaps that's why she didn't need my assistance?"		"Let's speculate. I think Asya did a Double Cast of pseudo-divinity when firing the bow. Perhaps that's why she didn't need my assistance?"
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	Hal did not know if it was because she was already plunged into confusion or not, but Orihime was inexplicably speaking in polite forms.		Hal did not know if it was because she was already plunged into confusion or not, but Orihime was inexplicably speaking in polite forms.

	"B-Besides, other than me, no girl could possibly be generous enough to accept a ~~covert~~ pervert like you, Haruga-kun."		"B-Besides, other than me, no girl could possibly be generous enough to accept a repressed pervert like you, Haruga-kun."

	"Well... That's certainly true."		"Well... That's certainly true."

Zzhk at 09:03, 14 December 2015

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	Then Galad's damaged gigantic body was blown away violently, crashing to the ground.		Then Galad's damaged gigantic body was blown away violently, crashing to the ground.

	He fell next to the shore of the Kyuedogawa. As a clearing ~~was~~ a large stretch of lawn laid with pedestrian trails, it was able to withstand the impact from an elite dragon's massive body.		He fell next to the shore of the Kyuedogawa. As a clearing consisting of a large stretch of lawn laid with pedestrian trails, it was able to withstand the impact from an elite dragon's massive body.

	Seeing the silver dragon putting up a pathetic fight, unworthy of the formidable foe he once was, Hal muttered quietly, "So his wounds haven't healed yet...?"		Seeing the silver dragon putting up a pathetic fight, unworthy of the formidable foe he once was, Hal muttered quietly, "So his wounds haven't healed yet...?"
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	Meanwhile, Mutou-san shook her head with an expression of disbelief.		Meanwhile, Mutou-san shook her head with an expression of disbelief.

	"Well, I'd like to say it was our imagination or mistake, but both Funaki-san and I saw it happen clearly. Our memories are		"Well, I'd like to say it was our imagination or mistake, but both Funaki-san and I saw it happen clearly. Our memories are definitely not mistaken... Although he had been glaring at us with a very scary look, as soon as that bone specimen monster showed up, he transformed..."


	"Say, was that guy someone in the shelter with an unknown identity by any chance?"		"Say, was that guy someone in the shelter with an unknown identity by any chance?"

Cthaeh at 02:55, 13 December 2015

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Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

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Part 4

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Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

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Part 3

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Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

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Zzhk: /* Part 1 */

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Part 1

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	As though looking down on a map, Hazumi scouted out the distribution of blue Raptors over the Minamikasai sky in the Edogawa ward.		As though looking down on a map, Hazumi scouted out the distribution of blue Raptors over the Minamikasai sky in the Edogawa ward.

	Near the mouth of the ~~old Edogawa River's~~ mouth connected to Tokyo Bay...		Near the mouth of the Kyuedogawa river mouth connected to Tokyo Bay...

	Dozens of Raptors were flying back and forth in excitement, surrounding the community center located there. The precise number was—sixty-seven of them.		Dozens of Raptors were flying back and forth in excitement, surrounding the community center located there. The precise number was—sixty-seven of them.

Zzhk at 06:15, 23 November 2015

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	"No helping it. It's our turn next."		"No helping it. It's our turn next."

	"—So last time's giant ~~tortoise~~ really is the princess' servant!"		"—So last time's giant turtle really is the princess' servant!"

	Asya nodded after listening to Hal's report. Looking through binoculars, Orihime cried out. The Japanese girl was currently looking in Tokyo Bay's direction at the river mouth.		Asya nodded after listening to Hal's report. Looking through binoculars, Orihime cried out. The Japanese girl was currently looking in Tokyo Bay's direction at the river mouth.
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	After the complete annihilation of the Raptors at Minamikasai—		After the complete annihilation of the Raptors at Minamikasai—

	Having summoned Glinda back to Shin-Kiba, the American witch had received a report. The dragon king's minion that had appeared offshore of Haneda four days prior, Genbu-Ou—that giant ~~tortoise~~—had apparently floated up from the sea in Tokyo Bay and was heading towards the Kyuedogawa river mouth.		Having summoned Glinda back to Shin-Kiba, the American witch had received a report. The dragon king's minion that had appeared offshore of Haneda four days prior, Genbu-Ou—that giant turtle—had apparently floated up from the sea in Tokyo Bay and was heading towards the Kyuedogawa river mouth.

	The star performer was finally arriving on stage. Asya immediately announced, "We'll first have Rushalka fight as much as possible. Once she reaches her limit, entrust the queen's power to Akuro-Ou—I'm counting on you, Orihime-san."		The star performer was finally arriving on stage. Asya immediately announced, "We'll first have Rushalka fight as much as possible. Once she reaches her limit, entrust the queen's power to Akuro-Ou—I'm counting on you, Orihime-san."
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	Akuro-Ou summoned nine black arrowheads.		Akuro-Ou summoned nine black arrowheads.

	These arrowheads flew to a position above the approaching Genbu-Ou before releasing flames together. Nine beams of flame attempted to incinerate the gigantic ~~tortoise~~ minion. At this moment, the ice arrows rained down like a sudden downpour. However, none of this worked.		These arrowheads flew to a position above the approaching Genbu-Ou before releasing flames together. Nine beams of flame attempted to incinerate the gigantic turtle minion. At this moment, the ice arrows rained down like a sudden downpour. However, none of this worked.

	Enveloped in golden light, Genbu-Ou's gigantic body remained completely unharmed.		Enveloped in golden light, Genbu-Ou's gigantic body remained completely unharmed.
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	But judging from his personality, it was possible that his heart was shaking precisely due to the shame.		But judging from his personality, it was possible that his heart was shaking precisely due to the shame.

	And having received the master's orders, Genbu-Ou—stood up, surprisingly. The gigantic ~~tortoise~~, a hundred meters long, had originally been crawling on all fours after landing.		And having received the master's orders, Genbu-Ou—stood up, surprisingly. The gigantic turtle, a hundred meters long, had originally been crawling on all fours after landing.

	But suddenly, Genbu-Ou stood upright on stubby hind legs.		But suddenly, Genbu-Ou stood upright on stubby hind legs.
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	Blowing apart the fifteen-rune arrangement of "shield," it pierced Genbu-Ou magnificently.		Blowing apart the fifteen-rune arrangement of "shield," it pierced Genbu-Ou magnificently.

	However, this did not mean that things were over. Enveloped in blazing flame, the ~~tortoise~~'s supermassive body began to burn intensely—		However, this did not mean that things were over. Enveloped in blazing flame, the turtle's supermassive body began to burn intensely—

	Neither exploding nor stopping, Genbu-Ou continued to fall while burning intensely.		Neither exploding nor stopping, Genbu-Ou continued to fall while burning intensely.
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	Struck by a concentrated attack from three different leviathans—		Struck by a concentrated attack from three different leviathans—

	The golden light surrounding Genbu-Ou finally vanished. The giant black ~~tortoise~~'s massive body shifted slightly in its trajectory of descent, finally falling a hundred meters away from Hal's group instead of right on top of their heads.		The golden light surrounding Genbu-Ou finally vanished. The giant black turtle's massive body shifted slightly in its trajectory of descent, finally falling a hundred meters away from Hal's group instead of right on top of their heads.

	CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASH!		CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASH!

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	Juujouji Orihime kept murmuring softly, which was quite rare for her.		Juujouji Orihime kept murmuring softly, which was quite rare for her.

	However, this uncharacteristic behavior of hers, murmuring emphatically nonstop, felt inexplicably adorable, even to the point of troubling Hal. But actually, somewhere in the bottom of his heart, Hal seemed to understand ~~wha~~ Orihime was implying, but was it right to interpret it that way? The hesitation in his heart was making Hal unsure.		However, this uncharacteristic behavior of hers, murmuring emphatically nonstop, felt inexplicably adorable, even to the point of troubling Hal. But actually, somewhere in the bottom of his heart, Hal seemed to understand what Orihime was implying, but was it right to interpret it that way? The hesitation in his heart was making Hal unsure.

	Hence, he asked timidly, causing Orihime to blush and bow her head.		Hence, he asked timidly, causing Orihime to blush and bow her head.
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	Hazumi took a deep breath.		Hazumi took a deep breath.

	Raptors were normally the color of steel, but the sixty-seven Raptors gathered here were blue. According to Haruomi-senpai, this type of Raptor ~~were~~ imbued with imitation dragonslaying power.		Raptors were normally the color of steel, but the sixty-seven Raptors gathered here were blue. According to Haruomi-senpai, this type of Raptor was imbued with imitation dragonslaying power.

	They were formidable enemies that even the Shootdown Ace's partner, Glinda, must not take lightly if she were to mobilize.		They were formidable enemies that even the Shootdown Ace's partner, Glinda, must not take lightly if she were to mobilize.
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	"Yeah. But more precisely, that's not quite the right description..."		"Yeah. But more precisely, that's not quite the right description..."

	Confronted with Hal's question, Mutou-san hesitated, so Funaki-san interrupted, ""U-Umm, there was a handsome guy who transformed right before our eyes. Transforming instantly like those red and silver giants in children's shows. That's right, he turned into that dragon!"		Confronted with Hal's question, Mutou-san hesitated, so Funaki-san interrupted, "U-Umm, there was a handsome guy who transformed right before our eyes. Transforming instantly like those red and silver giants in children's shows. That's right, he turned into that dragon!"

	" " "......" " "		" " "......" " "
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	At Asya's command, the wyvern in Queen Form instantly took flight.		At Asya's command, the wyvern in Queen Form instantly took flight.

	Her target was above the scattered clouds in the night sky. With astounding acceleration, she reached sonic speed in a merely a few short seconds.		Her target was above the scattered clouds in the night sky. With astounding acceleration, she reached sonic speed in merely a few short seconds.

	Breaking past the cloud layer, she ascended rapidly with momentum to reach the heavens.		Breaking past the cloud layer, she ascended rapidly with momentum to reach the heavens.
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	Aiming at the target, Akuro-Ou fired the cannon of gold on her back.		Aiming at the target, Akuro-Ou fired the cannon of gold on her back.

	A red flash of light exited the ~~barrow~~ and ascended the sky, piercing Genbu-Ou's massive abdomen.		A red flash of light exited the barrel and ascended the sky, piercing Genbu-Ou's massive abdomen.

	In a addition, a white beam came flying in from the northwest. On standby at Shin-Kiba, Minadzuki had fired the dragonslaying bow again. This attack utterly tore apart Genbu-Ou's shell.		In a addition, a white beam came flying in from the northwest. On standby at Shin-Kiba, Minadzuki had fired the dragonslaying bow again. This attack utterly tore apart Genbu-Ou's shell.
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	When the Rune of the Arrow moved in front of True Genbu-Ou, Akuro-Ou stopped firing at the same time.		When the Rune of the Arrow moved in front of True Genbu-Ou, Akuro-Ou stopped firing at the same time.

	The golden cannon, which had been firing nonstop, vanished suddenly. Taking its place, a symbol of a "tilted half-moon" ~~appared~~ on the white fox-wolf's back—The Rune of the Bow.		The golden cannon, which had been firing nonstop, vanished suddenly. Taking its place, a symbol of a "tilted half-moon" appeared on the white fox-wolf's back—The Rune of the Bow.

	Also, in True Genbu-Ou's surroundings, twenty runes of Ruruk Soun manifested.		Also, in True Genbu-Ou's surroundings, twenty runes of Ruruk Soun manifested.

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	Hal did not know if it was because she was already plunged into confusion or not, but Orihime was inexplicably speaking in polite forms.		Hal did not know if it was because she was already plunged into confusion or not, but Orihime was inexplicably speaking in polite forms.

	"B-Besides, other than me, no girl could ~~posssibly~~ be generous enough to accept a covert pervert like you, Haruga-kun."		"B-Besides, other than me, no girl could possibly be generous enough to accept a covert pervert like you, Haruga-kun."

	"Well... That's certainly true."		"Well... That's certainly true."
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	With many things still ambiguous, the topic of conversation reached an end by the time Hal noticed.		With many things still ambiguous, the topic of conversation reached an end by the time Hal noticed.

	At this moment, a call was received through the internet on the cellphone that was connected to the ~~nagivation~~ screen. It was Luna Francois. Operating the navigation system, Hal started the video call.		At this moment, a call was received through the internet on the cellphone that was connected to the navigation screen. It was Luna Francois. Operating the navigation system, Hal started the video call.

	'Preparations are complete on my side.'		'Preparations are complete on my side.'
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	A glowing pentagram appeared over the pier, then transformed into the shape of an infinity symbol before turning into a winged serpent.		A glowing pentagram appeared over the pier, then transformed into the shape of an infinity symbol before turning into a winged serpent.

	It was Minadzuki, the emerald leviathan in the form of a serpentine dragon. Hazumi touched the back of her right hand. Appearing there was a ~~pictogram~~ reminiscent of a "tilted half moon"—		It was Minadzuki, the emerald leviathan in the form of a serpentine dragon. Hazumi touched the back of her right hand. Appearing there was a pictograph reminiscent of a "tilted half moon"—

	The Ruruk Soun symbol signifying the dragonslaying bow, the Rune of the Bow.		The Ruruk Soun symbol signifying the dragonslaying bow, the Rune of the Bow.
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	Traversing ward boundaries, it shot from Shin-Kiba in the Kōtō ward to the river mouth of the Edogawa.		Traversing ward boundaries, it shot from Shin-Kiba in the Kōtō ward to the river mouth of the Edogawa.

	At the same time, it accurately pierced the chest of a Raptor flying in the air at the scene. What a ~~spendid~~ long-distance sniper shot. After shooting down one Raptor, it immediately changed direction and angle to penetrate the next Raptor in the chest. Then it flew towards the subsequent Raptor—		At the same time, it accurately pierced the chest of a Raptor flying in the air at the scene. What a splendid long-distance sniper shot. After shooting down one Raptor, it immediately changed direction and angle to penetrate the next Raptor in the chest. Then it flew towards the subsequent Raptor—

	This white flash of light repeated this change of direction and auto-homing for nearly sixty times in total.		This white flash of light repeated this change of direction and auto-homing for nearly sixty times in total.
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	Through magically amplified vision, Hazumi witnessed this scene unerringly. This was the power of the Rune of the Bow!		Through magically amplified vision, Hazumi witnessed this scene unerringly. This was the power of the Rune of the Bow!

	Gathered in the sky over Minamikasai, the Raptors were instantly ~~wittled~~ down to less than ten.		Gathered in the sky over Minamikasai, the Raptors were instantly whittled down to less than ten.

	"Glinda, charge in deep! Long Ride!"		"Glinda, charge in deep! Long Ride!"
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	Luna Francois yelled, producing a black magic circle behind Glinda.		Luna Francois yelled, producing a black magic circle behind Glinda.

	Rivaling a the gigantic body of a "serpent," the large circle had a pentagram symbol ~~incribed~~ within it. Like a carriage drawn by a horse, it flew in pursuit of the three-headed lion. Since it was not possible to invoke pseudo-divinity while controlling a "serpent" remotely, anything to entrust had to be done now.		Rivaling a the gigantic body of a "serpent," the large circle had a pentagram symbol inscribed within it. Like a carriage drawn by a horse, it flew in pursuit of the three-headed lion. Since it was not possible to invoke pseudo-divinity while controlling a "serpent" remotely, anything to entrust had to be done now.

	Regardless, the mission was accomplished for now.		Regardless, the mission was accomplished for now.